Date: 03 Oct 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love this story! I just spent the day reading the whole thing. I can hardly wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it! Hoping to have the next chapter up in a day or two! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 24
ugh what a cliffy to leave us all on !
hope you up date really quick !
Author's Response: I know, I've spoiled you guys until now, lol! I can't end EVERY chapter with Bella curling up to sleep beside Jasper :) I'm hard at work on the next one, will try my best! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 24
Finally the Vampire Whisperer is here. It took long enough for him to get here. Can't wait till they hand Edward his arse. This story is one of the best I have ever read.
Author's Response: Lol, thanks for sticking with me during the build up! Things are going to steamroll right along for awhile now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great AU so far. Really enjoying your FF.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
Yea for malcolm coming.....poor for eddie. wonder how he found them
Author's Response:
Edward will explain himself next chapter, no worries! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
Man I can't wait to see how this unfolds!!! I am so excited! I loved how worried they were about Bella getting the flu. I figured Edward would pop up eventually and boy did he! Malcom showing up is going to be quite the adventure.
Author's Response:
Yeah, things are gonna steamroll right along here for awhile now. I figured the flu would really freak the vamps out since they wouldn't care about human medicine over the years. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
sent you a PM,excellent ch.edward back arrogant as ever i see,hope the major sorts him out,hope you up-date soon,bye.cheryl.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the return of Edward! He'll get what he deserves, don't worry! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
ahhh the Edward drama decends. while personally I like Edward he did leave her so tis his own fault....besides Jasper is quite hot .....hmmm a jasper edward bella sandwich.....i am gonna go mull that over in my mind for a bit........awesome chappy
Author's Response:
I still love Edward in AH fics, but I just can't get past him abandoning her in canon stories. A bella/jasper/edward sandwich is definitely something I could get behind though, lol! Maybe in my next fic ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
GAH! and GASP! and then WHAT!
i loved it though, it had me smiling.
Author's Response:
*giggle* glad you liked! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
I was wondering when that was going to happen. I have a ton of what if's now. How over the top will Edward be? I get a little sad when he is bat shit carzy in other fics. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
I hope you'll like what I do with him- I'm not going for bat shit crazy or complete reversal of his character. I'm going more for the effect that he hasn't handled the last two years well and the changes that Bella has experienced will be difficult for him to accept. Hopefully, the next chapter will clear a lot up! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
WOW! I was so glad to finally see Edward arrive. I really hope he doesn't turn psycho and try and rape or kill Bella....that is so overdone. lol.
Great chapter and I look forward to reading about Malcom. Scottish dudes are the sex. yum!
I can't wait to see Bella get changed.
-k
Author's Response:
No rape or killing of Bella (by Edward anyway - evil grin!) I'm going more for an unbalanced-unwilling-to-give-her-up take on it, not a complete reversal of his character. Hopefully the next chapter will clear it up!
I am way behind on the next chapter because a bunch of people rec'd Coming Through the Rye- with a Scottward! Between reading it and buying all new panties, I don't have time to write :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
I already review on FFN, but I will here too. Edward is a douche. hehe :)
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks! I feel like a douche myself for not realizing the chapter didn't make it up over here, lol! More doucheward coming up!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
awesome chapter. had to laugh about the giant bag o medicine.
Author's Response:
I had this vision of Peter at Walgreens just emptying the shelves! Glad you liked, thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 24
Well wasn't this interesting... We all know Edward needs to go get a clue, but I love the ending the most. It just was a perfect way to end the chapter. I hope you update again soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it! I'm not that comfortable with cliffies- you'll notice I tend to end my chapter with Bella curling up to sleep, lol! So anyway, I'm glad you thought this worked!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
well im happy that she going to able to finally some closuer with ducheward cant wait to see how and when malcolm will help alice ! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Yeah, things are going to roll rather quickly for awhile! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 01 Oct 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope they find a way to help Andy. he is one of my favorite characters in this story. the way he reminds me so much of my best friend/unbiological sister...
I hope he get clean and gets out of all this truble.
Love the story by the way!
~tell next time~
Author's Response:
Bella cares about him, and Jasper would do anything for Bella, so they'll do what they can to help him. Glad you enjoying the story and connecting with my original character!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
I like fluff but action is good as well! Can't wait for the next update. I am really enjoying the play by play between Peter and Bella.
Author's Response:
Action is coming up! Glad you like Bella and Peter- they're fun to write! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Sweetness is always good to read.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed, because big drama is on the way! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter
Where is that story you are rec'ing? I can't find it here or on FF
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked the fluff! Not sure if VSPS is on this site or not, but she's over at ff.net. Go to my profile, Be Careful What You Wish For is on my favorites! Should be near the top, she updates frequently!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
I want to see some Edward in the pciture. I'm torn on how I want it to play out. I'm kind of hoping he won't be an ass, but what's a staory without a little Assward? Great chapter as always!
-k
Author's Response:
You don't have long to wait to find out what he's gonna be like! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh no I did like it. Sometimes the action can get a bit heavy. I'm just not good with words when it comes to reviews. I've always loved every chapter. I really liked the humor in this one. So sorry if it sounded wrong.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, I totally misread your review! I didn't think you were flaming me or anything, you just sounded disappointed, lol! Please don't apologize- I really appreciate every review I get- even if it's not a rave!
I'm probably a little paranoid because I feel like I have a tendency to get off track with the story line, but it just feels wrong when I try to write action non stop!
Anyway, the action is definitely starting up again- hope you like it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing my story!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
take this is literally the calm before the storm,can't wait to see what happens next,thanks,bye.c.
Author's Response:
You're not wrong! Buckle up, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
love the whole bear looking at me think that was so funny
Author's Response:
Glad you liked! I always feel good when I make people laugh- it's hard to do! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
well im happy she won over rose but i cant wait till edward comes back and trys to fight for her ! keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response: Not long to wait on Edward! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Luved it! The bear with the stink eye was hilarious. And now you've also made me curious about when Edward will show up and how he's going to handle the news.
'til next time
Firewings312
Author's Response:
Not long to wait to find out about Edward! Glad you liked the bear, lol!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
I cant wait for more! This is a great story!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you're enjoying!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 23
It was fluffy, and I'm ready for action again.
Author's Response:
Hmm, I can't read your tone with this statement, but it sounds like you didn't enjoy it. I'm sorry if you don't like the fluffy stuff, but I just wasn't ready to throw more at them so quickly after the wolves. I feel like a balance of lighthearted moments is important and makes us more connected to the characters when we have to go through drama with them. Anyway, I write it as it comes to me, and the action is coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Some hints for sure in this chapter...I bet Edward's return is not too far away!
Author's Response:
You're not wrong! He'll be around quite soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Sep 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have a feeling a confrontation with Edward is not far around the block. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Good instincts, he'll be poking his nose in really soon! Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 20 Sep 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it! Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed! Will try to be faster for next chapter!
Date: 15 Sep 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Love the police car idea.....and the bloodmobile was hilarious.
Author's Response:
Thanks, although they were both ideas given to me in a review! I should start asking for ideas I guess, lol! Thanks as always for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
you know i was just wondering if edward will ever show up in this story???
Author's Response:
Yes. *evil smile* I was thinking of just stopping there, but I kept laughing at myself! He's coming up, in all his tedious glory! Patience grasshopper!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
:)
Author's Response:
:* You crack me up with this! Someday I want to know what's on your mind, lol!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome as usual. Can't wait 'til next time!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, glad you liked!
Date: 07 Sep 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter. It was nice to see Bella able to help the vampires instead of always being the 'weak link' - should be a great confidence booster for her. I also enjoyed the more humorous aspects of the blood donation, it brought a little levity to a serious situation. It was good for her to get some closure with Charlie, and also with the wolves, as she can more easily keep her gaze forward now, rather than it skipping to the past so often.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked Bella helping Peter-- I've had a few complaints that I made the vamps weak against the wolves. That wasn't my intention, but I needed to make Peter vulnerable somehow so that Bella could step up. She gets to help, and Jasper gets to learn that he can be around her blood. If you liked the blood jokes, stay tuned!!!! I got the most awesome idea from a reviewer and I'm running with it in the next chapter!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
That ended better than I thought. I am glad that little confrontation is over. I like J more and more every chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad you're happy, I've had some disastisfied customers over the fight and the outcome, lol! Glad you're loving J, he's like my dream man! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 21
good chapter. glad they let her help peter. sad they had to fight at all though.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but the drama will bring them all closer! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
I just love protective and sexy fighting Jasper! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked him in action! Really going to try to update more frequently now that I'm splitting the PoVs! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
Another amazing chapter! Great action, great drama, great love! This is so my favorite story and I can wait to read more!
Author's Response:
What a compliment!! Thanks so much and I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
awww poor peter.
Author's Response:
You can't keep Peter down though, lol! He'll be fine. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yeah predicatible but thats ok. Soon as she said she wanted to go back to forks, I knew the wolves would come into play.
Author's Response:
That's so funny, because her trip to Forks was long-planned, but the wolves were a very recent addition! I needed them to make something else happen- otherwise I was planning on leaving them totally out of the story, lol! Ok, back to work on the chapter! :)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
kinda was expecting that ending.
Author's Response:
Was it a predicatable cliffy, lol? Don't hate me, you know I don't usually do them, but it just had to be this chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow love it so far can't wait for more x x x
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 20
Drunk Bella was adorable, and I love the idea of the 'bucket list'.
Jasper's sweetness toward Bella as she was dealing with her grief over Charlie's loss almost brought me to tears, and her goodbye to him was so realistically poignant.
I can imagine how intense the upcoming scene with the wolves is going to be, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I love the way you're interweaving so many subplots into the main one, you always keep me guessing and anxiously awaiting the next twist.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked tipsy Bella- she might show up one more time, I can't decide, lol! I'm so glad you're finding the story interesting, I have a hard time seeing it objectively as I write and I sometimes think it's boring!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome update. Now I'm just having problems remembering what was going on with Jake when Bella left Forks last.
Author's Response: Thanks glad you liked. Jake hasn't been addressed in this fic until now, but the way Bella left, she never knew about the pack or any of it.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, great chapter. Man, I love how good Jasper is for Bella! He's so dreamy in your story!
Author's Response:
Giggle, for a while, I actually tried to make him not so perfect, but I just couldn't give him any major flaws! I give up, it's a work of fiction, he can be the perfect man, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
Heart felt chapter. I hope it was a good outlet for you. I really enjoyed see more interaction between the four of them. Take care and thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the emo, it really was a good way for me to relax! Glad you liked our awesome foursome in action, lol! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
well i thought it might be edward that showed up.. but i guess i should have thought about the wolfs.. i hope there is not too much of a fight
Author's Response:
Well, you know how hot headed young wolves are, sigh. Stay tuned for the outcome! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
i'm really enjoying tis story. It's very well written and so easy to get lost in the narrative. Good job. On to chapter 2
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderful resolution to the Bella/Emmet situation - he's such a sweetheart, I don't think anyone could stay angry with him for too long. I'd love to see him and Rosalie join the 'Whitlocks' full time, the hilarity that would ensue would be epic.
Mama Josie was great, such a character! I love the trust Jasper has for Bella, just following her lead at times without worrying or over-thinking things. And I so agree with Jasper that Bella needs to get totally drunk once before he changes her. That night would go down in infamy between her and Peter and the trouble they could get into.
P.S.: Best of luck with your mother-in-law's situation. I help take care of mine since she has Alzheimer's and I know what a strain a seriously ill familiy member can put on a person. Stay strong.
Author's Response:
I know, it was really rough to keep her mad at him! The McCarty's will be back, never fear! Also, tipsy Bella comin' up soon! So glad you enjoyed Mama J and the side trip. You really picked up on how I'm trying to convey their relationship- both sides trusting each other. Thanks for the kind words for my m-i-l. Hats off to you, I've worked with people with Alzheimer's and I know what a challenge it can be. You're a good person to do that for her. Hugs, heavy.
Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved the chapter...as always.
Family should always come first, so we'll be patient and wait for your updates (without bitching too much - lol).
Kat
Author's Response:
Thanks for your patience- things are better this week and I'm making some progress on the next chapter! Glad you enjoyed the latest! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 18 Aug 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 19
family first hun.
Love your story.
Author's Response:
Thank you, MIL is doing much better this week!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm amazed you had time to write at all. I hope you and your family can find peace during this difficult time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words, the writing is actaully a great escape at the end of the day!
Date: 16 Aug 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter as always. Take care of your family and use this as the outlet it was meant to be.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words- everyone has been very supportive, and my fingers are itching to get to work on the next chapter :-)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loving it as usual.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm glad Bella made it out of New Orleans to find Jasper!
Sorry about your mother in law. I lost my dad 3 weeks ago unexpectedly.
Looking forward to updates when they come.
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry for your loss, there are no words at times like this, but you are in my prayers. Hope you liked their little side trip, big action is coming up ahead shortly. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
well i hope that they find what they are looking for cant wait till the next chapter ! best wishes on the family front!
Author's Response:
That vamp whisperer is elusive isn't he, lol! Thanks for the well wishes, and for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Aug 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like the peace that comes upon Jasper and Bella when they are in physical contact.
I'm glad that Bella chose Jasper as worthy enough to have shared the story of her tragic history since her 18th birthday.
Jasper is a sweetheart to have emphasized to Bella that the actions that she had to take to survive doesn't make her a bad person or a slut.
I'm really enjoying this story so far.
Well done--keep up the good work!
=)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the lovely reviews, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love the reaction that Jasper and Bella have to the other when they touch; it is so cool.
:D
Author's Response:
Thanks! I played off of the electric feeling B and Edward had in the books but made it suited to Bella and Jasper. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, talk about your streak of awful happenings (I really didn't want to use the term "series of unfortunate events", but still), sheesh.
Jasper is a great guy to have kept an eye out on her that first night.
Well done--keep up the good work!
=)
Author's Response:
Yeah, but don't worry, life will probably get better with Jasper around, lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm so sorry if I made you think that you went overboard or that I didn't like it. You surprised me and that's a good thing. You wouldn't want your story to be predictable (did I spell that right?).
I love your story and your writing. Please feel free to keep surprising me!
Lotsa Love.....Kat
Author's Response:
Oh my goodness, you didn't make me feel that way at all- sorry if I made you feel bad! I just think it's a funny thing to talk about, lol! How many licks, oh wait, that's a different part of the chapter *giggle* I mean how many humans can three vamps take on at once before one escapes to tell the tale?
Will do my best to keep the surprises rolling! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and don't worry about hurting my feelings, I try not to take this too seriously!
xoxo
heavy
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow. I knew that they were kick some ass but I didn't expect there to be that many people there. I wonder how Emmett is going to deal with killing so many people - that will have to bother his conscience.
Kat
Author's Response:
Did I go overboard? I really tried to figure out what would keep three vampires out for revenge occupied, but maybe I overestimated, lol! Don't worry too much about Em, he's about to wax philosophical! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
You had me scared at the end of the last chapter! I was afraid of the direction but loved where you took this chapter. I really love how strong Bella is.
Author's Response:
Really!! Where did you think I was going I wonder. Did you think Peter would succeed in keeping them apart or that Jasper would stay in lock down mode? Anyway, glad you liked how it turned out. Bella has just as much power in their relationship as Jasper, even if she is still a fragile human. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
woo hoo......the wicked wizard is dead......
Author's Response:
Hope his ending was up to your expectation, lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
Fantastic way to end K2, and I love that Jasper took so much extra time with Alex - he needed a 'special attention' kind of beatdown. It definitely satiated my newborn bloodthirst, and I was cheerin' Jasper along out loud, much to my husband's amusement.
Loving Char so far - she's such a great foil for Peter, the perfect compliment to his personality. I can see her and Bella becoming quite close, and I'm sure Bella can pick up a thing or two from her over the coming years of their friendship.
I felt so bad for Jasper, having to relive what he used to be like during his Maria days, but I was also damned proud of him, too. He resisted the call of the blood being spilled around him, and managed to hold himself together long enough to get back to Bella so she could help him as only she can. He's so much stronger than anyone ever gave him credit for, and maybe now he will start to see that for himself.
The moment they started trying to keep Bella and Jasper apart, I knew that wasn't going to fly, and Bella's little speech to them afterward was great. Her backbone is growing right along with her self-confidence, and it's wonderful to see.
This is one story that I'm never going to want to see come to an end, and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Enjoy your time away, and a belated Happy Birthday!
P.S.: As for your question in response to the last review I left, rather than tell me what he thought about what he read, my husband decided to show me instead, and all I can say is... Thank you, Jasper! *big damned grin*
P.P.S.: Let your hubby proofread!!
Author's Response:
Glad Alex's ending entertained you and your husband, lol! Lot's more of Char ahead, no worries! I'm happy you like the ways Bella's changing. My birthday was very nice, thank you!
p.s. will try out the proofreading on hubby, and Jasper says he's glad to oblige *tips his hat and winks at you*
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
Pure satisfaction for those that love Andy. I love how Bella and Jasper continue to prove that they can last and their love is real and undeterred.
Author's Response:
So glad you liked the end of Alex and Bella and Jasper's love for each other! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked it!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
loved this chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad! Thanks for reviewing to let me know you liked it!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Hppe you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 18 Jul 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you liked! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh my goodness.. i love it!! I can't wait until Edward comes into the picture.. :] Poor Alice, though.. i was thinking Bella would be like 'Let me try..' and they would sort shit out.
<3
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying. Edward is down the road a little more. Alice will have resolution by the end, don't worry, although Bella is not her cure. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 17 Jul 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bossy Jasper is sooo sexy...omg....please update soon
Author's Response:
Glad you liked him, that was my favorite lemon to write so far! Working on the next one, it's going pretty well, so hopefully not a long wait for the next update! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
The characters you have created are absolutely awesome. I cannot wait to see how you progress with their relationship. And maybe a reunion with Edward? I always thought that Jasper was better for Bella than Edward. Both are driven by their emotions and caring for others. I love the way you have written Peter and look forward to "meeting" Charlotte. Looking forward to your next posting.
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying what I'm doing. Edward will be back, but it's still a way down the road. Char will be here soon! Will try to be faster with the next chapter- k2 is going down!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love Peter! Jasper is always hot! Loved it and can't wait for the revenge. I hope Emmett will be able to join in the fun!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked! K2 goes down next chapter, and no way would I leave Emmett out! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
yummy
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Glad you liked!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love Peter's sense of humour and how he's drawing Bella's out in response to it. Having Jasper's love could bring her 80% of the way back to life, but to truly heal from the past she needs others in her life as well, others she's willing to open her heart to, and Peter is certainly filling that need. I'm sure that Charlotte will help quite a bit as well.
It was uplifting to see that she didn't cave into the Cullens, leaving the possibility open for more interaction in the future without offering complete forgiveness that they haven't yet earned from her. It will do them good to have to work for her love once more, since they so carelessly threw it away the first time around.
I'm so glad Andy finally saw the light thanks to grandma, Bella would have been heartbroken had he continued to refuse help. It would have been a victory for K2 even if they were utterly destroyed by the guys, and I would have hated to see that happen. As I stated in an earlier review, I'm so looking forward to watching them get what they deserve after all the harm they've caused.
Bella using Charlotte against Peter was hilarious and I had no trouble picturing that phone conversation in my head. Poor Peter, I think he seriously underestimates Bella's 'ruthless/stubborn' streak at times, and it's great to see her holding her own against him without the million and one blushes she would have been betrayed by in the past. Bella with a backbone is awesome.
I always loved the contradictions in Jasper's personality. One moment he's the Major in all his glory, and the next he's the perfect mate, showing the sweet, loving side of his heart by going out of his way to get back pieces of Bella's past for her. It filled in another missing piece of her heart while offering him the opportunity to get to know her better.
Great way to end the chapter. Jasper's so damn sexy when he's Dominant. I even caught my husband reading over my shoulder. *grin*
Author's Response:
What a fantastic review- thank you so much! You're so perceptive about the role Peter will play with Bella, and of course Char will too once we meet her (soon!) One of the things that drove me crazy in the books was they way Bella let the Cullens off the hook about leaving. It was like she thought is was acceptable for them to do that- no self worth. We'll check in with Andy in the future so people get a chance to meet him sober too. K2 goes down next chapter (yay!). *giggle* what'd your husband say? My hubs doesn't know what I write (he's not much of a reader!), maybe I'll ask him to proofread for me!!! Thanks so much for the lovely in depth review!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Happy belated birthday! Loved the new chapter. Kat
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
I have to tell you...this story has made me fall in love with Jasper! I am usually not a big Jasper lover but man has this story changed my tune. Thank you SO much for this chapter and happy belated b-day!! :)
Author's Response:
Wow what a compliment! I'm so glad you like what I've done with him- he's fun because from the books he's almost a blank slate- lots of room to make him how I want him! Thank you for the birthday wishes!
Date: 15 Jul 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I love Peter and his obsession with The Jersey Shore. I'm glad Bella finally figured out Jasper was her forever and I can't wait to see what this Vampire Whisperer can do.
Author's Response:
Lol, I live in Jersey and hate that show!! Big emo progress for our Bella, huh? Vamp whisperer is a few chaps away (I think!) K2 goes down next chapter- good times!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. I am so glad that Bella is coming to trust in Jasper enough to give herself fully to him.
Author's Response:
Big steps for her, huh? Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
I cant wait for Jasper, Peter, and Emmett to get their revenge! This is one of my favorite Jasper/Bella stories! I cant wait for more!
Author's Response:
I'm thinking of making the revenge scene pretty graphic- lots of people are screaming for blood, lol! I'm so glad you like the story, thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story
Author's Response:
I'm so glad! Thanks for letting me know!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter and, as usual, so worth the wait. I'm going to give your Peter a high-five - his interaction with Bella was so sweet, and I loved the way she was instantly so comfortable with him. I hope we'll be seeing a lot more of their interaction throughout the rest of the story.
Poor Alice. I have to admit I never cared for her character much, but I can't keep myself from pitying her current situation despite my dislike. I can't wait to see what Peter's come up with to help her, and the idea of the Vampire Whisperer was awesome. You bring such a sense of subtle humour to the story and it's enchanting.
I'm also looking forward to seeing how Jasper and Peter plan to take care of the creeps who hurt Bella, and anticipating some intense justice to be dealt out, vampire style. I have to admit I'm a total sucker for sexy, protective males.
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed Peter and Bella's connection- I hoped people would like the feel of it. He'll be a regular character, so glad you like him! Now Alice- I loved her in the books, but now that I'm BellaxJasper, she has to go, and the "nice" ways to write her out are taken! Hope I can pull the vamp whisperer off on paper like he is in my head!
The boys are out for blood and Alex's days are numbered! A lot of people are screaming for their heads to roll, so hope everyone will handle the violence ok!
Thanks for the lovely review!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 16
I just found your story and I am loving it! I love Bella and Edward together but it is nice to change it up every now and then. I am a huge fan of Bella-Jasper stories and I love Peter! I think your characterizations are spot on in an AU Cannon kind of way. I know that statement is odd but I hope you get the idea - I really like it! Can't wait to read what happens next.
--lightspell
Author's Response:
No, I think I totally understand what you mean- I made some "improvements" to her character, but I really try to keep her in character- does that make sense?, lol! So glad you're enjoying the story. I still love AH Bella and Edward, but in canon, I'm all Jasper, sometimes Peter. It's funny because I loved him so much the first time I read the books, but the more I read, the creepier he got! Thanks so much for reviewing, hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it and love me some Peter.
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed him! He'll be around for a little while now! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great Chapter. I was beginning to think that Bella was going to be the one to get through to Alice. It will be interesting to findout more about this vampire whisperer.
Kat
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope I can pull the vamp whisperer off! He's cool in my head, I hope I can translate him to the page- little worried about it, lol! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it. Peter always makes me laugh. I was wondering when he would show up. Love Jasper in the tub. Maybe I could borrow him for a while??
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm sending Jasper your way. Where should I tell him your boo boo is? ;-) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
i like peter a lot! cnat wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you liked him, he's fun to write! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
sorry to see the story got deleted and you had to repost. Glad you did though. Love this story
Author's Response:
Oh, don't waste your sympathy, dear heart, that was my own f*** up, lol! The internet hates me, end of story! There was probably a way around the glitch, but I couldn't find it, so I took it down and started over again. Sigh. Anyway, glad you still like my story even though I'm apparently retarded! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 30 Jun 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! I'm eager to see what you're going to do with Alice.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope you like how I play her out! Thanks for reviewing!