holy shit i seriously thought that they weren't going to get together in the end.  they were so hostile towards each other.  hehe.  but, sexing it up in the coach's office - the way to go right.  at least everyone is of age..thank goodness.  but, little naughty getting it on with your coach.  =) 

i love that alice is fiesty.  that she cusses like a sailor and doesn't take shit from anyone.  that side of her definitely needs to come out more. 

her and stanley together in a closed cage.  let them go at it - i'd pay good money for that.  ;)

Holly hell.  Holly:  Fucking. Hell.  Where were you hiding Jasper and why? Why would you hide this fine specimen of fan fiction man, when we could have been enjoying his adventures with Alice a long time ago?

You went a little outside the norm with his personality but it was great to see him more passionate, and emotional, even if he acted like an ass toward Alice for most of the story.

Alice was also a little pack of surprises, not being the chipper, happy-go-lucky girl, but a woman with a fiery disposition and strong convictions.  The bit about Felix cracked me up, from Part One of the series and the beginning of this one I had imagined Felix as Alice's boy toy and it happened to be Felix the Cat! That was great!

Great one-shot!