Date: 18 May 2011 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 32
Good chapter I don't understand why the men did not call first.
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 32
*says with shit-eating grin on face*
awwwwwww!
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
bella just can't get a break
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
sweet and funny
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
great chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 32
A little scary, but she will be okay. Liz along with all the family will be there to help. I love the idea of Liz and Charlie. I hope that can work out at some point in the future. Charlie deserves to have a good woman in his life too. Great chapter...thanks so much!!!
Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
poor charlie
Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
poor emmett
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
poor emmett
Date: 04 Apr 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 32
im glad that shes finding comfort in him in her time of need
Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
glad renee is gone
Date: 04 Apr 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 32
Bella just shut down after hearing Renee's name. I hope that once she hears their story she gives them a chance. You can't be loved by too many people. They seem genuine.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
poor emmett
Date: 04 Apr 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 32
I was so excited to get your update. I have missed this story. I feel so sorry for Bella. She was finally moving on with her life and starting to really make progess and now this. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 32
i love this new chapter! i was waiting for the new chapter for a while and i think it was worth the wait. Whens the next chapter out??
Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
Jasper had me cracking up with his tire iron!! I love Edward. He is so sweet and I love how he wants to take care of Bella. Loved it and can't wait for more!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 32
I love this story. I look forward to your updates!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter , Bella with a hotgun i can see her as annie oakley i just doubt many of the readers will know who that is, ah the wonders of google
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
poor Bella. glad Liz and Edward and all were there for her.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter! I feel like I say that to every chapter, but they are all so good. I love this story. Please update again SOON! =)
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 32
Aw, I really think Edward should say the " I love you " to Bella; I think it would mean so much to her and she'd most definitely be saying it back to him.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter, glad to see that Emmett was thinking the same thing I was about Jasper and his tire iron! I can't wait till Edward has the nerves to tell her when she can hear the words. Excellent job. ;)
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
Best Parts:
That was all it took for Jasper and Edward to demand coming with me. Edward grabbed his baseball bat, from the hall closet, and somehow between the Cullen home and mine, Jasper's freaking tire iron appeared. I swear he went no-where near his car. I have no clue where that thing came from.
I look back to Jasper in the back seat of the jeep. He's rubbing his tire iron and gazing out the window. He could be either plotting as well, or mentally going all Gollum on us and calling it his 'precious' his head.
"Charlie, where is Bella?" I hear Edward ask Dad in hard voice. He's clearly on alert too, and I promise myself to be easier on him with dating Bella from now on. His first thought was her and, to me, that shows a lot about how much he really cares for her.
A light thumping noise grabs my attention and I turn to look. Bella was holding the shotgun. Holy shit!
"Back away from my Dad!" She yells at the top of her lungs, pointing the gun at the younger guy, who had jumped in front of his father. You can see that her body is shaking; her finger is trembling on the trigger.
"Bells, calm down," Dad tells her, moving slightly towards her.
"I won't let them hurt you, Daddy." You can tell she isn't really with us right now. Her face is whiter than... well, it's really damn white. Her eyes seem like they are looking at the scene in front of her, but not really seeing anything. It's hard to explain, it's like the lights are on and she is in there, but she is moving on auto pilot, some weird part of her taking over.
"Panic attack, maybe some disassociation," Edward mumbles to himself. I don't know if he is diagnosing her, or talking about himself.
"Aww, baby girl, they won't. I promise." Dad speaks to her as if she is a small child and walks towards her slowly, as if she is a wild animal. Once he gets the gun out of her hands, he takes her to his favorite chair where he puts her on his lap and rocks her like she is a small child.
"It's going to be alright, baby girl, Daddy is here," he says quietly, a few times and you can see her body start to relax.
"Bella, baby, here take this. It's just a small dose to calm you down some." Edward is as quick and sneaky as Jasper. Somehow, he came by some panic meds and water without me even seeing him leave the room. Jasper walks over, pats Edward on the back with his one free hand before looking at Bella.
"Don't worry, Bella, it's ok." They share a grin before he joins me and Edward on the floor in front of Bella. We are like the Hadrian's Wall in its heyday, nothing is getting by us.
Liz and Edward follow me into the room, where Noel is plopped on the bed sound asleep. I swear the dog snores louder than Dad. Edward runs over and moves Noel and pulls back the quilt so that I can lay Bella down. Edward sits on the bed beside Bella and runs his fingers in gentle sweeps around her face. Noel crawls out of his lap and curls into Bella's side. The pup seems to know her Momma needs her right now.
"I'm going to administer a sedative to help calm her."
"I gave her a quarter of a xanax earlier, Dad." Edward adds.
"Good to know, I'll adjust the dose based on that. Good thinking though, Edward." Carlisle praises
Later that night while I'm asleep on the couch, I feel the blanket move and a small form curl up next to me. I pull her close and she sighs. I kiss the back of her head, loving the smell of her Honeysuckle shampoo.
"Is this ok?" She asks quietly.
"Yes."
"I feel safer when you're near." Her voice is still quiet, but the words make me feel like she shouted from the roof tops that I was her personal hero.
"I feel better when you're near too." She hums softly and in the silence I hear the soft sounds of her breathing as she falls asleep. After I'm sure she is gone, I say what I haven't been brave enough to say while she's awake. "I love you, Bella."
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
Love this chapter!!! Emmetts pov cracked me up especially when he talked about Jasper and the tire iron.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
Is it bad that I found myself LOLing during Emmett's POV? Even during the seriousness I found his thoughts humerous. I wonder what can happen to Bella next? Seems like everytime she gets somewhere she's thrown 2 steps back.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 32
awww... plz update soon
Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 32
I hope that Bella DOES accept them in the future. They seem to be okay.
Date: 02 Apr 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
I am trying to add this story to my favorites but am having difficulties. I have been following this one for quite a while and can't wait until your next update. It is a very good read.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 31
I first read your story on fanfiction. I love it !! The plot is excellent, B&Ed relationship is lovely and the twist are so surprising ! I never see a grandfather, an uncle or a sister coming from B's mother side !! Hope to read what happens next very soon !
Date: 09 Mar 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 31
I liked how she was willing to try and protect her dad. I hope she can have a relationship w/ her Grandfather, Uncle/Aunt and Cousin/Sister. It would be good for her to know that there were some goodness on her mom's side of the family.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 31
awww,,, nooo... i dont want it to end
plz update soon
Date: 20 Feb 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 31
More people to love Bella and for her to love....
[Report This]Date: 20 Feb 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 31
thanks good chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
Crazy! I had to laugh when I read that Jasper had his trusty tire iron. Great job. ;)
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 31
I think Bella needs to know that there is good genes are her mother's side. I think this is a good thing. Bella can always use more people to love her.
Date: 17 Feb 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 31
Awesome on both this chapter. And the to extreme update
Date: 16 Feb 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
hehehe awwe great chappy and the boys are great
Date: 16 Feb 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 31
Wow...these two have been through as much as Charlie. How can people be so mean and crule. It took way to long, but I am so glad that Bella is away from Renee and doing so much better.
I love that she was readay to defend her Daddy and the other guys. Bella has come so far and I can't help but smile about that.
Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 31
Sequel?????????plz:D
Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 31
That was a mess! Glad to know she has other relatives that want to meet her. Can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
Loved the chapter <3 can't wait for the next one :D Connor is so lovely :) x
Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 31
I am so glad that Liam and Conner are not a threat to Bella. But I think Emmett, Edward and Jasper with his tire tool had it covered. lol. You know Charlie didn't have it covered with his gun. lol. Thanks for updating. SOOOO loving this story. Renee and her mother were definately a piece of work. WOW!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter! Loved that Bella was trying to protect her family, even though she was scared. Shows how far she has really come! :)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 31
Can we kill all the Higgins with a bomb? Just asking. Great chap.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter!!! I Love how Bella was going to protect her daddy.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 31
Well i guess badness must run in the family Bella was cute with her bravado.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 31
Ohh it is a shame to be cut off there.
Loving the story.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 31
Wow that was a semi confusing story, but I got it in the end. haha Bella was so cute trying to protect Charlie with the broken gun=) can't wait to see what happens
~My Not-So-Secret Obsession
Date: 16 Feb 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 31
love you!!! Great job!!!!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
Love her protectors. Glad she's got some more family too.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 31
I couldn't help but laugh at the image of the boys coming in to fight/protect Bella...hee hee. Then they sit in front of she and Charlie...double hee hee.Ü
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 31
Awwww I loved that chapter. Thanks for the quick update. Can't wait for more....keep it commin! :)
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 31
please update soon!!!!! and please update To The Extreme soon please.
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
the story seems to be getting overly complicated now..you're a really good writer though so I am going to trust it's all leading somewhere and there's a point to the introduction of a new plotline
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love the way she come down with the gun that was hilareous but the best part was Jasper and his beloved tire iron.
I also like how the fish weight went up by like twenty more pounds. So like the old fish stories men exagerate on.
Date: 15 Feb 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
AWW I am so proud of Bella!!!
Best Parts:
"Hey, Bells..." Charlie's voice is broken up by the sound of the door. I jump worried that the men are hurting him. I look around trying to find something to protect him with. A memory of a shot gun in his closet that he said didn't actually work because he had taken apart the firing mechanism. It was for show in case someone broke into the house and I needed protection again. Something to scare them off. I ran and grabbed it, shutting Noel in my room before inching my way to the stairs. My legs shook, but there was no way these men were going to hurt my Daddy.
"Who the hell are these people, Dad?" I heard Emmett demand. My stomach dropped, they have Emmett too!
"Calm down, boy." I hear Charlie say to them.
"Charlie, where is Bella?" Edward demands, his voice hard. My sweet Edward. If they lay a finger on him, I will beat them with this gun, I don't care if it doesn't shoot, it will hurt to get smacked with.
The younger one turned and walked towards Charlie and I leapt into action.
"Back away from my Dad!" I yell pointing the gun. My body's shaking and I can feel one of those panic attacks coming on. But I have to keep it together, I can't, won't fall apart when they need me!
"Bells, calm down." I hear Father's voice.
"I won't let them hurt you, Daddy." I say softly back.
"Aww, baby girl, they won't. I promise." Charlie tells me gently coming towards me he takes the gun and sets it on the floor before pulling me over to his chair. He sits down and pulls me into his lap where I break into tears as he holds me whispering how everything is going to be alright.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
Your kidding her grandfather are they good people???? So cool her catching the bigest fish loved it. Edward is a smart boy he learns well. So Charlie was going to give her the birds and bees talk LOL
Date: 14 Feb 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 30
omg.... i cant wait til next chapter...
edward is soooo sweet.....
plz update soon
Date: 13 Feb 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
wow agrand father and uncle wow.
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
Awesome story so far cant wait for more!
Date: 12 Feb 2011 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 30
That poor girl never geta a break!
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
Grandfather? Huh, didn't see that coming. SO this Liam must be an uncle to Bella? Crazy.
Date: 10 Feb 2011 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ah man, I was looking foward to the Charlie sex talk! But the grandfather revelation should be good too! Great chapter, update soon!
Date: 10 Feb 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 30
What does this mean for Bella? I laughed as Bella caught a big ugly fish. Now she has something on Emmett. lol. I can't wait to hear her tease him about it.
Date: 10 Feb 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow...I didn't see that coming. I can't wait to find out more!!!
Bella catching the biggest fish on her first time out was priceless! I just love to see her grow and blossom. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 30
OMG!!! I am glad to see Bella coming out of her shell. I love the way Edward is with her. I can kill for the way the chapter ended.. I can't wait to see the way this is all going to go and see how Connor and Liam fit in to all of this. I just hope that Bella doesn't freak out to much... Can't wait for the update..
Date: 09 Feb 2011 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
AHHH, UPDATE SOON!! What's everyone's reactions gonna be=) I loved Emmett's fish story and Edward's reasurrance to Bella that he wants to stay with her by asking her out to the game early.
~My Not-So-Secret Obsession
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love it!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 30
Nice way to end it! Can't wait for the next chappie.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
Wow...I didn't see that one coming. I really liked this chapter and loved how Bella caught the biggest fish. I also found it hysterical how Emmett caught is one and only fish.
I look forward to your next chapter.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
glad she had fun fishing.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 30
OMFG.....Yes I want to kill you but I also really really want to know what happens in the next chapter. Sooner than later I hope. Thanks for the update. I'll be waiting!