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Reviewer: eitak Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love your story so far. Its very well written, and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter, I hope they kiss. Although I think something might interrupt them. :/

Reviewer: techygrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter! Just discovered this story and totally love it!! Can't wait for teh update!!!

Reviewer: StrongerThanYouSince1915 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

is she going to get her first kiss?! or will a certain annoying jessica stanley ruin the moment? great chapter!

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Date: 07 Apr 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

I'm really enjoying this story! I hope Edward kisses her. ;)

Reviewer: Gikkas Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 14

awwww CC gonna kiss Bellie ........Rose needs to get that big stick out of her butt before it permanantley gets stuck up there lol great chappie please update soon :)

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 14

and so it starts between jake and edward

Author's Response:
No there will be no Edward/Jacob love triangle. I'm anti-Jacob ;0)

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

AAAHHH! You just left it like that OMG! I want to see the kiss. How sweet if he is about to actually kiss her. Loved this chapter, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: TexasTwilight77 Signed

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Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 14

Definitely need to update soon! Loved this chapter, glad that we got to see a little bit of the 'old' Rosalie. Great job, keep up the good work. ;)

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed

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Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 14

I loved it! I got my Noell and Jake fix. All is right in the world and Bella is about to be kissed by Edward. Rose is getting help and should be back with Em in the future no soon but yay still. I love Esme's company name its cool. Until next time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

go eddie.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

i hope the beautiful boy does. :)

Reviewer: markadda Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 14

Urgh! I hate cliffies

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

Are we going to see a Bella / Edward kiss? I'd like that. I'm thinking that now that Bella is sixteen, Edward will make his move? Finally?

Reviewer: Avery Shane Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

I can't wait! What a mean cliffy :(

Reviewer: twilightobsessedmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh please don't let this be a trick!! Is Edward really going to kiss her? Probably on the cheek right?!! Ahhhhh!!!! Great chapter!! At least it finally looks like Edward may be a little jealous of Jake, or at least possessive of Bella!! I don't know which would be better. Can't wait for more chapters!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

OMG did he kiss her oh my how will she react? How will Charlie and Emmett react? How is this going to make Edward feel for her now because in his intervie he doesnt have them feelings for her ya right????

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

Good first day of school hope the rest goes as good as the first but I have a feeling it wont

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 14

I would love a birthday kiss from Edward. And anything else he may give!

Reviewer: annabell2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

go edward love this chap keep up the good work

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

Awe now that was a awesome and sweet chapter. I loved the time that she spent with Em. Oh Rose is just doing her self in when she acts like that. What a great birthday for her. I hope Edward does kiss her. Loved it.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

It good to see Bella having fun. Poor emmett he is in the poor me state.

Reviewer: cullenarymasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

Good chapter. Hope she gets kissed soon. Eagerly awaiting your next update.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

Thank you! I was having a crap day on the verge of tears and then I got the email you updated. It was just what I needed (a sweet little pick me up)! Now of course, the little cliffie has me yearning for more but I can deal until the next update! Very cute chapter. I love that you gave her a Sweet Sixteen party and her very first kiss (well almost, next chapter). Hopefully you will give us an EPOV too! Thanks for updating and making my day!

Reviewer: marchellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

So does he kiss her? I need to know now!!!! Good chapter

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love it!!!! I can't wait to see everyones reaction... I hope Rosalie and Bella can become comfortable with each other. It sounds like Rose is trying... Great job...thanks!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

OH MY GOSH!!!!! Please let Edward kiss her. You have left us hanging again. GREAT job with this chapter and with the WHOLE story. I am loving it!!!!!!!

Reviewer: NaMaDRI Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

oh god what is it with you people and giving cliffies just before the much awaited kiss. this is the third fic i have to do this for , so here we go

kiss her, kiss her , KISSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS HERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! JUST KISS HER ALREADY , CULLEN OR SO HELP ME GOD...

* STARES THREATHINGLY TOWARDS THE LAPTOP SCREEN*

great , now that i got that off my chest i have to say i loved this chapter

xoxo

Anna

Reviewer: InLovewithEric Signed

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Date: 06 Apr 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 14

OOOOOHHHH come on!!! That was so not nice!!!
Please update really really soon...please??????

Reviewer: rosaliehale1994 Signed

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Date: 06 Apr 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

OMG!

WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP THERE!!?!??!?!??!

INSERT STOMPING OF FEET AND POUT!

PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

Good job with this happy little chapter.

Reviewer: yankeerose Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 13

Yeah for Bella!

Reviewer: techygrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 13

So, I just discovered this story and I absolutely love it. I hope you update soon. Your characterizations are great and I actually really like this Bella and how you are making her slowly come out of her shell. Looking forward to you next update. :)

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 13

good chapter

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 13

so adorable and cute. i LOVE sweetward. Fanatastic chapter. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

I am so loving your story. I love how protective Bella is over Emmett. I can just see Edward trying to hide his smile when Bella is trying to get them out of the room....kitten trying to be a lion. lol. Glad her first day was good. Can't wait to find out more about what has happened to Rose.

Reviewer: lovely Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

i luv it!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

well first day down the rest of the year to go. wonder how long it will be before eddie and bella realize what they are feeling for eachother and start acting on it? maybe durring class when they are apart from the rest of the group?

and what about the em and rose issue? still lots of questions there.

happy easter!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 12

wonder what happened between em and rose? must have been bad if he ended up in the beer gardens.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 11

well at least everybody showed up before something really bad happened. eddie got a few shots in and then got to play the knight in shinning armor!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

wow the things that happen at a baseball game! hold on bella the cavalry is on the way.

Reviewer: rosaliehale1994 Signed

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

LOVE YOUR STORY!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

I'm really enjoying this story. I tend to like the stories where Bella is a lot more bold and sarcastic, but her character in this story is even stronger due to what she's been thru. I hope she ends up finding the strength to end up being that bold & sarcastic type Bella i like though. :) Great work!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 9

well now the door is open for them to dig deeper into bella's history and her pain. hopefully she can really begin the healing process now.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

so cute! bella got a puppy. everyone got a hug. she is getting comfortable with things in her new life

Reviewer: willows_wiccawannabe Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 13

I loved the chapter, I'm glad her first day was normal- in a good way. I loved Bella's protection of Emmett, that was cute. Good Job.

I would love a continuation to the Christmas Surprise o/s but no pressure, lol.

I have heard of Bookends, but I'm a wuss and need to psyche myself up for that one. The Dilfward one looks good though....

See you on Twitter = D

-Rae

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

yay rose kinda redeemed herself. still not sure what happened to rose, and why would she think it would 'kill them both'?rape? abortion? miscarriage? cheating? oh the possibilities are endless.

thank you for writing.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

bella seems to be getting used to her new life, slowly but surely. i wonder what will happen at the birthday party?

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 13

Awsome chapter. I loved all your updates and I always look forward to seeing you in my inbox.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

oh boy i wonder how far the abuse goes? obviously there were enough serious injuries that bella needed medical attention often enough for her to learn to distrust doctors. but that has to be the tip of the iceburg, when you think of all of the 'punishments'that were not bad enough to see a doctor. poor girl.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed

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Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

love it!!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

looks like little bella has stirred things up without even knowing it! wonder what happened to rose about a year ago...?

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter, I love how Bella seems to be getting more comfortable.
I wonder what's up with Rose, it sucks her and Emmett aren't together right now.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 13

awwww sweet chapter.

Reviewer: InLovewithEric Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 13

Looking forward to more....

I love this story - so originial. And I love how you are working with Bella and Edward. I hope that the love story comes in soon??? maybe???

Reviewer: readingfreak6790 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

i liked the new chapter but the old banner was better.....just my opinion

Reviewer: readingfreak6790 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

i liked the new chapter but the old banner was better.....just my opinion

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

wonder what bella is gonna think of all of the things that alice and esme buy her? poor rose yes she is a bitch but it looks like for once everyone around her is not gonna explain it away with a 'that's just how she is...'it is about time!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 2

poor sweet girl.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

bella is walking into a ready made family that already loves her and is looking out for her. i wonder if she will be able to deal with that?

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

What a positive for Bella to have a good first day. I love her monolog about Alice and personal space. Always happy to see an update
Meg

Reviewer: Avery Shane Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

I loved it.

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 13

So sweet of Bell ato take care of Em. great first day. Loved it.

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

good chapter. more please.

Reviewer: Magos186 Signed

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter. I loved it. I thought it was so adorable how Bella got all Mama Bear towards drunk Emmett. And when he said he loved her, when Charlie kissed her, her reactions were so sweet. I'm glad she's finally accepting her father and brother as family that loves her. I feel bad for her regarding Alice though. That girl needs some mellowing out. I have a question though. You said Alice was in the A-K homeroom, which makes sense cause she's a Cullen, but why wasn't Edward in Alice's homeroom? And why wasn't Bella in a homeroom with Emmett? Bella and Emmett are both Swans so wouldn't it make sense for them to have homeroom together? Or are the homerooms seperated into genders?

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0) Homerooms seperated by grade level, at least thats how it was in my school. Em and Edward are seniors, Bella and Alice Sophmores :0)

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed

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Date: 01 Apr 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

No Noell this chapter. *pouts* Anyway, I loved Edward's jealousy and Alice's because Jasper was so hot. Poor Em & Rose I have never pulled for them to get back together but this is a first get them back together, please let Rose tell Em what the fuck happened to her to make her change. Oh and I love Edward's inner dialog or monologue and the hard on. *winks* Until next time.

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

awww that was cute....i had to move one time in the middle of the school year...no one knew me they were always staring at me...for like a month...

Reviewer: cullenarymasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter. After all Bella has been through, its nice to see a protective side of her over someone she barely knows. It's odd that when I read the chapters, Bella seems to me to be so much younger than she is. Almost like a small child. I constantly have to remind myself that she is a sophmore. Can't wait for your next update.

Author's Response:
Thanks :0) Yea the person that Bella is written after is like that, seems younger than her years. But really this is the first time Bella has had any real social interaction at her schools before she never talked to anyone, so she is still very naive and young.

Reviewer: thetoesayno Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love this story! it's lovely but without being overly sappy, you've got the balance right.

Look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 13

This Bella breaks my heart. I love how she is starting to blossom. She has come such a long way. I hope she keeps getting better and understands that her life is never going to be like it was before!!! Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 13

I love it and love you for updating so soon!!!!

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed

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Date: 30 Mar 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 12

This was my favorite part: And Jasper went home last night; his Dad came and picked him and his tire iron up. I love my Noell as usual but I can't wait to find out what happened with Em & Rose plus this drama with Tanya & Edward. Oh yeah baby can't wait. See ya around in twitterland.

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

many why did u have to end it there?? it was getting good...i like this story!

Reviewer: Flynnstones Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

two words. LOVE IT

Author's Response:
 Thank you sooo much for the great review it meant a lot to me. Reviews show me that I’m not just writing for myself lol

Author's Response:
 Thank you sooo much for the great review it meant a lot to me. Reviews show me that I'm not just writing for myself lol

Author's Response:
God I have no idea why it is posting all those codes, sorry about that, thanks so much for the review hun.

Reviewer: Kendall94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 3

poor rose maybe she willl learn one day...

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm so happy Bella doesn't have to worry about Phil anymore. Now if we can get rid of Renee for about 10 years things will be really good.

I'm guessing things didn't go too well between Em and Rose since Em was found in the beer tent without her.

I hope Tanya isn't a bitch to Bella since she walked up when Edward was hugging her.

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. ;0) your guess might be right.

Reviewer: kjoyp Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 3

Really loving your story. It's good to keep some mystery about Bella's POV. Thanks!

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ooo no Tanya. Em pull your head out. Love you killed off phil. Looking forward to the next instalemenf and an e&b kiss. Meg

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :0)

Reviewer: jukeboxbliss Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 12

Just read all the chapters. Good story. I like your Edward. It's nice see a story where Charlie is not the abuser. Glad Phil didn't get to Bella. Hope Tanya doesn't cause Bella any problems ... poor girl has been through enough.

Reviewer: ybsigns Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love that Edward loves the carpet cleaner. Too funny.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

I just started reading your story and I love it! :)
I can't wait for the next chapter and see what drama Tanya is gonna start.

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

please don't make me wait till next Friday....come on... I hope that Edward and Bella become a couple.. they are so cute...

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well, I sorry but I am with Bella...I can't seem to feel bad the Phil is gone. After what he did to Bella he got what he deserved. I am glad that Bella had fun at the fair. It was a pretty great day until Tanya showed up. I can't wait to see what happens next...great job...thanks!

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12

Uh-oh!

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 12

ooooooo I do wanna know what happens. Excellent chapter. I feel really bad for Emmett though. I just wanna cuddle the poor guy. I know Rose said her secret would wreck them both but it can't be worse than him getting drunk and her being an uberbitch. She just needs to fess up.
HOORAY for phil being dead. I suppose its too much to ask for renee to be shanked...that'd be awesome.
Also, I love your Bella/Edward moments. Absolutely adorable. This story totally rocks and I can't wait for more.

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Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

love the chapter :)

Reviewer: rosaliehale1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

cool chapter!

please update soon!

Reviewer: innocent_renegade Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

omg!!! its tanya!!! ahh.. lolz :) love it... update soon! :) i wonder what will happen to edward.. haha :)

Reviewer: Liam1sister Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 12

Whoa, great chapter. Can't wait to see where you take this story.

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Reviewer: Avery Shane Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 12

I read this all last night/ this morning. Yes I stayed up to read this whole story so update soon. Now I'm go to bed because my eyes are killing me but I just couldn't stop reading!

Author's Response:
Glad it kept you entertained enough to keep you awake ;0) Thanks for the review, and I hope you like the story.

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh man Why does that B**** aways have to show up. Loved the chapter, Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

uh oh evil tanya is back

Reviewer: sessahhh Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 12

So Emmett got drunk, eh? I guess Rose rejected him and he felt the need to drown his sorrows. Looks like Bella's doing much better and so that's good. Great job!

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 12

Love this story and can't wait to see what happens next..

Reviewer: twilightobsessedmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh no!! Not Tanya!! Bella is so sweet and innocent, she is not ready for Tanya!! I love Edward being so sweet with Bella! I"M not ready for Tanya!!! Can't wait for more chapters!!

Reviewer: Kerry Hale Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

so glad Phil is out of the picture. Great update.

Reviewer: JodyG Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 12

AAAAAA what a great chapter. I am so happy Phil is dead.

Reviewer: feebee70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 12

absolutely enjoying this. good work!

Reviewer: markadda Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

Tanya needs to get stuck on a tilt a wheel

Author's Response:
LOL. Thanks for the review ;0)

Reviewer: acw1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

look forward to more

Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0)

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