Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Yay!Loved the update, glad that I got the link for the update.
Loved everything, specially Edward's apology and being upfront with her for a change, I love this pair they are good for each other. I actually like this Jacob , I liked his advice he gave Bella, sh seemed to listen too, which was good.
look forward to more :)
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Hahaha, Team Jacob!! And of course I'm not mad about E&B.... It's always about E&B, so I'm usually happy as long as Jacob is a good person that takes care of Bella. And not a rapist or murderer, or a cheating bastard, blah blah blah, 'cos he almost always get to be the bad guy... :(
So thank you for this chappie!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Ok, so first - I really loved how Bella was trying so hard in her head to feel something, anything for Jake, but came up with nothing.. that made me squeee internall! ;)
Then, to have him all but maul her.. wow.. I kinda wanted it.. lol.. but was glad he had to stop it ;)
Then, the over-protective Edward steps in. Ung. Kill me! So hot... but I gotta say I really wish they were just say what they mean and not jump around the words.. or maybe that's just because they're young. lol (yes, I'm showing my age now!)
I'm excited for EPOV - and where this will go from here. *giddy* Great chapter bb! *mwah!*
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Wow! I didn't think Edward had it in him to be that honest with Bella. By the way, closet club sex is fucking hot!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I am so glad they both realized how wrong things were at the start of the chapter, even if it seemed to be more so jacob... she needs jacob though as he seems level-headed... and woah to the closet scene... I am so happy that they are willing to admit to the strange pull and hope that they can figure things out together, even if it won't be easy!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
That chapter was fucking fantastic!! I was so pleased that she couldn't do it with Jake and then Edward turned up at the club, apologised to her and they had awesome sex in the closet.
Loved it!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Wow, they are all screwing each other. I love it! Can't wait to see WTF is up with Edward.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
OH.MY.GOD!!!!!! I've missed youuuuu!!! And your Bella and Edward soooo much!!
This chapter was absolutely amazing!!! I tried not to gag a lot with the Jacob scene, I barely succeeded :P
I loooooove how the chapter developed, and OH.MY.GOD the B/E interaction slays me, for real!!! Such intensity, so many feelings that make them so scared!! But I love that they're finally both brave enough the explore them! I'm so proud and happyyyyyy!!!
Thank you!!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
purple headed womb broom? you know this is why i love you, yes? rotfl forever.
Can't wait for more...as always. Loved, loved, loved this.
Thank you!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Was waiting to read this on Twi... but just couldn't wait anymore!
Loved it! Didn't even mind the Jacob stuff *blech* because it was so well done! And the closet... gah... hawt!
"I just happened to look up over Jacob’s shoulder. The girl behind him just happened to take a step to the right. The guy next to her just happened to spin to the left. The light just happened to ignite his face, highlighting the same cheekbones that I was carefully studying that very morning." -I really liked this part - really well-written.
Great job! Can't wait for EPOV on this!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
great chapter :) Is the EPOV going to be a repeat of this chapter or moving forward?
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Pardon me while I rewrite my whole review, as the site failed and it was lost. Really? Ugh.
I love you. So hard. You are the best. The smartest. The funniest. The most. And now on to the review of the chapter, instead of my review of the...you :)
Well, no secret how I feel about Fido/Jake. But you have really managed to capture the dorktastic goofiness in a fuckhawt bod. Let him go work his shit out with Ness, even if that is the part of BD that gives me yucky squickity tummy...lol
I know the fandom loved a fucked up broke down screwed around Edward. But I have to tell you, I love your damaged Bella. I feel her. Bitch doesn't just have issues, she has VOLUMES! Sure, she acts like a slag sometimes, but so do I. I am totally pulling for her.
So, let's get to the main event shall we? Unf. Edward. Kiki, you know I love him right. Even as headfucked as he is, I just love him. He'd give her the car? I've seen pictures of that car, I think I'd take it over fu...no, nevermind, we both know I wouldn't.
Poor baby, I just want to hug him. Your combination of 'little boy lost' wrapped up in belligerent fuckery...it is the best. He's so fucking desperate for her, and yet he's so fucking desperate for her...yeah.
Lastly, you fucking JERSEY SHORE'd!! OMG!! Total fucking win!
I missed them. I missed you. I love you more than I did 20 minutes ago, as if that were possible :) Way to come back, bb!
-Becci
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Thank you for an incredible chapter. Bella needs to realize this thing with Edward is for real. Love your work!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Thank you, so much for the update. I was going through serious B.D.R withdrawls. Love the chapter, so happy she got some from E.
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I'm glad Edward finally told her how he feels. I just hope she dont screw it up. and I hope Jake dont break his face when he finds out!! hahahaha
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Yay you're back! I hate it when RL kicks my favorite writers in the ass--how am I supposed to escape my own RL BS w/out stories that let me escape to my happy place? Seriously-great chapter--glad E is being brave--hope Bella can be too.....Anyway--Welcome back!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
ok that was just fucking awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the end.. Please post EPOV as soon as you can.. I am totally dying here..
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
OMG That was some hot closet sex! These two are scorching! And Edward manning up and admitting he wants her and can't give her up?? That deserves a fangirl SQUEEEEE!!! I can't wait for his POV! The stuff with Jacob was good, I like how they both realized they really wanted someone else. I was checking this site DAILY to see if you posted an update and this chapter DID NOT disappoint after the long wait! Keep bringing the good stuff! :D
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
An update! I love Jealous Edward. I can't help it. I think it's pathological... Hot chapter. I can't help but not hate Jacob in this story... even though I know Edward's the hero in the end, haha. Thanks for sharing!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
loved it
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
GOOD GOD that was WELL worth the wait! Amazing chappie! I have missed this fic Soooooooo much! I loved the suttle Twi references in here, but I loved that Edward finally admitted it. Bella needs to see it too! I cannot wait to see EPOV!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Great chapter, its like he asking her to take his hand to jump off a cliff, asking her to take a risk to trust him, update soon ^^
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Wow, Edward is taking Jaspers advice...sort of. Growing up and taking his Bella..love him :)
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Every day I check for updates on this story!
You just keep me on toes!
When will the long-awaited chapter??
Thank you and good luck!
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
love it girl! continue please!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Love it, great possibilities ahead!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Well damn Edward new puss wont make you forget Bella..Looking forward to BPOV next..
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Down the river Denial, or down the river Denali?
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Eddie is developing emotions! :D
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
when are u updatin i hope soon...
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
plz update soon! I am dying here!!!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
shit! this is fuck awesome!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I'm dying to read what's next, thoroughly enjoying this story, just sat & read the whole enchilada today.
I'm lame on reviews sorry, but thanks so much for writing. Those 2 are kinda breaking my heart with their pig headed self denial.
hope you post soon!:D)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
LMAO! The way EDward gets blue balled over and over again. Your way with words is so delightful, so hard nosed.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I love this so far! Looking forward to reading the rest.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
hi, I was reading this on fanfiction and nearly had a melt down when I saw that it was no longer on, I saw your page said you had moved and so Im now here to follow (that sounded stalkerish and sad). I'm neither of these things I swear, I just really want to find out about the most annoying couple in the world! They have to get it together, surely. Anyway, please up date soon.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
double wow.. pls dont make us beg for the next chapter!!... been reading your since last night and sometimes just couldnt get sec to drop a line.. dammit i want to know what happens next.. great story!!!
Tricia
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Oh wow, could Edward be anymore of an A-hole and Bella isn't much better. I hope the peen in the next chapter is cullens,b/c unless it's jaspers there's no need to go on. Lol these 2 need to be locked in a closet or something and left there until they come to their senses about how they feel about each other. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
"vagina depression " BTW that must be one of the funniest thing i have ever read .. lmao brilliant i swear
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
You have had many genious lines in this story, it is hard to chose just one, but I think the "the trio finally has it's Yoko-Factor" has to be the best for me!! It made me smile.
LOL! This story has been highly entertaining, full of excitement and very favorably like a teen soap opera. I love it! I feel a little sad that Jasper is so mad at them both, guess it's understandable, but it was just so much fun having everyone "understand the way it works" in Forks.
I love how you introduced Esme! Now Edward has a lot to question!
Such a great story, can't wait to read more :-)
Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I'm betting the peen will be Jacobian... Just to get over the Edwardian shit....
Sighh....
Please update soon.....
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That's rite! I stalked you all the way to the coffee shop!!!!
EEEEEEEPPPPPPPPPP!
At first I was so peeved when u moved!!!!
Then I went into a mental breakdown while screaming NOOOOOO and WHYYYYY on the front lawn of our school....
Yup...got in trouble....
Then my stalking senses told me to go here....
Anyways!!!!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
sigh... I always feel sorry for Bells.....
And I wish you'd put up a Carlisle POV!! for when he saw Bella.....
NEVERTHELESS.... Continue updating Blues!!!!!
-I_M_Swance... aka Death from The.Twins-Life.and.Death
Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Please dont let them screw this up!! let them get together!! Please please!! hahaha
Date: 07 Mar 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Oh no not the date with Jacob!! Please let her and Edward work this out, Maybe Edward left last chapter to go get them breakfast!! Hey it could happen right?? hehe
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
please update, soon!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
You're killing me here! Just give me some Edward and Bella! ^^.kidding.
Ok, so: I love it,of course. But I kinda felt sad how Edward reacted towards Carlisle,but I gues that's Edward.
I can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Its getting deeper and I love it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
loving it! I'm not really a fan of A/J stories there too lovey dovey and just straight too romantic like those two can do no wrong I love your twist on their relationship.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I loved it. Except jasper jumping in their convo. that was some bullshit.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
loved it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
I loved it. I really fucking loved it. Edward coming to the rescue and not in a embarrassing way either. Jasper love him. This was a deep chapter but it was needed it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
yeah I bite the hubby so no need for a week for me that's a standard. I loved chapter so much going on and so much sex. bring it on only a few more days until the bet is over.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Aw Jakey you are going down for the skank Bella not the girl she was before she got her upgrade. Poor Edward I know he is pissed off and I look forward to reading the shit. Em cracked me up with the clowns they scare the shit out of me but I try to keep that on the low but 'It' I will pull a bitch move on you and dip out. I have to cut the review short I'm about to throw the fuck up. This bug is killing me. I had so much more to say but damn I need some nyquil. TMI? my bad. Until next time.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
I love it. He's whipped and doesn't even know it. I'm pretty sure girl wonder is under boy wonders dick powers as well. They finally fucked well bring on the next four days, yay! Does that make me a perv yet I don't care!? Until next time.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
I loved it. Bells you lose but that did suck I hate to lose too. Get him back so it can at least be 2-2 instead 2-1 Edward leading. Damn girl step your game up.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
Shower head was fucking hot! I loved it! Keep the smut coming or should I say cumming!?
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
OMFJ I loved it! Go Bella she tore his ass out of the frame. Edward didn't know what to do with himself. Bella's death glare had me LMAO!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I loved your super sexy jake. Bella has a challenge on her hands with mr. cullen. I would love for jake to shake his junk in front of my face like now especially since he's legal.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I am very glad I followed you over from ff. Why did they boot you? This story is one of my Favorites. Please keep up the very awesome work and update soon.
Marguerite
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
That was so good and hot. Go Bella. Edward's dick never stood a chance. Payback is a bitch though. Edward will get you back I'm sure.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
I loved all the cockblocking Bella was doing. I mean Edward didn't offer to finish where Mike failed how rude! I'm loving it. Poor Em zi hope he doesn't get a complex or turn because he is to fine for that to happen.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
I'm liking it so far. These two need a release pronto.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Oh Edward is an absolute bastard but I love ain't that sad? Anyway, I loved it and I'm going to keep reading.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I loved it. It lives up to the hype I have been hearing about on twitter. Mary and the rest of the pack said it reminds them of her writing and I can see why. I'm going to keep reading and see what happens. Then I have to finishe reading closer so I can be in the know with Mary again.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Wow...these two are a mess!!! I like what Japser says..."grow the f*** up!" I hope they figure this out soon!!! They are so much better when they are together and nice to each other. Great job...thanks!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I hope this was misunderstanding and Edward really didn't leave again...maybe he went for breakfast???? Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
I hope they continure to be nice to each other. I am sure they will be freaked out by these new feelings and they way things are happening, but I hope they will give each other a chance. Great job...thanks!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
Omg. That was both hot and hilarious at the end. Poor Edward not getting lol
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
Wow...what a mess these two are making. They are both going to get a wake up call!!! Great job...thanks!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
hmmmm......not happy!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I found you! Now that I'm caught up, I will just say that you are one master of the angst. Both of our little lovebirds are so full of pride and fear, I wonder how they'll ever get it together.
I'm betting on more Eddie peen. Kindda like at the fair, when he just couldn't control himself when he thought about her with Jacob.
But looking forward to the next chappie! Is there a way to get alerted??
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Great chapter you are a genius. Seriously this is one of my favorite stories, I especially like A&J, they're amazing. And a happy Alice is a less dangerous Alice. Kind of sad that Edward can't get his head out of his own ass and that the joint Bella smoked is still clouding her judgment but I trust your judgment and I know the story will still kick ass even if the two of them are oblivious. Anyway, can't wait for your next update :D
Date: 27 Feb 2010 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Great fic. Hot smut and an interesting storyline. Not what I expected - pleasantly surprised.
Thanks for sharing it with us all - I look forward to the next update.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I really dont like Jazzy bein mean to Bella, they make the best of friends if they are not a couple.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
yeah tell me about it.. FUCKING MEN.. GAWD.. When they'll grow up and fucking face the consequences they've put into their selves? hmm.. I don't wan to be mean or anything & you must be wondering "who the fuck is this gal"? lol im fucking guilty on not reviewing more often than necessary.. Sorry..
On to the topic.. I want to slap Bella too.. their like all high & mighty their ego is bigger than their heads its hard to grasp.. Okay they may be scared to let their guard down.. Cuz somebody may hurt them or what-the-fuck-ever.. Well good job for them aren't they just hurting each other more because of denial? Good job you two.. I am sorry for my rant.. I am just livid you know.. Its eating me up so much.. Your story is so compelling i cant help but react this way.. Great job BTW.. Great chappie as always.. Keep it up.. Can't wait for more..
& yeah IDK if you've heard it.. But someone was plagiarizing this fic.. & many other fics.. IDK if it was blocked already.. Fucking copycats.. GRrrr..
~isha
Date: 26 Feb 2010 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Awesome, I was just checking for a new chapter and low and behold...bonus!! This chapter was a big batch of fuckery ala Edward, but we'll see what's up next one...hope they pull their heads out of their respective asses and talk!
Thanks for sharing...
Date: 26 Feb 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I love this story. I am so glad I found it here.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Love this story so much. So interesting how their relationship changes.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Ok how do i add this so i get email alerts to let me know when this story has been updated??
Now on with the story.. um I don't like what Edward did but i understand he paniced...not cool but i understand....... Maybe seeing his Dad finally act like a decent role model he will see it's ok to be with one woman and see it's not a good thing to fuck and leave.......... or maybe he will see how happy Jasper and Alice are......i don't know but i am dying Bella went out on a date with the nasty mutt boy....... can't wait to read more hopefully by then i will be recieving updates........
Date: 25 Feb 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
facepalm indeed.
they are both frustrating me to no end, edward maybe more so...
and that peen better be edward's! i don't think i could handle jacobian's...
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
oh god, edwards so stupid and it has to be eddie's peen, LOL!
i love this story so much, i've litrally read it 10 times. ill be waiting on the next chapter.
please let edward and bella get together in the end :)) xx
Date: 25 Feb 2010 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Uhhg! Why does Edward have to be such a stubborn arse? What happened to the sensitive guy from the night before? The one that made love to Bella? He is so messed up!I still love him tho!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Maybe they both need to sleep with other people for them to realize and acknowledge how they feel about each other.
Is there a ways of getting update notifications from TWCS?
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Fucking Edward! I swear. I'm gonna smack Edward because he is soo in denial. ugh men! I'm so pissed off at him. I'm kinda hoping she has fun on her date with Jacob and Edward runs into them but I know Jake won't want her like he does his GF. They'll be friends still I hope. Can't wait for your next update. I just figured out how to use this site so I didn't know about the update. lol Great chapter though. How many chapters is this story going to be anyway?
Date: 25 Feb 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
def. in denial.. i love this story its so great!! i cant wait to see her go out on the date with jacob.. it would be funny if they both saw eachother while there on dates or something..
Date: 25 Feb 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Oh man! I can't believe this is where I have to catch up with the story. It's going to kill me waiting for the next chapter. Let's just hope that both idiots wake up and realize they love each other (or at least are on the way there).
Awesome story! I started reading about 2 days ago, and would have been caught up a long time ago if it weren't for work and sleeping. Oh, if reading delicious lemony Twilight FF payed the bills, I'd be one richer-than-Bill-Gates woman.
Can't wait for your next installment. Keep up the great work!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Okay just got done reading and I love it. I figured Bella and Edward would fall in love eventually. Hope it works out. Will Bella forgive him? Update soon.....
Date: 25 Feb 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
I have been waiting for this chapter for so long because I love this story. They are both so stubborn and headstrong and hot. Cannot wait for the next.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
*sigh*
So happy to read this. I love these guys, SFM! So glad I found a place to keep reading you! :)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Wow talk about embarrassing... that alone would make me strive to be nothing like her and get out of forks
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
tsk, tsk, tsk....I have a feeling (hope) that when E goes out that he runs into B/J and B ends up dumping J and goes home with E. We will see. I'm probably wrong, as I always am. It's nice to see Jasper the voice of reason.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
O.M.G ......
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I'm loving it already! can't wait to see where this goes
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
phew i need a cold shower, brill chapter
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Glad to find this story over here as I was reading on FF. Good luck with RL - fantasy is easier. Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Amazing as always!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
I'm thinking Edward is about to get a whole lot more pissy, especially since Bella suggested the whole monogumuos thing
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Awesome story betting that it is some jacob peen
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Glad to find you over here on this website. Still enjoying your story! Btw, what is "RL" that a lot of authors refer to?
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Wow lovely... Edward might want to figure out what a condom is before he knocks someone up LOL