Date: 13 Apr 2012 12:32 AM Title: Family Time
Awesome chapter. Love the look into the family relationships and goings on. I was so excited to see your chapter as I LOVE your story! Hope life settles down for you.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your continued support. It really helps me want to write more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 7:24 AM Title: Family Time
It's been a while since I've read this and with out starting all over again, I have a couple or few questions.
Is B a virgin? Did she agree to be his girlfriend? Will she leave when the article is completed?
Personally, I hope she does. I think it will add meat to the story.
Author's Response:
Yes Bella is still a virgin.
Bella sort of fell into being Edward's girlfriend, they both want it. She is confused but can't seem to stop the pull to be near him.
Not telling you if she'll leave. I have to leave a little mystery.
All I'm going to say is that I love reading drama.... So of course I would want to write just a little drama right?
Thanks so much for reading.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 5:56 AM Title: Family Time
Great chapter!!!! I missed this story sooo much!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! (yeah, I know I'm greedy)! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it.
Yeah it's a little greedy ;) but I understand completely. I am 90% sure you will have another next weekend as long as I can get my hands on a real computer. I actually enjoy writing on the ipad now, but still can't figure out how to post using it.
Date: 10 Apr 2012 2:11 AM Title: Family Time
Goodness I was so excited to see a new chapter posted! So sorry to hear RL kicking your butt. I am so pleased with the direction of this story, even if I may occassionally be impatient at the pace. Truly the pace is fine, I just need to learn patience! *grins*
Thank you for promising to finish this. I would much rather wait and be gifted with a throrough story than have it rushed and feel incomplete.
Author's Response:
I know that this chapter was a little off, but it took me a bit to get back into the flow of writting again.
While real life has sucked I've been a little depressed and that makes it even harder to write about people falling in love. I'm trying to push past it and writing as well as reading are a great way to lose myself. So as I said I promise that I will finish it, you all deserve at least that for your unconditional support.
Thanks for reading it really means a lot to me.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:33 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
YAY!!! I'm so happy you're back! This is one of my favorite stories, and I actually reread the entire thing before reading the new chapter! Love it! and of course I can't wait to see what else you have in store!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2012 3:49 PM Title: Family Time
Hey darling! I am so glad that you are back! loved this chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! This chapter was tuff it was hard to get back in the flow of things. I'm trying to push through it.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 9:29 AM Title: Family Time
Thanks for the update. So glad that you can continue with this despite everything that's been thrown at you.
Trip
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support, it means a lot to me.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:36 AM Title: Family Time
really glad to see you back especiallly since this is one of my fav stories :DD
Author's Response:
Thank You so much for sticking with me it means a lot.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 5:13 AM Title: Family Time
So good!!! And worth the wait!!! I really loved the kid's dialogues (so hilarious) Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
I have to admit that I used things my daughter has done over the years as inspiration. She was such a cute kid and I miss when she was little like that. Now she's almost 9 and sooooo grown up.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 4:32 AM Title: Family Time
Thanks for posting!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! lol
Date: 09 Apr 2012 4:04 AM Title: Times Are Changing
I have missed this story. I had to reread to get get in the groove again :-)
Date: 09 Apr 2012 3:08 AM Title: Family Time
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
As long as I can get to a real computer you should have a chapter next weekend.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2012 2:45 AM Title: Family Time
i really do love this family
it is very intresting to see the dynamic of how well they all work and live and love so well together
i am hoping and it seems bella is enjoying the family that she lets hersef be loved and be apart.
i was shocked by renesme hitting edward but it seems she was upset he was claiming her ella, loved it.
maggie and her outburst and stomping of her foot and hands on hips with edward and bella was great
love this family and can't wait for more. thank you for updating
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your continued support.
Renesmee and Maggie's reactions are both thing that my daughter has done in the past. I couldn't resist taking those memories and sharing them in this unique way.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 2:24 AM Title: Family Time
I was SO excited to get the alert for this chapter! I love it!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it. It was a little hard to get back in the flow so I'm happy to hear that it wasn't too horrible.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2012 1:14 AM Title: Family Time
Je lis avec mon IPad... mais pour écrire, ce n'est pas parfait...
Quand j'ai besoin, j'envoie des textes de mon IPad à mon portable par l'entremise de hotmail, je suppose que c'est ce que vous avez fait.
Je suis hyper contente d'avoir un nouveau chapitre. Par contre, une fois le texte traduit par Google Translate, le texte est un immense paragraphe, c'est très dure à lire. Pour le prochain chapitre, pourriez-vous laisser plus d'interligne entre chaque paragraphe, svp.
Author's Response:
Je suis heureux que vous appréciez l'histoire.
Je vais essayer de mettre de meilleurs espaces po Parfois, j'ai du mal à couper et coller sur le téléchargement d'afficher l'histoire et ne pas avoir un ordinateur de mon propre chef, là n'est pas aider.
Merci pour la lecture.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 12:29 AM Title: Family Time
Welcome Back hun. Hope all is well in your RL.
Sweet family time.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! RL sucks but whats new right.....
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:45 PM Title: Times Are Changing
I love the originality of this story, and I really hope you finish it. I have yet to find a FF that is even close to this one in it's theme. Please let me know if you have given up on this story.
Thank you,
CMS
Date: 24 Oct 2011 12:58 AM Title: Times Are Changing
So happy to see another chapter.
Bella craves a sense of belonging and she wants that fulfilled by Edward and his crazy family. I am eagerly hoping she finds her place.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2011 12:01 PM Title: Times Are Changing
Yes! Can't wait for some Bella/Edward time! :~)
Date: 17 Oct 2011 4:25 PM Title: Times Are Changing
Great Chapter love the story keep it comeing !!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2011 9:32 AM Title: Times Are Changing
Oh my sweetie, I hope that you are doing better! I am glad to hear that you are on the mend but I am so sorry that you have had such a rough time of it, this year.
I loved this chapter and can't wait for more.
Michele
Date: 11 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Times Are Changing
I was so excited to get this update. RL has gotten in the way of me reading it as soon as it came out. But I have enjoyed reading this chapter. I have not always been a big Rose fan in any story but I like seeing Rose this human, someone with lots of feelings. You have done a great job with all the characters in this story. I am sooooo lvoing it. Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2011 1:51 AM Title: Times Are Changing
thanks good chapter
Date: 05 Oct 2011 8:28 PM Title: Times Are Changing
Rosalie got what she wanted. I don't know why she asked for them, but she asked and he delivered. Calisle has some beautiful wives. They don't look old enough to be Edward's moms. I can';t wait for the next chapter.
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:28 AM Title: Times Are Changing
Yay an update!!! The spankings are gonna be intersting!! A great lemon!
Date: 05 Oct 2011 3:24 AM Title: Times Are Changing
I am so sorry to hear about all of your health problems. You definitely have a great deal on your plate right now. My prayers for a speedy recovery go out to you!
I was thrilled to find that you updated this story. It is not something I would usually read as I don't do well reading lemons that aren't E/B but I find all of these characters to be endearing and I their family dynamics are fascinating. I am enjoying this so very much!
Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:16 AM Title: Times Are Changing
I am glad to see you are back and doing well. What away to come back, great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 6:53 PM Title: Times Are Changing
fab chapter.hope rose is ok now.can;t wait for bella to join the family properley.update soon
Date: 04 Oct 2011 1:50 AM Title: Times Are Changing
loved it
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:29 PM Title: Times Are Changing
I was so excited that you updated! I've been looking forward to it for some time now. I also enjoy how you put up pictures of your characters, although Sasha is about 21 or 22 in real life.
I have many questions regarding your story. I keep getting confused about how old each child is and whose mother is whose. It wasn't clear if Carmen was Kebi's or Sasha's daughter when Edward discussed his siblings with Bella. Though I'm not sure how Sasha and Carlisle could produce a brunette child with such dark features so maybe she's Kebi's. Could you clarify your character's ages including all of the adults? How many months old is Renesmee? You said she turns 2 in September but I couldn't tell what month it was in your story. Are the children in school? Are Carlisle and his wives in domestic discipline relationships, as Bella was assuming?
Character ages, and corresponding mother/child connections are hard to keep track of with such a large family so it might be a good idea to set up a table or something, lol. I cannot wait to see the next chapter. I really like seeing more of Carlisle's children in the picture and hope we get to see more of his interaction with his children. Your photo of Renesmee is perfect, by the way ;) Such a doll. Hope you can clear up some of the confusion pertaining to my questions. Thanks
Date: 03 Oct 2011 10:39 PM Title: Times Are Changing
I can't wait for your next update I hope it don't take as long
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 9:53 PM Title: Times Are Changing
looking forward to the prospect of more updates :D
Date: 03 Oct 2011 8:30 PM Title: Times Are Changing
I am enjoying reading this story and look forward to the next update
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:02 PM Title: Times Are Changing
Je lis sur mon IPad et ce n'est pas possible de laisser une review sur TWCS. Je suis bien heureuse de lire la suite, votre histoire est tellement bonne. Même en lisant avec Google Translate, lol.
Montréal, Québec, Canada
Date: 03 Oct 2011 1:48 PM Title: Times Are Changing
Excellent ... Fabulous emotions. The intensity at the end was awesome.
Date: 03 Oct 2011 12:22 PM Title: Times Are Changing
i really missed you story and i want to see how it will end, so i'll be patient. ;)
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:15 AM Title: Times Are Changing
yay it is so nice to have another chap of this story i've missed it. sorry to hear you have been unwell hopefully things are looking up
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 6:03 AM Title: Times Are Changing
reneesme is adorable.
what a chapter. i think things are going well for bella. it is sad that she still doesn't see herself staying. it seems at times she does but she is so scared he doesn't want her
edward has quite the family dynamics. i guess it could be overwhelming and also so intriguing. bella has a lot to learn. seems it has sparked a maternal bone in her. i kind of see bella having the first child for edward. i so love it and looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:58 AM Title: Times Are Changing
Oh Bella. Gotta get that girl some self esteem. Poor Tanya having her visit all messed up due to others actions. Hope it gets better.
Bella went shopping happy....but its for a good cause.
yummy lemons.
Date: 07 Sep 2011 4:18 AM Title: Home Away From Home
I discovered this story by chance about two days ago and I have spent almost every spare moment I have had reading it. I had no idea, based on the premise, that this story could draw me is the way that it has. You have done a remarkable job of telling this story from all the various perspectives. I normally cannot handle reading non canon pairings but in this case I truly feel the connection between Edward and his wives. I have become engrossed and thoroughly enraptured by this story. Your characters are engaging and compelling. I am eager to read more. I can't wait to read how the story is going to progress. Will Edward and Bella begin their DD relationship before they are married? Will the first time he sees her bottom bared be when he must take her over his knee? How will either character deal with that? How will Bella deal with sharing Edward? THe women must keep their jealousies and insecurities in check but has Edward ever had to deal with that? I would love to see him face the possibility (even if only in his mind) of having to share one of his women. How would he feel about that? I feel so very invested in this plot. I cannot stop thinking about it. I beg of you to write more!!! I absolutely LOVE it!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:15 AM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
I love your story! Please update soon, I can't wait to see how Edward and Bella's realtionship continues.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 9:28 PM Title: Home Away From Home
REALLY DESPERATE FOR THE NEXT UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 10:18 AM Title: Home Away From Home
I really enjoy your story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Jul 2011 7:35 PM Title: Home Away From Home
I read this story before I dropped off the face of the earth. I'm glad that you have continued it. I can't wait to see where you take it next. Please continue.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2011 12:03 AM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
Very interesting story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 11:06 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Wow interesting topic. Can't wait to see where this goes.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2011 8:51 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Hurry up and update, I'm in love with this story. :)
Date: 25 May 2011 3:09 AM Title: Home Away From Home
I am glad to have seen Rosalie's conversation with Esme. This has to be an extremely difficult time for her and I am glad she has Esme to talk it over with.
Seeing more of Edward's family interact with each other is enlightening. Seeing the children being deciplined must have been an eye opener for Bella. It spoke volumes when Esme passed Reni to Bella. It was neat seeing Bella take the baby to snuggle. I can only imagine had Edward been there to witness it, he would have had much the same reaction Bella did seeing him hold the baby at the hospital!
Little by little, Rosalie is bonding with Bella. It may not be with the suddeness that Edward and then Alice did, but in this it is about reaching the same destination.
Date: 25 May 2011 2:32 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
I loved this chapter! The heart to heart with the endearing Siob, meeting Carlisle (again) and seeing those two interact was a joy. It was a treat to see Carlisle and Siob's responses to Bella and Edward together. Aaand of course, a hot moment snuck by Edward for a toe curling kiss!
I am looking forward to Bella's introduction to the rest of this interesting family!
Date: 24 May 2011 2:54 AM Title: Explaining The Pain
Bella certainly seems interested in Domestic Dicipline. I wonder if her interest is solely professional??
Date: 24 May 2011 2:53 AM Title: Money Problems
I am glad that Bella got to witness Alice's punishment. I agree that it is something that she needed to see. Given how much Edward (and Alice too) want Bella to join thier life, it was imperitive that Bella understand ALL aspects of this life.
Date: 24 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Family Ties
Hmmm. It was both enlightening and endearing to hear Edward's story. I believe it started a bonding between he and Bella that neither is aware of.
Naughty Alice! Were you buying up the town to set up Bella in Edward's life??
Date: 24 May 2011 2:01 AM Title: The Most Basic Facts
I, like both Edward and Alice, was rather surprised by Rosalie's invitation for Bella to return over the week end. I am looking forward to seeing their day together.
Date: 24 May 2011 1:41 AM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
I was surprised and pleased to see Edward then Rosalie's pov. While I imagine it makes it more complex for an author, I believe this will give a beautifully well rounded perspective on this story overall.
I am most eager to continue exploring this charming story.
Date: 23 Apr 2011 7:56 PM Title: Home Away From Home
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next update.
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:15 PM Title: Home Away From Home
Great story. The dish that is Tanya's favorite we call pigs in a blanket, and yes it is yummy!
I can totaly see how poligamy in a family would be beneficial. I would love to take shifts with someone else in doing laundry, dishes, and child care.
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 8:14 AM Title: Home Away From Home
I really liked this chapter; it's probably one of my favorites so far. I hope we get more of Carlisle and his family to come and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 11:20 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Love this story
Date: 10 Apr 2011 2:30 PM Title: Home Away From Home
Thank you for the update! Can't wait to hear more.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 7:45 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Glad to see you back... I've missed you and this story. Good luck with the kids... I will keep you in my prayers (and your cousin, too for a safe return).
Muah ~ Tracy
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 9:57 PM Title: Home Away From Home
I'm glad to see Rose is accepting Bella a little more :)
Yeah, spankings... I was spanked when I was younger. I have a friend who wasn't, but when she had kids she started doing it because that's how her husband was raised. My parents always used a belt or their hand. Wooden spoon, hair brush, switch from the tree, I've heard it all, but when my friend pulled out a wooden paint stirrer from the Home Depot I nearly lost it XD
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:57 PM Title: Home Away From Home
This was a good chapter. Can you explain again which child goes with which mother in Carlisle's family or tell me which chapter that was in please? I enjoyed this chapter. I know Roselie is having problems with adjustments, but I know Bella will be the best for the family. She will be a calming force because Alice and Roselie have such stong outgoing personalities. Bella should bring some peace and hopefully children to the family. With her job, she can work from the home. She can bring stablility.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:51 AM Title: Home Away From Home
So Bella and Rose think alike on some subjects. Good!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:25 AM Title: Home Away From Home
thanks good chapter
Date: 07 Apr 2011 7:00 PM Title: Home Away From Home
great chapter. loved the look into roaslie's head and the introduction to the rest of the cullen family.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:10 PM Title: Home Away From Home
Chapter 22
I know that I could not be comfortable or accepting of a man that has more than one wife, no matter if I loved him. I realize it's my upbringing that influences my beliefs. Hell, maybe it's just selfishness.
I wonder if Bella is truly making the right choice by becoming involved with Edward?
I see nothing wrong with domestic discipline. It is not abuse.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:36 PM Title: Home Away From Home
Spanking and discipline being handed down by a husband is very different than that of a parent.
Parents need to teach their children right and wrong so they can grow to be decent human beings.
A husband and wife are supposed to be equals.
I will be absolutely disgusted if your Bella agrees to be spanked or disciplined by her husband. It is sheer nonsense.
Only sick twisted men need to discipline their wives. Women who think that this behaviour is acceptable need their head examined.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:44 PM Title: Home Away From Home
I loved this chapter. Loved seeing Rose like this. She is going to make a great mother. Loved little Ben. That was sweet. You are doing an awesome job with this story. Love little Renesmee. Loved the end where Rose and Bella agreed that Carmen deserves her punishment. I just know that Rose is going to let Bella in. LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. You are doing a GREAT GREAT GREAT job with this story. I hope things gets easier for you. Don't worry, we will be here waiting for you. Don't worry about answering the reviews. You just write the story and not worry about replying to the reviews.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 1:29 PM Title: Home Away From Home
Very interesting to get another perspective on the family inner workings. Fascinating story.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 10:12 AM Title: Home Away From Home
i was beginning to think that you had the story on hold although i did enjoy rpov i much prefer bella and edward but there is info we had to know i hope the next update is up much sooner but i do understand if it isnt i will be anxiously waiting for next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 7:13 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Thank you for taking the time to update this story... i hope all goes well with your cousin and the children... i have enjoyed this story and can't wait until the next update... :)
Date: 07 Apr 2011 5:50 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Loved this chapter. I was so excited to see an update for this story. I wish you updatnks for the update.ed more often.I really enjoy this story. Tha
Date: 07 Apr 2011 5:41 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Great chapter. I've been waiting for an update.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:17 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Still following the story, it is very interesting! Good luck with the kids =)
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:15 AM Title: Home Away From Home
love the update
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:06 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Good chapter. nice to seee Rosalie's thought processes.
RL: Know what you are going through hun. My ex was deployed for 6 months and I had all 3 kids alone with me
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:04 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Loved it. Keep it coming
Hugs
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:32 AM Title: Home Away From Home
Finally an update!!!! yay!!!! I like that this chapter gives us insight into the family. Are there goin to be any lemons in this story?
Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:56 AM Title: Home Away From Home
loved it
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 2:36 AM Title: Home Away From Home
I hope everything settles down for you too. I can't wait to get into the Bella and Edward part of the story. I know you are setting things up by including other family members but your updates are so far apart I just get bored by all the others...lol Not your fault, of course, I am just more interested in what happens between Bella and Edward. Thank you for sticking with the story and good luck with your new family additions... :~)
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 6:53 PM Title: Hospital Admissions
Facinating story. I look forward to the developing relationship.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:44 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
Ahhhh.... i finish up to where you finished grrrrrr!! i want more... i love your story
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:21 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
So it's the teenagers that get all the great scoops on the family. Glad that Bella got to meet more Cullens and they all seem to like her. That would be just as weird for them to welcome an outsider in to judge them as it is for Bella to walk into thier world...I really like seeing the dynamics from both sides, and how Siob doesn't necessarily want to follow in the family footsteps.
I think it would be so hard to share, even if you like and respect the other wives like Rose and Alice, won't Bella have some trouble knowing certain nights he is not with her is is likely fucking them...one thing to observe, another total thing to live it with feeling involved.
Can't wait to read the next chapter, and see how Bella handles the rest of the family.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:35 PM Title: Hospital Admissions
Well I think that Sobian and Bella are going to be great friends.
Date: 01 Mar 2011 4:51 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
Siobhan is gorgeous! I really got into your story! I'm so glad Edward's family is taking such an interest in Bella!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 3:03 AM Title: Revelations Before The Fire
WOW! This chapter was crazy! Love it! Can't wait to see what Rosalie says!
Date: 01 Mar 2011 2:48 AM Title: Flashback
Gasp! He said that! Wow! I wonder what will happen next!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:17 PM Title: Suppression
Huh... I hope Rosalie really got what she needed from that. I look forward to seeing the rest of this.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:27 PM Title: A Woman's Perception
Wow...That is a harsh life that she was born into. I feel so bad for her and I'm glad Edward saved her!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 4:50 PM Title: Money Problems
Wow! That was harsh but he had warned her! 12 thousand dollars is also an excessive amount of money!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 4:06 PM Title: What Happens Behind Closed Doors
huh... Very interesting... Nice lemon and I continue to be intrigued.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:55 PM Title: The Beginning Of The Truth
Very interesting! I think I'll enjoy seeing where this goes.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:30 PM Title: Hospital Admissions
awwwww good chappy
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:00 PM Title: Hospital Admissions
Edward and Bella are so cute. I can't wait until they get to spend some quality time together. Siob is a hoot. She would be a very good lawyer. Can't wait for next chapter.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 6:21 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
lol third degree from a 14 year old. haha.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 5:25 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
it is a process to move this story along. loving it every step of the way. wow when her eyes meet his when he was holding the baby, love it. kind of glad she is coming to the conclusion that she wants a family and with edward, wow.look out bella things are changing. i still predict that bella will be pregnant with edward's child before the other girls. love it all
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:38 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
I am so excited to see you updated... I have been dying for an update :) I love this story and I cannot wait to see what direction you are taking it. I've been following every chapter but under my 'reading' name. So I'm sure you don't recognize this one. I just took the plunge and posted a o/s so I wanted to create a 'penname' a little more exciting than 'tracylk' ... LOL...
Your writing has captured my heart and I hope we don't have to wait as long for the next update, but I can tell you, I have a totally different kind of understanding now that I'm on this side of the fence, so either way... as long as we may need to wait... I'll still be here ready to read and review!
~Muah~
Fangs XxOo
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:27 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
Chapter 21
I don't know how Bella can feel so comfortable with dating Edward. I couldn't be with someone who is in love with not only one but two other women. It seems, to me, that a woman wouldn't very much self respect or confidence to want a man like that. I don't fault Edward's way of life. It's just that I think Bella is jumping into rather quickly. Maybe she should pull back some and really think about what living like that would mean.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 2:10 AM Title: Hospital Admissions
nice chapter, I wander if Bella will really be able to share Edawrd