Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Wow, Bella is pathetic and about to lose Edward all on her own. I highly doubt Edward cheats on her considering his jealously concerning her.
She needs intense therapy.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Damnit, I really hope she doesn't mess this up. I don't think Edward will be able to forgive her if she does. I'm not too sure I believe what Rose said, she's definitely the type to say shit just to get a rise out of you. As for the words of wisdom from Jasper...well he should talk more often, I mean he got through to Edward. Excellent chapter. Now I'm dying to find out what happens next. ;)
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
oh noooooooo james!!!!
bb you have to update us super soon!!
thanks for this update =))
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Holy angst Kikiblue-man! Geez lay the angst on me...
Brilliant, truely brilliant, its giving Bella a real depth of character. Its changing the story from just a smut fulled spectacle, to an insight into a screwed up teenage girls mind.
You deserve a few 'we're not worthy' bows....
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
WOW, Bella's selfdestructive, hope Edward comes for her and kicks James' ass.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Thank you for the update. I love how Edward loves Bella unconditionally. I hope he understands her freak out.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
What the hell is the matter with Bella, why does she have to believe what Rose said when she knows its not true, she spends all her time with Edward, how is he cheating on her. Insecurities are bad news.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I think I hate you. *pouts* I don't like emo Bella! Damn!! Didn't you say there were only a few chapters left? What. The. Hell?!!!!! OMG! You seriously can't pull James back out. Ugh. I. Am. Ded. *sulks*
Yes, I am a baby. lol ;) *love*
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I understand Bella's behaviour, and am actually surprised the seed of doubt wasn't planted alot sooner. What confuses me more is the ILY. That is a fairly big confession to make for someone who is so guarded. I really would like to know what was going through Edward's mind. And also what Edward was doing/thinking while Bella was at the party.
Did not expect James to come back on the scene. Very anxious about what is going to happen next.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Please update A.S.A.P. !!!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Got my tickets too!! Can't wait. I hope Edward shows up and kicks James' ass!! He just needs to grab Bella and get the hell out of Dodge!!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Thanks for the update. Emo Bella is so depressing. I Hope she get's over it soon. But I do see where she is coming from...
And James? This can't go over well...
Till next time
Lovebel xo
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
hope James doesnt rape her. And Rose is just a biatch as always
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
If she does anything with James I'll be pissed. I hope Edward dumps her if she does, because she'd be an idiot.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Poor Bella. She is such a typical teenage girl. Once she gets what she thinks she wants she has no choice but to question herself and then set out to destroy her own happiness.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Poor Bella; it looks like she is about to burst the happy bubble her and Edward have been living in. Insecurity is a realy BITCH! Love the chapter I am feeling her pain, as i have totaly been there.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
No not James, this could be bad. I hope Rosalie was just high and talking shit.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I wish she would just listen to Jasper and be happy but when you are used to people screwing you over I know it can be hard. I hope she gets it together before she ends up hurting herself worse than anyone else does.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
She better not fuck James! She needs to take her ass back to Edward and grow up! I get people have hurt her...but Edward hasn't been one of those people. She needs to stop punishing him for everyone elses mistakes!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
first of all, everytime you update i am left with the chapter swirling around in my brain all effing day long! i call it BDR syndrom. it's nice and i'm not complaining, but DAMN this chapter really messed me up. i feel sorry for Bella. i want to squeeze her and shake her until life makes sense for her. i have that trust issue that she has, and i know first hand how hard it is, and just want to tell her to love him and and let him love you back! the self destruction is unnerving, but i suspect it is unavoidable. we all know that she loves him, and i even think that she trusts him. i believe that she doesn't love or trust herself. it's kinda heartbreaking. i just REALLY pray that she won't do anything stupid with James... although i can see it happening as i write this. "please Bella, come out of emo land and step into the light! lol. walk away from the douchy ex boyfriend... no, run away from the douchy ex boyfriend!" do you think she heard me???
love you, bb... and p.s. i got my midnight tickets too! even better i got tickets to see all 3 movies! lol... pathetic? why yes, i think so ;) *squish*
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I get Bella and her insecurites...better to hurt than be hurt, right?? Sure hope she doesn't do anything stupid. James is bad news, Edward is hurt and confused by her behavior plus he has issues of his own, Rosalie is just plain mean and nasty.
Hope Jasper or Alice help Bella out of there or Edward can be the Knight in shining armour and swoop in to rescue her.
Good writing but a little p'o'd at Bella's behavior. Hope the next chapter has her redeeming herself!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Thanks for the update! btw. you are so frickin cool.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
oh holy fuck dont let her crazy ass fuck everything up!!!!!!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
God Rosalie is such a bitch. I hate her. bella was doubting Edward's affections because he didn't say it back and now she's doubting even more because of freaking Rosalie. she needed to tear that bitch down. lol god i love this story. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Oh WOW. What a chapter. You rock my world. Brilliant chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Well, with everything Bella has been through, no wonder she's expecting the worse. Poor Edward though, maybe he wanted to say I love you :/
I hope she doesn't do anything with James, and that Edward shows up and kicks his ass :)
And Rosalies is a bitch, lies is all she says.
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Poor stupid, stupid Bella. I hope she doesnt mess up!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I think Rosalie is full of shit and James is gross- no James...please
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Oh Bella is so messed up. Edward not saying he loves her back doesn't help the situation either. Rosalie is such a bitch I can't stand it. Her and emmett are so fucked up its sick. I really hope edward comes to save the day with james. Edward needs to pull bella out and save her. He's the only one who can! Great update. This story always gets better and more interesting.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Damnit! I hate getting spoiled by a fix w so many chapters! Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
omg hope edward shows up
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
No Bella!! I know she's afraid of being hurt but I really hope she doesn't do anything with James :( As far as Rosalie goes, I think she just made that up to piss off Bella because she feels bad about her own behavior. Can't wait for the next chapter (hopefully not too long of a wait!!) Great job, as always...
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
OMG! I feel for her. She just can't trust the fact that Edward won't cheat on her.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
Noooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Grrrrrrrrr. Don't make me come over there. ;o)
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I think you have done a great job of showing how Bella struggles (life has not been too kind to her)... Rosalie is a wench and I think is just planting evil thoughts... it is my hope that Edward shows up to save the day in some way! I look forward to whatever happens next!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
OMG Bella you fucking dumbass... I really hate her now. I liked her now I want to punch her in the face.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Glad E said his piece to Dr. Daddy. He deserved that.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Just thinking about how glad I am that E manned up then I read your a/n. Haha
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
It better be E!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Poor B.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
Its just a date. And Edward so deserves to be jealous.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I think he's 18 now. Still, I'd rather have a moody, pouty, emo Robward.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
Bout fuckin time!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Perfect. Just the E I was looking for. Well, maybe he is a touch more of a prick than I was expecting.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
I was looking for a less than innocent story. This looks perfect.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I love your story so much.... like I told you before.. I love this strong Bella! .. how do you set an alert for this story.. this is the only one I follow here in TWCS...
Date: 15 Jun 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Great, as always, thanks for sharing.
I am wondering a bit about this "need to kiss and f*** Edward" thing you describe at the beginning of this chapter. I mean, of course I know the feeling when you miss someone and all this stuff, I know the urge to come closer and ........but really NEED? OK maybe it´s just me and I can´t imagine it because I got never "edwardised", unromantic prick that I am ;-)
Hope you had a good time in turkey and are back healthy, sun tanned but without permanent skin damage :-) and in the mood for writing (smuty) fanfic.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Uhhhhhhh, the end of this chapter is so sweet.
thank again for sharing,
love your story.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I love your story so much.
Pure smut and also sweet, I can´t say more ;-)
Thank you for sharing.
All the best from Tirol
Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
I JUST ABSOLOUTLY FUCKING LOVE YOUR BELLA!!!!!! ... OF COURSE I LOVE THE STORY.... BUT BITCHY BELLA.... SHE ROCKS! ;)
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
This chapter was just excellent, awesome, great.
Love your story
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Great story. Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for sharing.
Date: 08 Jun 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
“You let me have you whatever way I want in my car.” - Dayum! *wipes drool from chin*
Wow! Bella was into girls? That's a new one! Loved her entertaining the idea of inviting the waitress to join her and Edward if it had only happened a week earlier.;) You saucy minx!
Sex up against Edward's car in the parking lot??!! *rubbing thighs together* I think my shower massager is calling to me.......
And what is up with that last line? *shaking fists*
'We were exclusive, together and only together. What I didn’t understand was why I wasn’t happier about it.'
There had better be a perfectly good explanation for this, Woman! You can hide in Turkey, but you will have to face us again at some point. *wink*
~Paula
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
i really love this story, it gets better and better with itch chaPter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
I read some of this when it was on fanfiction and I fell in love with it. So like the little puppy I am I decided to sign up here so I could read the rest of your story. Yes, I'm a beautiful Dirty Rich stalker, sue me ;) It's really good you should write more stories because you're a good writer
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
I loved it.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
awwww they are so cute together.
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Loving it!! Cant wait to see how this ends. But the end of this chapter it has me wondering if Bella and Edward are going to be together or break up for a while.
until next time :)
Date: 04 Jun 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Thanks for the update. Why does she fight her feelings for him? I guess it's the disappointments from parents & James. I'm waiting from James to make an appearance??
Have fun in the sun, wear sun screen;~)
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
you rock! luv your story. where are you from in the UK? I used to live in cambridge, but am an american. i loved this chapter. enjoy your vacay and hope you get lots of good inspiration for when you return.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Oh no! Poor Bella; never having had any relationship where she wasn't hurt or let down, so now she's just waiting for something bad to happen, instead of truly being happy. And you know how that goes - she's going to start becoming a self-fulfilling prophecy if she keeps that shit up! I really hope that she can find some peace within herself, and in her relationship with Edward, because as much as she needs him to prove to her that she can be enough, all of her, he needs her too. Plus, these two are just so hot together! That smut scene on the car = muy caliente ;)
Date: 03 Jun 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
This chapter was amazing. Ah the hallway kiss, it was the best! cant wait to read what troubles the duo get into and what the gang have t say about it xx
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
awesome chappie! i think being like a drug to E is just not enough for our B... i mean her mother is an alcoholic duh! she needs ILY to be happier.... hope she'll get it at the end :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
This chapter made me pensive -- who knew she was so totally alone and feels completely unloved. Happiness is going to be something she has to learn to be.....something that does not come naturally to her. Do you think Renee will off herself?
Date: 03 Jun 2010 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
This is my fave chapter so far! I always like seeing lovey dovey, yet possessive Bella and Edward.
Yum!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
A M A Z I N G ..pls update soon :)
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
they're so cute lol. i was cracking up at the waitress! great chapter :)
Kristi
have fun in Turkey!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Mmmmmm Smut....I love me some smut, especially hot cars and smut...
Though the ending was a little dun dun DUN... What's with all the suspence lately? Everything I'm reading has a cliffhanger attached! Why isn't Bella so excited about Edward wanting to 'go steady'...Geez 'go steady' thats so lame. Hmm how about 'date exclusively'..'
Now what was I going on about? Thats right... the review, ok, yeah, why isn't Bella shitting gold bricks that Hotty McHotpants wants to get into her poon all the time and still learn her favourite colour and buy her Starbucks Frappes?
I'd be the Golden Goose if that happened to me, I'd squeeze out a gold nugget every 15 mins!
Have fun in Turkey, take time to visit Gallipoli. Its on the Dardenilles (however you spell it). I cried like you wouldn't believe.
P.S. Thanks for the chapter!! Sorry for the epicly rambly review, but I'm pressing that submit button anyway... Here button, button...
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
I can't help but get nervous from that last line. Great job as always, have fun in Turkey! ;)
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Thank you for this update. I love this story. I am glad they are going to be open.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Wow, she really needs to work through some deep-seated issues so she can fully enjoy what she has with Edward and be happy.
Great sexing, as always ;)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Bella's not happier about being with Edward? Is she insane? I really hope they make it work!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
WTH is going on?! Why is she feeling this way?! Did I miss something here??
Date: 02 Jun 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
okay no I didn't get the reference, what was it? :) also I was sort of stuck on the whole parking lot hot sex scene. WOW!!! hot hot hot. keep up the great work and have fun in Turkey. :D thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Oh My Edward!!! That was beyond hot having Edward fuck her against the car. That was unbelievable!
I hope that Bella is only feeling this way because the relationships that she has seen her whole life are worthless and maybe she feels by putting herslef and Edward in that same category that they will become like her and Alice's parents.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
I LOVE YOU :-D Thank you for my bday prezzie *tackle hug* And I'm torn b/w goddamn woman and awwwwwwww. I'm so happy they're all official :) It was awesome as always! And the car hood schmexing? GUHHHHHHHHHHHH.
Enjoy your vacay, bb! Can't wait to hear all about it :-p (BRING ME BACK A HOT TAN MAN WHO LOOKS LIKE JACKSON PLEASE... PLEASSSEEEE?)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
this was great. I am loving territorialward! yeah, claim her yours babe! They both are so young and this is so strong between them....
Sad about Renee...we have to deal with her before anything bad happens..so hopefully rehab or something soon....maybe that is why Bella's not happier?
BTW, hoodfuck was fuckhawt! Cant wait for weekend in Seattle!
Thanks babe for sharing it with us. Have fun in Turkey and safe travels!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
awwwwww the entire chapter was amazing!!!
I am so happy they're starting to realize that they want to be together for real!It seems that Edward is a lot more concious and determined about his choice, which is a good thing, because Bella is still struggling with self doubts so she needs Edward to be her constant in this. She's so used to being treated as a means for pleasure that she's finding it difficult to understand how someone can actually care about her..that is just so sad :( I'm so happy that she finally has someone :)
The last sentence just shows how scared she still is, she's afraid if she lets her feelings grow that someone will get hurt..I only hope that she doesn't make any decisions based on her fears, every relationship has risks, it's the fact that we take them that makes us live our lives..excellent chapter!!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Oh yeah....that was fucking hawt. U know...I never figured that it would be edward who made the first move. Now hopefully Bella can stop being a hOor for five minutes and be good to Edward...visa versa of course
This is really one of my fav fics...I know its coming to end I'm just hoping you don't give E+B the clap and call it a day.
I want a happy ending...tree fucks included...fucks it. Let's do bush fucks. Shrub fucks...cactus fucks...rose bush fucks too!
Mary
Date: 02 Jun 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
I.Want.To.Try.It.Against.His.Car.
Of course, with my husband :)
I absolutely love this chapter! This story is awesome, fresh, different. Just loving it, all of it. Plz, get back soon from Turkey! And enjoy your time there! :) Thanks, thanks, thanks for the chapter.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
maybe she isn't happy cuz she doens't know how to be look at her life.. god look at her drunk mother........
i am so happy they are together now and said fuck the world and doesn't care who knows (except Renee of course)..
The sex on the car or aganist the car OMG hot as hell....... loved it.....
i do feel bad for Edward he is trying really hard and he has no clue what is going on in Bella's mind........ and why she is the way she is......... he is gonna get his heart broken by her........i can feel it...........
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Great chapter! Love that they're finally together. Have fun in Turkey!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Such an adorable chapter, I could get used to all ther sweetness~
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Well fuckity! *runs, fallssss...scrapes knees* hey...I'm finally here! Shit...took me forever but I'm finally reading all ur updated...which took forever btw b/c I was pimpin' your shizzz all over twittah...but u know that...u where there.
Mmm..."You and me against the world Swan"
I really want this to work out between E+b...ok. On to the next chap
Mary.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Thank you for the quick update. :)
As always it was hot and sweet and confusing. Why isn't she happier???
Can't wait to find out.
Have o good trip to Turkey. Till next time,
Lovebel xo
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
SHOWER TIME!!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
What does she mean she not happier about it? Girl should be freakin estatic about it. Enjoy your sun, I know I am. Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Holy hell, that was hot ;o)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Loved it!! The smut was gooood!!
xoxo
marianne
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
well if it isn't more brilliance from my smut dealer! this was fantastic, in the way that your lemon meringue pie usually is. what's with the hint at angst in the end??? "Angst thy name is Bella"! jeez, can't poor Eddie catch a break? he wants to date, and try normal... kissing in the halls and banging in the parking lot.... like any other red blooded teenage boy! lol. and damn it if i didn't think they were gonna have a threesome with Plain Jane! That. Is. All.
wait... did i mention that you are brilliant? how about the fact that i lurve you beyond words for dragging me along on this little adventure? well there, i mentioned it!
xx~j
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
I'ma slap a bitch - Bella needs to stop second guessing Edward!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
She better be happy with a fine ass man like that!!! I would be delirious!!!!!!! Anyway, have fun and cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Why is Bella being dumb? She's hurting my head. Low self esteem much? Grat chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Love it!!! Cant wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Why isn't she happy about being with Edward??? Maybe she is still scared it;s only a bet. Please update soon as this is one of my very favorite stories.
MArguerite
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
GAH! WHat is WRONG with her! She is with Edward Cullen! Snap out of it Bella! Thanks for the update, have fun in Turkey! Looking forward to the next chappie!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
bella can really drive me crazy. she has edward, all to herself, and she's questioning why she's not happier about it? ughh, that girl needs to stop being so analytical over everything and just start being happy about what she has. edward sure has his work cut out for him.
but on another note.. i really liked this chapter and their possessiveness over each other. hoottt!
have fun in turkey!! :)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
OMG! They're quite possessive aren't they?
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
good chapter can't wait for the next.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Oh, Bella! Why? What is it you want? Dammit!! lol
Enjoy your trip bb!! Sounds exciting! :)