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Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2020 11:54 AM Title: Contest Nomination

Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us.

Althouh I must admit, it had some quite terrible scenes in it.

But I enjoyed reading it.

Thank you!!!

Greetings from Germany,

leinchen

Reviewer: pumba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 11:47 AM Title: Contest Nomination

Probably very late to say this but I was wrapped with this story! The plot, twists n turns were great and well thought out. Loved reading! You didn’t go over board like a lot of others and just ruin characters for the rest of the story.Thank you for putting the notes on FF so I could find it here. Amazing job 😊

Reviewer: pumba Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 11:46 AM Title: Contest Nomination

Probably very late to say this but I was wrapped with this story! The plot, twists n turns were great and well thought out. Loved reading! You didn’t go over board like a lot of others and just ruin characters for the rest of the story.Thank you for putting the notes on FF so I could find it here. Amazing job 😊

Reviewer: pumba Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Feb 2019 11:46 AM Title: Contest Nomination

Probably very late to say this but I was wrapped with this story! The plot, twists n turns were great and well thought out. Loved reading! You didn’t go over board like a lot of others and just ruin characters for the rest of the story.Thank you for putting the notes on FF so I could find it here. Amazing job 😊

Reviewer: cherylchuy2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2018 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm speechless!!!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 18

The only chance he ever had at her loving him is through brain washing, Stochholm, or by giving her freedom and a choice

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes. 

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor woman have stockholm syndrom, they aren't wife's they are prisoners. Now edward will take over the rape and force....I hope bella gets free and alerts the feds about the backwards town breaking rules...if she ends up with edward I hope it's after he gave her a choice and groveled. This fic causes mix feelings in me can't wait to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope Bella gets free and Edward has to work for her to want him

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope Bella gets free and Edward has to work for her to want him

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope Bella gets free and Edward has to work for her to want him

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2017 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

I hope Bella gets free and Edward has to work for her to want him

Reviewer: MariahajilE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2016 11:00 PM Title: A Mother's Love

Congratulations! You've been nominated in the 2016 TwiFic Fandom Awards!
The full list of nominees will be published on the site tomorrow, December 18th.
Round 1 polls will also open tomorrow, December 18th, and close December 25th at 11:59pm EST. Round 1 results will be announced on December 30th. Round 2 polls will open December 31st and close January 7th at 11:59pm EST.
Banners will be awarded to 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place winners, with 1st place winners also receiving a blinkie. All winners and the recipients of the Fandom Achievement Award will be announced January 22nd.
Good luck!
Iris Host, Organizer TwiFic Fandom Awards twificfandomawards.blogspot.com

 

@TwiFicFanAwards

Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks for notifying me.

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 41

carlisle is a sick very sick man

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2016 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 35

Did carlislefind rene and phil and and plan everything?

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

this is insane!

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

I wonder what will be the consequenses of Edward and Carlisle find out that she was rape

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

But didnt Rene left instruction that he something happened to her bella will go to live with her lawyer

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Charlie is sick

Reviewer: debnin Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2016 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 5

I dont know I think that she had a opportunity to tell someone when she was at the hospital 

Reviewer: wolfpack15 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2016 6:40 AM Title: Contest Nomination

best feaky storyx ever



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2015 11:04 PM Title: A Mother's Love

Loved it! Poor Renee!

Reviewer: heimk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2015 4:30 AM Title: A Mother's Love

I love this story and I come by and retread it from time to time, I have a question how old is everyone was just wondering. 

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:03 PM Title: A Mother's Love

Oh my... no!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 9:09 AM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story

Reviewer: trilby97 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 12:43 PM Title: Epilogue

Recently I have been reading fics with twisted Carlisles for some reason, but hands down, yours is the darkest I have read. Insane actually. Your story was very powerful, the emotions going through me were uncontrolled. I'm from India, till date some men think they're always right and have a way they wanna run their family. Women are uncredited things at home solely for the purpose of maintaining the house and bearing children. Might I add, arranged marriages are quite prevailing still. During the age of my grandparents, the bride and groom would see each other at the day of wedding. But then again, I'll have to blame our society and history for making such barriers which would take generations to break. 

I feel I'm ranting than reviewing. The chapter on Carlisle reminded me of Wuthering heights. Him being Heathcliff. Just a thought, and at that moment I felt a little sad for him. Even during the end. When he called Bella Renee. Apart from that, he was an asshole. Probably I needed some redeeming factor for Carlisle. 

Esme came out as a very strong character, I love how you wrote her. She not only supported herself, but Rosalie, Alice and Bella too. I can understand why Esme never left. I felt angry when Bella's therapist blamed her. If Carlisle had power to keel track of Renee and Bella, he could have brought her back as well. And she couldn't think of what Carlisle would take from her then. She always lived in the hope that her children would change someday. 

Lemme comment on the others too, though Carlisle and Esme stood out the most. Charlie had a rather active role in Bella's life, a lil too active I must add. James made me sick. Its true when they say, most of the time, the abusers are family members. Its sick to the core what they did, I'll never understand what Bella went through, but you wrote her well enough that I can feel some of her pain. More than one occasion, I cried. Edward was initially an assward, who later became confusedward, then just Edward. Take it however you want that. 

I liked that Jasper and Emmett took an active role in making Edward understand. Now that he had a girl worth fighting for. I just sang Mulans song in my head. I initially didn't believe that Rosalie could be subdued into anything and that Alice would sit in one place. Emmett and Jasper took good care of them and their love showed through throughout the story. 

I had to take a break and shake my body when I read that Demetri took Bella. I was so overwhelmed. I had to loosen myself before reading further. Thousands of thoughts were going through my head. This story brought out a lot of powerful reactions from me. I didn't skip through any scene, not because I'm a sadist or a creep, I wanted to take in the full effect of the story. I wouldn't have understood the characters if I had skipped the training scenes. 

I wrote so much, still I feel like writing more. That's my bad habit, if the story is complete, I can stop, I have to read it in one go and comment towards the end. 

All in all, I love your story, its one I don't think I'll ever forget. I was going through TWCSs top ten, and it deserves its spot there. It touched my soul, got me thinking about a lot of things. Apart from the violence, what people read in stories and think lightly of, some people live all that in real life. Hell include the violence. Who said violence can only be physical. 

Thank you for such a lovely story. 

Take care

Trilby.

Reviewer: toshibaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

I was so disappointed in Edward. I thought he would save her, but heseems just like them. He knew of the abuse the whole time and encouraged it? 

But most of all I'm disappointed with Bella. That girl has no fight in her whatsoever. She just accepted the abuse right away, no fighting, screaming, or anything for that matter. She didn't try to run or even resist! I think even if they were to rape her, which I guess James has, all she would do is cry. Which is confusing... she grew up in a normal loving family, why did she turn out so weak? 

Also didn't Renee say her gurdianship would go to her friends? how did she end up with Charlie? so many questions! I'm off to read more and hopefully get my answers.

Reviewer: wantonlytoread Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2014 10:42 AM Title: Contest Nomination

Wow, I stumbled on this story and OMG, what a ride. My heart has been pounding, my stomach in knots, and u cried. What a terrifying, emotional read. Just wow. Well done, you totally had me involved and riveted to the very end. It's a scary thought that this is actually anyone's reality. Let's hope they can get their happy ever afters too. Thankyou for writing. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving TPW a shot. I'm glad you liked it! It wasnt an easy story to write either. Read my one shot Esme's Christmas Tree to see the very end of their story.

 

Mic

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 49

Well huh? I thought maybe there would be 25 years of evidence against Carlisle & Charlie buried in a large metal footlocker type box somewhere in that garden!

Reviewer: seirr933 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 6:48 PM Title: A Mother's Love

 

Reviewer: harkie5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2014 1:41 PM Title: Epilogue

I loved your story!! I was so stressed out I couldn't put it down. Your imagination OMG I never could of thought up something so crazy horrible.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I hope you'll check out my other stories as well. I also have written 2 original novels thru twcs.

Mic

Reviewer: geosordino Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 35

I don't cry easily - when people put up "tissue alerts" I usually find that I don't , in fact, ever actually need a tissue.  But this chapter, the end in particular, when she's speaking to her mom & Phil, you had me in tears.  Powerful stuff.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Mic

Reviewer: rosemarieswan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2014 7:58 PM Title: Contest Nomination

You are an amazing writer. Even though I was a bit uncomfortable reading at the begining, I understood why you had to write that. I hope this story will be dedicated to all those abused women out there. Thank you for writing this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for making it all the way thru the story and for reviewing! Abuse is a cycle and until someone choses to break that cycle it will only continue throughout generations. I hope you'll check out my other stories CAM and LOMO (not nearly as dark) as well as my original novels (nothing is p2p) Blind Faith and The Darkness of Perfection (which has a sequel in the works)

Mic

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 53

I was hoping Edward was her date :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 52

What a test for Edward...

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 50

Oh no!!!  Is it Carlisle???

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 49

Made me cry :(

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 48

Oh, so good!!  I'm so glad he told her!!!  I hope they don't try to break down her door to get to her :)

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 47

Oh no! Oh no! Oh no!!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 46

Who are these guests?? Bad news!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 45

How much will Carlisle expose to Edward about his wishes???

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 44

Beautiful :) 

How about birth control??? 

They left the ice cream out... will Esme get home on time???

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 43

You are doing the right thing Edward...

Poor Rose and Alice...  Maybe they can get remarried :)

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:12 AM Title: A Mother's Love

great story! was a bit worried that she was actually going to end up with someone else but loved the ending



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Be sure to check out my other fanfics LOMO & CAM. LOMO is the darker of the two, but neither are like TPW. I've also published 2 original novels: Blind Faith and The Darkness of Perfection (which will have a sequel). DOP does involve white slavery, but it is not a "copy & paste" rewrite of TPW. There isn't a single scene from TPW in my original work.

Thanks again for taking the time to read and review!

Mic

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 42

Perfect!!!!

Carlisle is so, so ugly.  I can't believe how evil he is!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 41

Ugly, very ugly.  Just wait till Edward sees what Carlisle's plans are.  He will definitely have the support of his brothers!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 40

Looks good so far, huh?



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 39

AWWWW :)

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 38

Way to go, Edward!!!  I hate  to see what happens when Carlisle finds out!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 37

Such a great chapter!!!  They are truly learning to trust one another :)

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 36

So, so cute!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 35

Bella is such a brave girl. 

Did Carlisle pay Renee and Phil's attorney off??

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 34

Do you think she will give up the info on Carlisle??? Or will Edward catch his father in the act???

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 33

Hopefully this will be a good start for both of them!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 31

Good luck Bella!!!  He's closer than you think!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 30

One step forward...two steps back.  Hang in there Bella!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 29

He's getting better and better, isn't he???  Carlisle better stay out of Edward's business.  He gave her as the gift, now let Edward enjoy it!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 28

I am hoping that this did the trick for Edward.  I am hoping that the light bulb has finally gone on :)

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 27

That was nice for Bella :)

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am still hoping...at least he is asking

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 25

Both Renee's and Esme's wishes have come true...

Renee got away and Esme will have Bella as a daughter in law.

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 24

Kinda sad, huh??  If only Edward would wise up!!!

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Date: 03 Jun 2014 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 23

His brothers are trying so hard...



Author's Response:

The lightbulb will click on soon.

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 22

I think Edward is being very patient.  Carlisle is being ridiculous.  He's the next one that needs to be found out.  I'd feel sorry for Esme though...If she loves him...

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yeah!!!!!  I am so glad that Emmett and Jasper have seen the light and they are sharing it with Edward.  Hopefully, things will smooth out for Bella...

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 20

Oh no, oh no, oh no!!!!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

I hope he realizes that Jasper is right!!!!  Oh, I hope :)

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 18

It's good to see that the Cullens aren't as bad as Charlie and James, but it still seems as though Carlisle might have a little of the dark side with him...

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter... I think it has Edward thinking....



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Mic

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 16

OH NO!!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

Hmm... What's Edward have in mind??? :)

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 14

Charlie and James were stupid to treat Bella the way they did if they knew Edward was watching!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 13

Maybe Edward does have a chance to really be different and get to know Bella :)



Author's Response:

Remember change doesn't happen overnight. Edward is going to screw up. He was raised to be a heartless bastard and it takes time to overcome years of raising.

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward, you should have listened to.  Would they have noticed what else James did??

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 11

I am so glad that Edward came to save Bella.  I can believe he beat him up, though.  James will take that out on Bella.  Can't Edward take Bella home with him now???



Author's Response:

Soon. 

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

Unbelievable!!!!

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Date: 31 May 2014 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

Poor, poor Bella :(  Is there any chance that Edward could be a nice guy???

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Date: 31 May 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 7

Pure dogs marking her...

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Date: 31 May 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 6

Who will save Bella :(  They are such pigs.  I feel Bella's hate!!

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 5

The punishment was worse than it should have been.  Is Edward just as nasty??

Why did James smirk at Emmett and Jasper's marriage??

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Date: 31 May 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

She has to go through a whole year of this???  I can't believe Vicki went along with this!!

Reviewer: megann Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2014 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 49

So I totally thought the secret to her garden was going to be some poisonous herbs or an escape tunnel she was building or a hole about 6 feet deep just waiting for her to get the nerve to kill Carlisle... Therapy is not as exciting as I was hoping. And it wasn't really a secret.

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

Can't she run away??????



Author's Response:

Please be forewarned the next 7-8 chapters are very dark and graphic and deal with abuse. I promise the story gets better and has a realistic happy ending.

Reviewer: bella0609 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2014 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

So humiliating...  Poor Bella :(

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Date: 30 May 2014 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

What happened to the special guardians set up to Bella through the lawyer??  Did she fall through the cracks??

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Date: 30 May 2014 12:27 PM Title: A Mother's Love

Incredible first chapter

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Date: 09 May 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 48

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD.....SHE FINALLY GOT HER MOUTH TO WORK & TELLEDWARD WHAT HIS FATHER HAS PLANNED FOR HER....TO SODOMIZE HER.

 

THIS has been one of the hardest stories I have ever read. I've not skipped any chapters....I've read it all....& I can not believe the gall of Carlisle & how he has raised his sons' & then buying them wives AFTER they have been trained to satisify them sexually !!!!!

 

I just about took up biting my nails again in this chapter. It racked my last nerve.

 

Well, I'm off to read the rest.'

Thanks muches for sharing your story with me.

 

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)



Author's Response:

Thanks for giving this a shot and congrats on making it through the beginning! I know it's not an easy read. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. 

Mic

Reviewer: Brinkleydeelite Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2014 1:47 AM Title: Epilogue

When I started reading this I didn't think I could finish it.  But man did it pull me in.  Such a food read.  



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with the story. I'm glad you liked it. I hope you'll try my other stories--none are like this one.

Mic

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