[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2019 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Wish there was more T^T
Date: 30 Oct 2016 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
A unique and beautiful story. I love the detain you wrote as far as the inner working s of the minds of Bella and Edward. A question please - how can you write just one outstanding story and then never write again? Do you write under another name? Please let me know mialuthor@gmail.com
Author's Response:
Thank you so much- I do still write but outside the world of fanfiction! Youre amazing :)
Date: 14 Sep 2016 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
Phew this started off as good ass smut to read ;-) but quickly had me in tears, I literally needed to get a second tissue box. Im not kidding. Enjoyed the ride and hope that you'll be inspired to write more soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you- its your kinds words that keep me tapping away at my laptop! Youre awesome :)
Date: 11 Sep 2016 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
This was such a great story to read thank you for posting it I hope you write more
Author's Response:
Youre awesome- thank you :)
Date: 22 Jul 2016 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
This story is absolutely fantastic!! Once I started reading it I just couldn't stop! Really! ;) I am happy that they found their way back to each other and I am sad that there is no more of their story! I'm a mess! lol :P
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! I'm sending you an anti-mess hug! :)
Date: 19 Jul 2016 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
OHMY! ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2016 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Awesomeness....😄
Author's Response:
You're the definition of awesomeness ;)
Date: 29 Jun 2016 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
I love that Jacob is all sweet and nice! Love it! Is Cullen jealous?? Could it be? Good!
Author's Response:
He's a cutie! Thanks for reading and reviewing :) x KB
Date: 28 Jun 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
these 2 are both so fucked. and yes literally but that wasn't what I meant...
Date: 28 Jun 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
I hope she gets to even up the score soon...it's so much fun to watch them duel...
Date: 28 Jun 2016 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
that shower scene made ME wet! hot hot hot!
Author's Response:
Hahahaha!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2016 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I like that you've made Jacob a hunky relatively innocent character in all this debauchery. Kudos!
Date: 28 Jun 2016 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
looks like she's got one up on him. wonder how long that will last...
Date: 28 Jun 2016 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
sorry but I'm finding it difficult to stop reading long enough to review. I fucking love this story. These are not Ms. Meyer's characters, are they? No, they are all dirtied up and having much more fun.
Date: 28 Jun 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
just wow. Domie rec'd this little ditty to me, knowing I love the smut. this is grade-a choice smut and I love it! thanks!
Date: 26 Mar 2016 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Love love love. Great story. I love what I felt as I read it. I loved the not too cutting angst and I love your style.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Means a lot :) x KB
Date: 02 Dec 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
you are better writter than SM
Author's Response:
Aww, shucks- thanking you. Loved reading your reviews happy new year- KB
Date: 01 Dec 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 25- Echo
a ghost from the past!
Date: 29 Nov 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
they are getting there!
Date: 29 Nov 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
they have fell in love!
Date: 28 Nov 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
He thinks hw is winning but bella got himm by the ball.
Date: 27 Nov 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
with out a doubt bella is a whore
Date: 26 Nov 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
this bella is a fucking slut
Date: 25 Nov 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
theare are a lot whores at forks hs
Date: 24 Nov 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
bring on?
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Wow!! I am intrigued!
Date: 04 Jan 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
I'm feeling happy & light headed! It was a perfectly sweet ending that they needed! I'm making you one of my fave authors In case you ever write anything else bc I love your style in writing, thoughts, & humor! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Date: 04 Jan 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 25- Echo
I'm sad that there is only one more chapter :(
Date: 04 Jan 2015 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
Thanks for giving the heads up on the HEA. After this chapter I was beginning to wonder.
Date: 04 Jan 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
I wasn't expecting James........now hat she is so intoxicated I'm guessing James is going to try & hurt her. I hope Edward comes to her rescue.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
I hope she realizes it is her being unsure of her future that still makes her unhappy. I hope Edward can help her.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
I was soooo hoping it would become official with a public kiss in the hall way. Granted I thought he would do it. It was a thousand times better that she did it!
Author's Response:
Ah! So glad you liked that shift in B! I'm loving reading your reviews- so glad you're enjoying it! X KB
Author's Response:
Ah! So glad you liked that shift in B! I'm loving reading your reviews- so glad you're enjoying it! X KB
Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
I hope he just puts his arm around her tomorrow & says we are going to he'll anyway. That is my fave part in twilight. Also one of my favorite songs from the soundtrack plays at that moment too. Oh and about your comment on your Edward doll you snuggle, I don't have one but I do have one of the life size window cling ons from new moon that Burger King had when they sold gift cards for the movies. He is on my sliding glass door to this day. It's funny bc my husband could care less. Edward makes for a great body guard! He can be seen from my front door sidelite windows and he looks like someone standing in my kitchen. Whenever anyone comes to stay he freaks people out.
Author's Response:
Haha! Bloody brilliant! Ive still got my little Edward doll on my desk- watching over me like a creeper! We are the coolest peeps with our Edwards! X KB
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Love Mumford & sons!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
I was so worried she would still walk away! I definately think jasper and Alice being together along with his dad & Esme helped Edward see it was ok to want a steady relationship.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
He is so in love! Now if they both can just realize it!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
I'm glad we got the back story on what's been going on with A&J
Date: 03 Jan 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
Where the heck did Edward go????
Date: 03 Jan 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
I love that he has taken care of her now twice. He has always had a soft spot for her.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Edward just won HUGE BROWNIE POIUNTS!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
Biting is the BEST! I don't know what it is about it but it does release some tension!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
This story has kept me up all night! It is so good I don't want to put it down.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
No doubt this forks has disease written all over it! That's why I love fanfiction. We can fantasize about having sex w/o diseases. Another hilarious thing that I have never heard of is Blue Walls. So very funny!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
I have to say your author note is just as funny as this chapter!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
I was wondering why they didn't make that agreement about not using anyone else during this week.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
Without a doubt NIN's Closer is by far one of the sexiest songs! It is sad to admit but it has been used in lots of my sexcapades!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I'm glad she didn't want to mess with Jacob & his girlfriend.
Date: 03 Jan 2015 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
Another laugh outloud chapter!!!!! That last line was priceless!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
This chapter kicked butt! Well other than E&B getting it on that is! I can barely wait for Bella to rock Edward's world with her skills! I laughed out-loud with Emmett in the closet! That is one of the funniest scenes ever written! Also, I loved the line from jasper about "once you are bitten it is hard to stop the change."
Date: 03 Jan 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
I can't believe I have been missing out on this story all this time!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun
Ok you warned us that he was a douche but I really wasn't prepared. I'm still laughing!
Date: 03 Jan 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
This is hilarious!!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
1st off I can not believe that Bella got a job. That really surprised me. Lol. I am sooo proud of Edward not letting his pride keep him away from Bella. Love the ending.
You have done an amazing job with this story. I have truly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it with everyone here.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing- I've been looking forward to reading every chapter review you've done! Chuffed you loved the ending x KB
Date: 17 Nov 2014 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 25- Echo
So glad that they have both grown up some. Glad Edward had Esme to talk to. So happy that Bella talked to a therapist. Sooooo glad I do not have to wait for an update. I am sooo off to read the next chapter!
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 24- Never Think
What the hell just happened? ???
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 23- Hologram
OMGosh! !!!!! What is James doing there?
Date: 16 Nov 2014 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur
Bella is scared that something is going to go wrong and she does not want to be hurt. She is afraid to be happy. Poor girl.
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands
Does this mean that they are finally together together? ???? Loving this story.
Author's Response:
Dude your reviews are giving me life! So glad your enjoying BDR! X KB
Date: 16 Nov 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 20- Jigsaw
Are they finally together????? Can't wait to read about them going to school.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
Love reading Edward's POV. Glad he turned down Rose's ass. Lol
Date: 15 Nov 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy
Glad that Bella andJacob did not do anything. Proud of Edward for admitting his feelings for Bella.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm
Glad that Jasper and Alice are hiding their relationship. Bella and Edward bless their hearts are so screwed up. Maybe one of these days they will get it right.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light
Love Alice and Jasper's story. But I can not believe that Jasper went straight back to his old ways on the 1st day of school. That was just wrong.
Date: 13 Nov 2014 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything
I have been wondering what was going on with Alice and Jasper. Can not wait to find out what is going on.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
They do care for each other. So Edward has been keeping her secret for a whole now. Wow, he really is one of the good guy. Lol
Date: 12 Nov 2014 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Add it Up
Poor Bella. I really feel sorry for her. Glad Edward came to her rescue.
Date: 12 Nov 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist
I am thinking that Edward is getting a little attached to Ms. Swan!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Under The Sheets
We get a Edward POV! !!!!!!! YAY!!!!! So Jacob get in trouble with Nessie. What is Edward going to say about her going out with Jacob? ??????
Date: 10 Nov 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Situations
FINALLY! !!!!!!!!!!
I know this I fiction but they sure do a lot of drugs and drink a lot for high school students. And still be able to function the next day. Lol
Date: 10 Nov 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat
Wow, Bella lost. Lol. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life
They both love playing with each other.
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Closer
Glad Bella finally got her release. Lol. Now Edward has blue balls. Lol
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone
I don't think Bella is ever going to get her rocks off. Lol
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy
I am kind of glad that she got one over on him since he left her high and dry and horny the night before.
Date: 01 Nov 2014 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth
I don't think they are ever going to fuck!!!!!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me
Bella really does not like Edward. Can't wait till they get together.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Boy these kids are really fucked up.
Author's Response:
Lol- yes, yes they are! And things get progressively more fucked up..enjoy and thanks for reviewing and reading!
X KB
Date: 31 Oct 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
This is definitely a different set of Cullens then are in most stories that I read.
Date: 06 Oct 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Loved it. These kids were Off Da hook with the stuff they were getting in to as high school kids.
Date: 01 Mar 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Love it
Date: 27 Feb 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Hey,
Thank you, really enjoyed this! T
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2014 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
I really enjoyed this story! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 31 Oct 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Loved your story. Took me maybe 3 days to read it. Totally slacking with school and house cleaning. But it was a good story to read after a long day filled with 3 kids and school work like crazy. I can't believe it was your first fanfic; that is crazy. Are you planning anymore?
Author's Response:
Aw thank you so much, that's some epic reading there- 3 days? And you've got three kids?! I salute you, honey! Not planning anymore fanfic at the mo, at least not twilight related- I think I'd feel like I'd be cheating on BDR's B&E! Chuffed you liked these little messed up Forkians- thanks so much for reading and reviewing! You've made this chicks day!
x KB
Date: 16 Apr 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
I donno where I should begin with! Awesome story, that's a start I guess. But I'm sure you don't wanna see just that! I read it in one stretch so, damn, it's all jumbled and wooly in my head! That's what the story did to me. I was actually air fisting while reading.
Firstly, thank God it wasn't the usual mills and boon plot of the guy being super rich and the girl barely affording education(HA!). Apart from that, you just fitted Upper East Side into a small town. Plot really caught to me, so did the fucking. My pervy mind was sure doing it's tricks on me. Role of Rosalie fitted her, and I guess her relation with Emmett was pretty real. I fell in LOVE with Jasper. He was one consistent character throughout. Alice was just, woah! all over the story. I felt like punching Renee when she showed up at Emmett's Country Club party. I had a moment of, 'NOO I can't read this further' until Edward saved the night. My other such moment happened when James entered and when she lied to Edward and wanted to leave.
I wanna say sooo many things!! Why aren't they coming to my mind!! I hate it when this happens. Anyway, great great story!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it and your brain managed to read it all in one haul! That is a hell of a complement xx KB
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
*plays tupac Me and my girlfriend* Loved this story! Loved the ending! Tell me when I click your profile I'm gonna find more fic, something?!
Author's Response:
HaHa! Perfect fade out song! No more fics as yet :/ TY for reading!! xKB
Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Wonderful ending to a great story. You had me from the 2nd chapter and I've loved it all the way. Even when they both were being littl twits!
Author's Response:
They are little twits in dire need of a face punch, aren't they? TY so much for reading and reviewing xKB
Date: 27 Aug 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 14 - End Credits
well kudos to you that chapter was really anamazing love scene ...the softness in both of them they both showed their real side an it was wonderful even if it doesn't last past their waking up ..and putting their emotional walls back in place again they both felt what true love makining can be like
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Very good!!! :)
But could u do a sequel??? Need more! :{)
Author's Response:
Aww Thank you! Not planning to do a sequal, I'm afraid! x KB
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Awesome story! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks very much! x KB
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Great story!
loved it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading! x KB
Date: 08 Jun 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Wow. I'm thinking I may like this story!! I LOVE the sweet Edward....but I also LOVE me a douchebag Edward!! lol
Author's Response:
I know what you mean, why do we love a douchbag Edward sfm?! Thanks for taking a shine to him and reviewing!
x KB
Date: 08 Jun 2012 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 Local God
Interested to finIsh reading this one seems good
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Great story!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much x KB
Date: 17 Feb 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
i love it i totally do. but i swear that edward never said he loved bella? :P
and i get that your finished and that...but i would love a 5 years down the line or something like that. :P im selfish i wanna know how it all ended up and you need to tell me haha.
but anyways, great story! :)
and i swear some of those scenes were OC style, which made me smile, because man the first 2 seasons of that show were great...kinda miss it! :P
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review- I LOVE the OC! (Marissa was my QUEEEEEEN) so I'm sure some influence got in there ;)
Not planning on a sequal- but never say never ;p
Thanks again x KB
Date: 08 Jan 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
Loved it! Great job!
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IM SOOOOOO HAPPY THEY HAVE A HAPPY ENDING.
LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS STORY oops just realised i had caps lock on :S
once again loved this story
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 26- Bad Romance
omg so i slightly hate you because now in this entire story edward STILL hasn't said he loves bella. fucking a man! otherwise I love this story and I am crying a little. So thanks for that :)
Author's Response:
Aw- Thanks so much! Thats really great to hear (I LOVE YOUR TEARS apparently- lol!)
Ah those three words...and yes at the end of the day, he is a man!
Thanks so much for reading :) xKB