Date: 09 Aug 2019 12:53 PM Title: The final stretch
I hope the babies will not be named Volturi. They are Edward's and Bella's. They need their true family name. Who cares if Aro finds out he lost everything. He signed it all away.
without giving too much away there was some things that although Aro signed them away there was a stipulation that someone with the Volturi name has ownership of it, however, the babies offical name wont be Volturi. Some false documents will have to be written though so as far as Aro knows they will have one set of names for him and then there real ones.
Date: 09 Aug 2019 4:10 AM Title: The final stretch
ugh. That "family" makes the Manson's look normal. I want to scrub myself for the ick factor. Glad its almost over.
Yes this 'family' are very awful, it is almost over, about half of the next chapter and then she is home. I promise :)
Date: 09 Aug 2019 3:32 AM Title: Bye-bye James, Hello home - Part 2
Buh bye to the first of the filth. Creepy is too mild of a word. I need a shower now.
Thank you for the review! Bella is almost home now and i agree i needed a shower after this chapter too :)
Date: 05 Aug 2019 8:25 PM Title: Bye-bye James, Hello home - Part 2
I love this chapter. James is gone and Edward got to feel the babies.
Thank you, i thought Bella needed a bit of Edward time after dealing with James and that was the best way. Thank you for your review
Date: 23 Jun 2019 1:32 AM Title: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly
Wow Aro is really buying what she's saying. Duh.
Wow thank you for all of your reviews. I really apreciate them. I just want to put out there that i am trying to convey how much Aro and his whole family's operations have become complacent with how well their run in the crime world has been and how comfortable they are with how much power they think they hold. This is why E and his team have gone to great lengths to enhance what James has screwed up so to make sure Aro cant refute what B tells him, however they are working with the ignorance of Aro's complacency to their favor to make this take over as quick and smooth as possible, especially for B sake.
Date: 04 Jun 2019 1:51 AM Title: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly
Wow, Bella throw Victoria over the banister. Aro is going to help kill his own son. What a fucked up family.
Just goes to show just how bad James has been and hey they are a crime family and Aro needs to save face from his son's stuff up, but what is his loss will be Bella and Edward's gain lolz
Date: 02 Jun 2019 5:52 AM Title: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly
I love this story..I was shocked that Bella killed Victoria but she had to go..lol..I don't trust Aro or his wife..I hope nothing happens to the baby..I like the way they work..Edward and his team so far have everything under control..I hope it stays that way..until you post again..Well done..Bravo
Thank you for your review!
Date: 30 May 2019 4:53 PM Title: When the opportunity arises…. Take it swiftly
I am fine with whatever you the author decides and what works for you. BUT since you asked, I am going to be selfish. I would like option A especially if posting during the week and not on the weekend. If on the weekend then please do option B. I tried to read my favorites at work during my lunch unless it is a long chapter then I have to wait until I get home and get everyone feed.
Date: 17 May 2019 2:35 PM Title: Pleasant Surprises save the day
OMG ! Love your story and this chapter was great ,great writing.Cant wait for more sitting on edge !
Thank you for your review! It means so much to have wonderful and encouraging reviews like yours!
Date: 08 May 2019 1:50 AM Title: Time to Gather the Pieces - Part 2
I have a feeling Edward's plan is for Bella to get pregnant by him and not James. Aro is sick. Telling her that he will help her kill his own son. That is just wrong.
Thank you for your review. I thought to add something in there to show why this family has to go down.
Date: 06 May 2019 4:02 AM Title: Telling Alice and Jasper
Alice took the news much better than i was expecting.
Thank you for your review. She loves her brother and just wants him to be happy and she just had this feeling that Bella was going to be good for him.
Date: 06 May 2019 3:17 AM Title: A Show of Heart
I was hoping it was a room about his mom.
Thank you for your review. There isnt much memories of his mum so hence why the room is filled with what it is, however Edward Snr has kept stuff in his room of his wife so only the stuff that was meant for their kids was put in that room, but shhhh Edward Jr doesnt know that ;)
Date: 30 Apr 2019 7:12 PM Title: Time to gather the pieces - part one
I can't wait to see how she handles James.
Thank you for your review. Just letting you know Bella has some evil plans for James and their other targets and she wants to play with James' mind before she finally strikes *cue evil laugh and sinister smile*
Date: 26 Apr 2019 3:11 PM Title: Time to gather the pieces - part one
Thank you for the update..I hope everything goes according to plan..I want Bella & Edward back together ASAP..until you post again
Thank s for the review!I got some nice and evil plans for how they handle James that I hope everyone will love, just got to make it flow right.