Date: 29 Jul 2017 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 55
Great story. I'm wondering if Edward ever gets his finger back. And while most of me doesn't mind the ending with his what about me statement. A part of me is wondering if he's still a Cullen. He's he going to try and get revenge or what's going to happen to him. He's alone or it seems as if he was disowned by everyone idk if that's the case but it seems that way. Is he going to learn and grow. Get a job and eventually find his hea. Or do we just hate him lol. The ending left me conflicted
Thank you for the review and you have some great questions....to answer some of them I'll start by saying there is a work in progress sequel you can find on fanfic.net by same author name :) Feel free to check it out, I think it answers a few things for you.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 18 Jan 2015 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
So, what? Is everyone supposed to be able to read her fuckin' mind? It would be different if nobody asked her what she was thinking about, but Jasper outright asks her, and the selfish shit doesn't say anything.
Proving she has all the control again.
Everyone jumping through hoops for the Queen B.
Well you go girl. I know she can be whiny but that was what happened when I began writing. Thanks for all the reviews! Even if it is pissing you off. I hope you like the end at least.
Date: 18 Jan 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
I've read this before. Been quite a while.
And I guess it's just me and my poor attitude, but I can't help thinking Bella is just throwing a tantrum.
"My boyfriend dumped me and I'm going to hold my breath until I turn purple."
Because, of course, Bella is the ONLY one EVER who has been dumped by somebody. Bella is the ONLY one who EVER lost someone, and NO ONE feels the pain of loss like Bella. NO ONE has had a broken heart before. ONLY BELLA.
Everyone around her is begging her to react, talk, eat, etc and she refuses. She's got the power, she's got everyone by the balls and she's yanking on them.
Little Queen B (for bitch) getting all the attention, while other folks grovel at her feet.
I guess it kinda pisses me off. Guess I can't sympathize. I didn't get it when I read New Moon, and I guess I still don't get it. Then, I suppose I figured it was Edward was meant to be her one and only, he left, and she fell apart. But I still couldn't really sympathize.
Everybody has to deal with shit, but you still have to get up and do the laundry, feed the kids (if you have them), put the dog out.
Maybe that was Bella's problem—she didn't have anything else in her life at all so she knew she could collapse and it wouldn't make much difference. I mean, Charlie could actually feed himself and do his own laundry.
Knowing this, Bella went into her zombie tantrum. However, she did continue to go to school. Nobody could take care of that for her, so she did that.
I just want to slap her and say, "Get the fuck over yourself, you selfish little asshole. You ARE NOT the center of the universe."
It's what happens in life—you get left. Dogs die, parents die, friends get killed in car crashes.
And this is why I think Bella was so immature. She may have been responsible, until Edward dumped her, but she was still a sheltered kid and didn't have a clue about the crap that happens.
I'm glad Jasper is gettin' tired of her shit.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 55
Well I have read some of your other works. Chocolate Jasper is my all time favorite. Thanks to Heavyinfinity pimpin Saving Bella hard in one of of her story where you were her beta. I just had to see what she was going nuts over.(I'm so glad I did) this is anothor fav off mine. I am also glad I'm late this party, because I to read that finished story all at one time. So, this my review for the entire story. I love it! Thank so much for sharing it. It was fun, sad and many more things that you already know. With that said, all I can say is "Well written,well done" I am a fan.....
Thank you so much darlin!
Date: 26 Jul 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
She needs to get past all of her crap soon and move on to the next level and Emmett really does need to back off .
Well I don't know if you made it to the end but things evened out. I think :)
Thank you for leaving reviews!
Date: 26 Jul 2014 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
sassafrass junction is one of my favorite ones also.i was starting to re-read it when i saw about this story so i went to check it out now i am stuck on it unless it starts to slow down again then i might got back to SJ for a while.
Date: 26 Jul 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
Emmett needs to reel it back some.he may think he is her big bro but he isn't.he needs to realize that Jasper is trying to work out his emotions concerning Bella and she is not helping when she won't talk to him.then she pulls thatbonehead stunt with the knife.
Date: 24 Jul 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
For one thing i don'tunderstand why FF pulled this story? i know there are screwed up people in the world that would probably just report the story because they didn't like the pairings people write about.but what kind of admins would pull them just to make them happy?..OK,thatwas my rant,now for my review....I love the Jasper/Bella pairings,i would love to see agood amateur video made of thisor one of the ohter good stories that are out there with these two.don'tknow if you have written this in the story but iwould love to see Jasper,probably with some help from Em take Anal Eddie apart so he couldsuffer like she did after what the child didi to her.
Date: 19 Jun 2014 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 55
What a truely awsome story!! I've been hooked and have virtually read straight threw only stopping for school runs, and a few hours sleep early ths morning!! Thank you so much for sharing this amazing story, I m so glad I found it over here at twcs, can not understand why it was pulled fom fanfiction site, I sometimes wonder if they truly know what they are doing over there!!
Thanks again for an incredible story and a very sexy jasper!!
Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you loved it and were able to find it. I don't know why fanfic pulled it. They kept pulling Made of Stone which is on fanfic and nothing wrong with it. Their canned notifications don't make sense. Anyhow, I'm actively posting on that one so feel free to join me over on fanfic for the sequel and there is also a side shot for Saving Bella over there and personally (and I know I'm biased) but I think it's cute! :) And I had loads of fun writing it.
Thanks again for the awesome review! Oh and Saving Bella can now be yours in PDF format if you would like to PM me your email address, no push though, just letting you know it's an option.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am going to take a break fromthis tory for a while before it puts me to sleep.
Hahaha well thank you for all the reviews and giving the story a try. Vicky does show up and things certainly change for the pair but I understand it's a long long story. I did have trouble at times moving time along. If you choose to return to the story I hope you're able to enjoy it but if not I understand.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh yeah i keep forgetting your Beta needs a Beta,you keep leaving words out of your sentences or you will add extra ones. i guess some of the mutts are in the parking lot giving Rose some trouble.pretty sure Emmett will try to remove body parts from Golden Boy when he sees him next. nice to see that Rose will be her friend now instead of give her trouble.
Date: 06 Jun 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
It will be so nice when Douchward is a smoking pile of ash and Bella is a vampire living her ever after with Jasper.
*giggles* Well the ever after with Jasper is almost assured. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 06 Jun 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait for Fuckward to get his self rightious ass beat. i guess next time she sees the family as self rightious as they are they will expect her to just run back into their arms and act like nothing happened.and oh yeah Rose will be a bitch towards Bella.
LOL welll I hope you continue to enjoy the story and find out what happens. Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 55
Totally enjoyed the story. Didn't take time to review each chapter as I had to know what was going to happen next. Kind of sad to see it come to an end.
I'm happy you enjoyed it. I understand not reviewing every chapter. I'm in the process of reading a multi-chapter fic myself and like you I have to know what comes next. Thank you for taking the time to leave this review.
Date: 01 Apr 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 55
Hello. Terrific story here! I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I liked all the characters and their personalities also. Thanks for entertaining me the past few days! Suzan Noerr
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 16 Jan 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 55
It's over, It took me two years to read and for two years it's sat open on my computer never closed and it's finally over :( not sure how I feel about that. I don't think I'll ever read/find another fanfic this engrossing again amazing story.
Hugs tight...thank you so much for sticking with it. I appreciate your dedication to reading it all the way through and your kind words about the story.
Date: 25 Nov 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 42
I'm French and reading your author note made me react : Décolletage, that just doesn't exists !
So I just check one of the biggest French dictionary. "Décolletage" does exist but has nothing to do with female anatomy or clothing. It is a technical term used in agriculture or in nut-and-bolt works with tow different meanings. Nothing to do with your story.
However, "décolleté" is the correct term you need. It can be either a name or and adjective. As a name it denotes the female anatomy part as you explained in your note. As an adjective, it denotes the part of clothing which lets you see the corresponding female anatomy part.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 53
I'm not upset at the way Bella treated Esme.
I'm glad...some people were really upset, others agreed, I guess it's just how you view Esme and if you take in to account the changes in the story or the Esme from Twilight...they're slightly different and Bella's views certainly are.
Thanks for the review!
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 27 Jun 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 55
Amazing story, Shame I only first read this now. But Thankfully I found it and I enjoyed every minute of the journey with the characters. Great job, hun.
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It's one of those better late than never. :)
Thanks for taking the time to review. I know it's a long difficult story to read at times so I appreciate that you were able to get through it.
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 17 Jun 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 55
I personally would LOVE to read "the sequal" if your brilliant mind ever decided????? PLEASE;) I have read this story on fanfiction, and I just had to read it again. O and the story you are writing on Bella and Peter... WOW Can't wait till you update that one. At the risk of begging once again, PLEASE;)
Well I'm not certain about a sequel I have nothing planned but certainly things run through my head now and then :) No promises. Thank you for the great review though and I am doing my best to work on the P/B story. I'm purchasing a home and it's taking every spare minute to get my sh*t together :( But hopefully I'll have something soon.
Thanks again for the love!
Date: 13 May 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 55
I just wanted to let you that I really enjoyed your story. I think that the personality changes that occurred in Bella were realistic. I also enjoyed the interaction and friendship between her Rose's character.
While I really enjoyed the Twilight Saga I always felt that Bella's character was done a disservice by never getting to fully expericne the anger and betrayal from the abandoment of the Cullen family and especially the parental figures Carlise and Esme.
Thanks again for a great story.
PS - Given the choice I know I would've dumped Edward in a minute (no make that a second!) for Jasper
I totally agree...Jasper is the better pick ;) I'm really glad ya liked the story. Thank you! I was always upset that Bella just let the family back in and never said a word about how their leaving affected her. I'm honestly thinking they still don't know. LOL. Of course, I can also argue that she didn't need to go off her rocker for a boy either. ;) Now if it was Jasper well that would be different*giggles*
Glad you enjoyed it.If you go over to fanfiction.net there is an outtake I just realized I never posted over here. Same story title and author name.
Date: 05 Jan 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 55
Great story. Bravo, Bravo! It was interesting to see Jasper break down and not be so strong. Personally I love a badass, strong Jasper. But I love seeing him in a different light. On that same note, I loved seeing Bella really gain some strength. Well done!
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. If you venture over to fanfiction.net I've posted an outtake. I was going to post it here and still might just haven't hadd the time.
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 04 Dec 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 55
I must say I fucking love you! This story was fanfuckingtabulous and I honestly teared up because its over. Hope you write more amazing stories!
*blushes* Aww thanks *tips Jasper's hat* I appreciate the love and as long as you keep me on author alert you'll know if I write something else.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Mynxi & Jasper
Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 55
Well, it just wouldn't be right if I didn't review this chapter since I did all the others.
I thought it was an excellent ending to an incredible story. I am usually a strict E&B fan, but there was something about your Jasper that really touched my heart. I have laughed and cried and said 'ahhh' so many times throughout this story that I have lost track. I have loved it all.
Thanks for sharing it with us!
PS. If you like a little dirty vampire action, check out my one-shot 'A Family Affair'. It is dirty citrus galore. ;)
Ohh love dirty vampire action will certain take a peek! *giggles* I am so glad you stuck with me through the whole thing and read and reviewed! I'm also happy you gave it a shot but I understand the attraction to cannon so I'm glad I could warp your sensibilities a bit *giggles*
Thanks for all your kind words and reviews!
Mynxi & Jasper