Date: 13 Oct 2015 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
There are so many things that i'm loving about this story
- Bella has a backbone
- Jasper isn't a control freak
_ You & Your Beta have given this a nice flow without the distraction of constant grammar errors
Great Job !
Date: 20 Feb 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
What a suprise.... Edward and Andy. :0) Bella gets to have hrer friend. I've really enjoyed reading this story.
Hope you liked the twist! I planned for Edward to end up with a guy from the beginning, but I wasn't sure he deserved Andy! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 18 Feb 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
only a jersey girl can write a story like this! this is why i love being a jersey girl myself!
Lol, well, I can only claim to be a Jersey girl by transplant, but I'm glad you think I'm pulling it off!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Feb 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 34
what a way to end,excellent story,very surprised with edwards out come,lol, was so sure you would of made bella hand him his ass permanantly,,,not so much of a prude now is he ,,,,lovely,pmsl.
glad to of been of some help with team malcolm, it was a great honour, so thank you again, looking forward to more of your work. c.
Lol, glad you liked that little twist! My feeling is that any guy who voluntarily remains a virgin for 107 years is just denying what he's into!
Your help is much appreciated- are you game for a whole chapter on Alice and Malcolm? :)
Til next time :)
Date: 06 Feb 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 34
I am so happy with the way you pulled Andy back into Bella's life and used Andy as a means for Edward's redemption. I think you resolved the family balance for the Cullen's in the best possible way. Both Alice and Edward found true happiness and contentment after losing their "gifts" and learning to trust, communicate and take chances.
I will miss your characters and this story, but no sequel is needed. This has been a great adventure!
Glad you liked the Andy and Edward twist. I thought everyone deserved a happy ending!
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Date: 06 Feb 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
I loved this story!! This is a story that I will save in my favorites and reread again and again! I know what you mean about it being bitter-sweet to finish a story. I recently finished one on the fanfiction website that was hard to let go of so now I am rereading and revamping it and posting it here on TWCS. I love this story!!! Thank you for sharing it with us!
Thanks so much for the compliment and for reading and reviewing!
Til next time :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you for sharing your wonderful story. You have a gift of building relationships among your characters. I look forward to reading more stories by you!
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Til next time :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 34
What an awesome ending to a great story! Love the Edward is Gay (sort of) Seems as though he might swing both ways lol! But Im glad to hear that they all made up and are all happy. (The way I like stories to end!)
Anyway keep up the great work and I look forward to reading some of your materal under your new name! Oh and Im thinking of you with all the snow you guys are getting at the moment - Yes it made the news here!
Yeah, I don't know if he's bi or just still into Bella, lol! So glad you enjoyed this story and I'm planning the smut as we speak!
We're lucking out and just getting rain today, which is gross on top of the snow, but soooo much better than more snow! Hope the storms are giving you a break!
Til next time :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 34
ANDY??? wow didnt see that one coming. LOL
Great chapter. Its been a great ride hun. thank you for taking the time to write and share with us all.
Lol, did I surprise you? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Til next time :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 34
OMG, I am so sad, yet so happy! I love this ending!!!
THank you, so much for sharing this story with us readers. I for one will be forever grateful that I got to read such a wonderful story. I look forward to reding more of your work, for sure!
Awww, thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Til next time :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 34
Who knew Edward was going to fall for a guy? Wonderful ending. I have enjoyed this story alot.
Lol, my theory is that anyone who stays a virgin for that long is denying what they're into! So glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Til next time :)
Date: 05 Feb 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
I'm so sad that this story is complete, but so happy for you at the same time. sigh.... :) Once again, congratulations!
It's definitely a bittersweet kind of feeling! So glad you enjoyed the story- thanks for reading and reviewing!
Til next time :)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oooh, the plot thickens!
Buckle up- it's a wild ride from here on out! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 33
The way everything seemed to be tying up in this chapter I figured it was coming to an end. I've really enjoyed reading this story and will definitely keep an eye out for more stories that you may write.
So glad you've enjoyed the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was amazing. I liked how you wrote that Jasper left himself while killing. It's so much like what he would do. And I'm glad that those fuckers are dead.
Thanks. I wanted to show the different side of him without using the "Major" personality. Glad you liked!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
I am so sad that this story is almost done. I always look forward to your updates, but I guess it can't go on forever. I am anxious to see how you write the Epilogue.
I'm a little sad too, but the story is about done. I'm REALLY nervous about the epi- it won't be long, and I'm worrying that it's coming across very cheesy! Still, I love epi's in fanfic- I always feel like "real" books end at the good part lol!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
Loved the chapter. I really liked the idea of Bella's "tattoos". I'm also sad to reaad that the story's almost over. If you're up for it, I'd love to see you write a Darksper story. You know, all kinds of sexy bad. I've been wanting to see a really great one written and I've loved this story so much that I think that you could pull it off.
So glad you liked the tat idea- I consider that a huge compliment from you! I'm having a difficult time describing what I'm envisioning, but I'm going to try to explain it better in the epi because lots of people have asked.
Your Darksper request is floating around and around in my brain, but I still have reservations about my ability to write him as less than perfect! And again, he would have to end up all nice and happy ever after too! As I said before, I take it as a huge compliment that you think I could do it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 33
Good chapter. I am happy to see that Bella is the one to take care of Vic.
Yes, I felt it was important for her to be the one to end Vic. She's a badass vampire now, no reason for Jasper to do all the work! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Jan 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter. LOL even Tanya couldnt handle whineyward. glad V is finally dead.
cant wait to go read your other stuff.
Lol, that idea popped in my head at the last minute and I thought it was funny! Hope my alter ego lives up to expectations!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Dec 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 32
Loved this chapter. It was nice to see Jasper and Bella have some alone time, to let Jasper get use to Bella being a vampire and Bella getting use to her newborn tendencies. Thought it was extremely cute that Bella asked Jasper to marry her, stealing his line. Thank you for writing!
So glad you enjoyed the twist with the proposal! I considered not having them get married, but in the end I felt it would be important to Jasper. I wanted Bella's proposal to feel kind of like their first kiss did! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Dec 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 31
I really love the way Bella is developing. Her relationship with Jasper is so great. I love how things have gone with the Cullens, and I wouldn't be the disappointed at all if her relationship with them ends that way. I hope great things are in there future.
Glad you're enjoying it as we get closer to the end. Much more on Bella and Jasper next chapter :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 31
More than yummy! You help us feel the connection between Bella and Jasper and how deep it really goes. Her idea about Edward was inspired and it should be interesting to see if it works or Carlisle kills him having finally used up his patience on him! Wonderful!
Glad you enjoyed all the connectin, hee hee! Somehow, I think Carlisle will hang onto his patience for Edward, but we'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 31
well i hope for her sake that she dose great with this new lfie!
Well, I never like to give too much away, but my Bella isn't going to have the effortless newborn experience from the books. She'll have some stuff to overcome, but she'll be able to be proud of herself when she does. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 21 Nov 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story! I'm only at ch 12, but I plan on being through 30 by morning. I usually am for Cannon couples, but this is a great fic. thanks for writing!
Glad you're enjoying! I always feel good when a canon fan feels connected enough to my characters to keep reading! I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm glad they were able to help Alice. Wonder what Bella has planned for Edward? ha ha
Yep, it feels REALLY good not to have broken Alice hanging over my head anymore, lol! Hope you enjoy Bella's plans! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 30
well cant wait to see what she has instore for revenge! cant wait till the next chapter
Thanks- I'm pretty excited about it, because as far as I know, what I'm planning hasn't been done before! Hope you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 30
great chapter. Loved how malcolm and jazz worked together to help bella help alice.
Glad you liked! It feels good not to have broken Alice hanging over my head anymore, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
more sexin' please? hehehe I'm such a perv. LOL :)
Lol, more?!?!? So how many lemons a chapter? 9, 10? Seriously though, I'm building an alter-ego under a different pen name, and I think I might just satisfy you when I write what I plan to under that name! Don't worry, I'll pimp the hell out of it when I'm ready to get it going!
Hope you enjoyed my meager two lemons in this one, bb! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
What was Edward thinking? He'll think twice before going after Bella again now won't he? ha ha I'm looking forward to reading more of this story when it's posted. I really love your story and will wait patiently. :0)
Bella's POV is up next- more newborn firsts! I'm so glad you've enjoyed reading so far. I normally make a big effort to post once a week, but it's not happening this week! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Glad Jasper got to her before she died. Looking forward to seeing what hppened after Jasper arrived. :0)
His POV is up next, and then you're caught up :( I'm working on the next one, but I'm out of town, so it's slow goings. Thanks so much for reviewing as you read!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh no, Jasper had a feeling he shouldn't have left. I hope he finds Bella soon. Did Edward really put all this together or is Victoria finally making an appearance? Gonna keep reading.... :0)
Yeah, it was hard to make him ignore that feeling, but if he didn't, then where's the drama? Your questions will be answered, keep reading grasshopper!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Gotta keep reading. I want to see what's going to happen next. :0) Thanks for all the rec's I've put a bunch on my to read list.
Hope you enjoy the recs! You're lucky, it's not a cliffy to you since you're catching up! People wanted my head after that one, lol!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 29
Perfection...and probably one of the best "turnings" I've ever read! I thad it all. Thank you also for dealing with Edward - and in that way! It was positive poetry!
Again, thank you for the kind words. I'm really glad you liked what I did with it- I was trying hard to make it significant without being repetitive. I found it challenging, lol! Glad you liked Bella's treatment of Edward- that was fun to write, lol! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
Stunningly raw and perfect!!! Every single syllable!
Author's Response: Thank you so much- I had several complaints about how I adressed Bella's change, so I'm thrilled that you appeciate the way I handled it! Always refreshing when someone sees what I was trying to do- thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
How lucky is it that Malcolm showed up now? Edward seems a bit crazy at the moment, maybe Malcolm will be able to get him under control??? Another exciting chapter. :0)
Lol, in my head, I visualize Malcolm as being a little hesitant of the situation he has just walked into! You know, like he's tempted to just back up slowly and go to the next house or something!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
I wanna see Emmett line dance. ha ha I like what Bella had to say to Rose about not focusing on the "what could have beens" Great job!
I really hated it in Eclipse when Rose said she would give Emmett up to regain her humanity. Glad you liked the chapter and the line dancing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter! It was really fun to read. From the beginning to the end. :0)
Thanks! I got some grief for beating Peter up, but I liked seeing him vulnerable, and it helped Bella realize that she's a real member of their family. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 12 Nov 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
I was crying so hard when she was saying goodbye to Charlie. Can't wait to see how this little visit from the Quileutes will go. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks- I've been told I should put a tissue warning at the top! I'm glad you felt connected with her experience. Thanks so much for all of your reviews!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love that Jasper reminded Alex about Bella telling him he was a dead man and that in the end Alex was begging for his life. It cracked me up when Bella came out of the room after comforting Jasper and told Emmett she "gave good head" lol so funny :0)
Glad you liked the end of Alex and "direct" Bella! Giving good head is something to be proud of, lol!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Peter and Bella make me giggle :0) I had wondered when Jasper and Bella would talk about "forever" and now they have. They make me happy. Great job!
Thanks, glad you liked the "forever" discussion!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
In one of the other chapters when Alex took Bella, I loved when she told him he was a dead man. Now I can't wait to see when Jasper and Peter actually get him. :0) I'm really loving your story.
Glad you're still enjoying- hope you like the vengeance scene when it gets here! Thanks so much for all your reviews!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
another great chapter. I really felt Jasper's struggle to not give in to his blood lust. Great job! Again I just love Jasper and Bella togher and the connection they have. I'm glad Bella let Carlisle and Esme know excactly what she felt about not being part of their family anymore. I like how tough Bella is and that's it's not over the top. Looking forward to getting to know Peter more. :0)
Glad you liked- this chapter is near and dear to my heart because it's really how this whole story got started for me. I'm glad you're enjoying my Bella- I wanted her to be strong but not bitchy (unless it's necessary, lol!) Hope you enjoy Peter!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it! I really really just love these guys together. Wonder if Bella will ever let Carlisle and Esme see her??? I know, I know I'll keep reading and find out :0) Great job!
Thanks, glad you found it worth the wait :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
A migraine headache? What???
Yep, migraine headache. Now, to be fair, I have since re-worked my early chapters, and she was correct when she said that the dialog wasn't formatted right. But I was hurt by the migraine comment, lol! Mynxi went beta momma on her for me, but she still feels that it wasn't a harsh review. Oh well, can't be loved by everyone, lol! Hoping you disagree with her!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter! Looking forward to seeing how they get Andy out of the mess he's in. I liked seeing them all go to the club and of course what happened back at the appartment that night. Jasper and Bella are so great together. :0)
Glad you enjoyed the club and "aftermath" lol! That was a fun one to write!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
I wondered when Emmett would show up. ha ha Now Peter just needs to stop in too. :0) I'm glad Bella stood up to Rose. It also made me happy that Bella let Jasper feel that she loved him. Great chapter!
Thanks! Part of the reason I didn't make Rose and Bella bffs was because I needed her as an instigator for a few conversations! Glad you liked!
Date: 09 Nov 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yay, They kissed! It made me laugh a little when she described what she wanted it all to mean when she said they'd still be friends and keep kissing. :0) I'm glad she's not going to fight what she's feeling any longer, at least it doesn't seem like she is. Great job!
Yeah- I couldn't draw it out much more! I know other people do it really well, but I just kept feeling like realistically you would get to the point where you put up or shut up. Although, never having been through a friendship to dating transition, maybe I'm wrong, lol! Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
So much to look forward to finding out... Peter has made contact. :0) Wonder who the other faces from the past are going to be??? Wonder what's up with Andy? It's good to know the cops aren't looking for her in conncection to what happened to Charlie. Going to read the next chapter now. :0) Great job! I'm enjoying your writing, it's very easy to read.
So glad you're enjoying the story- I'm having a great time sharing it. All your questions will be answered in good time, Grasshopper :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 29
So E is really crazy he deserves everything coming to him and more. I fall a little more is love with Jasper with each chapter.
Yeah, I really went OOC with Edward in my story, but he's so fun to hate this way, lol! Glad you're enjoying Jasper- I love him too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmm Will we ever get to see what the vision Alice had was about? Guess it's not that important but I was just wondering if maybe she saw Jasper and Bella together? I like that Bella has taken care of herself all this time but it's really sweet to see Jasper want to take care of her. :0)
We don't get to talk to Alice in person for quite awhile, but her condition will be explained eventually. It will be hard for Bella to accept his help, but it's inevitable, lol!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 4
I like that they are being so open with each other about their stories. Can't wait to see what Jasper has in mind for his "rescue mission" :0)
Glad you enjoyed the revelation of their histories. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 29
great chapter! I love that Bella knocked Edward's head off! He deserves it. I have often thought that Bella let Edward off the hook WAY to easy in New Moon
Yeah, I had real problems with that in the books too! I've really made Edward OOC, but he's really fun to hate, lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!