Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
OMG this is going to rip Bella up he needs to turn around and tell her that he loves her to NOW. So where do you live I live in Montesano????
Author's Response:
Hey!
I was raised in Vancouver Washington, but I live in Bellingham right now for school :)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Man, I really thought it would be Charlie!! But Carlisle was a good choice too!! =)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
OH. MY. GOD.
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE let the next chapter be a few days EARLY. PLEASE.
trying very hard not to see Edward as a douche... i get it... he's just as scarred as Bella... but damn.... that was harsh...
MORE MORE MORE...
Author's Response:
I am trying my very hardest to have it out early, before i leave! I'll do my best :)
Katie
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Oh Dear.......walking out is not a good thing
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Hopefully the Cullens can help Edward and Bella make a fresh start AND put away Alec
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Omg please let it be Charlie! I'm praying its Charlie. I'm just saying. Omg twitter is down right now and I miss my twitter buddies. I guess when its back up I can follow you and you can follow me if you like? Here are my favorite parts: That's love Edward scary huh?: I feel like a fucking tool for becoming so invested in her. I've learned in my time on my own to not believe in other people, they always let you down.
I find myself wishing I would've just kept her in Portland with me, never giving her the opportunity to heal and grow - never giving her the opportunity to grow away from me. I feel guilty for even thinking this way.
She's been through so much and deserves nothing but the best, and that's not me. I can't blame her for wanting more and when she decides she doesn't want me, I will step back. Until then, I'll try to show her I love her the only way I know how, by keeping her safe and taking care of her. I can't regret meeting her or falling for her. My life has been hell since I was twelve, she's the only good thing that's happened to me, and I will hold on to her as long as I can.
Lol: If Jake were here and knew what I was thinking, he would tell me to stop acting like a pussy. I decide to take his imaginary advice and actively shut down my thought process and join Bella in sleep until we reach our destination.
Lol: We step onto the platform at the station and are blinded by the bright lights. Even though it's pitch black outside, they have the station lit like a fucking football stadium. I see Bella take her free hand and rub her eyes.
Until next timeAuthor's Response:
Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! Yeah, I would love to chat on twitter! I'm kdc2239 over there too :) I give out little sneak peeks while i write sometimes too
Katie
Date: 30 Jul 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Need to know, now!!!!! Lol, great chapter, loved all the cuddly moments and even how he wants her to need her (I think that's very realistic- we all want to be necessary!) Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
<3
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 28 Jul 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
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Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
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Date: 28 Jul 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 5 Spies
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Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
<3
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Another great chapter, looking forward to the next update :-)
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the chapter! I hope you like the next :)
Katie
Date: 28 Jul 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Please God let it be Charlie!!! Oh the Cliffy is gone drive me bonkers!!! hahahahaha
Author's Response:
Sorry for the cliffie! I hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
I'm thinking her dad.
Date: 27 Jul 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Oooohhh!! Is it Carlisle? I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
The mystery will be solved next chapter, promise! I hope you like it!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
it is awesome!! loved this chapter
Author's Response:
So glad you like it! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
CHARLIE!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
hehehe good guess! You will find out next chapter!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
OH COME ON!!! YOU CAN"T LEAVE IT THERE!!!!
Love it.. really love it..
can't wait till the next chapter..
Author's Response:
Sorry for the cliffie! I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2010 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
i am loving this, i must know....who is it? charlie?
Author's Response:
So glad you like it!! I can't say who it was, but the next chapter will, I hope you like it!
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Love it hope you update soon
Author's Response:
So glad you like it! Thanks so much for reading!
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
OMG!! I hope it is Charlie in the diner!! I can't wait for the teaser!!
Author's Response:
The teaser should be up tomorrow, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
This story is getting so good. It's great to see both Edward and Bella letting their guards down and letting each other in!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
I'm just glad that, no matter who it is that has just recognized Bella, that Edward is there to help her. And they are getting closer and closer.... I like it.
Could the customer be Charlie?
Author's Response:
Yes, it's good that Edward is there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
OH NOW that is just MEAN.. hahahaha.. Loved the chapter. Great job.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the cliffie! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 27 Jul 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Oh my goodness I am in love this story! Can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 26 Jul 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
will the rest of the gang join us in this chapter? i hope so please!
Author's Response:
The next chapter will answer your question! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Katie
Date: 26 Jul 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
:)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
Is that person Carlisle Cullen? I hope that Bella doesn't run now that she is facing part of her past.
Author's Response:
I can't tell you who was in the diner but the next chapter will, I hope you like it!
Katie
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
What a nice trip the farry ride is a fun ride. So who sees Bella?????
Author's Response:
So glad you liked their trip! I can't tell you who was in the diner but the next chapter will, I hope you like it!
Katie
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
This was sweet. He is so protective over her and even though he might deny it he is head over heels in love with her. AS I think she is with him. And they met some good people. I really want to know who she ran into at the end., I think it may be Riley. Lord I hope it isn't Alec. I hope he comes to a very gruesome ending. Keep up the awesome work. You are one amazing writer.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Hey bb!
So glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for the review! I can't tell you who was in the diner but the next chapter will, I hope you like it!
Katie
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
I bet it is Carlisle. Great story so far. Keep it going.
Author's Response:
I can't tell you who was in the diner but the next chapter will, I hope you like it!
Katie
Date: 26 Jul 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
CLIFFY!!!!!! love the "girlfriend" dilemna.....
"I wonder if there's any chance that maybe she loves me too." - LOVE this...
MORE!!!!!
PS - who is it that drops the food???? who, who??? :)
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the chapter! I can't tell you who was in the diner but the next chapter will, I hope you like it!
Katie
Date: 24 Jul 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
miss bella is going home. i hope alice and the rest of her second family is still there and they can set down roots and start pushing through to thier hea.
this is such a sweet thing edward is doing for bella.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
the momma inme wants to hols bella and make her see that her momma would be so proud of her. she survived, she got away, and now she is trying to build a life.
and eddie well i wanna tell him how proud i am that he is wanting to do everything he can to give bella the life she deserves, a home, a friend, love, and joy. she will love you, i just know it.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Girl! I love your story! I read this on Twilighted.net and I just can't get enough of it! I didn't think to look on fanfiction, but I did see this new site and thought I'd see if there was any stories I haven't read yet, that weren't on twilighted. I was scrolling and I found some good stories, and then the world froze.....
....I freaking screamed. Seriously. I jumped up and grabbed my sister while yelling at the top of my lungs, "AAHHHH!! Her stories on this site...Her stories on this site!!"
...Yeah...I was pre-ty happy about it. Of course I saw the 10 FREAKING CHAPTERS ON IT!! And I flipped my lid once again. Yup.
I love this story. I have only ever read one story that kinda-sota had the homeless stoyline going and I tried to read it, but it so did not wok out and that said peson stopped updating for a while and I think forgot about the story all-together.
This is one of the most interesting stoy I have ever read. I have a problem with getting bored easily with a stoy when I read it fo a while. I mean, I like the stoy, but it just gets petty boring and I feel like I aleady know what's going to happen, so I stop reading.
Yeah...not in this case.
You always throw a curveball and I don't know what is going to happen! I love it!
I would have never guessed that that happened to Bella. I knew that someone had messed her up, but to that extent? Nope, didn't coss my mind that she would be stuck with a weirdo for that long.
I can't wait till I get to read what's up with Edward.
I honestly freaked when he was going to buy the tickets. I thought that he was going to get jumped and beat up by James and the guys. I was haing a MINI-heart attack! (notice the bold print...it was BIG to me!) I was glad when he made it home safely.
I can't wait to see what is going to go down in Forks and who Bella is going to see!! I love it! Really, truely from the bottom of my overly-reading heart!! I'm so glad that you got this story in you head and put it up for us to read, because I would be honestly sad if I didn't get to read it.
I love it and can NOT wait to read more!!
-greeneyedgirl7 ......................this is not the name I use on twilighted.net....just sayin' lol
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you so much for the sweet review! I'm so glad that you like the story! Yeah, it takes a while to get the chapters loaded on Twilighted but I'm working on it :)
Again thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter, it will be up Monday!
Katie
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
wow... this was just wow.. I love edward.. how cute is that?
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
awww how beautiful..
Do you speak Italian?
Author's Response:
I am Italian, but no, I speak very very little. I learned enough to just get around while I was there :)
Thanks again for taking the time to review!
Katie
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
wow... poor Bella..
Date: 23 Jul 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
god that is mean.. thank god I don't have this cliffy.. LOL do I?
Oh and I will put this up on recommended story this week if that is okay?
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thank you for taking the time to review! I would be honored for the story to be recommended!
Thank you so much!!
Katie
Date: 22 Jul 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
oh god this is fucked up.. poor jacob..
Date: 22 Jul 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5 Spies
omg... I hope they don't have to go back to the streets after this week in the hotel
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
awww... would love to know what bella is doing!!!
Got to keep reading..
Date: 22 Jul 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
Wow this is quite a powerful and mysterious little story you have here..
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
great start!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I hope you like the rest of the story :)
Katie
Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
awww god this is different!!!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
That is so sweet that he is taking her back to Forks. Maybe them going there is the best thing that they could do for themselves.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review the chapters! I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
Well I guess that they will be having a trip to Forks. I wonder how they are going to get there.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
Wow that is a terrible story and I really hope taht Alec doesn't find her because they both could get hurt if he does. Maybe they should try finding her father and see if he could help them.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
Wow just when they think that things are getting better for them then they have a setback. I really hope that she can get through this with the help of Edward.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
Wow that was kinna scary I thought that he was going to hurt Bella because he thought that she was Leah and wasn't listening to him.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 Spies
I am glad that Edward finally figured out that he needs to stay with her.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
Wow I never thought that she would have hidden money but I am glad that she did. I just hope that she can convince Edward to stay with her.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
Who is she saying that she is sorry to and to let her go? And the last one is help me so that mean that she is runing from someone in her dreams too.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
That is sad that she has been hurt so badly that she can't trust anyone that is trying to help her.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
I wonder why he is out there on the streets.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
I cant wait till they get to forks. I am so happy they admitted they have feelings for each other and kissed need more of that.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
hope they are ok there
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
dun dun dun dun....the plot thickens....
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Oh I hope something really good happens in Forks... maybe a cullen appearance???
Author's Response:
Maybeeee? LOL
You'll have to wait and see ;)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
katie
Date: 20 Jul 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
I enjoyed this chapter and I'll see you Monday. These are the parts that I loved because they ar cute, funny or just Edward on some messed up kind of level. I hope their trip goes well but I'm thinking there's going to be drama I hope Alec doesn't show up or some shit. I hope Jake shows up at the shelter even though he is crazy and needs some mental help. I'm still a little upset and disappointed with family over this. Anyway keep up the good work.
She flutters her eyelashes at me; I assume this is an attempt to flirt. She really just looks like she has something in her eye.
"Do I look like a map?" she asks rudely. I'm tempted to let her know that while she doesn't look like a map, she does look like a cheap hooker.
I have a key, but I still knock as I open the door, just so I don't catch her changing or anything. Not that I would mind all that much.
I'm shocked to see her eyes start to well with water. She bites her lip in an effort to control her emotions. She thinks I bought this shit for another girl, and she actually cares. Fuck, maybe she cares about me more than I think.
"Yeah, she is really nice," I say. She looks up and gives me a fake weak smile.
"Oh, good," she says, giving the snacks her attention once again. I can't stand to see her hurt so I give up the gig. I already feel stupid I bought the shit, now I have to tell her why I bought it. I walk over to her and take the food out of her hands.
"No, it is Edward. It's a big deal to me," she says, taking her gift out of my hand. I lean forward and kiss her on her forehead. I'm happy that she likes the gift so much... but I still feel stupid for buying it.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the chapter, thank you so much!
Katie
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
great chapter. edward is so wonderful to bella.
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
hey,I really like your story so far... please update soon! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Edward just gets sweeter and sweeter by the minute. That was a very nice thing he is doing in taking Bella back to Forks, and getting the lip gloss for her as well. And you can tell by the kissing, hugging and hand holding that they are getting closer and Bella does think of him as more than just a friend. And now that she has told him about her past, she is really comfortable with him. I'm hoping that they can broaden those feelings more as well soon.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
I am loving your story - I hope the Cullen's are still in Forks and Edward and Bella have an easier time.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
I got a little teary over the lip gloss at the end! Masterfully done!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your sweet review, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Awww... I love how Edward shows how much he loves her! You are doing a wonderful job of developing the relationship between these characters! An update in this story always makes my day!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
:)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
I just love this story.. They are so sweet together.. Great chapter.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Aw, Edward is so cute buying her lip gloss. I love how you wrote his reaction when he was shopping in the "girly section" and then when she found the gift. Very cute.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
I really like your story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, i hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
i really love this story, i cant wait to see what happens in forks!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
loved it as usual .
update soon and let us know what happens in Forks and give Bella a little boost of confidence she really needs it.
xoxo
NaMaDRI
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Oh damn you you made me cry. That was the sweetest thing when he bought the tickets and the lip gloss. Little things mean so much more. He really does love her and I have a feeling she loves him but is just scared to trust. Can't say that I blame her one bit. I have a feeling though that there will be a lot of drama when they get to forks. Like Alec or her dad. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
Aw, I'm sorry you cried! So glad you like it though, thanks for the review bb!
Katie
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
LOVE LOVE LOVE....
lipgloss, lemon (tiny one but sweet) and handholding...
i hope Bella finds closure... what did Mrs. E whisper to her?????
MORE... QUICK! need a fix already!!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
I loved this chapter. I love the wonderful tender way that he loves her and cares for her.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
he is going to take her home??????
Date: 16 Jul 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
They were so cute with the pizza! So sweet at the end too! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Hey!
Thank you so much for taking the time to review each chapter, I really appreciate it! So glad that you like the story so far, the next chapter should be up Monday, I hope you like it :)
Katie
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 Secrets
Poor Bella. I'm glad it's not the mob though, that's what I was thinking. I'm so connected with these two characters. Great work.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
Oh, poor Bella. I was all excited that the kissing was going so well for her. Be strong, Edward!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
poor jake. my heart aches for people who really deal with this situation.
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 Spies
I get chills like every other sentence. I was tearing up at Edward's story!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
I"m just breathless is all! I was so worried for them, and I swear I feel the cold rain even though it's like 109 today!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 Careful Where You Stand
damn wish i had time to look up the italian! Great job!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 Boogie Man
Oh, I got all mushy inside! I feel like I'm right there with them!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
Love the setup, can't wait to find out more!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
:)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence
THis is so good.. and I just had to google the Italian words from last chapter.. VERY INTERESTING...
Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story!! I hope you like the rest of it :)
Katie
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
oh gosh this sounds good
Date: 13 Jul 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
awww sweet eddie
Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
is edward going to take her to see her mom???
Author's Response:
That question will be answered in the next chapter ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Katie
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
This story is absolutely amazing. I sort of have to take a step back now and breathe, cause it's heartbreaking. I wish I could offer some deep critique, but just know your story is gripping, moving, and just phenomenal. I am so glad I found this story and cannot wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the sweet review, I hope you like the rest of the story :)
Date: 13 Jul 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 6 Animal I've Become
So Jake is schizophrenic?
Date: 13 Jul 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
Aw, that was so sweet. Edward has fallen hard for Bella and dare I think she has feelings for him as well. He's the first guy to really just be a friend to her and now that she has told her story, it seems that she is starting to heal. The nightmares have ceased a bit and she is sleeping better and she is more comfortable than ever with Edward, not to mention she laughs and justs lets go with him. He's finally understanding why she does some of the things that she does and he accepts it wholeheartedly. I think Edward can be the one to help put the past behind her and be able to move on.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9 I was Broken
I loved it. I'm glad Bella is talking about her mom again. I love that Edward is learning Italian from Bella. I can't wait to hear more of Edward's story. I'm curious as hell. Until next time. I hope Jake/Sam's okay? He really needs helps but that does happen a lot in that population. Until next time keep up the good work!