Date: 02 Oct 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
Rose isn't such a bad person. Its very cannon that she stuck up for Bella when she was really needed. I hope she can work on whatever issues she has so that she and Emmett can get back together.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am glad that Bella can at least see that life can be different. And even if she isn't "all better" she has to be getting a little better!
More Edward please!!!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am seriously loving this story and the Cullens are universally awesome.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella! I wonder what it was like to live with Renee. I like the way you have split up the POVs. I wonder when we will hear from Bella.
Date: 30 Sep 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am glad that Charlie has told the kids and that everything is out in the open. I hope that Bella is going to be ok. That was alot to hear from Charlie. I like the little story about Em putting toys in Edward's crib. Sweet. Can't wait for your next update.
Date: 25 Sep 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
OOOOOKKKKKKK!!!!! Did not see that one coming. WOW!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 25
When I read this chapter I was thinking VICKI!!!!!!
Date: 25 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
I so love your story. That is one reason I am coming back and reveiwing. I am trying to get caught up on my reviews. I am WAY behind. I read this chapter right when you posted it but am just now reviewing. Sorry, RL just gets in the way sometimes.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Please update soon!! I love this story! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed before but I usually getof the writters coffee shop from my cell phone and it wont let me review. I think this story is wonderful please continue.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Omg poor Charlie he went through it big time. That was such a sweet story about Em putting toys in Edward's crib aw I'll say it again aw! So freaking cute. Tanya and Renee is crazy I hope like Em does that it skips over Bella. Until next time.
Date: 12 Sep 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 4
update soon?
Date: 12 Sep 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 27
Poor poor bella! Her life is even more messed up then I thought it was!
Date: 11 Sep 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
As much as Charlie needed to tell Emmett and Bella what was going on, I think that Edward should have been there for Bella or once the talk was finished and Emmett and Charlie noticed how Bella was and that she went upstairs, they should have called Edward to come over to see her. He really is the only thing that calms her down.
Date: 10 Sep 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Charlie! Bella has got to be just absolutely overwhelmed!!! Please have Edward make it all better. Pretty please? And thank you for giving us the 411 through Em's POV. This was a great chapter. As if we didn't all know how psycho Renee is already, you really laid her bare with this one. Great work! Oh and I want Tanya bulldozed! LOL!
Date: 10 Sep 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
Good chapter. Nice to know the back story. Next one will be interesting.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow really hope the craziness isn't catchy for bella sake crazy ass family good chapter
Date: 09 Sep 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
I have followed you from the beginning... so please continue. I feel for Charlie.... what a tough time. I hope that this does not tarnish his reputation in the eye of the small town of Forks.... That his true friends step up to defend him and that Tanya is thrown out like the trash that she is.....
Date: 09 Sep 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 27
So many years ago and all they would have to do is look up the background and see that he was framed. Renee is just plain nuts and so is Tanya. I cant wait for more I love this story and cant believe there is not alot left.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
The whole new development with Tanya being Bella's aunt and being the one who took Edward's V-card......that's just nasty. Not sure what else to say. Can't wait to see what happens next though
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter, I love all the twists and turns you keep throwing in there. Keep it up. ;)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
omg.. thats just incane...
i cant wait to read the next chapter... bella and edward time
and find out if tanya is telling the truth
plz update soon
Date: 08 Sep 2010 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow...what Charlie went through is so crazy! He didn't deserve this. Bella didn't deserve the crap she went through either. People can be so horrible! I am worried about Bella. I hope she gets through this and can find a way to put it behind her. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 27
Tanya is her aunt, crazy. I wonder what Edward will do once he finds out?
Looking forward to more. :)
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Good chapter
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 27
I hope that Bella will be okay, and that everything regarding Tanya and Renee come to an end. This family needs some peace. I can only imagine what Edward is going to think when he finds out who Tanya is....I'm anxiously awaiting for more.
GREAT STORY!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
WOW! After I started reading I realized I missed that last update and went back and read chapters 27 & 27! Wow, didn't see that coming with Tanya. Great chapters, can't wait to see how Edward and Bella feel about all of this and of course, each other! : )
Date: 08 Sep 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Charlie...and the kids too of course
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
That is just freaky. I wonder how Edward will take the news!
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter!!! I love Emmett and his thought process and how he lightens the mood.
Date: 08 Sep 2010 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
That is one crazy family. I can't wait until Edward hears about Tanya. I think Charlie will be fine. It will not take much to prove that Jean, Renee, and Tanya are crazy.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH CRAP!!!! Poor Charlie. I HATE TANYA! Damn psycho-slut! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 30 Aug 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
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Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know, it's a site glitch a few other stories are like that right now. I'm waiting to see if I have to repost everything or if it's somthing the site will fix.
Livvie
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
friggin cliffies!!! this is a really good story plz review soon. i and im sure most of your fans will appreciate it
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
ok was not expecting that
Date: 26 Aug 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Okay...I was completely and absolutely wrong about Vicky. I had almost forgotten about Tanya, but to get that little tidbit that she is the sister of Renee. Talk about WOW. I would never in a million years have even considered that to be a possibility, though now that I go back and look at her behavior and it's similarity to Renee, I probably should have seen it.
Great story!!!!! I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. Something tells me that Renee tricked him. That she hid her real age from Charlie. I hope he doesn't get into trouble over that.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Me thinks the culprit is Vicky.....I hope we find out for sure soon.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
You just gotta love Charlie...he's the perfect father for Bella to have, especially after having Renee as a mother. I hope she call call him Dad soon. Maybe even tell him, she loves him.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm lovin' this story! I found it last night after I put the kids to bed and started reading and the newt thing I knew it was 3 am. This morning was hard to get up! LOL!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
That was a wonderfully romantic date....Awesome!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yay!!!! Hopefully she stays in prison for the full amount of time.
I'm excited to see how Edward and Jasper ask the dad's for permission to date their daughters. I can see that being quite funny.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
okay so did not expect that wow great chapter
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am so glad that Charlie shot Phil and Edward got some good blows in on him too. I hope Bella will be okay after all of this.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope they get to her in time...talk about suspense.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh no....don't tell me Phil's team is playing at the game they are all going to...I'm probably wrong but I just feel like it would have to be something like this.
Great Story!!!!
Date: 25 Aug 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am so glad that Rosalie came in and rescued Bella.
This is a wonderful story.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
Holy Crow! Didn't see this coming, excellent job. Can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
You are doing a wonderful job with this story...I am almost scared to find out what Bella went through. I just hope she can heal....
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad everyone attempted to put Rose in her place. She really needs to work on her foot-in-mouth disorder.
Edward was soooo cute w/ Bella. You can see his protective side come out when it comes to Bella.
I'm really worried about what exactly Renee did to Bella. I hope she finds someone she can confide in.
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your first chapter, though I'm a bit worried about all of the things that Bella had to endure having Renee as her mom.
Date: 24 Aug 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
awww.. poor Charlie.. I think he is a victim here... I hate Tanya... she has to go!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG I love cyber Monday its the best! I'm just saying!: So, I introduced her to cyber Monday, the time that I did most of my Christmas shopping.
OMG LOL: Mark nods and pulls his a camera out of his cop bag, aka 'fanny pack'.
LMFAO this is too funny: "Alright then, I'll have the confession typed up so you can sign it." Shoot, I feel like super cop, my mad interrogation skills clearly beating this teeny bopper.
Holy shit I wasn't expecting this: "Why did you do it?" I ask in a bored tone, trying not to encourage her.
"Your little slut of a daughter stole Edward from me, that is true. It sealed her fate, Charlie." Ice is dripping from her words. "What set this in motion though, Charlie boy, is all you, though. Tell me, Chief, how is it going to sound when I go to trial and I tell the good citizens of Forks about how their beloved Police Chief fucked my big sister, when she was just sixteen years old and left her pregnant? How you didn't do right by her? How she had to go out into this cold lonely world and fend for herself and her baby? I might go to jail, Charlie, but you will finally pay for your crimes as well."
I sit looking at her stunned there is no way... I never knew.
"Renee is your sister?" I ask shocked.
"Ding, ding, ding. Score one for the pedophile!" She laughs maniacally. "and Renee said you'd take forever to catch on." She taunts.
Wow! Until next time I loved it!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oooooo, what a cliffie! Thank you for the new chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Aug 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, she's a freak
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 26
WOH!!!!! I certainly didn't see that one coming. Shocker of all shockers.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 26
DAMN!!! Can some one throw me a rope to secure myself to the side of this cliff?
I so hope tht it will not be months again before you update, I like this story and I hate to wait ;)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH...MY...GOD!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh crap.
Great update
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ahhh why couldn't we have different drama. I thought this whole Renee thing was behind us. I love this story I just feel like the whole Renee thing is being dragged out now. Anyways thanks for the update. Haven't been able to read or review in like forever cause my computer was down. It's good to be back. Looking forward to more.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 26
That was a very interesting twist. I had totally forgotten about Tanya.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
oh my god... holy shit
damn... no words....
plz update soon
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG did not see that coming Tanya and Renee are both crazy must run in the family. How old was Charlie when he got Renee pregers????
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
wow that's a twist update soon please
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
what you cant do that!!!! OMG way to throw us for a loop. I cant wait to see what happens next.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
didn't see that one coming. nice! :)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Didn't see that coming! The ending there was epic!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 26
I would not trust her. She is probably lying. Charlie wasn't that much older than Renee. What is the age on consent in Washington? In most states it is 16.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh....shit..... I did NOT see that coming! I wonder what's going to happen now....
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Interesting little twist. I really enjoy this story. Good work!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
WOW!!!! I didn't see that one coming nice twist.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow...I didn't see that coming. Tanya is Renee's sister. How did Charlie not know that? I guess more of Charlie's life is going to come out now. This family has been through enough because of Renee. I hope they get through this once and for all!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
OK as Em would say holy Fuck. THat was not expected update asap plz.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
I love your story. This was an exciting chapter. I almost wish you would have written the embarrassing conversation between Charlie and Edward concerning the Tanya incident. Perhaps that would make a great outtake?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH MY GOD!! That is so weird Tanya is technically Bellas AUNT!!! What about Tanya's parents do they know?? And Charlie was already Cheif of police??? Update soon you cant keep us hanging with that!!!!...please.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Charlie I cant wait to find out how all this plays out.
Date: 18 Aug 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Glad that Bella did not freak out when Jacob was asking her out and then talked bad about way she liked Edward. Glad she has started theraphy. I understand why Vicki would be hurt but boy she was MAD. Emmett never promised her anything more than friendship, did he.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am glad that Emmett told Charlie the truth and he feel comfortable talking to his dad like that. I am starting to not like Vicky. I love the Charlie took Bella to play miniature golf. They are starting to get close.
Date: 17 Aug 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
So glad that Edward and Bella talked and she is going to get some outside help.
Wow!!!!! Emmett received a blow did he not. That explains a lot with Rose.
I just want to let you know that I really enjoy reading this story. I am a little behind on my reviews but I am up to date on reading the chapters. Now I am just back tracking to write reviews. I want your review number to go up so people will know what a wonderful story this is.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
is this vicky being all psyco? or is it someone new? glad to see rose and em are working on things. still wonder what's up with yorkie though.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 24
well it seems like bella is opening up more and becoming more comfortable with her new life, friends and family.
Date: 08 Aug 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
I learned the hard way never to let her have caffeine, Edward refers to it as The Red Bull Incident. I call it the day Alice went insane.
"Let's go beautify!" She fist pumps reminding me of Emmett and I relieve Carlisle of the makeup cases.
Aw!: At the bottom of the stairs Edward is standing tall, looking extremely handsome in his black suit, and sapphire blue and black striped tie. He smiles up at me and the flutter in my tummy changes, increases, but not from nerves, from something more. It feels good, I feel good and warm. I smile back and walk towards my beautiful boy.
Lol: "Alright Romeo let's go get our dance on." Em interrupts our sweet moment and before I can glare at him I notice Bella doing it for me.
"Pictures!" Chief Swan runs out with his camera. "Esme threatened my life if I don't get pictures." He grumbles.
OMG poor Vick but so damn funny for real: "Please, she could have gotten something with more taste from the Goodwill or Target. That dress screams hoochie momma." Angela over hears us and looks.
"Is she trying to pick up some extra cash in the hooker garb?" Angela, sweet Angela shocks me. "I mean my dress was cheap, but I don't look cheap in it." She argues with my raised eyebrow.
"Maybe she didn't realize it looks ummm..." Bella trails off, trying to be nice.
"Like a hooker dress?" Alice fills in.
That is so cute and sweet aw Edward: "This is a special dedication going out from Edward to his Bella." The fast music fades and the soft strands begin to play. Bella's blush takes over and I pull her into my arms.
"Who is this?" She asks softly.
"Death Cab for Cutie." She nods into my shoulder, squeezing me tightly. We sway as the words flow over us.
Lmfao x2: I rush over and see Jasper and Emmett trying to break up the fight. When I get a good look at the participants I'm mildly shocked. Rosalie and Victoria are choking each other, pulling hair, and throwing punches. Emmett's arms keep trying to pull Rose back, while Jasper is grabbing for Vicky. Alice is no help at all, she's busyscreaming 'kick her ass Rose!'
"Dude be careful, it's a fucking war zone." He warns me.
cute lol: "Tattle tale." She taunts like a small child.
Tough talking Jasper hot: "Calm your ass down." Jasper is warning Victoria.
"Bite me asshole, that bitch is going to pay." She growls at him.
"Bitch? I'd rather be a bitch than a skanky ass hoe like you!" Rose yells at Vicky.
I agree Bella: "Thank God we remembered to take Noel with us." I say out loud. We had gotten down the street earlier when I remembered to go back for my baby. She had been napping on my bed oblivious to being left alone.
"Whoever did this, I'm going to kick their ass." Emmett tells me.
Omg lol: "Even if we have to go all Scooby gang, we'll figure it out." Emmett says and Alice laughs.
"Jasper, you are so Shaggy." She starts giggling, pointing at his blond curls.
"You're lucky I love you short stuff." He says and she stops and looks at him.
"I love you too Shaggy."
These were my favorite parts until next time.
Date: 06 Aug 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good chapter....cant wait to see what happens next...
Date: 05 Aug 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
cant wait to see what happens next... i think vicky did it she is the only one i can think off besides renee
plz update soon
at least bella is getting bettter
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. I'm so happy that you are writing again. You are an amazing author and I love this story. Please update soon:)
~My Not-So-Secret Obsession
Date: 03 Aug 2010 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 25
It was probably that crazy Vicky. She is jealous that Emmett didn't love her.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. You'll find out next chapter who is behid it ;0)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
I still crack up when she refers to her Dad as "Charlie Swan."
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. LOL glad it hits your funny bone ;0)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review.
Date: 02 Aug 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG, if I knew you would be updating I wouldn't have gone away for the weekend. I've missed it so much! I think icky Vicky is the culprit for the break in. I have a sick feelings she is going to target Bella. Please update soon, I absolutly love this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. LOL sorry I didn't warn you hun, but I hope you had fun this weekend :0)
Date: 02 Aug 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the update. I can't wait to find out what is going on with the calls.gifts and the break in. I have my thoughts of course but I can't wait to read what it really is. :D
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. Next chapter you'll find out who dun it lol
Date: 01 Aug 2010 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Is this Victoria that is doing this to the Swans'? What is happening to Victoria anyway? She seemed like a nice girl, just a bit obsessive about Emmett. Anyways this was a fun chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. We'll find out next chapter who did it :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
Charlie's POV was soo sweet, and loving towards Bella. I almost cried when he said that he would die a happy man when Bella calls him Daddy. It so great to see Bella coming out of her shell.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks glad you like Charlie :0) Thanks so much for the review.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so glad that Rose and Emmett are talking I bet that it was vicky that tp the house she is one pissed of girl.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter, I'm thinking it was Vikki who's been making the calls, leaving the gifts, and now vadalizing the house.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0) It might not be who you think it is *evil laugh*
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 25
poor kids. hope they find out who is doing it soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who it is next chapter :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
Lovely!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love it!! Great chapter it had a little bit of everything romance, girl fight, and suspence. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, glad you liked it!! 0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thank you :0)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
i love it I wonder who did it and if it was only a prank
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, we'll find out who and what it was next chapter :0)