Date: 20 Dec 2018 7:04 PM Title: Working out the kinks
This is a crazy plan. I hate that Bella is going to marry James before she marries Edward. I think Edward and Bella should have a secret wedding before the mission.
I was thinking of letting Bella and Edward marry in secret, but then the Volturi could have means to find that out and besides they will do checks to make sure she is being genuine in her decision, how ever i could have them get a tattoo of some decription that only Bella and Edward's families would know what they meant....but that is something to think about. Thank you for your review.
Date: 17 Dec 2018 9:03 PM Title: Working out the kinks
I hope Bella doesn't get hurt with James.
Bella is a lot stronger than James knows about as he and the rest of the Volturi havent heard the rumors about Bella, but your hope is the same as Edward's so your going to have to keep reading to find out. Thank you for your review.
Date: 17 Dec 2018 4:51 AM Title: Working out the kinks
I hope she doesn't go easy on Rose. No matter what has happened to her attitued is not warranted. Bella has been through so shit too and she is not a bitch unless is needed.
I hope nothing bad happens to Bella while she is with James and she is able to kill him soon after the wedding. Maybe he could have a heart attack from all the drinking he does.
I hope for another chapter as soon as you can. Thanks :)
Your right, Rose's attitude isnt warranted and it is why Bella wont take her crap, however Bella also doesnt want to piss of Edward or the rest of his family, so she tries to put Rose in her place in a repectful manner while letting her know she wont take her crap. There will be some more funny moments to come between them later in the story, til Rose learns to take a chill pill lolz.
James doesnt know about what Bella is capable of and he may just get a rude awakening.
Thank you for your review.
Date: 17 Dec 2018 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Formal Dinner
nice punch. glad she put rose in her place, but i dont think that will be the last of it.
yeah i just had to punch Rose as it felt right, not sure if it will happen again, but in my story Rose is kinda hard to get on with until she fully knows someone and they prove themselves, so there could be more. Thank you for your review.
Date: 12 Dec 2018 5:55 AM Title: Working out the kinks
So thatâ€™s what they are after I like how mature Rosalie is being
Thank you, I didnt want Rose to be too stand off-ish for too long and also she is a lawyer and so i wanted her to just be professional rather than bitchy towards Bella and Edward.
Date: 17 Jan 2016 12:12 PM Title: The Next Step
Bella is very brave to put herself in this position. Edward is going to go crazy with Bella not being with him and in danger.
Edward is already very protective of Bella, but he is learning that she is way stronger than a normal female. Bella is all about the greater good and with the arragement between Edward and Bella being all about avoiding a war and blood shed, this plan is a way better course of action then what they were going to do as it means that if she needs to be recused or needs help in anyway she can get it, where as being in another part of the states they would be on their own and there was too many variables to try and work out.
She already loves Edward and his family for the help they are giving to her and her father so this is the least she can do for them, plus she can get her revenge on him for her mother!
Thank you for your review.
Date: 16 Jan 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 11 - The Formal Dinner
Good for Bella. Rosalie needed that to readjust her thinking.
Thank you for your review. Rose does need to learn to loosen up a bit more in my story, but there is a reason why and i'll get to that....unless you want to see more fights between Bella and Rose before i explain?
Date: 12 Jan 2016 6:59 PM Title: The Next Step
OMGosh, I am surprised that Edward did not go all caveman on that idea. Lol.
I was going to have him go all caveman, but he has seen Bella in action and knows that she isnt a weakling and has started to see her as an equal.....although i think he may have some things to say to her before she leaves to start this mission.
Thank you of your review.
Date: 12 Jan 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 11 - The Formal Dinner
Hot damn!!!! A chick fight !!!!!!!! Lol. Glad Bella did not take any shit off of Rose.
Thank you for your review! I wanted to make Bella a bit of a kind hearted bad ass in this story and Rose with her attitude still. I will get into why later in the story, but if you want more chick fights between them let me know!