Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
YES I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What is the deal with Tanya???? Why is Emmett drinking, fighting with Rose??? What has happened to change Rose??? And whatever it is, why can't she talk to Emmet about it if they were boyfriend and girlfriend???
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! Check the blog around Wednesday for a teaser ;0) ANd umm I can't answer your question because it would ruin the rest of the story lol ;0)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow a blog update and a new chapter all in one day, you are so spoiling us! I just adore your story!
I'm so happy to see Bella isn't too damaged after the ordeal with Renee and then Phil. I hope after testifying it will help heal her some more. I'm pretty sure I've mentioned this but I can't wait for Edward and Bella to start having romantic feelings. If Tanya lashes out at Bella, we may just see Edwards lion claws come out!!!! Anyway, can't wait for the next update as this one of the stories I drop everything for to go read. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, this chapter was a move towards Bella realizing she feels more for Edward than just safe haven/friendship. More to come soon... the relationship is going to really kick in to gear in about 3 chapters.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn girl with all those cliffies! but still LOVING IT!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 11
such drama! awesome bb :D
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
awesome work and lovely shout outs!
xx
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just can't get enough :)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 8
AWESOME chapter! Luv ya!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love you and your kick-ass chapters :D
xx
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Always awesome to read your work :)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awesome work sweets :)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
Great work :D
Author's Response:
Awe your on TWCSL now too! Awesome bb.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm not sure if I have reviewed those chaps before.. but thought I'd leave you a couple of lines ;)
AWESOME WORK :D
Date: 26 Mar 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
BB I'll always be here for ya! Can't wait for the next chapter ;)
xx
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Hi. Told you I was going to check out some of your stuff. I really really try to avoid wips because I have so many on alert between fanfiction, twilighted, and now here too, but the summary was just too intriguing and I couldn't pass up reading this. I absolutely love it so far. This story is amazing. And Noel is adorable! I like that you made Victoria a nice character and that you're not letting Rosalie get away with her bitchyness. I'm sure we'll eventually find out what her problem is though.
I saw on your blog (while looking for the bedroom pics) that you lost a lot of new chapters for your stories. I hear you. I have one story I have been blocked on for a while but one night the ending came to me. I wrote it out and it was absolutely amazing and then my computer crashed and I lost it. Heartbreaking when that happens. So take your time with the sequel to Tempting Bella. You left the characters in a good place (although I would have liked an explanation on how the twins came about). As for this story, it is truly amazing and I will be patiently waiting for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review, I love indepth ones, they really let you know that the reader cares about what they just read. And I'm so glad you like TB too, and don't worry I will reveal the secret of the twins, if I don't get a sequel done I will at least do a few more outtakes.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
So glad Edward got a few punches in at Phil.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is an amzing storie ...you have had me on the edge of my seat sence the being.I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings..I hope that Bitch Renee gets what she disservs and that ass hole phil should die a slow and painful death..
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I loved Jasper's tire iron & Edward kicking Phil's ass. I'm glad Noel is okay. Em told Bella he loved her aw big bro that's so sweet. Phil fucking deserved to get shot WTG Charlie plus big Daddy C refused to treat Phil big ass bonus. I loved it. Vicky is actually sweet I hope she doesn't think there is more going on than her being friends with Em. He still is very much in love with Rose. I hope Rose gets the courage to tell him what happened that changed her so dramatically. II think I know but I hope I'm wrong. Until next time.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
Another great chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
So good. Will try to do a longer review later not on the phone. Meg
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story. I am so glad that Phil did not hurt Bella. I am really really glad that Edward got his hits in. Did Renee torment Bella with needles, is that why she reacted so bad to them????? Can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
more please :D
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thank god no one was at work when I read this. I couldn't keep my mouth shut. Words like bastard and asshole were flying out. Of course I literally cheered when Edward got his turn at Phil. Edward is so sweet and caring towards Bella. I can't wait for the ah ha moment when he realizes exactly what he's feeling for her.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
I LOVE this story. You have done an amazing job and to know that this is a true story being told is unbelieveable. I'm so glad your friend was comfortable enough to share this story with so many is great.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
You had me doing my happy dance when Edward punch that bastard in the nose and kicked him in the nuts the gut punch was pretty good to. Thank you Thank you for not hurting that puppy I dont know if I could get over it. I wonder how Bella is going to be when she wakes up and will she understand why Emmett held her to get the shot???? More More More I am hungry for this story.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
could you please let bella and rose be friends again and let her and em get back bogether so we finally can here the secret she has!!!!!!! i just hate when you vleave cliffys but i love th sory good job!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow nice chapter this story is finally coming along. Bravo Bravo :) I love it
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm loving this story and can't wait till I get caught up.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
eddie is so sweet
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great job. Well done. ;)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
Too bad the bullet wasn't fatal!!! It's kind of nice to have the Dads sharing the "knowing looks" and not just Moms! Usually it's Esme that is the perseptive one. Are Emmett and Jasper going to tell Edward what they walked in on when they got there?
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. It's weird that Emmett is so adult in this one - he isn't that playful, carefree version we usually get but an adorable big brother. I like how at the very end though, they go back to being teenagers playing video games.
I liked this line in particular: "correction... that would be, kick-ass homemade goodness that melts in the mouth and never in my hands."
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
OMG...poor Bella has been through enough. I hope that she remembers that Emmett said he loved her.
I am so glad that everyone got there in time. I love the number that Edward pulled on Phil!! I hope nothing happens to him for all that!!!
I think it is a good thing they will be staying with the Cullens. I hate that all that bad stuff happened in Bella's bedroom. I would never what to go back to that room!!! Great job...I can't wait to see what happens next...thanks!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
Lovely chapter! So happy that Edward got some damage in on Phil!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
so happy that bella is ok!
love that edward was able to beat the crap outta phil a little, just wish that jasper had been able to use the tire iron too ;)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can't wait to see what happens when Bella starts school and the skank squad get jealous of how close she is to Edward.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
i love it please write soon it one of the best
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
This chapter was awesome. I loved it. i would love to see Bella and Charlie really talk.. and him to tell her that he loves her with all his heart... and I can't wait to see where the relationship goes with Bella and Edward....yay!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
sending loving reviews lol I am thoroughly enjoying this story :) update soon I hope Phil loses the ability to use his microscopic twig and giggle berries (hey it can happen after a kick to the groin it is a medical fact trust me I am a nurse lol) :) great story though
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story so much. Thanks for sharing it and for the new chapter, I had a great time reading it.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Excellent Phil butt kicking!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Fist pump for Edward! Excellent chapter I love the way all of the guys are so protective of Bella. Can't wait to get the next update.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter. i'm so glad bella got to take an active part in her rescue. em is such an adorable big brother... jasper, too. the tire iron made me laugh. oh, and how can anyone not love protective avenging angel-ward?? yummmmmmmmm... can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story and I get so excited to get updates from you. This was a great chapter. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great up lifting chapter! I guess you took care of Phil without actually killing him. Why did Renee hate Bella soo much? Why would Phil get involved with someone to crazy like Renee? Was he after Renee to get to Bella? Anyway is it HEA after this or will there be more drama?
Date: 16 Mar 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. So glad the boys got there in time. WOW Phil is as crazy as Renee. Loved it.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great HEA. At first I thought maybe Edward would be the first to get there just possibly stopping by to check on her, but I am glad all the boys got their moment to shine!!!! So when is Edward going to fall in love with her so Jasper and Alice can be together too?????? All in due time, right????
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Awww, I was hoping for another chapter. Oh well, guess I can TRY to wait. :-p
Author's Response:
I should have the next chapter up by Wednesday evening. It's going to my beta today. Glad you like it enough to come back for more :0)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
Ooooh I get caught up and it ends with a major cliffy! Perfect ;) Can't wait till you update. I'm gonna run over to your blog. Again great job.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 9
A little bit of a tear jerker at the end. Way to play the game guys! I just love how Edward is calling her baby. One more chapter and I'll be caught up. Awesome story girlie.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow down the rabbit hole we go. Whoa mama someone save Bella. I hope Noel is okay she's just a puppy. I hate Renee and Phil especially Renee she sucks as a mother and should be ashamed of herself.
Author's Response:
Hey :0) Don't worry your Jake won't be a bad guy, he's just a kid who opened up his mouth and said something stupid. I don't plan on making him douche of the year or anything. Thanks for all the great reviews :0)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Okay, Jake's a douche. Really freaking out about the little cliffy. Gotta keep reading almost caught up!
Author's Response:
Wow thanks so much for all the great reviews :0) I should be updating with chapter 11 sometime this week, it's almost finished. There are some teasers on my blog as well.
Don't worry Jake won't be a bad guy, he's just a teenage boy, who didn't think before opening his mouth.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
I literally did a fist pump when Rose stuck up for Bella, I'm worried about what happened to her for her to change. Another great one.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Man that was so good really I didn't see that shit coming.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really love how you made the characters so down to earth. I can't wait till the party. I wonder if Rosalie will show up and see Victoria with Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Okay, Carlise's a perv, lol! This story just keeps getting better. :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Okay first off I kinda suspected Rose would act like that. Second, I almost spit my drink out when I read about Charlie eating the pancakes! Excellent job. I'm a little confused and really intrigued about Bella's POV. Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out what's really going on. I'm rating this chapter a 10 for Charlie's orgasm face!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love Noel. Bella is making progress one step forward three back probably. I hope my Jake doesn't become a bad guy.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
I hope Rosalie doesn't start to resent Bella. How did Edward get Bella's shoe size? Well another great job, wondering when we'll get BPOV. Good one. :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I can't believe Emmett kicked Rose out. I know she didn't mean it, but I guess his big brother instincts have kicked in. I can't wait to get to EPOV, so with that I'll continue. Great job.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting, can't wait to see where this story goes. Love the part about Emmett ragging on Edward and his 'relationship' with the carpet cleaner.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Rose she is hiding a deep dark secret that she believes will hurt Em more but he would just be disgusted more than likely. I'm still loving it and all the drama.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm still loving and thank God for you A/N2. It confirmed what I thought.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh shit this is making me so sad. Poor Bella & Charlie he wouldn't let that happen to her.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Man poor Em he had to breakup with Rose because she had issues that would keep effecting his sister good brother move Em. Edward, Esme and Alice are making a killer team getting the things together that Bella needs. I'm loving it. Oh I forgot to mention that Bella's POV crushed my little heart for real. Renee is a bitch and didn't deserve to have Bella as a daughter.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it Rose is getting what she deserves no easy out this time mama.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
It looks like another interesting story. I can't wait to read more. Oh yeah I started following you on twitter. I need you to follow me so I can make comments you can see since my tweets are protected since the girls and I usually have picture porn parties and they get a little raunchy. Yeah twitter is like a black hole for me and so is fanfiction. Until next time.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh crap. Wow can't wait for the update. I see Phil not living. Don't kill the dog. Please meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow I hope she tells Alice about Phil. More tears. Meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ok so I cried. And the last paragraph scares me BIG time. Meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 7
So what happened to rose? Royce ? Greatness having rose stick up for Bella. Meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Rose is learning a hard lesson but I am proud they didn't cave to her. I like your take on the characters. Thanks for shareing your story. Meg
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love the start. My heart breaks for Bella. Great story telling. Meg
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMG you are so evil leaving it like that.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the great reviews on here and FF.net :0) Don't worry by Monday or Tuesday I should have the next update up. *hugs* Livvie
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
So smart charlie.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh no...... hope no one hurts her dog.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Beat his ass Em!!!! (and Edward of course)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow!! Great job with this chapter. So much stuff happened in this one and it ended with such a cliffie.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really like your story !
I hope you'll update soon :D
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh man. why stop it there????
how do i add this story to my alerts???? im new to TWCS.....
Author's Response:
Hi thanks so much for the review :)
To recieve updates on TWCS go into your account info link at the top of the page then click the link that says edit prefences, then you want to make sure you check beside Contact when favorites are updated and hit save. After you do that, any story you put on favorites, when they update you'll recieve an alert. Hope that helps!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 10
a very very intresting great chapter. please tell me noelle is ok. and will emmett get there in time dont let her get raped in my opinion rape on bella sorta ruins the story I dont know why I just find it romantic when edward is her first time. update soon
Date: 12 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! O_O
Date: 12 Mar 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really enjoying this story so far. Your plot is intriguing and I'm really digging the characters. Well done!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 10
no no no no!! you can't do this to me! no cliffhangers allowed!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow. I can't believe how fucking stupid Renee and Phil are. I hope he's about to get his ass beat by Em, Jazz, & Edward.
I loved Charlie's comment about burrying a body on the Rez :) I died laughing at the porno career choice conversation.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
Now Phil can join Renae Bitch in jail. I hope Charlie and Emmett rough him up a bit before they haul him off.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hopefully Em will get there in time.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
another wonderful chapter!
please update soon!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 10
that is so not a nice place to leave it!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
HOLY SHIT!! I can't believe you left it there!! I can't wait for it to update!!!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMG! Heart fail cliffie!
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
Dusk, Masen Pattz, too funny! But jaw porn was spot on!!!!!! Wow, emotional chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
You had me in tears and then I read the last two sentences darn it! Great chapter.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
I can't believe that you stopped it there... come on... don't leave me hanging!!!! I can't wait for Emmett and Charlie to get there.. he is in BIG trouble
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
OHHHHH MANNNNNN
That is just not nice!!!
Update soon please please please
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
please update soon ilove it