Date: 23 Aug 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
Your stories are to be commended. They are so original and good. I contiune to look forward to reading them. Thanks for the excellent entertainment.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG, so many girls/ladies. He was a sick SOB.
Author's Response:
Thank you for All the reviews to this story. I am currently working on the next chapter and hope to get it up next week. Alistair always creeped me out in the book, it seemed fitting! Thank you again!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
Alice and Walmart it doesn't get any better.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
WOW, this is very interesting. I am looking forward to reading on!
Date: 03 Aug 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wonderfully action packed and emotional chapters. Alec?! Who knew!! Great turn there. Sorry it took so long to catch up. Ah, vacation!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
love your story!
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
love this story!! can't wait for the next chap!!
Date: 01 Aug 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 16
jane is going to be trouble
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
Please do continue this story. I am still enjoying reading it.
Date: 01 Aug 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it ! Thanks for the updates :D
Date: 01 Aug 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
please finish this one first. i always wait for your updates and will like to read this story to the end.
Date: 31 Jul 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am loving this story. Please continue writing
Thanks
B
Date: 31 Jul 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 15
finish please
Date: 30 Jul 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
awesome chappy please continue
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great Chapter. Keep the story going.
Author's Response:
Since so many have asked it will continue. with all the all human stories being written i wasn't sure if people wanted the vampire ones to continue and thats why i asked what you people wanted. i cant give you what you want if i dont know but now i do so i will carry it full circle. next chapter is already half done and will be up in a few days. thanks for reading it. nails233
Date: 30 Jul 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think that this kind of blackmail is offensive. I have favorited your story, which meant I was interested in reading it. But please yourself, if you don't want to continue, stop. I'll survive. For sure I'll not read anything else from you, because you don't respect readers.
Author's Response:
I am sorry you feel that way. I dont see where asking for the opinion of the readers is concidered blackmail or disrespecting. Where I come from it's called giving the readers what they want. All I asked was for your opinion if the story should continue. I am sorry you feel the need to stop reading my story because I asked for your opinion.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
:D :D :D
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:D :D :D
Please please please..*
:D :D :D
Alice R..*
Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 15
ohh bree is with a Volturi I guess.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great chapter! I hate the hangers though! You should feel ashamed for putting us through that.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
Of course I like this story and want you to continue! I know I'm a bad reviewer, but I read every update! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
You are forgiven. I know I dont always do it either but I am working on being better at it. I just needed to know if everyone wanted it. It looks like everyone so far is really enjoying this story so I think it will see its full cycle. I have so many twists to come I hope you enjoy them.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
I skimmed this chapter and hope to come back to it when I have more time. Just a thought- each character needs a new paragraph when speaking. It's hard to keep track of who is talking when it is formatted the way you have it.
Author's Response:
Please dont hesitate to tell me when I do something confusing. I dont want my work to be junkie and unreadable. So I have fixed those conversations and when you reread it, you will no problems - i hope. Thanks for skimming ti! i hope you enjoy it later!
Date: 23 Jul 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
When you say dark, you mean dark, don't you. Glad Bella and the two other girls were found. Sounds like their master was a vamp, and drank from Bella. Who was the master?? Oh sh*t this is going to be a twisted story and the girls have a long way to go to come back to normalcy. Good start.
Author's Response:
No it wont be too twisted. but it is the darkest i have written but i try not to make it too too dark. Hope you like it! thanks for reading it.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Cant wait for the update :D
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Crazy! wow! loved it :D
Date: 23 Jul 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
good chapter :D
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 10
ah oh what gonna happen to Bella?.......ok reading on... cuz i need to know . PS again i really like this fic
Date: 23 Jul 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Dang! that was a little intence...ok movie on so i can get caought up :D
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it as always
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 7
well u did not upset me. I love this fic. Its diffrent ;)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
loved it :)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Huhh?! ok moveing to the next chapter to find out that going on :)
Date: 23 Jul 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
A+++ I loved it
Date: 23 Jul 2010 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 3
go get em Edward :D
Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Holly WOW l Loved! ... not cuz what happend to her but its really good :D
Author's Response:
Thank so much for reading it. I am really glad you found this site! It's really awesome and they are very supportive here. Next chapter is in the works. nails233
Date: 23 Jul 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Im new to this sight . wanted to see what was here and i found your fic and so far i really like it :) I cant wait to get caought up
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
intersting chappy and who is brees mysery vamp ;)
Date: 19 Jul 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm confused about who Bree is meeting up with, whoever it is called her love. OMG! Please tell me its not my babydaddy! Great Chapter
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great story so far.
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
As always...lovin' it! You're pulling a larger family together now. Wonderful!
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great Chapter
Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sorry to hear about the surgery, glad to know you seem to be doing better. Don't like the cliff hanger. Are there any fans that do?
Date: 07 Jul 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great story!! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 07 Jul 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
ohhhh getting real exciting yay! Hope you are feeling better now
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Date: 07 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter, but a little confused at the end.
Author's Response:
Sorry about that! it was meant to be that way because right now they're confused too. All will be straightened out next chapter
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 13
oh no.. SETH!!... I am glad he is being protective.. but Jasper is going to kill him.. lol.
I am so sad this is the last chapter for now.. I am sorry about your surgery. I hope you are feeling better.
Can't wait to here what happens. Great job.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Glad Bella is feeling better.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh gosh.. who is this... scary...
Great chapter.. you do DARK very well.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
shiver....shiver ... shiver.
Great job.
Date: 06 Jul 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
oh gosh.. I have been waiting to read this until you had more chapters loaded.. at eight.. I couldn't wait anymore.. hahaha.. and you did not disappoint.. this is going to be a scary fun ride. yippeeee!!
Love it.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good chapter. Why would Bree think that Bella was the protected one and not Stella?
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
esme is so smart
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
I LOVE THIS STORY, CANT WAIT TIL U UPDATE AGAIN!
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great Chapter
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ah Esme started the ball rolling alright! Nice, very, very nice! I love the way you bring us through the relationships anhd then hit us with the heavy outside drama. It works so well!
Date: 17 Jun 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my Bree is an evil little bitch isn't she. Bella wasn't too protected, she still managed to get her ass kick by The Master. He may not have let anyone else hurt her but he certainly did.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter she is coming along real good
Date: 16 Jun 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
j'adore l'évolution de Bella/Edward. J'espère qu'ils vont beaucoup se pratiquer cette semaine!
Les conseils de Esme, un petit bijou, j'ai hâte de voir les prochains conseils du prochain chapitre.
Date: 16 Jun 2010 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
The shower touching was HOT -
thank you
Date: 16 Jun 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
how sad - I read this on ff and here!! but this was a great chapter - I like how you switch the POV'S up (bree is still a bitch and I hope they rip her limb from limb!!)
Date: 06 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Another great chapter
Date: 06 Jun 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
great awesome chapter
Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
poor girl. Glad she has the girls to talk too
Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter
Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
poor bella i hope she gets better...
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome Keep up the Good work! Really enjoying this storyline
Date: 04 Jun 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
You've done a great job with this story, even though it has very difficult subject matter. I wasn't sure if I would like it, but I'm glad I gave it a chance. This is very original.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for giving it a chance! It's hard to write but knowing the readers like it makes me want to do it, thank you! Nails233
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
This is most definatley dark, but handled extremely well. When the "darkness" starts to creep up on you, that's the time to add something lighter. Like Esme pulling Edward out of the room callin him by 3 names! Such a mother thing to do and only we can give it that extra umph when our kids hear it! It would make no sense if Isabella adjusted smoothly and swiftly; her road is bound to have setbacks. Follow your instincts. They haven't failed you yet!
Author's Response:
Thank You for reading my work and reveiws like yours definitely let me know that i am doing it right. Always feel free to tell me what you think because I rely on them to do a better job! Thanks again!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Excellent .... love the playtime both in the closet and more intimate. Eager for the next chapter.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter. Will she ask Charlie about Renee her real mother?
Author's Response:
Yes next time Charlie see Bella he's bring along something to help her remember places and people.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
So I feel bad that Bella and Stella are not back to where there were. They where so close they where everything to each other and now Bella feels threaten by Stella taking Edward from her. I ma very pleased that Jake and Stella are together and that they both feel that they belong together. That is cool. Yeah Esme had a talk with Bella about the family dynamics. She needed that. I am surprised Edward didn’t. I love Esme grabbing Edward by the ear and pulling him into the office for the talk. That was great. Well abck att he farm the house sounds amazing. I am glad it seems she will be okay with it. I love her trying on the shoes and such. Like a kid in the candy store, how cute. Walking in on her naked look out Edward. She already knew how she felt. She could feel her feelings for him, hot. They will be so good together. When the time comes it will be out of this world. The have both waited for so long it deserves to be perfect. I can’t wait for the talk with Esme and Alice on sex. Now that will be a funny chapter. Love the story, thanx
Author's Response:
Have no fears Stella and Bella will find their way back to each others freindship, espescially when they come back from Alaska...just a little hint. Thank you so much for reading it!
Date: 04 Jun 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
Wow still good, still can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 04 Jun 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
I love this story. It's so intense and well-written. Keep updating.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 3
This was good. I am impressed you used Alistair, he's not a vampire I come across a lot in this type of fiction.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh no, the bad vampire is back.
Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a really good and creepy start to your story.
Date: 30 May 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
this is getting good!!
Date: 25 May 2010 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter
Date: 25 May 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great couple of chapters... crazy that Seth is a half/half now... and his parents disowned him... how messed up! Glad that Carlisle and Esme are going to take care of him though.... and I am happy that Bella finally came out of the black hole she was in! Can't wait to see more! :)
Date: 24 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great Story, Please Update, definately want to read more.....
Date: 24 May 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent chapter ... love watching the evolution of Bella's mind as she comes to terms with the change in her captivity allowing fun back into her life.
Date: 24 May 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great stuff! Bella's even dealing with her inner demons. Darker next chapter, hmm? Count me in!
Date: 24 May 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
J'aime quand c'est sombre! c'est différent...
Date: 24 May 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
Good chapter. If Edward doesn't change her she is always going to feel like he doesn't want her enough.
Date: 24 May 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
So, what's wrong with going on forever? Oh, yes, carpal tunnel, double vision, injuring your forehead on the key board.
Turning Seth, still able to phase to wolf form. Didn't think of that. Boo-hiss to his father. What a douche bag.