Date: 22 Jul 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 33
THANK GOD! I was waiting for that - took a bit longer than expected, but it was well worth the wait! I'm so very glad Bella is finally standing up for herself, and that Edward is getting the message through his sexy, but obviously thick head. :D
-Sofia(:
Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yes, yes he IS. I finally have a small hope for Edward, and his possible transformation!
I'm curious, maybe Emmett's not as bad as we all thought, as well...
I sure hope so. :D
-Sofia(:
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 17
Edward acted like real monster in this chapter! Hopefully, that'll change...
Amazing job thus far, though. :)
-Sofia(:
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 49
does Edward Jasper & Emmett know the extent of everything carlisle put esme through?
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
My lord, that is disturbing on SO many levels... Yet, I want to read more. It's like a car crash - so rivetting, you just can't look away or in this case, stop reading. Awesome job, though. :D
-Sofia(:
Date: 15 Jul 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 10
Thank you so much for this story.
I have never read something such...
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you like it
Date: 14 Jul 2010 11:20 PM Title: Epilogue
ummm wow.. I dont know what to say.. Its probably one the most disturbing stories of fan fic Ive ever read.. but at the same time one of the best.. I just couldnt stop reading it.. I think your a wonderful writer.. and while this story is very very dark its DEF worth the read.. Just be patient with the begining.. Great story
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it. Be sure to put me on your favorites so you receive notice of new stories.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:17 PM Title: Epilogue
I'm sad to this story end, but it was awesome:) I'm glad I followed it, can't wait to read what you write next!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 53
I love this story! It's so original, I would definitely read the book:) Great chapter!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 52
Wow, love the chapter!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 50
Awesome chapter:) Love the story!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:23 PM Title: Epilogue
I loved reading this, definitely one of my favorite stories. Though the characters and their actions were at times awful and unexceptable, the story itself was amazing! Thank you for writing this!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 6:08 AM Title: Epilogue
I loved your story. I started reading from the beginning when it was on fanfiction.net and then I moved to your blog. When you stopped posting on your blog I didn't know that you moved it here. I just found it today and I finished the whole thing again in one day. It is amazing and I just wanted to praise you for your work.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. I'm still working (stalling) on CAM and I have a new project in the works that's almost complete that I'm really excited about. I'll be announcing it soon. I also have a couple of ideas for new ff's that I'm still kicking around as well.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2010 6:19 PM Title: A Mother's Love
I loved it, it had a beautifull ending. Thats alot of credits youve got up there, but Ihave to say there is no doubt that you deserved all of it. What other authors are on here from FF? I wonder...hmmm... I cant wait for all the rest.
<33
Date: 02 Jul 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 53
Holy hell,
I think you would do amazing to turn this story into an original! You have to let me know if and when you do! Itll be amazing. Oh, I cant wait. Def something Id wait in a long ass line for. I was alittle worried about the ending but your right, you know what your readers can handle. I cant wait. This had definetly been one of the best stories Ive ever read, if not the best. I cant believe its coming to a close. But i cant wait to see how it ends. Its put me through so many ups and downs, its definelty been a highlight in my life. Im gonna go finish now. XP.
<33
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:38 AM Title: Epilogue
AWWW an amazing end 2 an amazing story i loved this so much best fanfic
EVER
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:31 PM Title: A Mother's Love
i remember when i first found this story on FF and it took me two days to start reading because i could tell where it was heading. i have followed this story to every website it's been and hae even gotten some friends addicted to it. it means a lot to read something like this because i was abused from the age of 4 to 10 yrs old and then on and off till i turned 16 and got some "balls" (lol). for someone like the chracter of bella to survive means a lot to me especially the fact she could love, because thats one of my biggest struggles and have lost the man i truly love because of it. i can't wait for the publishing date please post when it will be released in stores. thank you. so much
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for sharing your story with me. I'm sorry you had to go through something as horrific as that. No one, child or adult should ever suffer abuse in any form.
I'm glad you made it through the graphic beginning and stuck with me until the end.
Take care!
Mic
Date: 27 Jun 2010 9:38 PM Title: Epilogue
1 word comes to mind about this story and i say it in truth
BRAV-FUCKING-OOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 6:54 PM Title: Epilogue
Oh my god I loved this!!! I am so glad Carlisle got it in the end. This is an awesome story and I am so happy I read it...
Great Job!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it
Date: 26 Jun 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 41
omg when you got to the part where you described esme looking up at bella and edward, i thought you were describing esmes like secret boyfriend or something and i was like wtf?? lol.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:31 PM Title: Epilogue
Awesome end to a great story. I wish you luck on publishing this... I know I'd buy a copie. :D
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:49 AM Title: Epilogue
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! I'M GLAD SHE GOT HER HEA IN HER TERMS. great story i can't wait to read more from you. you are really a great author and i enjoyed reading every chapter of this story even though someof them made me want to go out and kick every man named charlie or carlisle in the balls lmao.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and enjoying the story
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 53
OHHH I'M SO GLAD IT'S OVER ALL OF BELLA'S PAIN. THIS WAS A TRULY AWESOME STORY AND I'M SO GLAD I FOUND IT!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 48
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 47
WELL I HOPE BELLA WON'T BE TO MAD AT HIM HE IS ONLY TRYING TO PROTECT HER UNTIL HE MARRIES HER. BUT CARLISLE IS A CONIEVING BITCH! LMAO OMG THIS STORY IS SO GOOD I CAN'T STOP READING IT.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 41
that BASTARD!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 36
i am so happy for them so far
Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:15 AM Title: Epilogue
What a fantastic story. I LOVED it and couldn't put it away. For outtake ideas, I'd like to know if there is any story behind:1) Bella's essay written in the Bullets POV... did Edward ever find out, read it, what her teacher thought? 2) What Esme did with Carlisles ashes? 3) What Bella ever did with her Phoenix home? 4) A future shot at any children they had and the type of parents they were? 5) Did Bella ever end up becoming an author and if so what did she write and would she ever write about her story?
I cried at the idea of the "Renesme House". Loved it!!
THANK YOU FOR SUCH A GREAT READ.
Author's Response:
I do have plans for an outtake on what Esme did with the ashes. The essay is actually an idea my daughter had for a college essay - I think she actually ended up writing something else to turn in but I couldn't get over the idea. It was just too good to forget. I may do a future o/t of their future.
Right now I'm working on an original work and working on the rewrite for TPW to publish later this year.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 32
esme has absolutely no vagina after having emmet lmao
Author's Response:
Yeah 8lb 12 oz with a 15 cm head was my worst
Date: 21 Jun 2010 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 28
alright edward! bout damned time lmao i'm so loving this story lol as you can see i can't stop reading this story i've been reading this story since my first review lol
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
dat fucker! that low down dirty dog of a man. i hope it all comes out. i hope bellaa tells it all. i hope she runs away when she's 18 i would
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
awwww so edward is a prick but he's a nice prick. i just wish she would've let carlise do a complete check up. well anybody is better than charlie or james
Date: 21 Jun 2010 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
oh well edward isn't the dark bitch i thought he's be lmao he seems like he has a heart......i hope......
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
those.....those.....bitches! poor innocent Bella. i was brave enough to read all of it. i was sick to my stomach at the way charlie was acting. he was absolutely disgusting.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
those Bastards
i feel so sorry for bella
Date: 21 Jun 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bastards!
I can't wait to see Bella become a little bit stronger
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
THAT BASTARD!
Sorry i just felt the need to say that. lol
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
it was so hard for me to read that. i felt like i was gonna throw up lmao once again not at your story just that vile ass charlie and james lmao i hope this story doesn't trun me against charlie in other stories.
i read a story once and it made me hate Alice lmao
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is disgusting, it's hard to read through, well only this chapter. i can't believe Charlie and that asshole James. I just wish bella had a bit of a backbone to tell them no and not be so........submissive. hehe! it's a great story so far, a bit on the disturbing side. i hope i didn't offend you i actually like the story and anything negative is only toward those vile characters not you or your story lol
Date: 21 Jun 2010 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
what happened to her inheritance or her um..guardians. great story by the way i'm total getting sucked in lmao
Date: 20 Jun 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 29
I sobbed thru the whole garden scene... very creative writing on your part.
I wonder what would happen if all three sons and their wives and Esme stood up to Carlisle and said "enough". What could he do, really? An what is his crap about him being able to bring punishment to the sons wives??? Outrageous!!
Thanks for a great story.
Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm scared of hating Charlie. I L-O-V-E-D Charlie Swan in the TwiSaga and in the FanFic Universe. I am afraid of seeing him portrayed badly....
And what hppened with Renee's provisions with the lawyer and guardianship? Who notified Charlie anyway? I see other readers have asked and since you haven't responded, I take that to mean it will be answered in another chapter??
Author's Response:
This is answered later in the story from someone else's pov...
Please be prepared the story is about to get really graphic but I promise it doesn't stay that way after ch 10. If you feel the need to skip this part shoot me an email and I'll send you the summary. Hope to still see you on the other side. :)
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:19 PM Title: A Mother's Love
Okay, Renee's death made me cry... on page one! This is going to be a ride, isn't it? LoL. Here we go.....
Date: 16 Jun 2010 6:57 PM Title: A Mother's Love
Hey, I remember a while back you said you would to post an Esme outtake. Are you still doing that?
**Shauna
Author's Response:
Yes, I still plan on doing Esme's outtake. It's been a very busy month.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:17 PM Title: Epilogue
I was so happy to find a finished version of your story. You did such an amazing job writing it, and it is truly a unique story. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story
Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 46
It´s past midnight in Germany and I can´t stop reading. I feel the tension......and have to remind me this is just a story.......ARGH is it?
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you're liking the story
Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 37
This is my second story, where Carlisle is the bad guy.
I am really confused about this story. The first 10 chapters where really disturbing and difficult and i am still not sure why Bella is with Edward, knowing where she is going back to. Carlisle home i guess. Forgetting the Bella/Edward romance from S.M. I don´t think any teenager would do that beeing back home. But I guess it is just a really tough chapter!!!!!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 48
You know I had to stop at the last chapter last night so I could get a few hours of sleep before work. My stomach has literally been tied up in knots day worrying about what Edward was going to do to her. Gah! I wish that I had read this chapter last night! I think I need therapy for being so worried about a fictional character all day!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 42
I want to thank you for writing this story. I've never been so moved. I'm still crying even as I'm writing this review. You are a wonderful writer and I hope that you continue. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us, it was one that I will never forget. You are officially one of my favorite authors.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG it was really hard.....
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 1:16 PM Title: Epilogue
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it's over!!!! :( gonna cry!
loved it loved it loved it rmcrms5!!!
i just wish there was a rating of 1000 :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 48
ok that spent me! now i have to find a way to gather myself for work :)
LOVE the story rmcrms5!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 47
NOOOO!!!! come on mosterward! dont do it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 46
bum bum buuuummmmmm!!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 44
really really great scene loved it!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 8:51 AM Title: Epilogue
Hi..OMG..what an amazing story..I'm shocked...I have no words which have such power to explain my feelings now...I read ur story in 2 days..and It was so...I do not know...I have no words....just Thank You so much....Oh,I'm crying now...This is the best story I have ever read....THANK YOU....
Date: 06 Jun 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 18
I couldn't stand it and cried. Hartbreaking.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 53
i would absolutely loooovvvveee for u to do a series...pleeeaaassssee im begging u. u r trueley amazing
Date: 04 Jun 2010 12:09 PM Title: Epilogue
I read your story- it was so amazing I could hardly stop long enough to breathe. You're very talented, I really love your style.
Hot. Super Hot. Méga Hot.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Be sure to put me on your author favorites so you'll get notified when I post new stories.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 5:33 PM Title: Epilogue
Cette histoire est extraordinaire. Elle était si passionnante que j'ai lu avec l'aide du traducteur google.
Je suis fière d'être la bêta sur la traduction française, c'est un honneur!
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 46
i just found your story and got hooked up immediatly. it's odd and it's nice and kinda twisted. i like it a lot. so much in fact that i made a split decision and followed you here, i know i'm not going to regret it. a lot of people probably told you this already and followed you here, but i just had to tell you again. you're great.
redgoldfish
Author's Response:
thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying the story
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 53
dgdjlfgkj AMAZING. <3333
Date: 01 Jun 2010 10:03 PM Title: Epilogue
what an awesome ending
Date: 01 Jun 2010 12:01 AM Title: Epilogue
Really loved it! Super sweet ending! I thought it was great that you had Bella learn who she was before just going back to Edward! A touching and thought-provoking story I'm glad that I got to read the whole thing! Hell, I made an account on this site just so I could finish after it got pulled from ff. Amazing job!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the story
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2010 2:01 AM Title: Epilogue
Wow... Just WOW!! yeah, that's it. i've had one of my other friends reading this as well, and she'll be saying the same thing. it's a really good story, kinda freaky at times, but very good. i wish it wasn't over tho... /sadface. i'll be looking to read more of your stories tho.
angel
Date: 29 May 2010 6:26 PM Title: Epilogue
Well, this story...I've been waiting forever to finally finish it. Thanks so much for not giving up on it and completing it. This story has made me cry, made me laugh, made me angry. Now, it's done and there is as you promised a great, happy ending. This story is unique, it's original, it's touching, it's inspiring. This story is amazing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I have a couple of things in the works right now so put me on your author favorites so you'll get notified.
Date: 29 May 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 48
Thank God he didn't do anything. I would hate him so much if he did something. I can't imagine how Bella's feeling. I would be so confused...
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2010 5:38 AM Title: Epilogue
WHERE'S MY DAMNED KLEENEX?!?! VERY VERY EXCELLENT STORY SWEETIE! making it a real novel would be great! *now off to see what else ya got goin'!! * huge hugs to you!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 53
HUGE SNIFFLES! AWESOME chapter sweetie! thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2010 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 52
ohhh thank you so very much for this nicely wrapped present!
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 50
aarrgh! hope to HELL it's eddie & the boys!
Date: 26 May 2010 4:04 AM Title: Epilogue
Amazing Story!!!! i loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
You don't need to defend yourself for this story or the content of this story. It's obvious your a pretty intelligent person to be able to create such an imaginative story and talented as well to be able to express content like this while not having the story coming across in a smutty manner but rather a tragic and intense drama. I can't wait to see what Edward is like with Bella. For some reason I put off reading this for awhile-well I missed out because I love the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving my story a shot. I hope you continue to enjoy
Date: 24 May 2010 10:34 AM Title: Epilogue
FREAKIN' loved this story!!!!!! You are an amazing writer!!
Date: 24 May 2010 9:07 AM Title: Epilogue
I have been reading TPW since the very beginning on FF.N and, though it was sometimes hard to find on the internet, it was well worth the read. This story opened the eyes of many, including myself, on what level Twilight fanfiction could reach. Before this, I had never read anything quite as dark or controversial in fanfiction. It was a complete revalation that something like this could exist and I would enjoy reading it. This is a dark, twisted story that has somehow found its way into the hearts of many readers, despite its disturbing content. Though some scenes were hard to read, I have truly loved reading this story, and I thank you for opening my eyes to see what fanfiction can offer.
Ash
Date: 24 May 2010 1:47 AM Title: A Mother's Love
So normally I'm one of those annoying people who only posts "when will you update?". I figured since I basically followed you from the beginning, I should post a REAL review.
I love everything you created in this story, but the saddest part by far is anything with Esme. It's horrible how her husband and sons take everything out on her just because they can. I doubt Carlisle woul have beaten her so badly if he wasn't in love with Renee and didn't blame her leaving on Esme. Also when Edward blamed his father's disaproval on her and actually physically took it out on his mother.
I have to wonder though, if over the years Carlisle just "put up" with her, or if he was actually pleased with her as his wife?
~Megan
Author's Response:
In the chapter where you see Carlisle's insanity actually come out he says he tried to be happy with Esme, but she couldn't replace Renee. He never loved her.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 1:07 AM Title: Epilogue
OMG, EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked!
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG, My heart just about stop!!!!
Date: 22 May 2010 8:31 PM Title: Epilogue
I stumbled upon this story last year on your blog and thought you had given up on it. It's certainly a difficult read, but it's an amazing story. I'm glad Bella was able to change Edward to be a caring, loving individual. Thank you for sharing this with us, it's truely incredible.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 39
OMG, I haven't cried so much in a long time. Esme and Edward are the example of what admitteance is all about. Niff, Niff!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks
Date: 22 May 2010 11:56 AM Title: Epilogue
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I had tears in my eyes reading this - I only just found this story and have been avidly reading for three days! I really like the character development and loved the secret of the garden although I would have liked to know Esme's reasoning behind the bulb garden representing Edward and the night garden representing Jasper.
If the original is as good as this it'll be a wonderful and captivating read.
Author's Response:
The bulb and night garden will be explained more in the book. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked the story. Put me on your author alert so you'll know when I post new stories. I'm working on a story for the original contest coming up next month.
Date: 22 May 2010 2:22 AM Title: A Mother's Love
wen r u posting the outake
Author's Response:
I will be posting an outtake for Esme, but it isn't finished yet. Is this what your talking about?
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 29
Edward needs to have Jacob take out his father!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 28
Finally he gets it!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 27
This chapter was so refreshing. I enjoyed it so much!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
OK, I've read a few more of these chapters. It is hard reading this. That man is clueless. Someone need to punish his ass!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
WOW, I am finally getting where I can read this without tension. Don't get me wrong, I have enjoyed the last few chapters. I started reading the Into and chapter one, but had to move onto chapter 10. I couldn't read them. Its getting easier now!
Date: 19 May 2010 9:04 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow what an intense story! It owned me from the beggining...I missed work because I couldn't stop reading. It was hard to read in places and the scary part that there are evil men out there that are like the Carlisle in the story. I am glad your Bella is strong and able to overcome her abuse. It was fun to read "Lakewold Gardens" in the story. It is about 2 miles from my house. Anyways thanks so much for sharing your words with us! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. I can't believe you missed work for my story! That has got to be one of the highest praises I've received yet for this.
Date: 19 May 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
Wow that was intense!
Date: 18 May 2010 5:16 PM Title: Epilogue
I like your story! I had many feelings by reading it, she even sometimes made me cry.
Congratulation for your writing.
PS: Sorry for the faults of understanding
Date: 17 May 2010 6:44 PM Title: Epilogue
hey
I love your story and have been following it for months and am glad that it has finally come to a happy ending, however i hop you take no offense but i think that the epilouge of the story didn't reach to potential it has compared to the story and the ending seems rushed, i was a bit dissapointed by the ending because of all the emotional up and downs through the story waiting for bella and edward to be happy and it seems that the ending was over far to quickly with hardly any detail about how the characters feel and maybe what will happen in their future, please let me know if you would consider adding another chapter onto the end of the story
thankyou
Author's Response:
The ending was left vague for a reason. I'm publishing the story later this year but didn't want to leave the ff version hanging or pull it all together. This was a compromise for the published version. Any writer that has published their ff story pulls the story completely before completing it to encourage readers to buy the book. I didn't want to do this since my readers have been so faithful to follow me thru all the crap that I wanted to give you an ending without giving away everything that will be in the book. So for those who want to purchase the book the gaps for this 5 year period will be filled in along with some new material that was never in the ff story. For those who don't want to purchase the book you at least have an ending to the story and know they got their happy ending.
I hope this helps.
Date: 17 May 2010 2:39 PM Title: Epilogue
Awww, you're just a big mushy marshmallow like the rest of us, aren't you? ;)
Great story! This was a hell of an introduction to "The Writers Coffee Shop"!
I'm probably spoiled by this story, and all others will suck. LOL
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I'm publishing it later this year with new material and also a LOT more detail of the 5 year gap in the last 2 chapters if you're interested. I'll let everyone know as we get closer to publishing dates!
Check out my other story "Creating A Mate". It's still in progress and a lot lighter reading to give you a break.
Take care!
Mic
Date: 17 May 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 49
Well, it's no bone yard.....but I get it. =)
Date: 17 May 2010 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 48
OMG! I'm so glad this chap didn't end the way I thought it would! I was about to make my coffee "Irish" this morning. ;)
Date: 17 May 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 44
I love it!
Sweet, sweet lovin'.......
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 41
HOLY PSYCHOS BATMAN!!!!!!
WTH?! I did not anticipate this! I've clearly underestimated Carlisle's insanity. I'm blown away by his level of mind fuckery. Yes, I'm being crass! There's just no other way to communicate my hatred for the demon you've created. (Great work btw! Your creativity is fantastic! LMAO)
I hope Esme castrates Carlisle, lets him bleed to death and then buries the bastard in the wild flower garden!!
Am I close? Please say I'm close! LOL
Author's Response:
Glad you like! Psychos are just so much fun to write. You don't have to hold anything back on their characters. The more fucked up and twisted the more believable they become.
Date: 17 May 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 39
Carlisle is one twisted fuck.