Date: 24 Apr 2016 11:17 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
I liked it a lot!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 9:16 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV
Awe!
Date: 24 Apr 2016 3:48 PM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast
They are sweet!
Date: 01 May 2015 2:16 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
GREAT LITTLE STORY
Date: 01 May 2015 12:49 PM Title: Making Our Future
so not going to actally have sex hmmm
Date: 01 May 2015 12:42 PM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast
interesting
Date: 01 May 2015 12:33 PM Title: Prologue
great start
Date: 22 Oct 2013 8:59 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
Great story, full of love!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 8:52 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
beautiful :)
Date: 22 Oct 2013 8:05 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
Wow, very intense that last scene. Loving this story so far!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 11:20 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
This was short story but Beautiful.. awesome.. Your a great writer..
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:50 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
and baby makes 3, and girls make 5, and baby boy makes 6 a prfect little family.
i decided to try kickin it old school and i am so glad i did.
thank you for sharing your story
suzie :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:40 AM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
they finally all gave in to what they were feeling. and they made it beautiful.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 4:12 AM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
oh that would be horrile! poor bella she is trying so hard not to get any deeper involved in this.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 3:23 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
nothing makes you realize your feelings better than a life or death situation.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:31 AM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
well she may be falling but at least she knows enough to try to step back
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:40 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV
twin girls! wow! i wonder how long it will be before bella gives in and moves in with the boys?
Date: 18 Apr 2011 12:20 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV
poor bella she does not need to deal with james and his bullshit.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:48 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
oh my twins! and bella is feeling .... something....
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:35 AM Title: Making Our Future
so cute how eddie is embarassed about taking care of things at the hospital and everyone knowing what he is doing in there.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:22 AM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast
such proud poppas! and it would seem that both eddie and jasper are not opposed to bating for the other team....
Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:07 AM Title: Prologue
poor eddie and jasper
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:29 PM Title: Making Our Future
natural baby that is the way you should go and bella wants to too!!1
Date: 07 Mar 2011 8:18 PM Title: Prologue
go boys go boys getcha a baby mama!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 5:44 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
i just love the poly stories with e b & J... they just seem to complete each other. short, sweet story
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 20 Nov 2010 12:30 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
Adorable ending! This story was very cute. I wouldn't mind a few outtakes ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 1:45 AM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
cute story! I'm glad they ended up together.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 9:58 AM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
that was good i liked it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:09 AM Title: Making Our Future
Lol this story is really interesting, it has me hocked...but when i saw you used the Quad Cities in here i was highly amused, that and you are using iowa. I don't think i have seen someone use them yet. I am from the Quad citites so it amused me alot to see that in a twilight fanfic!
keep up the good work, i am going to go finish this then look at your other stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I have many more stories on my fanfiction page than here, although I'm slowly bringing over my others.
I grew up in the Sterling/Dixon/Rock Falls area
Date: 03 Jun 2010 4:24 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
Loved it! It was a really great story, good job :)
Date: 02 Jun 2010 7:09 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
This chapter almost makes me sad. It seems like Edward and Jasper are closer than ever but Bella seems like an outsider. Like she is the mean step-mother or something. They are talking about getting Bella mad at them just so they can run off together and have sex by themselves. I am sure Bella would like to run off and spend some alone time with one of them too.
Author's Response:
This is just a brief glimpse at a twenty minute period. After fifteen years together, people go on vacations. Sometimes they want time apart. If there were more chapters, I might have shown E and B going off, or J&B, or all three while Carlisle and Esme watch the children. Triads aren't always 100% equal in how time is divided.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 6:56 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
I loved every line of it!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 4:21 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
Loved this story and I am sad to see it end. Great job.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:41 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
I have really enjoyed reading this story..it was just fantastic..
Date: 02 Jun 2010 2:33 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
Great story, beautifuly written. I enjoyed reading every chapter. Congrats!!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 1:29 PM Title: Epilogue: EPOV
woo hoo. great short story
Date: 31 May 2010 10:23 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
:)
Date: 31 May 2010 7:10 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
“Does this mean I can call you 'Baby' again?”
(Thud..Faints) Soooo good...
Wait..Epilogue? Nooo..Not with all the loving and coming to terms with what all three of them coming together means... A few more happy, blissful or even trying chapters, please?? Pretty please??
Author's Response:
Unless someone bids on more chapters in the FGB auction, this story is complete- sorry. This was a short story from the last FGB author auction.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 31 May 2010 6:19 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
FANTASTIC!! I loved this chapter - so tender and sexy!!
Date: 31 May 2010 5:36 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
woo hoo. Yummy togetherness
Date: 31 May 2010 3:24 PM Title: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV
So beautiful! Love these three!
Date: 29 May 2010 5:06 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
This is an exciting story because with each chapter I feel certain I know what's coming next and you continually take an unpredictable path instead. I love that, especially as it's so rare. The time you are taking in bringing these three adults into a new relationship with one another and peeling back the layers of resistance bit by bit are making this more believable and a more intriguing journey. This is some wonderful writing!
Story Girl (Wanda)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 29 May 2010 2:56 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
this was such a happy and sad chapter!
Date: 29 May 2010 1:51 AM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
geez guys. giut trip the poor girl
Date: 29 May 2010 12:11 AM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
OMG! How can she say no to that?!? LOL
Date: 28 May 2010 11:06 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
:)
Date: 28 May 2010 10:30 PM Title: 8: Transitions JPOV
I hope Bella stays!!! Wonderful chapter!
Date: 26 May 2010 4:20 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Great start. Can't wait to see how it evolves.
As allways wonderful story telling skills. Meg
Date: 26 May 2010 4:12 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
arrg! cliff hanger!
Date: 26 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
I am really liking this story! I am a little afraid that jasper and edward are so in love it would be awkward for bella to be with them. They have known each other for so long its hard to think they could love her as much as eachother. I cant wait for the babies to be born though they will be such cute parents!
Date: 26 May 2010 12:37 AM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Yay I finally figured out how to review from my phone.. Ok I love this story. It's very sweet how Bella is giving them what they want and also what they didn't think was possible. I am in shock that Bella kissed Edward, wonder how that will work out. Can't wait to see what happens between all three of them.
Date: 25 May 2010 10:51 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Wow, you had me really worried there about Edward..Glad he's well and being kissed...lol.. Update soon, please!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 10:42 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Things are really heating up! Can't wait for the next update. WHICH I HOPE WILL BE SOON!
Author's Response:
No later than next Wednesday. I was impatient this week and broke my Wednesday posting schedule.
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 10:34 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving a smiley face. I'm glad you're enjoying the story
Date: 25 May 2010 9:57 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
please tell me that this is going to be the beging of the three of them and maybe bella opening her heart to jasper and edward i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
Author's Response:
The latest chapter 8: Transitions will be is next Wednesday.
thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 9:14 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Oh! Oh! Oh! MY!!!*Doing happy dance!* she kissed one of them!!! keep going - coz i'm loving it! that little bastard James - I wish he was dead!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 7:41 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Wow I love your story! I have never read an Edward/Jasper story because I'm really not comfortable with reading details like that but your story has become one of my favorites! You write it so tastfully that is seems natural and sweet.
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2010 6:27 PM Title: 7: Ikkyo EPOV
Woo Hoo. Maybe now they can prosecute James. He threatened and also admitted to previous assaults. Maybe Mama Renee will get her head out of her ass now.
Author's Response:
Thanks, bb. and I doubt Renee will. She hadn't by the time I finished writing the epilogue...
Date: 24 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
ahhh I am loving this story! cant wait for the next update!
Date: 21 May 2010 5:31 AM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
wow, i love it, please post soon.
Date: 20 May 2010 10:58 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
:)
Date: 19 May 2010 9:21 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
Love this story.
Date: 19 May 2010 5:18 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
Well at least she is being honest.
Date: 19 May 2010 4:06 PM Title: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV
loved it!
Date: 17 May 2010 3:20 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV
awwww i love this story, jasper is so cute
Date: 13 May 2010 8:40 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV
Aw Bella can't go! :( I'm sure things will work out... *crosses fingers* I love that they both have real feelings for her. And I hope that James gets what he deserves soon. Great last two chapters! Can't wait for more!
Date: 13 May 2010 5:47 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV
Why would she go to dinner at her mom's house to see James?
Author's Response:
She didn't. She told James she would meet him there, and then called Jake to come get her- keeping her away from James while he thought she was coming to him.
Date: 13 May 2010 5:08 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV
:)
Date: 13 May 2010 4:56 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV
Ugh the scumball is back.
Date: 13 May 2010 4:56 PM Title: Difficulties BPOV
Ugh the scumball is back.
Date: 13 May 2010 3:17 PM Title: 5: Charismatic Sociopath JPOV
awww 2 girls.
Date: 01 May 2010 4:21 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
*phew* I thought she'd lost the baby. Twins!!! I can't wait to read more!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 12:01 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
This is such a new and wonderful idea for a fic! I'm loving it. Great job
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:26 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
Oh my! Twins! And hot shower sex! Woohoo! LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:17 AM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast
Oh yes she will. :D More please! haha
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:07 AM Title: Prologue
Damn, so sad! Great start!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 5:06 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
OMG twins, yeah. So will the boys keep both. silly question had to ask. or will bella get one and the boys get one. but then that would break up the twins and I hear they need to be together. maybe they will all live together. I can't wait to see what happens next. love it
Author's Response:
sorry- I don't answer plot questions. You have to be patient. :)
As a mom of 2 y/o twins, I can promise that the pregnancy, delivery, and newborn days (or should that be 'daze', given the sleep deprivation?) will be realistic.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing
Date: 27 Apr 2010 1:59 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
wow twins
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:50 AM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
this is good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:35 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
:)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:03 PM Title: A Prayer Answered Over Breakfast
:)
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:46 PM Title: Prologue
:)
Author's Response:
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:45 PM Title: Phone Calls to Remember
I like the story so far and Jasper + Edward+ a story written well = awesomeness!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Now that the story is caught up to its posting on ffn, it will only update weekly.