[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter. Either way you do the outtakes is fine with me. Thanks for the update.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think the chapter was great.I also think you should do the outtakes as a collection.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks for the update. I would like to see the outtakes in the story. It flows better that way I think. See you next Tuesday.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
THANKS for the update!!! Love how Bella stood up for herself!!!! I hope you are hinting at kisses being in the future for E&B!!! As far as the outtakes go, I'll take them how ever you want to serve them up. I've already read To The Extreme and refuse to believe it is only a one-shot so I will be waiting patiently for an update on that as well! Thank you for consistently updating, it is very much appreciated as this is one of my favorites right now!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awe... *Sniff* So sad ... *Wipes tears* I can't wait for the next chapter! please update soon!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the chapter, my first therapy session was also very calm but my doctor was very direct, we started talking in the first one, at least the one therapist I had last year, I dont remenber the ones from when I was younger much just of tests like the ones they did with the smudges and the dolls, keep writing and I will make sure to check your one shot with the motorward ^^
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter I really liked what Billy and Charlie said about the whole Jacob situation. I think it is really sweet how Bella and Charlies relationship is growing.
I think you should post the outtakes seperately.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter- Edward and Bella are too sweet for words. I really like the Emmett POV this chapter- It was great reading his thoughts and feelings about Rose and everything that is going on with them. I look forward to him attempting to come to terms with all of it.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
therapy sessions are never easy. maybe you should post the outtakes seperately. that way it doesn't get too confusing. :)
Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
i guess polsting the outtakes depends on how you do it. if you post it in the story but still post a chapter than that would work. if your not going to post a chapter with it the post it by itself! hope that helps
fantastic story!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love it! Please update soon!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter...I love the progress that Bella is makeing! Looking foward to more.
Date: 21 Jun 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm really enjoying this story so far, and I love what you've done with the characters and storyline. I want an Edward for myself.
Date: 20 Jun 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 22
I feel really bad for Vicky...when a guy says another chicks name while your blowing him...its time to say goodbye!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
charlie is such a cool dad
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter! So now I get my Emmett hugs?? :-D
Author's Response:
LOL Emmett hugs for you :0) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Wow. Ive been behind in reading. The last few chapters I just reead were great!!!!
I was reading at work on the phone so please fogive the lack of love :-)
thanks for sharing. Can't wait to see how you help Bella heal. Rose's story is very sad too. Meg
Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
I don't like a depressed Emmett, get him back with Rose quick. Find James for Victoria so Em can let her down easy. And please get loverboy out of the sick bed. LOL Easy right? Great story.
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
She is healing big step wanting to get to know her dad. Emmett needs to get over being so mad at Rose and tell Vicky he just wants to be friends.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
is rose and emmet ever going to get back together
Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Edward. I need to go take care of him!! Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
omg.... poor emmett.... he is so torn but i reallly think he should talk to rosalie and work thingds out they are meant to be..... and vicky is just a complecation
awww.... poor edward.... hes sick.... i hope he feels better and he and bella spend more time together and get closer and be like a normal teenage couple...
plz update soon with a fully recovered edward and a new relationship with emmett and rosalie were they can be closer than they ever were.... and edward and bella time.. and alice and jasper tooo
Date: 16 Jun 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
Vicky really needs to back off. She knows that Emmett loves Rosalie. The gang is starting to get sick of her. She was ok as a friend, but they are still loyal to Rosalie. Emmett will heal and realize that Rosalie is the one for him.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Aww yay edward is finaly admitting to himself and everyone else how he feels about bella although i have a feeling both charlie and carlisle already know!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow how cute was bellas birthday party! and edwards gift so perfect for this bella!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Im not liking Jake! good thing Edward is always there for her when he shows up!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yay she got through her first day of school!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 22
loved this chapter :)
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn why cant they catch a break? all that shit bella had to go through and now Tayna ick!!! i cant stand her!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
awww, love the Bella and Charlie moment. Hate Vicky, I fell sorry for Rose and Emmett, oh, and did i mention that i hate Vicky? I did? Oh well, still true.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
finally
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
wow! im glad Edward got some punches in!!! hes such an awesome protector!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Very sweet update. Loved it
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for the awesomely quick update!!!! I absolutely love E&B but miss the other little POV's you spread thru the story. I would love just a little tad bit from the parents watching the kids come together and how they feel about that and about Bella's progress etc. Seriously, anything you give I will eat up regardless. This is one of my drop everything to read the update stories and I have not had very many considering the amount I've read. Looking forward to the next update!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ugh poor bella shes been through sooo much! Tears are streaming down my face!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
Renee is an evil bitch!!! ugh poor Bella!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awww shes opening up to everyone especially Edward Charlie Em and Ali!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Excellent chapter.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think Vicki is a nice person who has been there and deserves to be treated better then what she is. She has done nothing wrong and now that Rose wants to act right doesn't mean that Alice and whoever should become like Rose use to be and go all bitchy on Vicki. Was Edward really sick or was there some other girl involved there? Seems a little suspect to me
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, yes Edward was really sick.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
I don't like Vicky period... It's not that she is bad I just don't ***shrugs***
I want Edward now!! ***winks*** Poor poor little Eddie is sick...
(Don't tell him i said that...)lol
I loved it
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 15 Jun 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh no what's Rose hiding from Emmett?
Date: 15 Jun 2010 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved the whole Bella and Charlie bonding. I wish Emmett would talk to Rosalie though. Great chapter.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love Alice her relationship with Bella is always a must when I read stories I read one where they werent close at all and it was so foreign to me! Ali and Bella's friendship is a must!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved the miniature golf! That was awesome.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
awww i really want Bella to like Carlisle! i have tears in my eyes but im loving this story!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it. Especially Bella & Charlie time that was so special. Poor Em damn I feel so bad for him. Vicky just wants to spend time with Em who wouldn't? Anyway, I hope everything works out for Rose and the gang plus Em of course. I had my dose of Noel's cute self so until next time.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter!!! I think it is great that Bella and Charlie are getting closer.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ok Rose is a bitch!!! Poor Bella how cute is her attraction to edward?
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great job with this chapter. I'm glad that Emmett is taking some time to figure out how he feel and what he wants. He needs it. And I love that Bella is starting to let Charlie in. That's so important for her. Can't wait for more!!
~Rachel
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can tell Vicky isn't a bad person just by her interactions with Bella before she and Em were together. It sucks to really like a guy who loves someone else. I hate to tell Em but when he called Rose's name while Vicky had him in her mouth should've been his first sign to back off with Vicky. I think he rushed things with her. He needed more time after breaking up with Rose. They were together for too long to jump right into something else. He is breaking my heart. I hope he can deal with everything soon and move on wether it is with Rose or alone.
The mini golf with Charlie was greatness. There's nothing better than that father-daughter bonding. Thanks for that little bit of fluff since I have a feeling therapy is coming up and we are going to be angsty for a few chapters.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow i cant believe how clingy vicky is being. what was she implying when she said charlie would love haveing bella and alice there. was she implying he's some kind of perv. of something. update soon please.
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 3
Im glad they are all sticking up for bella even though rose didnt mean to be rude she still was! How cute is Edward? awww gotta love him!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Aww gotta love the gang yes even Rose she didnt mean to be such a bitch!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Loved the Charlie and Bella time!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aww i hope they all like her! i feel bad for bella already Renee is a bitch!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love that Charlie and Bella spent the day together. She needs to see that not all partents are like Renee. Charlie and Carlisle and Esme would never treat her like that.
I feel bad for Emmet. He has a lot to think about and deal with. I can see how Vickie is just trying to hold on it him, but she has to know that really isn't a good relationship.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
I'm loving Edward more and more. He seems to be the perfect person to care for Bella and help her through all of the crap.
I never expected that from Rose. I kept expecting her to be raped by Royce or something. Losing a child is never easy but deciding to deal with it alone is horrible. I feel so bad for Em right now. It seems like the Swans just can't catch a break.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
I loved my dose of Noel aw! Poor Rose that is so sad. Poor Em damn it he needs time for real its to fresh. Man and Edward at the zoo that made my heart hurt so bad. I could so see Edward with a bat camped out in Alice's room on the floor. He's good boy/man. That took guts plus it helped Bella get to therapy so triple yay! Until next time.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow.. what a chapter.. Didn't see that coming I thought it was going to be the normal she got raped.. great change...
Great story..
Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh no tanya is now on the scene again... poor Bella...
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
well thatwas not really what i was expecting from rose but it fits and em's thought on resentment for him not knowing makes prfect sence.
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
poor bella! and the rest of them are just along for the messed up ride! and with having semi-normal lives this is some pretty fucked up shit!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
that was one hell of a first by themselves date! not sure how eddie is gonna top it.
the kiss and bite was too funny. i wonder what bella is gonna find when she googles kissing?
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
too funny that she didn't even realize it was a date. glad to see rose is trying to deal with her shit, too bad emmy decided now was a good time to ask vicky out. i wonder if alice is gonna tell him about rose? or will rose seek out em first?
Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh helll I am glad i can keep reading....
Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 9
AWWWW I was wondering how they sat back and watched......
Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
OH that was a mean ending to the chapter when I was loving she got a puppy....
Date: 13 Jun 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
AWWW poor Rose
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
got to love alice!!!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
god what did it say?
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love that she bought her a brand new computer.. that is so funny..
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOL yeah she is lucky Charlie wasn't there...
Bella is going to die at the clothes.. LOL
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella's life seems so awful, I am glad she has moved now..
Date: 13 Jun 2010 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was a mamoth of a 1st chapter.. going to keep reading..
Date: 12 Jun 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
A horrible event can cause a panic attack if anything similar happens on TV or in real life. I have panic attacks when I feel trapped by people. (It's not claustrophobia, it's some kind of social anxiety disorder). My best friend displays OCD tendencies when she's nervous or anxious, and that can be considered a type of panic attack as well. They can manifest themselves in different ways, and sometimes it does seem random and apparently without cause. That's one of the fascinating things about psychology.
Author's Response:
Yep :0) I personally suffer from panic attacks as well, so I know how random they can be. Thanks for the review
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
I loved it...at least now we know why rose was being so nasty. As always amazing chapter...i look foward to more.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, great chapter, I'm glad BeLla is going to start going to therapy.
Yay they're officially dating now.
So sad about Rose, I hope her and Emmett end up alright.
Looking forward to more. :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
I received the update notification last nite while I was driving home and pulled over so I could read the latest chapter. You have me hooked on this story like a drug!!!!! Unfortunately it was too difficult to send a review from my darn phone though so I had to wait til this am when I had access to a computer.
Very cute scene with Edward asking Bella to be his girlfriend. Looking forward to him teaching her how to kiss, especially after all of her research, LOL! I thought they would have to drag her kicking and screaming to therapy. Just curious, did they already ask Edward to talk to her or did he just do it on his own?
Poor Emmett! Rose was wrong but I so get "it". Hopefully Emmett will come around as he really seemed to have his head on his shoulders after receiving the news. Really interested to see how he will be reacting to Vickie now that he knows about Rose.
Thanks for the quick update, can't wait til the next one and the next one after that and the next one after that, etc.... You don't plan on ending anytime EVER, right, LOL!! I <3 this story, you are awesome!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 21
so sad about rose she should have talked to him sooner not waited so long glad bella is going great chapter
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
I was thinking about rape... This is more...
I liked Bella's and Rose's progress!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Will Bella be mad if she finds out that it was kind of a set up for Edward to talk to her about going into therapy??? No wonder Rose is such a Bitch trying to hold it all in I like Emmetts explanation about her being mad at him because he was not morning and in pain like she was just because that is what she chose. Emmett needs to relize that she did not do it to be mean to him she thought she was protecting him from the pain that pissed her off.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
oh my god....
bella and edward are together !!! i cant believe it:) cant wait to read more about them
oh my god.... i cant believe it.... i didn't expect that.... its so sad...n i hope em can forgive rose and they can heal together .... but only time will tell but i really hope they can work it out :(
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
Poor Rose and Em, I feel for them.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
EXCELLENT chapter...all the way around. Love how Edward smoothed her into therapy. Between the way he and Charlie dealt with Bella, you had me crying. I friggin' love this story. Yes, Renee is horrible and awful but I'm rooting for Bella's hea so hard that I'm getting laryngitis.
God, I hope Edward will be alright, I have an awful feeling you're going to do something to Edward, don't do it, don't do it.
LOVE this story !!!!!!!!!!! Kiss that little baby for us.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow that was emotional to read what happened to rose. Can't wait for next chappy ;)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Poor Rosalie. That can be so devastating to someone. I was once told that I might not ever be able to have children, but thankfully, I have two amazing little ones. So maybe there's hope for her yet, who knows. I'm really glad that Bella has decided to try therapy. It could be really good for her. I think, most of all, my heart goes out to Emmett. I think it's because not only did he lose a baby that he didn't even know existed, but it was kept from him for so long.
Great job with this one. I can't wait to see what you've got coming :)
~Rachel
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Emmett's response was very mature and controlled. Far more so than most guys his age would offer in a similar situation. Rose's handling of things was obviously poorly done, but I am glad to see her trying to work through it now and attempting to make amends.
I actually found the panic attack realistic. One of the identifying factors of panic attacks is their unpredictability and being triggered out of the blue that way by unanticipated stimulus. Edward's was of helping Bella open up to the possibility of counseling was sensitive and thoughtful. I loved it. He is so very there for her and that makes him even more appealing.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow...I feel so bad for Emmett and Rosalie. She should have told him, but she didn't. I hope they can work things out some way. I really don't like Vickie and I don't want her being with Emmett.
I am glad that Edward got Bella to talk to him. Therapy is going to help Bella so much. I can't wait for Bella to understand that she is a wonderful person and everything that Renee ever said to her was a lie. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
WOW!! That was so intense. Great chapter and I love that Edward and Bella are officially together now. He is so sweet to her and I love that. I of course can't blame Emmett on how he is feeling but I do hope he can forgive her and maybe they can get back together. I also hope that maybe Emmett will tell Bella everything and maybe she can be his shoulder to cry on. How sweet would that be. Thanks for the update, Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am so glad that Edward talked to Bella about therapy. It will help her so much. For such a small town, the therapist are sure busy. Rosalie was wrong, but I hope Emmett will forgive her. He loves her and he doesn't need this pain and hate in his heart. It is not in his nature.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
wonderful chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, alot of drama in this chapter, great job though. ;)
Date: 11 Jun 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
WOW so good. Great update.
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter! So much is explained! Can't wait for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad that Bella agreed to therapy, thanks to Edward. ~*~ Rose's miscarriage reminds me of my own. It was like hers, my first preganancy. At the time, I didn't know what was happening to me either. I was scared shit out of my mind. I too, also mourned on my own for about a week after which I finally told my boyfriend about it. I don't think he was that upset at me although I shutter to think if I had waited any longer.
BTW great story!
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad that Edward asked Bella to be his girlfriend and told her his story of how he ended up in therapy as well. That was the perfect way to introduce her to the idea of going there to try and help her get over what Renee did to her for all of those years.