Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Omg please please, don't leave it there! I really wanna know what happens next. Please update soon!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this is really good!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love this story. Edward is so sweet and sincere and I absolutely adore Emmett in this story. I swear I haven't said "awww" so many times during any fic ever! I am very excited for the next chapter. You are an outstanding writer!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
Gosh, I wanted to smack Rose and hug Bella, LOL! Can't wait til E&B really start falling for each other....
Date: 10 Mar 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
I really love how you are doing different POV's for everyone except Bella. It is a refreshing change from the norm of most stories. I do hope to hear Bella's POV sometime in the future but really like how your going so far. Oh, can you post your blog info, if you have already done this, sorry, I just haven't found it yet. : )
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Damn, Eddie's right, Renee did a number on her!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
plezse up date soon so love ur story and cant wait to see what happens to PHill
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just found your story, can't wait to go read the next chapter to see Bella's reaction to her new family and friends. So far, it's very cute and I am looking forward to reading the chapters you already have posted and will add to my favorites so I don't miss any updates!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
I knew thing were going to good to be true. Phil needs to die with his balls in his mouth. Please dont kill the puppy Hurry and get to her guys HURRY HURRY
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow I really hope Em and the rest of them can get there soon. I really Phil doesn't get the chance to do anything to her. Great update.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
So Phil is just as bad as Renee. Please let Emmett get there before Phil hurts Bella. Or better yet let the police get there and witness him abusing her. Emmett is going to feel so bad for leaving Bella by herself. He will never forgive himself. I hope he doesn't feel to quilty. PLEASE update SOON!!!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG the suspense will kill me. This story breaks my heart I really wigh that Bella could understand how much Charlie and Emmett love her, I think she loves them and so far sees them as nice people but I dont think she fully understands that she is loved and wanted. Great job though, I feel like your writing is really great.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow...where is everyone!!! They have to get there in time. I won't believe that they don't. Put Phil away too!! Get rid of both of the low lifes and Bella can get the help she needs and will maybe feel safe in her life for once. It breaks my heart everything she has gone through! I can't wait for more!!! Thanks so much!!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
I can't believe you did that. I am going to be waiting for an update.......That will hopefully come sooner than later.:) Oh great chapter by the way. I just want more.
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
PLEASE let everyone get there on time before he could do anything to her. Her life just became really good....please with a cherry lollipop?
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter. well, until the cliffy that is. you mean thing, you. it was great to see charlie being so outwardly supportive and bella accepting his comfort. i was a bit suprised that edward didn't play a bigger part since he is her safety blanket of sorts, but the bonding and trust building with charlie is important and sweet. wow, phil and renee are beyond words. ugh.
can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 01 Mar 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
This story breaks my heart and warms it all at once. Can't wait for more. ~Jen
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sneaky lady,Esme! I lvoe the confronntation between Rose and Emmett...although something tells me she's madder at Bella now than before!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
LOVE TI!!!!!! Great job wi;th this chatper. love Bella with Noel. I was wondering why the guys were letting Renee do all of that stuff to Bella, but it was all a plan. I am glad that they got Renee arrested. What information does Renee have Charlie????????
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 9
I love this story with all my heart. I wasn't too keen on the Charlie POVs but I grew to love them, because they do give some insight to the other characters (:
I can't wait for Bella to become more comfortable with herself and with Edward.
And Edward!! He calls her Baby!! AWWWHHH!! :D
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
Just found your fic today. I really love it, hope to read more soon!!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
This story is good, but hard to read. Makes me want to punch Renee in the face, Charlie too, for not protecting his daughter.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope Renee gets raped with a broom handle in jail...the bitch!
Author's Response:
LMAO that is totally my favorite review! Thank you so much :0) For all the support and for making me laugh my tushy off with that last review!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just finished reading this and I am in love...love love love. Oh cannot wait for the next chapter. Made me cry and all I want to do is love Bella with every inch of my being.
thank you for sharing.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Another great chapter!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow Renee is really evil So glad she is going to jail for now. Awesome job with this chapter.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
Bloody hell!! Im loving your story broken Bella and sympathetic Edward is amazing. I just hope thatsthe last we see of Renee and Bella realises whole heartedly that shes loved and wanted x
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
Such a great chapter. I'm so glad Renee is getting what she deserves (I hope) and Charlie understands the kind of treatment Bella was forced to suffer through. It breaks your heart to see Bella go through that again, especially after being privy to her self-deprecating thoughts and her thinking she is going to have to go back to her mother. Poor little one. At least now they have incriminating evidence on that awful woman. Good job!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yay!!! They got Renee. hopefully she will be gone at least for a little while!! I absolutely love it when Edward calls her baby!! So sweeet! Does he even realize that he is saying it? Great chapter!!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well, it was about time Renee was brought down a few notches. That woman is just pure evil. I'm just glad that everybody was there to witness what went down and that she was arrested.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 9
OH MY GOODNESS!
I JUST FOUND YOUR STORY AND I LOVE IT!
I STARTED READING AND I COULDN'T STOP!
PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Yeah, for Charlie. I really feel sorry for Bella - she needs to be spoken to by Charlie and Emmett so she can understand what's what. She needs to confide in a friend - probably Edward...not so sure if Alice could handle it.
Thanks for the update - can't wait to see what you have for us next.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope this is enough to keep Renee away forever! She is so evil. I am glad that Charlie said the things he did, but I am sure it is going to take a while for Bella to start to believe them. Great job...thanks!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awww.. so sweet. I know that the pain and torture that Bella went through is important, but I would love to see Renee go away for a long time, and maybe the judge could talk to Bella privately.. maybe he could see all of her health records and make sure that all of Renee's right were taken away.. maybe even a good threat of ever coming to the state of Washington again...I would love to hear Bella call Charlie.. Dad...
Date: 28 Feb 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2010 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Just wow this is a amazing story I really can't wait for you to update
Date: 28 Feb 2010 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
OH you made my day speed bump(Renee) got what was coming to her and in a parking lot at that. I was starting to worry no I was thinking what the fuck why are they not helping her but AHHHH now it all makes sence that was great. I am hungy for more more more
Date: 28 Feb 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
I knew it was not going to be good when I read that Phoenix was playing. Renee is really a stupid bitch, isn't she. WTF was she thinking abusing Bella like that? I was wondering what the hell was going on when everyone was letting Renee abuse her. I breathed a sigh of relief when I realized why.
Great job with keeping me on my toes throughout that chapter.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. I love this story, and was so happy to see an update. Looking forward to more.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awe, Edward is so sweet with Bella. The puppy was such a good idea.
What a cruel way to end the chapter. I'm feeling all happy and warm and fuzzy and you have to ruin it with that last paragraph. So mean.
Luckily I got behind and have a chapter to read right away :)
Date: 28 Feb 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Too bad they can't keep Renee in jail forever! And I agree, Edward does have a great butt!
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
awesome chapter!!
poor bella hopefully renee is out of her life for good now and if not at least for a long while
can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
What a huge chapter! Charlie steps up & is totally prepared for Renee, Bella trusts, and there's this cute fluffy puppy running around everywhere. I'm so glad I followed this story over to TWCS -- I hope it will be a good home for you to write the story that's in your head.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love that Edward got Bella a puppy. That was soooooo sweet.
I am scared by the last of the chapter. What is going to happen??? That did not sound good. Please update soon.!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am glad that Bella is starting to feel like she can ask questions. She is going to have to talk. I am glad she has a puppy. I think that will be good for her. How can you not smile when a puppy is there! I am worried about what is going to happen though. Bella has been through enough! Great job...thanks!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow...I can't believe what Bella has been through. The poor girl is afaid to go to the bathroom without being told it is okay. I hope this comes out soon. Charlie has to be told what she is thinking, but Bella doesn't know who to trust. What a terrible cycle. Great job...thanks!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love Alice's last line!!! Great job...thanks!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
Please tell me that Renee is going to get what is coming to her. Karma has got to come around, right??? Great job...thanks!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't believe that Bella has been abused like this. Renee is an evil evil woman!!! I can't stop reading this. Great job...thanks!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't believe that Bella has been abused like this. Renee is an evil evil woman!!! I can't stop reading this. Great job...thanks!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Okay so i love this story ALOT I can't wait to see more.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
I await with bated breath for the next installment of this delicious tale. Motivating? Huh? Huh? Get on it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow I just found this story, and I soo love it. I am really looking forward to more.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderfully sweet chapter. So glad they got Bella a puppy! I think the Jacob thing was a little excessive. I understand he was probably told about Bella and how not to upset her by bringing up Renee but still... people forget. He was just trying to get to know her and hope to get in her pants (he's like 14! that's all guys think about).
I am not looking forward to finding out what is about to happen to Bella. Ok, I am but only because this story is very, very interesting. It hurts to hear about Bella's awful life experiences.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Best chapter yet!! They seem to get better and better. The writing is stronger and definitely smoother. Great, great job!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
Such a great job with this chapter - it seems like it be so tough to write in any POV about what's going on with Bella past or present. I like the part with Bubba; it seems like such a great way to bring Bella out of her shell. She seems so happy and carefree.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think I want to cry a little after this chapter. Great, great job with this one. It obviously was difficult to write as the subject matter is quite intense.
I really liked BPOV. I think hers is the best part of the story yet. It answers a number of questions in addition to bringing up a thousand more.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think it's funny some of the things Charlie says in his head (" It's kind of freaking me out a little."). hahaha. Esme's POV is just so motherly and sweet. You can't help but wanna hug her. I liked the super fast mini diagnosis by Carlisle. And Alice... what a powerful ball of something she is. I think the Rose thing is getting blown a bit out of proportion given the fact that everyone knows her nature is brash. But seriously Rose, just suck it up and apologize. Good job with this one. The writing seems to have gotten smoother and a bit more relaxed.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
i love love love this story!!!!!!
i really hope that soon bella tells them what happened to her before and definitely about phil!
edward and emmett need to relax on the whole no dating the younger sister thing!
update soon please
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
I liked the different POVs but I think three in one chapter may be a bit too much. I am really curious about Isabella and why she is the way she is. I think the character personalities have been really good, if not a little exaggerated. Alice is crazy hyper and Edward is way stressed for a first meeting. Good job moving it along though.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
This will be an excellent story. It's got a great start so keep it up. I wonder what Isabella will be like when she arrives. Good job.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh the plot thickens... : ) great update, hun!
Date: 21 Feb 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Such an awesome chapter. I love that Bella got a puppie
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh no...I knew something would happen to burst Bella's happy little bubble.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome story! I'm glad she finally got the pet ;-)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not Fair, you say "Yep their from Eclipse" but i can't find them anywhere.
:(
Help a RPattz-lover out.
***On Knees pleading***
Author's Response:
I found them on various blogs, Robobessesed, Naugthy Kitty's Twiworld.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jake was being a little creap wasnt her. The three musketers to the resecue how cool. OMG what is going to happen to this poor girl. So excited for the puppy unconditional love something she knows nothing about once she figurs it out she will see it is all around her. More More More
Date: 20 Feb 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love it!!! Jake got his ass kicked, lol! Hope you update soon!
-Ang
Date: 20 Feb 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
im loving the story. but please tell me the forshadowing is not about renee. that bitch needs to die, painfully and by a knife!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
I forgot to ask this in my last comment: Where did you get the pictures for your banner? Are they from Eclipse? Please Let me know.
Author's Response:
Yep they are from Eclipse :0) Thanks for the review.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great Chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great story. I'm lovin' it. Please keep it coming.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter. It's getting very obvious that Edward is very protective of Bella. And I'm glad about that. She really likes him and is the most comfortable around him.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am proud of Rose. She does have a good heart. What has happened to Rose? Why has she changed?
Can't wait for you to update again. I am so loving this story.
Date: 15 Feb 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
I'm dying to know what happened to Rose.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great story. I really like how deep you go with the characters and how they interact with each other. I really feel bad for Bella and for Rose as I wonder what the issue is with her.
Can't wait to read more.
Heather
Date: 14 Feb 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great story! It really keeps you hooked. Please update soon!
Date: 13 Feb 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story... it's sad but sweet.. I love that Edward is so protective over Bella.. I hope that you have alot more to this story..
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 7
great chapter. feeling sorry for Rose and Bella.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
something bad happened to rose too, didnt it?
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
I just found your story today and I am in love with it
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww :( poor bella x
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
ive enjoyed it so far :) x
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Happy Valentine's back @ cha. So Rose... What is she keeping from Emmett?
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
Of course I want more. I want 2 know what Renee did 2 Bella and what Rosalie will do 2 Emmett. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
The story is moving along very nicely.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2010 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm enjoying the different POVs I'm so use 2 just B & E POVs. U just got 2 love Emmett.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 7
What happened to Rose was she attacked by someone is that why she has changed?? So C &C let Edward into the land of man and how to get out of things LOL. Lauran is not stable she is wacked in the head. So Tanya raped Edward is that what happened?? How is Emmett feeling about Edward leaving his party to spend time with Bella?? How sweet poor thing. I knew something happened sexualy with her thank god it was only be ogled at by a pervert and then her sick fucking mother speed bump that is what I am going to call Renee form now on. Cant wait for more
Date: 13 Feb 2010 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awesome, deep story bb.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
LOL, I never thought of Charlie and Carlisle fishing to get out of party prep. I love it. I just knew something would happen with daughter slut 1. Yay, Rose for coming to the rescue. Poor Em just broke my heart stadning there looking broken and torn.
Ok, so Eddie realizes he would die fighting to protect Bella. I wonder how long it will take him to realize that is love for a woman, not love or a sister or relative.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
So will Bella be big B? Got read the next chapter, bye 4 now.
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
I just found your story today and I am in love with it
Date: 13 Feb 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
I just found your story today and I am in love with it
Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Renee needs to be hunted down, hanged, drawn, and quartered. Sorry I've been reading a bit too much historical fiction lately.
I didn't think Em was looking at Victoria like a girlfriend. I can see him being friendly with Vickie at Edward's birthday party and Rose getting very pissy about it.
My heart breaks a little more with each new piece of her abuse puzzle we find.
I love Alice :)
Date: 13 Feb 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
If Rose has changed suddenly, then obviously something has happened in her life to cause her to act differently.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Renee is a sick bitch and I am with Alice but I think I would use her like a speed bump over and over again. Cant wait for the party I am almost afraid for poor Bella is she going to freak out or are some of the nasty bitches going to get mean with her when they notice Edward paying atention to her.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
This story is so sweet. Bella coming out of her shell and making new friends. I kinda teared up at the end. Can't wait for more.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, you have to love Alice. I am gald that Alice is getting Bella to open up just a little.
Date: 12 Feb 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
aww its really good poor bella
Date: 12 Feb 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter!! I love how protective Bella was being of Edward!!! That was funny! Alice is so good to her!! They are all being so patient with her. It was so sad to hear some of what Bella went through with Renee!!! I cannot wait for more chapters!!!