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Reviewer: its simply me n you Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2016 6:12 AM Title: Soccer Secret

enjoyed this.  I can totally understand why they hid the marriage.

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 11:13 PM Title: Soccer Secret

Great story, there is room to continue this and expand the harpies ugliness. Would make for a good read.

thanks and I really enjoyed soccerward and soccerbella.

Reviewer: Dillinger910 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 9:35 PM Title: Soccer Secret


Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 6:07 PM Title: Soccer Secret

A trully great storyline; if I may make a suggestion, you should consider finding a beta. A second pair of eyes can more easily detect errors in spelling, punctuation, etc. that sometimes can be distracting, and it's a shame with stories as interesting as yours..Keep writing :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I had a lot of fun writing it. And I really love hearing that people liked it.

I actually do have a beta for my other story. I wrote most of this story at my daughter's soccer tournament. Then I descided to change it to a NC-17 and added Lemons. ;)  I wanted to submit it for the challenge so there was no time to send it to my betas.

The next time I do a challenge I promise that I will do it in enough time to have someone else fix my mistakes. 

Reviewer: raindrop0620 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:12 PM Title: Soccer Secret

great o/s :) :)

Author's Response:

Thank You!

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 1:34 PM Title: Soccer Secret

Go Edward! I wish all men would stand up for their women like that!

Author's Response:

I know I wish I could find a man like that.

Reviewer: doeluvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:24 AM Title: Soccer Secret

i have been looking for a soccer playing edward for some time now and when i saw this i just had to read it and im so glad the it was good and well written

Author's Response:

Thank You. I actually wrote most of this during my daughter's soccer tournament. It was a whole day tournament where my daughter's team only placed 3 games so I had lots of time to write. 

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