Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
the chapter isnt showing up!
Author's Response:
There's something wrong with TWCS, try again, but if it doesn't work you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/Fuggiasco
Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
the chapter isn't posted, just chapter notes,
Author's Response:
There's something wrong with TWCS, try again, but if it doesn't work you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/Fuggiasco
Date: 31 Aug 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
There was no content for the chapter.
Author's Response:
There's something wrong with TWCS, try again, but if it doesn't work you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/Fuggiasco
Date: 31 Aug 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
was there supposed to be a chapter here?
Author's Response:
There's something wrong with TWCS, try again, but if it doesn't work you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/Fuggiasco
Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
aww... no chapter? :(
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with TWCS, you can read it here though :)
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/Fuggiasco
Date: 30 Aug 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
this chapter didn't post
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with TWCS apparently :/ If you don't want to wait for it to be fixed, you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/
Date: 30 Aug 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
HELP!!! CAN'T SEE THE CHAPTER!!
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with TWCS apparently :/
If you don't want to wait for it to be fixed, you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/
Date: 30 Aug 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
okay whats going on i got all excited because you were in my inbox and all i got where the chapter notes story notes andend notes no story ???????????????
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with TWCS apparently :/
If you don't want to wait for it to be fixed, you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/
Date: 30 Aug 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
Just so you know, none of the stories on the site right now are actually working. Anything updated by any author today has just shown the author's notes, but not the actual text of the chapter. It's a problem with the site I guess, but I just thought I would let you know- you are not the only one this is happening to
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with TWCS apparently :/
If you don't want to wait for it to be fixed, you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/
Date: 30 Aug 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 16 One More Time With Feeling
i can't see this for some reason. i'm not sure what the problem is :(
all i see ar ethe AN's... sooooo sad!!!!!
Author's Response:
Something is wrong with TWCS apparently :/
If you don't want to wait for it to be fixed, you can read it here http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5961148/16/
Date: 30 Aug 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked
hey so why can't i read any of the chapters anymore...?
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what you mean? Is the story not showing up for you? It's working fine in my end, but maybe there's a site issue?
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
edward is so cool
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
<3
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Well I guess that they are going to be staying with the Cullen's in Forks for a while then aren't they? I wonder if they will go back where they were or if they will try to make a new life for themselves somewhere else.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
omg this is so beautiful you ahve got to keep this going i want these two together in the end with good jobs and maried please you are a rgeat writer i await the next chapter
Date: 24 Aug 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Oh I just love your story. Edward is so wonderful and I am glad that they will be staying with the Cullens.
Author's Response:
So glad you're happy with how Edward handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Very nice! I really like it!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Nice chapter. You made me smile in Edward wanting to ease Bella's pain by telling her story to Carlisle: he's really come a long way himself in this story, hasn't he? It seems he's always had a strong ethic about the treatment of women and girls because of his experiences when he was young with his Mother, but he's definitely put himself more on the line.
I knew the Cullens would only want to support and help them - nice turn that they found an "acceptable way" to help Edward and Bella.
Author's Response:
So glad you're happy with how Edward handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
great chapter, i feel so horribly for B&E and im glad E accepted carlisles offer! hopefully he can relax around them soon and maybe start to get some of the help that HE needs as well as bella!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
I'm really with how this chapter played out. I hope Edward will keep slowly realizing he is good enough for Bella.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
I loved it as usual. I love that Edward keeps on pushing and stepping out of his comfort zone I'm so proud of Edward and smiling so hard right now. And go Bella for being brave these two kids are gonna make it. Carlisle and Esme have the divide and conquer bit down to a science. I loved this chapter and can't wait for the Bella, Alice, Emmett and Charlie reunion yay! Until next time.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked the chapter bb! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Katie
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Oh this was deff my favorite chapter so far! Great Job :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it!! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Things are about to get really interesting. Wonder what happened with Alice. The story is great; and so original! Can't wait to se what happens next. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
I love this story!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Wonderful chapter. I am so glad she has Edward to help her find her way back.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Yes!!! I loved this chapter and haven't been able to read much or review at all because my computer was all messed up. That is until now though. Loved this chapter, so glad they are going to be staying with the Cullens, and can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
So glad you like it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Great chapter.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
great chapter. happy that bella has some normalcy in her life along with edward
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
This was so hot. I am sooooo glad that they pushed their relationship a little. It was so HOT what they did with the kissing and the naked chest together. I loved it.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
I am so glad that Bella and Edward are finally moving a little forward in their relationship. I love that Carlise offered him a job so that he could earn his way to stay there. I cant wait for the next update and for more intimate times for these two they definetly deserve. it.
Author's Response:
So glad you're happy with how Carlisle handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
This story is great, it was diffrent at first, something Im not used to reading, Im very glad I gave it a chance. I was wondering when the Cullens would come into place, glad Edward and Bella are off the streets and that they both will be dealing with their ghoasts. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you gave it a chance too! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
My heart feels a little better after reading this. I feel so glad that at least there was always someone looking for Bella even if she didn't know it and I'm glad that Edward is giving this a chance. He needs someone to look after him, too, even though he's been on his own for such a long time. Love it.
Author's Response:
You're right, even though it's hard for him, Edward does need people's help as well. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
I just found this a few days ago and I love it. I don't usually read fics like this, but i'm very glad I gave this one a chance. Great chapter ;)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you gave it a chance too! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
*sigh* I just love this story
Author's Response:
So glad you like the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
So proud of Edward this chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
So glad you're happy with how Edward handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Great Chapter!!! Wonderful!!
I love how Carlisle allowed Edward to keep his pride and still manager to help them. Edward was being very mature about sticking with Bella....
Author's Response:
So glad you're happy with how Edward handled things! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
WOW at least someone else knows now Edward had to be very strong to tell Bella's story. I love the Cullens they are good people and will take care of Bella and Edward but it will be tough for Edward to be taken care of????
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
i am so in love with this story... i go through withdrawl every monday when i'm done withthte update until the following week when you post...
i can't wait for her to see Charlie again...
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like the story so much! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
Oh man it had to be very hard for Edward to tell Carlisle all of that. And you know he really loves her if he is willing to stay there so she can heal. He put his pride aside for her. Real love. Keep up the awesome work. I still say this is one of the best stories out there and should get an award.
Marguerite
Author's Response:
You are so sweet bb! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I appreciate it!!
Katie
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 15 Shelter
I loved this chapter - your characters are so unique and wonderful - even if they are broken. I hope that Edward will learn to trust again and that he won't leave her, when he thinks that she doesn't need him anymore.
Great chapter
Michele
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the sweet review, I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
surprised carlisle didnt have charlie their waiting.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
THIS.
excellent chapter... post early! post early!!!
DYING to know what happened to Alice. :)
Date: 17 Aug 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
so happy that they were able to progress their relationship. it may seem like a small step to most but this is a giant leap of faith for both of them. simple trust is totally foriegn to both of them and has been for so long.
eddie needs to learn that asking for help is normal and ok. but again asking for help is a form of trust and he has not been able to trust anyone but himself for years!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
Oh man this was very good. He loved her like she deserved. And knew when to stop. They make me cry sometimes because of all they have been through and they still have a semi positive attitude. I have a very weird feeling that either Alice or Rosalie is the gorl Edward rescued when he was 11. SHe should listen to Edward and tell them what happened. Keep up the great work.
Marguerite
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
<3
Date: 16 Aug 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
Edward takes care of those he loves. She needs to be able to open up and tell what happened and help find that sick fuck that took her so he doesnt keep taking others.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
I loved it. Edward really is steeping up to the plate to help Bella but also recognizes he needs Carlisle's help. I'm really proud of Edward. Oh and he waited so they can make love with the timing is better you go boy! Until next time.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
:)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
I wonder if Bella will let her dad back into her life. This is all a shock to her and I don't know how I would handle all of this if I were in her shoes but I am glad that Edward has seen that the Cullen's can help them and aren't trying to hurt either one of them.
Date: 16 Aug 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
MORE I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!! I love it... And I really can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
So glad you like it! The next chapter should be up soon :)
Katie
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
I'm overwhelmed and I am not even there. So much suspense. Hope Alec doesn't come after her. Love your story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 16 Aug 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
I LOVE YOUR STORYYY! im so hooked!
so the updates are a little off, since you usually update every monday, will you start updating every monday again or have your changed your update day?
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you like the story!
As far as the updates, I'm not sure. I'll try to keep it on Mondays but school starts soon for me and I can't make any promises. I'm trying so hard to get a few chapters ahead so there are no delays in updates.
I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
this we have to talk- doesnt sound good. please, he cant leave her- that will further prove to her that she doesnt have what it takes to keep the people she loves around her- he just cant leave her, he needs to convince her that they should talk to the police to get some justice for herself and any others that might have endured the same fate she did,
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
Sigh, as much as I know all these things need to happen, part of me hates that they have to come out of their cocoon and face the world. I hope Edward can push past his insecurity and just be there with her. Also, the lemonette was hot- can't wait until they get to the real thing!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
what's up with all the cliffies lady? but good work, i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I know! i've been a cliffie queen lately! Sorry LOL
I don't think there is one next chapter, I hope you like it :)
Katie
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
I really hope that Edward stands by Bella through everything...
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14 Sweet Talk
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you like the next chapter!
Katie
Date: 15 Aug 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Will we ever find out what became of Lucy? Inquiring minds want to know!
Date: 13 Aug 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
This is a really beautiful story. Love it.
Date: 13 Aug 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 10 The Only One
Well I think that it is great that Edward cares enough to take Bella back home, but I am afraid that this is the first place that bastard will go to look for her. I guess we shall see.
Date: 09 Aug 2010 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
I'm so proud of Edward for going back!! Poor thing, it gives me chills that stuff like that really happens to people. I was cheering at the ending! Good luck not getting eaten by a bear and I hope things go well with your mom! Will be waiting when you get the time to post it!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
OMG I was tearing up through this whole chapter poor Lucy but really who am I fucking kidding poor poor Edward. Damn it my heart was breaking for him so bad but I was glad he told Bella that he loved her and didn't run away again. Until next time damn this was a brutal chapter to read but now I understand Edward even more. wow!
Date: 09 Aug 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Good one. I'm glad that Edward didn't run; that he went back to Bella and told her about his past. I think he needed to do that to be able to move forward, with Bella. And I'm happy that he told Bella that he loves her, too. I think now that they've both said it, and told each other about their past, hopefully, things will get easier between the two of them and they can start opening up to each other.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Oh my lord no wonder he is the way he is. How he stayed sane is beyond me. To hold all of that inside would kill most people but Edward had the strength to survive. I think seeing that would kill me. Plus what that assfuck did to the little girl. Ewwwwwwwwwwww. ANd the things he had to do to survive. No child should have to do that. Now I know why this is my favorite story. Just like real life. I can only hope these two find peace and stay together. I cried a lot reading this update. Keep up the wonderful work.
Marguerite
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
its about time. Gosh I am so ready for them to have a physical relationship. Edward sure went through some rough shit. I am glad they found each other.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
so... Lucy. will we ever get to know what happened to her or where she is
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Loved how he finallly told her everything; and honestly, for the amount of shit they both have gone through, they deserve to find love. I'm obsessed with this story.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
finally edward wakes up!!! i love how his mom and grandparents taugtt him to treat women with respect that saved Lucy!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Best Part:
"Bella," I say. She's asleep. I don't care - now that I've decided, I have to tell her.
"Bella, baby, wake up," I say, gently shaking her. She sits up. She looks sleepy, confused, and so fucking cute.
"I love you too, so much," I say in a whisper. She stares at me for a long second, a smile graces her lips before she launches herself at me. I roll her over onto her back to continue what she started.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
poor eddie! he didn't really have a chance with helping his mom but he took control and saved lucy. will you have him meet up with her again? i think it would do wonders for him to have her thank him and tell him she ok thanks to him and what he did.
have fun on your holiday!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Christ, he's been thur hell and back. There are quite a pair aren't they! Perfect for one and other really. So glad he finally opened up to her!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
poor eddie.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
what a great chapter - my heart breaks for Edward, he is so alone - well he was until Bella :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Another great chapter i really feel for your characters. Great writing :-)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
Wow that is alot of things to have gone through at such a young age I really hope that they can get by together because they need each other more than I think that they even know.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 13 Even So
WOW... his back story is awful... i literally had tears in my eyes reading this... and then a big goofy grin on my face towards the end... :)
HE TOLD HER! LOVE IT!
enjoy your vacay... hope the surgery goes well... and after all of that is taken care of.... POST MORE!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
ok seriously that was a dick move on eddie's part. i mean i get that it has been a stressfull couple days, hell a stressfull decade for him but he promised he would not leave, and she just opened herself up completely to him! poor bella!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 11 Flying High
tell me it is daddy c! yay they are there and it is time to feel safe and at home!
Date: 05 Aug 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
NOOOOO, Edward, noooo. Can't wait for you to come back w/ more.
Date: 05 Aug 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Oh please please tell me she meets with the rest of the Cullens. She needs some peace in her life and I bet they miss her a lot. Her father too. I also have a feeling she will need all of her friends when Alec shows up. What happen to Edward to make him so afraid that she would leave him??? She loves him?????? WOW! WHat a cliffhanger. Keep up the awesome work.
Marguerite
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
:)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Well I glad it was Carlise that they ran into. I was affraid it was someone else. I am glad of the way that Edward handled the situation and I am glad that he took the business card. I was surprised that Edward ran out because he was affraid to talk to her.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Oh my... that chapter was an emotional rollar coaster! I so did not expect Edward to leave once Bella told him that she loved him. Can't wait for an update!!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Great chapter, I can't wait for the next!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
sweet and protective! I know he has issues and I hope that as hard as it is that Bella will cut him slack until he figures things out
Date: 03 Aug 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Well at least she knows that they have all been looking for her including her dad. I wonder what Edward's secret is and why he would hthink that Bella would leave him.
Date: 03 Aug 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Oh dear! What an emotional roller coaster! I hope Edward can let her in and start to move forward!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Ugh, I feel so bad for both of them! They just can't seem to catch a break! I hope Edward doesn't do anything stupid.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
not a good move for him to do----leave her
what is his backstory??
Author's Response:
No, that was not a good choice. Edward's history will come out very soon, promise!
Katie
Date: 02 Aug 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
OMG, OMG! I can't believe he just walked out instead of sharing his love for her. He needs to believe in her love and know that she won't abandon him.
Good writing I felt like I could put myself in their place and felt their emotions!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your sweet review! Don't worry, Edward's story will come out very soon!
Katie
Date: 02 Aug 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
I want to go camping in La Push, too!! This was a great chapter. OMG, I actually gasped out loud when Bella said she loved Edward. I hope that they get to meet up with the Cullens. I hope this will be a HEA? Please, please, please? Hehehehehe
Author's Response:
I don't mind going to La Push but I'm not in love with the whole camping idea. I'm not really a dirt and bugs type of girl! LOL
I hope you like the next chapter :)
Katie
Date: 02 Aug 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Poor Bella & Edward. They can never catch a break. I hope once he cools down that Edward will come back and tell her how he feels.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
love it!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Oh Edward, you really need to fix this, and fast!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
I couldn't be hard on him, he ran from something too!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
"Every single second. I won't even go to the bathroom... scouts honor," I say. She laughs and shakes her head.
"Well, I know I don't know that much about your past, but I'm almost positive you were never a scout," she says, laughing.
"I was," I insist in mock seriousness. "My mom, she uh... made me do it when I was younger. She and my grandma thought I looked cute in the outfit," I admit, trying to continue to loosen her up a little with my embarrassing confession. It works. She laughs and agrees that the outfit would be cute on me. I just roll my eyes at her.
"I'd like to hear more about them," she says quietly. I don't respond.
Poor Edward you're a good guy and just need to be a little more patient Bella will get there in no time: I take my time in the shower, exhausted from not only the trip here, but also the unexpected meeting with Carlisle. For the first time in a long time, I don't do anything other than bathe in the shower; I'm just too worn out... and tired of fucking myself.
Aw poor Edward and Bella she loves you man let her in plus I wanna know too lol:I rip my hands out of hers, stepping back. I'm pissed, but not at her. I'm pissed at myself, because I want to tell her so badly. I just can't. I'm pissed I'm so fucked up that I can't let her in even though I want to so badly.
Because I am the way I am, I react out of anger, not knowing what else to do. "Why the fuck do you even care? Why do you even want to know?"
She looks at me, shocked. She steps forward, anger in her eyes.
"Because I love you! That's why I care and want to know!" Her body stops. She freezes and throws her hands over her mouth, shocked she let the words fly out.
There's no way she's more shocked than I am. We stare at each other, not moving. Even though I thought I wanted to hear this all along, that I have admitted to myself I love her as well, I can't get the words out. In my mind, I know we should have a cheesy movie moment where we run and embrace each other while I declare my undying love for her, but I can't. Now that the moment has come, I can't, and I hate myself for it
Before I even know what I'm doing, my feet move and take me to the front door. I walk out, hearing her sobs as I walk away into the night.
The above were my favorite parts I am so wrapped up in this story I stopped updating my blog to read the update. Yeah I know it would have been here later but I keep seeing it in my inbox and I couldn't resist. Until next monday!
Author's Response:
SO glad you like the story so much!!! I am going to try and update early this week, before my trip! Keep your eye out!
Katie
Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 12 The World at Large
Liked the chapter. Poor Edward, hiding his own shame. I look forward to the next chapter - whenever you get to post it. Enjoy your trip!