Date: 04 May 2010 6:07 PM Title: Soccer Secret
A trully great storyline; if I may make a suggestion, you should consider finding a beta. A second pair of eyes can more easily detect errors in spelling, punctuation, etc. that sometimes can be distracting, and it's a shame with stories as interesting as yours..Keep writing :)
Thank you so much. I had a lot of fun writing it. And I really love hearing that people liked it.
I actually do have a beta for my other story. I wrote most of this story at my daughter's soccer tournament. Then I descided to change it to a NC-17 and added Lemons. ;) I wanted to submit it for the challenge so there was no time to send it to my betas.
The next time I do a challenge I promise that I will do it in enough time to have someone else fix my mistakes.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 6:24 AM Title: Soccer Secret
i have been looking for a soccer playing edward for some time now and when i saw this i just had to read it and im so glad the it was good and well written
Thank You. I actually wrote most of this during my daughter's soccer tournament. It was a whole day tournament where my daughter's team only placed 3 games so I had lots of time to write.