Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think you're doing perfectly! Very interesting story, horrifyingly frightening. You've captured the girls' attitudes and behaviors so well. I look forward to reading more!!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm loving it. Keep up the good work
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 2
loved it update soon please can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was good can't wait to see what happens next thanks....
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Holy crap!!! I am so confused about who the "master" is.....nice cliffhanger btw...update soon.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great set up! Can't wait until the next chapter please.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
Master should be interesting! I keep trying to figure out who he is. Looking forward to more!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really like it.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I find the concept here fascinating. Total brain-washing vampire style! You convey Bella's confusion perfectly.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2
Getting back to themselves is going to be a long road.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
ohhh, this is great. I love that there is mystery surrounding this, not all like this is the bad guy, go hunt him down.
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks very promising.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am excited to read more. This story seems very promising. Great first chapter.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
great chapter.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it. Keep going. I like the potential for this story and where it seems to be heading.
I'm adding to favorites so I hope to see updates :-)!
Marti
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
good begining, can't wait to see where this goes
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
J'adore... c'est si mystérieux. J'ai hâte de lire la suite. Je lis avec un traducteur anglais-français.
Fleur
Québec, Canada, 20h01
Author's Response:
Ce site ne me permets pas de ne fait pas languges mais le fanfiction.net multiples font, donc je pourrais pouvoir quelques-uns faire avec le translater sur mon ordinateur pour ce site. Lisez-vous ce site ?
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm definitely interested in hearing more! Hope you will update soon.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Intriguing. You have caught my attention.