Date: 09 Aug 2020 9:29 PM Title: Seattle
Loved it!
Date: 15 Oct 2016 3:06 AM Title: Boston
Thought it would be Erik yorkie
Date: 08 Dec 2015 8:54 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2014 4:27 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
thank you so much for posting this sequel ;D
Date: 07 Mar 2013 7:47 AM Title: Portland
Could you please change all the cloths to clothes. That is the correct way tod spell it.
Date: 26 Jun 2011 3:28 AM Title: Baby, one more time!
ohh i loved it!!! such a great story! so sad that its over!
Date: 25 Jun 2011 9:14 PM Title: Seattle
so weird when i read the 1st story i clicked on your name and it took me to your page with all your stories but the last one and this one wenret one there? i had to search isabella whitlock to find them....glad i could find this!!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:07 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
Sorry for not reviewing before now. I got so caught up in the stories that I just had to finish them...fantastic...please consider doing another sequel for the European tour. I'm sure you would have lots of happy readers, me just being one of them. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) I might, I'm just not too familliar with Europe so it would take alot of research on my part.
Date: 07 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: Baby, one more time!
tha twas good i liked it i like how you write your stories
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Jul 2010 7:37 AM Title: Boston
Hi there, hey probably a stupid question or I have been really tired (reading this while my daughter is in hospital) but has Victoria been in the story prior to her being the Omega. Where does she fit into the whole scheme of things? Thanx.
Author's Response:
Victoria was in the first one as one of the reporters who asked her a question at the press confrence at Charlie's bar. I brought her in as Omega because it was unexpected.
Date: 21 Jul 2010 3:23 AM Title: Baby, one more time!
Over the past few days I have read both Breaking Swan and Breaking Swan: The Tour. Both stories are fabulous!!! I really enjoyed them and as always look forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:14 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
wow! You skipped ahead a whole year! I think that's great, but what happened when Breaking Dawn had to go out on tour........did little Charlie stay at home with Bella? Did they go together as a family?
Say you are going to write the European tour with little Charlie and the rest of the babies around!?!?!?!
I can see it now!............PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, Breaking Swan didn't go back on tour during the year because they were focusing on a new album, Charlie's birth, then Olivia's and Aubrey's.
And I might write another one covering the European tour but I don't know yet. At times this one got really hard to write and I would have to do a ton of research on Europe before I could do it.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:00 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
So no more tour? not even a sequel? oh well it ended great. my perverted self would have loved one last lemon but that was cute none the less. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:) You never know when I might decide to do another one...just saying...
Date: 17 Jul 2010 12:50 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
This and Breaking Swan have been wonderful and I hate to see them end. You did a fantastic job!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 12:09 PM Title: Baby, one more time!
Great ending!!! I love HEA's! Thanks for the great story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:30 PM Title: Hurry, Baby, Hurry
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: Hurry, Baby, Hurry
aaaaawwwww that is soo sweet!
And DAMN right....edward cut it close!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:05 AM Title: Hurry, Baby, Hurry
awww so cute!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Hurry, Baby, Hurry
GOD you had me crying that whole chapter. it was so beautiful and I thought for sure Edward wasn't going to make it. I'm so happy he did. and then Charlie at the end had me crying so soon after I calmed down. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
I sobbed like a baby through the entire chapter! I swear I went through nearly an entire box of tissues!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:31 PM Title: Hormones, Grammies, and Baby
awwww!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:29 AM Title: Hormones, Grammies, and Baby
aww that last part got me a lot weepy. lol I love that they one their grammies and I thought for sure that she was the one going to be in labor not Kate but oh well. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
It got to me too! Thanks:)
Date: 12 Jul 2010 4:40 PM Title: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches
love the update! but you need to change it from a solid paragraph to have proper spaces. It will make it easier to read.
Author's Response:
Well, damn. Thats not how I uploaded it! Thanks for the heads up. I'll fix it!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 9:50 PM Title: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches
i loved this chapter!!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:37 PM Title: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches
First for the soundtrack I too love Let's get lost then followed by Jonathan Low. As for this chapter I love how emotional bella is with all the hormones. she can go from crying to being mad to crying again. too cool how you depict that. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Jonathan Low is a good one too!! Honestly, I love the whole soundtrack. I have all three soundtracks in one playlist....Just amazing music!
Pregnancy is such a crazy thing! Hormones are insane!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:12 AM Title: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches
loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Jul 2010 6:08 PM Title: Home Sweet Home
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: Home Sweet Home
sounds like they had fun...i want some fun too!
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't that be a good kind of fun to have, too? :)
Date: 02 Jul 2010 5:12 PM Title: Home Sweet Home
that was a hot comeback and YES To the finger in the ass. LMAO that was too awesome. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:30 PM Title: Los Angeles
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:38 PM Title: Los Angeles
that's not it right? :( I want to see the baby. I can't wait to see the baby and then (it won't be long) after sex with Bella and Edward. lol I can't wait. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Nope, we have a few chapters to go before I am done with them:)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:49 PM Title: San Diego
all of their hormonal outbursts and the guys sticking their feet in their mouths is sooooo damn funny!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 17 Jun 2010 6:10 PM Title: Lubbock
I am from Texas.............go HORNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
lol, I'm from Texas, too. WE are huge Horns fans!!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 5:14 PM Title: Dallas
i loved the length of it! THe compassion in this chapter is wonderful!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chicago
I did enjoy Edward's POV...sometimes he is really refreshing! LOL!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:32 PM Title: San Diego
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:05 PM Title: Las Vegas
hilarious!
Date: 16 Jun 2010 12:18 PM Title: San Diego
wow, just wow on the sex. lol that chapter was great. I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait till she has the baby and it becomes their cock blocker. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, Thanks;)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:13 PM Title: Phoenix
yeah for Dunkin Doughnuts and yeah for peanut butter. lol I can't wait for more. I hope bella has another day of increased horniness just so Edward can eat his words about thanking god that bella is into cravings and not so much sex anymore. those poor guys. lol keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:37 AM Title: Phoenix
Poor Ben, damn if you do, damn if you don't. LOL Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:43 PM Title: Lubbock
wow they are horny bitches aren't they? lol I love it. I can't wait for more updates. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:47 PM Title: Lubbock
Hokey Pokey the best line dance in all of history!!! HAHAHAHAH
Author's Response:
lol, Thank you:)
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:19 PM Title: Lubbock
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 04 Jun 2010 5:25 AM Title: San Antonio
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:39 AM Title: San Antonio
Great Chapter! I'm glad the story will continue after their last stop!!! All I have to say is HELLO LUBBOCK!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you ;)
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:01 AM Title: San Antonio
wow you just keep giving us more and more don't you? lol I loved it. two sex scenes in one chapter. you are a goddess. lol keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you. The updates will start slowing down now that I am caught up to what I have on FF.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:26 PM Title: Houston
Its baby making time in the house of Cullen. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:15 AM Title: Houston
This chapter made me frist moan with tears, then moan from lust, and then moan from laughter. All, and all a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:55 AM Title: Dallas
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:48 AM Title: Dallas
I'm glad she followed her gut also. 9 times out of 10 there usually isn't anything majorly wrong, but it never hurts to check that gut out when it tells you to. Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:41 AM Title: Dallas
god that girl had me crying almost all the way through. from them not believing her to her nightmares to the bathtub to the little girl at the end. those moments had me crying like a baby. I know wimpy but true. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
It had me in tears too when writing it, espicailly since it is something so close to me.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 8:49 PM Title: Oklahoma City
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Jun 2010 2:51 PM Title: Oklahoma City
oooh something's wrong with bella. :( poor thing. I love that he took care of her all the way even with her being a bitch. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:21 AM Title: Oklahoma City
Poor girl is more worried about her fans it seems she has forgotton about taking care of that fan in her belly. Hope she realizes it soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 May 2010 6:46 PM Title: Little Rock
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 31 May 2010 4:55 PM Title: Little Rock
aww Edward just needed his baby's mama. lol I loved that part. that was sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 5:52 AM Title: Little Rock
Great Chapter! Balled my eyes out at the end there!
Author's Response:
Thank you, me too:)
Date: 30 May 2010 11:18 AM Title: Baton Rouge
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 May 2010 4:48 AM Title: Baton Rouge
YES I definately agree with Bella. We are all going to be loving Second trimester hormones especially if they keep that up. :D I can't wait for more. that was hot. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 29 May 2010 4:37 PM Title: Tallahassee
I think Bella's hormones are kicking in fulltime with the way she yelled at Paul and then Renee and Charlie. poor guys don't know what hit them. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response: Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 8:50 AM Title: Raliegh
LOL 5 little words!!! That was classic!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 27 May 2010 4:06 AM Title: Atlanta
now we're about to encounter horny bella mixed with PISSED Off Bella. god the makeup sex is going to be AWESOME. Not to mention her kicking that girl's ass. lol I can't wait thanks again bye
Date: 26 May 2010 7:02 AM Title: Raliegh
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Raliegh
lol Charlie is awesome and so is the lesbian orgy. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 12:15 PM Title: Washington DC
aww Melanie's the good guy. I'm so happy. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 May 2010 7:28 AM Title: Washington DC
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 8:55 AM Title: Philadelphia
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 24 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Philadelphia
yeah up next, Garrett's back. I'm so happy. I can't wait for more. this is going great. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 May 2010 3:37 PM Title: New York City
aww I love the sequel and Im SOOOO glad they caught Omega which EWWW by the way Victoria? Gross. :D I loved it though. totally threw me off guard. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 May 2010 2:54 PM Title: New York City
I am so glad that she didnt really get her and everyone is ok. Thanks for the non cliffie chapter.. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 May 2010 12:09 PM Title: New York City
Loved it!! Nice twist!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 May 2010 6:28 AM Title: New York City
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Boston
holy shit i thought it was some creepy guy...but u proved me wrong... this is a really amazing stor and im honored to read it.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 May 2010 6:38 AM Title: Boston
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 9:36 AM Title: Colombus and Detroit
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 7:50 AM Title: Colombus and Detroit
I can't wait to find out!! involving the press is a fucking awesome idea!
Author's Response:
Thank you;)
Date: 20 May 2010 4:26 PM Title: Charleston
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 20 May 2010 3:49 PM Title: Indianapolis
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 20 May 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chicago
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 10:33 PM Title: Seattle
i cant seem to get past portland. everytime i try it just brings up the age thing. I soooo wanna go on.
Author's Response:
Hmm, well, I do have this posted on FF if you want to read it over there.
Date: 17 May 2010 7:30 AM Title: St. Paul
Loved it!!
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 May 2010 5:52 AM Title: St. Paul
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 7:41 PM Title: Denver
Loved it as always!! Here are the others!! Tell me if i have forgotten sth or/and if you want me to change sth!!
http://www.polyvore.com/denver/set?id=18795256
http://www.polyvore.com/zoo/set?id=18759666
http://www.polyvore.com/ready_to_leave/set?id=18747036
Date: 16 May 2010 8:03 AM Title: Denver
freat chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 15 May 2010 11:51 PM Title: Las Vegas
I feel OLD and deprived :-(
but thanks for the wonderful (mostly) fluffy chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 15 May 2010 11:57 AM Title: Salt Lake City
YAY!! Preggo Bella!! So here are the first sets sorry for the delay but my finals just started and I am a bit busy... :)
http://www.polyvore.com/david_copperfield_show/set?id=18746528
http://www.polyvore.com/las_vegas_galls/set?id=18726212
http://www.polyvore.com/las_vegas/set?id=18725547
http://www.polyvore.com/portland/set?id=18724463
http://www.polyvore.com/portland/set?id=18723699
xoxo
marianne
Date: 15 May 2010 5:13 AM Title: Salt Lake City
great chapter.... well some one is pregnant
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 May 2010 7:14 AM Title: Las Vegas
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 1:51 PM Title: Sacramento
Loved it!! I'll have the fits ready bu tomorrow!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Awesome, thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 2:16 AM Title: Sacramento
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 6:43 AM Title: Portland
I like it a lot!! Please please tell me I can make the 'fits!!?? ***pouts***
I was good in the others wasn't I???
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
lol, Of course you can!
Date: 12 May 2010 6:03 AM Title: Portland
great chapter... i see there is going to be some more drama.... i am excited to see who the stalker is
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 May 2010 7:46 AM Title: Seattle
Gosh this is gonna be sooo fucking good!!!!!
xxoo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 May 2010 4:34 AM Title: Seattle
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you