Date: 12 Feb 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think Bella should get a dog. It would be good for her. I love this so far. It's really good.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love the story so far :)
Date: 11 Feb 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
I want to go protect Bella. That poor girl. I hope Edward will help her get over what the evil witch did to her.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
LOVE IT!!! Poor Bella.
Date: 11 Feb 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love it can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Renee must die!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
How sad... please update soon, please let Bella tell Charlie everything.. I hope that b^&*h Renee gets hers...
Date: 10 Feb 2010 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
OH god more quicker is now to soon LOL Poor Bella what all did that sick bitch Renee do to her??? This is so sad and I cant wait to read more I am so hooked I feel like one of them people that cant look away for a car wreck but I know she will get better RIGHT????? More More More
Date: 10 Feb 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am glad that Bella is starting to at least feel a little more exlaxed around the kids.
What information does Renee have on Charlie that he is worried about? What does she have one him? Can't wait to find that out.
I am so happy that Charlie finally got to hug Bella and tell her that he loves her. Why did Bella ask Charlie if he was really her dad? What did Renee tell Bella? Will there be a chance that we might get to "hear" from Renee? Find out what was/is going on in her head and the reasons she has done what she did?????
I can not believe that Bella has a scare from where her own mother cut her for punishment. That is awful!!!!!!!!!!!
Bella is lucky that she has Charlie and Emmett and the Cullens in her life now. She will always be protected now!!!!!
Can't wait to find out what the test results are. What is in Bella's medical file that has Carlisle sooooooo angry?????
I know you just update today...and for that I am grateful. But I really really want you to update again. There is something about your writing and your story that just has me taken in. I am so caught up in this story. To let you know....I would be really really happy with a new chapter everyday!!!!! HAHAHA!!!!!!! Love this story. You are doing a GREAT job with it. Keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMG, what an evil place to leave us hanging. WTF did Renee do to Bella? Of course everything she's done to her so far is horrible, but for Carlisle to be that sick over it, it has to be bad.
I worry about Lauren and Jessica. I don't know if Bella can handle their bitchiness. Espeically if Rose is still pissed at her and jumps into their little clique.
I love Carlisle. Him talking about slutty nurses and wanting to talk dirty with Esme on the phone was greatness. In so many stories we only see the serious doctor and parent. It's nice to see the playful husband too.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Okay, Rose, you're really pushing my sympathies here. Please don't be a complete bitch to Bella the next time you see her. Obviously something happened last year to make her change the way she has. I think I'm afraid to know what that is.
I have a feeling it's gonna take quite a while for Bella to get over the way she grew up and how Renee treated her.
Hello, Edward, Bella is not a child. You should not feel bad because you find her attractive. I wonder how Bella will react if she sees another girl with Edward.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
I feel sorry for Rose. I know she didn't mean to insult Bella that way. She was just being Rose. I have a bad feeling the way everyone is treating Rose will only make her resent Bella even more.
LOL, of course they have to do sneaky shopping. I have a feeling Bella's room was either in the basement or in a closet. I bet she did all the cooking and cleaning.
So, Edward is looking at her more like a baby sister at this point? Obviously he isn't having conscious thought of her as a girlfriend or someone he'd be attracted to. He keeps referring to her as little girl.
I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to learn Bella's story.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
I have a feeling the harpy lived up to her nickname. I bet she never really wanted Bella, she only didn't want Charlie to have her. I'm afraid to find out what Bella has lived with her whole life.
Edward was so sweet :)
Date: 10 Feb 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love Charlie and Em. They are so sweet. You've done a great job making Renee a harpy. I just wonder how poor Bella feels about being dumped on her dad's door step. That was a great first chapter and I can't wait to see what you've got in store for this story.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
Thanks for letting us hear from Bella. What did Bella mean that Renee had already told her what she was here for? Renee has really done a number on Bella. Can't wait to find out what has happened to Bella.
Glad that Emmett took a stand with Rose. She really needs to learn to watch her mouth.
Love Esme. We now see where Alice gets it. Alice always seems to get her way...well...she learned that from her mother. Love it!!!!!!
I am REALLY getting into this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon and often. Love this story. Oh my, I just got a notice that you have updated. Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am off to read it. WOW!!!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am so glad that Esme came to the rescue. Every girl needs a mother figure. It dosen't sound like Bella has had one in her life so far. I am glad that all the Cullens are there for her.
Will we hear Bella's POV anytime during this story?
Date: 10 Feb 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG!!!! What has happened to Bella? What has Renee done to this girl? If Renee has not wanted her all these years why did she not send her to Charlie earlier.....I guess because she would not have had a "slave". That is what Bella is acting like. It seems like all she does is cook and clean and eats very little. That is not good. Glad that Emmett stood up to Rose. She really needs to watch her mouth around Bella.
I just wanted you to know that this is a great story. Love the story line. You are doing a great job.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm really liking this story. It's a story line I have hardly seen in all the different stories I've read on three different sites. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 10 Feb 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
WOW!!!! This is a wonderful 1st chapter. I can't wait to go read the others that you have posted so far. GREAT JOB!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review :0)
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am thrilled that your updating so fast.
Author's Response:
Thanks :0) I have 2 more chapters already written that I will be posting soon and I'm working on chapter 7.
Date: 09 Feb 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
Please tell me that Rose is not going to cause a bunch of shit? What did that Bitch Renee tell her she was there for? Wish everone had freinds like the Cullen's waiting for more
Author's Response:
Thanks for your reviews I finally figured the respond thing out lol. No Rose isn't going to be the cause of a bunch of shit, she has issues that will come out later though that are causing her problems. You'll find out what Renee told Bella in a later chapter I don't want to spoil the surprise ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Tough love is the way to go with Rose. She may become Bella's biggest allie in the end.
Author's Response:
Thank so much for the review :)
Date: 09 Feb 2010 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
I just read all three chapters of this story and you totally have me hooked. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review :0) More is on the way!
Date: 09 Feb 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Holy Shit! This is one depressing fic but it's SOOOO good! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :) Don't worry Bella gets a happy ever after so the bad will lead to good!
Date: 09 Feb 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
OMFG someone hunt and destroy Renee NOW. What did she do to that poor girl and cant wait to find out how she is going to come out of her shell. OK so only 2 chapters and I am hooked. I am needy hurry Thanks
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am loving Edward and Em in your story. So glad Em stood up to Rose. Its actually the first story i've ever read that he did that.