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Reviewer: eitak Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 3

I think you're doing perfectly! Very interesting story, horrifyingly frightening. You've captured the girls' attitudes and behaviors so well. I look forward to reading more!!

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm loving it. Keep up the good work

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it update soon please can't wait to see what happens next thanks....

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

that was good can't wait to see what happens next thanks....

Reviewer: mhawkins9802 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Holy crap!!! I am so confused about who the "master" is.....nice cliffhanger btw...update soon.

Reviewer: blooddrinker Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great set up! Can't wait until the next chapter  please.

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

génial!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

Master should be interesting!  I keep trying to figure out who he is.  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

I really like it.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I find the concept here fascinating.  Total brain-washing vampire style!  You convey Bella's confusion perfectly.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

great chapter

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

Getting back to themselves is going to be a long road.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

ohhh, this is great. I love that there is mystery surrounding this, not all like this is the bad guy, go hunt him down. 

Reviewer: SammyJo Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1

Looks very promising.

Reviewer: bellestormes Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am excited to read more. This story seems very promising. Great first chapter.

Reviewer: edward4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

great chapter.

Reviewer: marti1013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it.  Keep going.  I like the potential for this story and where it seems to be heading.

 

I'm adding to favorites so I hope to see updates :-)!

 

Marti

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

good begining, can't wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

J'adore... c'est si mystérieux.  J'ai hâte de lire la suite.  Je lis avec un traducteur anglais-français.

 

Fleur

Québec, Canada, 20h01

 



Author's Response:

Ce site ne me permets pas de ne fait pas languges mais le fanfiction.net multiples font, donc je pourrais pouvoir quelques-uns faire avec le translater sur mon ordinateur pour ce site. Lisez-vous ce site ?

Reviewer: gabelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm definitely interested in hearing more!  Hope you will update soon.

Reviewer: exploringplanetearth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing.  You have caught my attention.

Reviewer: annagardner11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love idt

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is good.

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