Date: 24 May 2010 7:14 AM Title: Match Point
naww cutee
loved it
awesome story
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 1:38 AM Title: Match Point
Yeah, I was getting really iritated with Eddie boy in the beginning. Good thing he redeemed himself in the end.
Good job and good luck with the contest.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I know I made him really bad in the beginning and really cheesy in the end for this reason. The diary was what made him see the other perspective of their situation and not the one he considered to be true. It was the shock he needed to really change.
Thanks for reading and the review. :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 1:03 AM Title: Match Point
that was really nice!!! i really like this charlie version.. different from what we know!!
Author's Response:
Yes, I know... I wanted him to be this kind of man. He adores his daughter more than anything in the world. For that reason I put the conversation with Edward. I'm very glad that you liked it. Maybe later when I find a beta I will translate my other stories too. Thanks a lot for the review.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:29 PM Title: Match Point
I think it was great leave it to Jess and Lauran to mess things up. He daddy loves her and wants her to be happy.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I wanted to show that sometimes she got bad advice and for that I used Lauren and Jessica. Now, about daddy dearest he knew she was in love and he wanted his girl to be happy. Of course he didn’t know what our boy did to her…
I don’t think he would have been so supportive in that situation.
Thanks again for reading and the review. I’m glad you liked it!
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:29 PM Title: Match Point
Ok. So I got the jist of this story, but only because I didn't try to read the entire thing word for word. This is great and all, but there were so many mechanical/grammatical errors that I could concentrate well enough. I had to skip down every line or so just to keep from getting caught up in trying to figure out what you were actually trying to say. Wonderful effort, but you're just..not..there yet. A bit more practice is all you need; then you'll be well on your way (:
Author's Response:
First, I have to tell you that English is not my maternal language. I’m from Greece and English is the first foreign language that I learned.
Second, when I wrote the story I had it checked also from a friend whose mother is from England and the changes she made were only in a few sentences. I’m certain that we both missed a few things but I cannot do something different now.
I’m sorry that it wasn’t up to your expectations but that is what I had to offer.