hehe - what a nice conclusion to all that sex.  EB are too cute for words and the kid makes edward even more attractive.  who doesn't want a good father to date?!  well, at least bella knows that he won't run if she ever gets pregnant.  everyone is off doing some sneaky things and all along EB has been getting it on behind everyone's back.  i love it.  lol.  i definitely didn't expect them to be together already.  they hide it so well.  but being caught by the teammates and your coach no less - that is pretty embarassing.  although i imagine coach is pretty darn embarassed himself.   hehe.

jake sucks?  end of story?  my research topic over the summer is eating disorders.  it is a mental health issue that often doesn't get enough attention.  even if you don't think you have a problem, probably most often you do.  but it is often unrecognized by peers and physicians.  so, mad props for getting bella some help. 

was this contest all about sexing it up?  i like it.  ;)

Jacob was a complete ass, I would have loved to hear what Edward said to him, just for the fun of it. 

I'm glad Bella finally had that final push, when Ryanne asked her about being fat, that she desperately needed in order to beat her eating disorder.

And what can I tell you about Ryanne? She was a beautiful little character, very lovable and sweet, and Her interaction with both Edward and Bella was pure and so cute!

The 'final reveal' of all the couples was very funny, Alice and Jasper will probable be scarred for life after having caught Bella and Edward going at it.  Simply funny!

Great one-shot and excellent series!

I can't wait for the end of May so we can start reading "Whirlwind", good luck with the writing process and see you soon!