Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. Eddie is REALLY delusional.
Got my compilation today. Can't wait to read it.
Author's Response:
I know, I've made him REALLY out of character! May have taken it a bit far, but it's so fun to hate him!!!
Thank you for donating to Fandom for Preemies!!!!!!!! Hope you enjoy the outtake!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad you enjoyed! Bella's POV is up next- more newborn firsts and she'll reunite with the family.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Getting good....
Author's Response:
Thanks, hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 29
Edward sucks. But I kind of like that Bella can now exact her own revenge on Victoria. Can't wait to see what gifts you give Bella if they differe at all from the books.
Author's Response:
We'll see if the impact with the wall improved his personality at all, lol! Bella's POV is up next- more newborn firsts and she'll reunite with the family! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ooh, I want Jazz to visit me w/no napkins. Preferably with nothing at all. ;)
Author's Response:
You and me both :)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I loved your comment about Jasper getting some this decade. Maybe then he wouldn't be so uptight!
Author's Response:
Lol, we'll have to wait and see I guess!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
What the hell is up with Andy?
Author's Response:
He's in a really bad situation. Much more to come.
Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wonder what's up with Andy and if Jasper needs to teach him a lesson.....
Author's Response: All will be revealed, keep reading :) Thanks for all the reviews!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
Things are progressing....
Author's Response:
Lol, slowly but surely! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
brill ch. when is edward going to get a clue? how many times does everyone have tell him no ?, any way looking forward to whats coming next are we going to see the Volturi in this story?
until next time,cheerio,fae cheryl.
Author's Response:
Thanks! We'll see if Edward has a clue once they clean the paster off his head, lol! I haven't entirely decided about the Volturi yet, but if they do show up, it won't be in a major fashion. Thanks for the help!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wonder what Jasper's up to.....
Author's Response:
Lol, whatever he can get away with to make her life better! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 29
well i hope that they can all take turns and tourcher edward! keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response: Lol, good idea with the tag teaming! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella's not going to let Jasper keep blaiming himself for everything is she. :0)
Author's Response:
No, they'll have a big heart to heart on that issue soon. Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad she has a friend in Andy. I hope he doesn't die by Victoria.
Author's Response:
Glad you like him- he grew into a bigger character than I had planned! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
It will be interesting to see if Edward reappears.
Author's Response:
He will be along, but not for quite awhile. The focus is almost entirely on Bella and Jasper for the beginning of their relationship. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you continue to enjoy!
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
Please?, some yummy Jasper and Bella? hehehe Update soon. :)
Author's Response:
Lol, sorry for the cockblocking! We should have a real lemon in the next chapter or so :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 29
please...never apologize for taking care of your family over getting a chappy out...we understand and those that don't can go crawl in a hole. awesome chappy can't wait for the next and yeah bella knocking of edwards head was funny as all hell and as i have said before i am team edward but love the story
Author's Response:
Lol, no one has been bad about the delay, I just feel bad when I can't post once a week. Glad you enjoyed Bella's wake up call to Edward. I've made him so out of character in this story, so I hope you can enjoy about him being decapitated even though you are team edward :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Really enjoying this so far :0)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love Jasper / Bella stories. Really looking forward to reading this one. :0)
Date: 01 Nov 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
Amazing cliffhanger.... and that's the Jasper we all know and love! Mess with his family, and you will be sorry and pay. Your Scotish phonetic-speak is truly impressive. I have Scottish relatives and reading it is like listening to them. Great work.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying the Scottish! I can't take credit for it, because one member of team Malcolm just straight up translates for me. The others then give me suggestions on how to make it better- do any two Scottish people talk the same? :) Anyway, it's a VERY time consuming process, so I'm glad you think it's a nice touch! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 28
At least Jasper got there in time to change her. Thank goodness. What happened to Edward.
Author's Response:
Jasper's POV of stuff is up next and we'll find out about Edward then! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
I seriously want to backhand Edward. He couldn't even protect her! I hope that now that Bella is a vampire she rips him a new one for being so stupid. Thank goodness Jasper arrived just in time. Aargh, im still really pissed at Edward. Very good chapter though. 'til next time.
Firewings312
Author's Response:
Lol, I REALLY made him OOC when I made him such a pussy, but I think it fits him well!! :) Jasper's POV of stuff is coming up next and we'll get to meet newborn Bella.
THanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hate Eddie for being an idiot but am happy that we didn't lose Bella because of his mistake.
Author's Response:
Nah, couldn't have a HEA if I killed her off, could we :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 28
wow so she is a vamp now.... as much as i hope edward is dead i also hope he is not so bella can rip him apart..
Author's Response:
Yep- newborn Bella here we come! Jasper's POV is up next!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Glad you enjoe!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
ugh eddie is such an idiot. glad b put him in his place.
Author's Response:
yep, he's just an idiot, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thank God Jasper found her in time!!! Can't wait for her seeing Jasper as a vampire.
Author's Response:
Jasper's POV is up next and we'll meet newborn Bella! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
ummmmerrr ok cheerleader girl....awesome chappy oved jaz edward was a dumba....er arse.
Author's Response:
yeah, Edward's an idiot. Jasper's POV is up next! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
I sat down at my computer this morning and came across a rec for this fic. I honestly have no idea where. I just could not get up from my seat until I completed reading everything you have written so far. It is truly one of the best stories I have read and I cannot wait to see where the story goes from here. Congratulations on an outstanding job.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Hope you continue to like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good chapter... Edward can go to hell
Author's Response:
Thanks! Jasper's POV coming up next and Edward's fate will be revealed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 28
well she finllly got what she wanted but before victoria got her! that would piss me off and when i became a vampire i would rip edward to shreads and then piece him back together and then do it all again and again ... cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Jasper's POV is coming up next, and we'll get to meet newborn Bella and see what she thinks of Edward now! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 27
Can't wait for Jasper to get a hold of Edward. He should no better than to mess with the Major :) Good Chapter!
Author's Response:
Edward will get what he deserves, never fear! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 26
True, I due hate cliffhangers, but to be fair I also love them when they are used well. Like here. I also love the fact that now Bella is surrounded by people who genuinely love her. Jasper, Peter, Char, Emmett... Having stood alone for so long it has to help! Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response:
Wow, that's the first compliment I've received on the cliffies, lol! I get it though- it's so hard with fanfiction, where we're always waiting for the next chapter. If it was a book, we just have to turn the page to find out what happened!
Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 27
I for one love Malcolm and this story!!! J/B. It;s a good story
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying him- the accent is soooo incredibly time consuming- I can't even tell you! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was an intense chapter. I love Malcolm. Maybe he can help Jasper properly punish Edward. Bella is lucky to have Jasper on her side. If anyone can rescue her, it has to be Jasper with Peter and Charlotte!
Author's Response:
Everything will get explained next chapter, I promise! Glad you're enjoying Malcolm!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 27
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
I really like your story!!! I don't get to read as often as I like so I usually end up reading several chapters at once. I am really enjoying your new character Malcolm. Surprisingly enough I am doing pretty good understanding his written accent. Probly because of all of my years of devotion to brit-coms and British television in general. I found years ago about. I had a feeling he might be Alices mate. Now I am wondering what is really going on in Edwards head. Im thinking that maybe he was the boss, though it could have been Victoria, Cant wait to find out. Maybe this time I will get to read it when you post it, though it is fun to read 3-5 chapters at a time. ;) Thanks for the story!
Author's Response:
Sometimes I save up a few chapters to read at once with my favorite stories- it makes it more like a real book where you don't have to delay the gratification of the next chpater, lol!
Glad you're enjoying Malcolm and not having a problem with the Scottish. I was reared on Brit-coms myself, so I find I'm no longer an impartial judge of whether the Scottish is hard to read or not! It is quite a lengthy process to get it translated, I have to say, so I'm glad you think it works!
Everything about Bella's abduction will be explained next chapter, I promise.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oooh, are Edward and Victoria working together. I wouldn't put it past the dick!
Author's Response:
Everything will be explained next chapter, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 27
eddie is an idiot. So are the newborn's eddies or vikki's?
Author's Response:
Everything will be cleared up next chapter, I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 27
well the only thing i can think of is victoria? but i dont remember if they killed her yet? cant wait to see what happens next and i really dont see edward working with her anyways so keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Victoria is still at large. Everything will be explained next chapter, I promise. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Damn Edward.
Author's Response:
I know. BPOV of it is coming up next! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
Edward has really gone off the deep end. Jasper is more than likely going to kill him even if he said he wouldnt.
Author's Response:
We'll have to see if Jasper can keep his temper, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 27
oh god.... what doeshe wan to be... her knight in shinnignm armor??? she will never leave jaspers willingly even if edward saved her honestly
Author's Response:
Don't worry, that will be made clear to him by the end of the story, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 27
Well lets hope you can do it again, cuz the suspense is killing me.
Author's Response:
I'll do my best to be fast again *sighs dramatically!* Lol, should be able to post again in a week I think. I was even sick this week and got this up! Sorry, things will calm down soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 26
Good chapter! I am a bit curious as to what Malcolm is up to. It seems like there is more to him than meets the eye. And I so can't wait to find out who has them making a run for it. Can't wait'til next time :)
Firewings312
Author's Response:
Thanks! We'll get some more info on Malcolm next chapter. Sorry about the evil cliffy- I hated to do it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
I guess its Victoria or the Volturi??
Author's Response:
Have to wait and see :( Sorry about the evil cliffy. Am trying to work fast to make up for it, but I'm really sick, so it's not going well. Thanks again for all of your reviews as you read! Makes me feel better than my stash of Cepacol lozenges :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward is going to get it now. How can he judge her???
Author's Response:
He's pretty oblivious. I'm playing up on his old-fashioned ideals and the vampire "resistance to change" as well as the fact that he is barely functioning without Bella while they're apart. It's obsession as opposed to love.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Finally Alice really needs Malcolm.Edward is just going to have to be dealt with later.
Author's Response:
I know, what a wait for the vamp whisperer, right? Hope you like him now that he's here!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the bear thing and drunk Bella with Em and Peter.
Author's Response:
Thanks- it was fun to write!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad she told Rose off. I always hated how she said she would give up Em.
Author's Response:
I know, that drove me crazy too. I think it's a crock of shit. She's gonna give up immortality and the absolute devotion of Emmett to be barefoot, pregnant and bitch-slapped by someone like Royce? I don't think so!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella really will do anything to help her friends and family.
Author's Response:
Yeah. It was hard to put Peter through being hurt, and a lot of people didn't like it that I portrayed him as vulnerable, but Bella needed a way to feel like a fully vested member of the family.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 20
Time for a show down? Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Yep. Poor kids can't get a break today :) Thanks so much for reviewing as you go!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
I hope they find him to help Alice. The stuff fit perfect for New Orleans history.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked New Orleans. I wasn't sure how people would react to it- if it would seem too much like filler or a tangent, but the story popped in my head and it wouldn't leave!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think they got what was coming to them. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, the violence was more challenging than I had thought, but I was happy with it in the end.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter. I like Peter and Bellas relationship.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I've enjoyed it myself. Peter's the big brother I never got to love-to-hate!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great idea Peter had after Bellas suggestion of a vampire whisperer. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
I broke poor Alice, I had to find a way to fix her, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
I think he should help Alice also. It sounds like she really needs it. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
I find that the hardest thing about being a BellaxJasper fan is finding a nice way to get rid of Alice. I was a huge fan of hers in the books, and still love her in non Jasper fics. Don't worry, she'll have resolution by the end of the story.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Good chapter. I think the smut is placed in the right places for the story. I really like the way you desrcibe how Jasper is in the hospital.
Author's Response:
Thanks- it's hard to balance the smut- I love me some smut, but I don't want it to interfere with the story development either. I'm slowly getting more confident about it though :)
Glad you like the hospital stuff- that portion is still one of my favorites in the story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
What a great time they had but of course they got a wake up call on the way home. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah, all good things must come to an end, I guess!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
At last Jasper finally got some relief. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Lol, poor guy earned it, didn't he? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter. Loved the way Bella and Rose interact.
Author's Response:
It was incredibly fun to write the girls' dialog :) Glad you liked!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Gotta love Em and his ability to get things settled with Bella. He is one of my favorite Cullens. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Yep, it's hard to be mad at Emmett, isn't it?
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 9
Really dont like that Alex guy, he is up to no good. Andy at least helped her out with his warning.
Author's Response:
Just wait, Alex gets worse! Andy's in deep shit. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
I say good for them both, about time. Good chapter.
Author's Response:
Lol, slow burn, right? :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
Why does Andy feel despair? What does he know?
Author's Response:
Wait and see! Thanks for reading and reviewing as you go!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Whats up with Andy? Is he jealous? Him having all that money is not good either.
Author's Response:
It's not jealousy, per se. Much more on hiim coming up!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
Glad Bella is at least welcoming Jasper while heis there.
Author's Response:
Well, she's willing to be polite at least! He's gonna have to earn her faith back before she really lets him in.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
What is that Jasper up to? Good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story development!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really like this story so far. So many questions, like what was the vision Alice had? Why wouldnt she tell Jasper? And many more, just have to keep reading.
Author's Response:
Lol, the question of Alice doesn't get answered for quite awhile! Hope you can be patient :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter. They both sure do seem to have lost everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Life has been difficult for them, but things are bound to get better now that they've met up, right ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 26
I can't wait to read what happened! Great story.
Author's Response:
Will try to work fast to make up for the evil cliffy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 26
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Lots going on in this chapter. I love how Bella held her ground. I am guessing that Edward has not given up!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked Bella's tirade- it was a lot of work to get it right, lol! Edward is a stubborn asshole :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is Edward being stupid and trying to steal Bella? Ughh... I need more. Please update really soon....like 5 minutes ago soon.
Just kidding, mostly. I really love this fic is all, you are doing a great job!
Author's Response:
Lol, thanks! I really am sorry about the cliffy- I hate them too! It's just that POV shifts are critical right now, and they make natural stopping places to end the chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
I can only think that Victoria has finally caught up with them.
Author's Response:
We'll have to wait and see who it is ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
Dam! I hate the evil cliffy's! hehehe Update soon. :)
Author's Response:
I know, I really do hate to do cliffies too- it's just a necessity for now :( Thanks for sticking with me anyway ;)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
well the only one i can think thats after her is victoria ! cant wait till the next chatper keep them comming
Author's Response:
We'll see who it is, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
ugh Vikki still chasing her down. Hope Eddie doesnt help her.
Author's Response:
I know, can't she get a break? :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
yep definatly good,loved getting the sneak peak,thank you , again........
i hope it's not bitchtoria that's smashing glass,,,i hope they get to jasper fast,anyway loved the cliffy,can't wait for more,cheryl.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for looking at it! Sorry about the cliffy- it's the POV changes right now that make it necessary!
Thanks again for the help!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
ohhhh i love it love IT!!
like i rate this and the 1 b4 a 100:)
my dose of herion is your stories :)
love it you did it justice with edward and malcom:))
Author's Response:
Thank you so much- I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
NEVER apologize for smut. Never.Ever.
Author's Response:
Lol, just making sure everyone knows it's not turning into a Porn Without Plot! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 11
I would let Jasper Whitlock get me off any time. . .anywhere.
Author's Response:
:))) Not much else to say, is there? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Damn...Edward has nerve!!! He abandoned the girl he claimed to love and his family without so much as a word. Then he expects to come back and take Bella away like she still loves him and nothing ever happened. He has the balls to get mad at Jasper for going against his "orders" to leave Bella alone. Not only that, he has the audacity to get angry over the way she had to live and that she ended up with Jasper.
He's damn lucky that Peter didn't kill him for hurting his wife and Bella. Now he is going to have to deal with Bella's wrath. He doesn't realize that she's not the scared and clingy little girl he left behind. I can't wait to hear her take all her anger out on him and rip his heart out like he did to her. I hope she makes him feel a million times worse than she ever did.
I loved it when Jasper felt reassured that Bella's feelings for him hadn't changed because she saw Edward again. I love how happy they are together...so back the f... off Eddie!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol- did he piss you off a little? :) don't worry, Bella's gonna school him good next chapter. Also, don't worry about B and Jasper. Things will get rough, but they'll handle it as a team. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
Eward always the selfish one and worried about what he thinks is best. I like Malcolm he seems very laid back, and might have a very interesting story to tell.
Bonnie Vampire?
Author's Response:
I always thought he had a huge superiority complex, lol! Glad you enjoyed Malcolm!
Were you confused with the bonnie vampire phrase? When I originally wrote the sentence, I used the words 'remarkable vampire', and my Scottish team translated that into bonnie vampire. Apparently, the word bonnie doesn't just mean 'pretty', it's also a general positive adjective. Am planning to include more translations next chapter!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I like it that they move slow - it seems more realistic that way.
Author's Response:
Thanks for sticking with me during the slow burn. It just wouldn't fit their characters to rush into something. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
I can't wait for to unleash on his ass!
Author's Response:
Hope I can do Bella justice, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
Way to go there Edward. I hope Bella gives him hell. I liked Malcom. I hope he can help Alice. I am turning into Peter - I am getting some feelings about the story. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked Malcolm. More of him next chapter, of course. Hope your Petey-senses lead you the right way, lol! thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Can't WAIT to see her go off on Eddie boy.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Edward won't enjoy the next part very much, that's for sure!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
Please say that there is more ass chewing and ass kicking in for Eddie! hehehe ;)
Author's Response:
Well, let's just say he won't enjoy the next chapter very much! The boys are done beating him up for now, as long as he behaves himself. We'll see if he can handle it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
well im excited to know her point of view i hope she give edward a tounge lashing! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
I hope I can pull it off! There's so much to say- it's hard to know where to start! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 05 Oct 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
No! Arg, I should have never told you cliff hangers worked! Really good chapter. Please please please update soon.
Author's Response:
I'm so sorry! It really will be cliffies pretty much from here to the end! I told everyone to enjoy the fluff while it lasted, lol! I have the outline for the next one started, will try to be fast :)
Date: 05 Oct 2010 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
GAH! I can't wait to hear the tear she is going to give Edward.
Author's Response:
She's definitely gonna tell it how it is, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
it was even better the second time through,hahaha,i don't think you should have any problems,just tell everyone to think of 'braveheart',there isn't alot of slang in it anyway,it's not a robert burns poem,that's hard for even the scottish,including me,PMSL. any way, glad i could help,ready and waiting for more,it was fun,heehheeee, until next time,
BYE ,Team Malcolm(cheryl)
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm getting a total British fix off of you!! PMSL- love it! I should have thought to mention Braveheart- everyone saw that! Thanks a million for all of the help. It was great having him come to life just like I dreamed him up! Glad you had fun doing it!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
I hope they can help Alice. she was one onf my favorite characters in twilight. and its sad to read about her like this.
i also want to know about Andy. how hes doing and stuff...
love the story
Author's Response:
The only bad thing about being a Bella/Jasper shipper is that Alice has to go somehow! This was the way I chose to go, but don't worry, everyone will get resolution by the end of the story!
Hope you continue to enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!