Date: 05 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT SHE RAN AWAY FROM EDWARD AND WENT TO JOIN JANE!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN YEAH SHE'S A NEWBORN BUT STILL!!!!!!!! BUT ON THE BRIGHT SIDE SHE WENT BACK WITH EDWARD SO EVERYTHING WILL BE GOOD!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
OK so I reread this over the past 18 hours...
YES all 21 chapters as I love this story & so want you to update asap!!!
So cruel to leave us in the waiting game ot see what happens...
Cliffies are cruel but so are writers that don't update for months (sorry was trying to write it less harsh than that!!!!) But I love this story so much that I need you to finish this story & put us out of our misery :)
Thank you & I do hope your book is going well....
My appolgizies on the delay. I have been a bit busy with writting another orginal novel to be released in August. So it will be finished i just have to work it into my other writings. thank you so much for reading and reviewing it! I deal with an editor trust me harsh is the norm for me, but she is the greatest and i wouldn't have it any other way. I will see about putting you out of your misery very soon. And yes thank you, Mocked by Destiny has done quite well concidering it ws my first, Am hoping Mocked by Faith does just as well. :)
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Hi, Just recently found this story and have really enjoyed it...I thought it would be a simple human kidnapping story, never considering it would be vampires behind it, so that was a great twist. Glad Edward and Bella finally got together, and that she made it thru her transition okay... can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
Whoopee!!!!! I was afraid you were going to be one of those authors that decided they didn't want to write anymore and just leave the story hanging. This is one fantastic chapter. I loved it that Edward and Bella finally got to make love, that was so sweet. Go Alice, damn that little pixie can get down right vicious, haha. I also love the way Jake was able to control Stella when she woke up, damn that boy is smart.
Thank you for continuing this awesome story and this wonderful chapter. I hope Santa was good to you.
Happy Holidays to you and all your loved ones.
Never! i care too much about my fans to torture you like that. I was just too swamped with my first original story being published in February to get anything else done. there was also the issue that i have 12 or 14 fanfiction stories running so i had to catch up on all of them one at a time. I also have two more orginal books that are scheduled to be published in the next year, but i plan on stocking up on the chapters so i have them to send out slowly once my break is over.
I promise more to come real soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Happy Holidays to you and yours as well!
Michele / Nails233
Date: 25 Dec 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yes, this was worth the wait. I love that two being changed at the same time with all POVs. Excellent chapter. BTW good luck on your book. I will be on of the first to purchase it when it comes out.
I cannot Thank you enough for being one of my fans! I have read all your reviews and look forward to seeing more from you. I will make sure to announce the date as it gets closer to my release date. I hope you have a Wonderful Holiday season! Nails233
Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
I really love this story. I just started reading it last night and I can't stop! Oh well, I guess dusting and cleaning can wait...lol Thanks!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I say the same about my house cleaniing everytime i write! LOL
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
WOW - he did take alot of girls...
I love how Jake imprinted on Stella - perfect :)
I'm reading this in my iphone as well & it wont let me leave reviews!
I'll have to go back & review if I get to the end of a chapter :)
I love this story - you have me hook, line & sinker!
Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bree - who is she with now?
I'm glad Bella & Stella have got there homes sorted out...
Only to get better - well, I hope so...
Thank you for all your reviews! I am glad you were recomended to my story! I hope you continue to enjoy it. there is still so much more to come.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 4
I just can't imagine the readjusting these girls are going to have to deal with & how long it will take to reeducate them.
Amazing story - I have to say once again :)
Got my heart beating so fast reading this :)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
I like the story and hope that you continue it to its completion.
Thank you for all your reviews. I am sorry it took so long to get back to you, but I do apprciate everyone of them! Happy reading!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can only imagine how tough this would be for Edward to have to re-train Bella. I mean, it goes completely against his nature to order her around as she is his mate and all he wants to do is everything for her to make her happy. It is going to be interesting to see how Bella comes around. Stella too if she is going to remain much in this story.
Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am liking the story so far. You never really read a story with Alistair in it so it is already different than what I have read before. So, curious to see where you are going with this story. How Bella and the other girls came to be with Alistair and the lack. How the girl's are going to recover from being abused for so long. I think this all has the makings of a very interesting story.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 18
but we don't have to wayt much?right? ***bats her eyelashes shamelessly***
Ah, now that is really a good question. And the answer is the next chapter is already written. Now it up to the Beta to send it back.
Thank you for reading and reviewing it!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Alec can´t destroy his twin. He will take Bree to Volterra and Aro will allow them to live ....ever after.... Jane will accept Bree, torture her now and then for fun and games .......and otherwise be a good girl. for her beloved Aro...because this is about Edward and Bella! And as much as I love Alec.
My brother would not kill me because of one bad decission in life. And I am not nearly 600years old. LOL
I can't give away too much, but i think the twist i have planned will shock everyone! Dont fret it will be worth the wait. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Come on, the Volturi are not that bad! Edward did not follow the rules. Why do they always want "help" from Alec, cutting of senses - but otherwise blame him as witchtwin??? He has feelings, ya know!
Here ist comes, my dark side!!! Still love the story. (I usually read dark Volturi stories; :O)
But you post whatever you like and I will wait for updates and maybe one of your other stories is any good?!
Thank you again for your review! Next two chapters are being beta'd and i will post as soon as possible.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
hey....are you going to update? i want to read more this is so good. jane and the volturi. that bitch...lmamo
Thank you so much for your reviews. Yes, I have two chapters at the beta's to be gone over. As soon as they come back I will post them immediately. After consulting the readers they have made my choice for me, so it will definately continue its course. This is far from the end. Thank you again!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 17
That vision of Alice's can't come about, nonononononono. Since Bella is a mental shield someone needs to change her to a hot fierce vamp, then maybe she can throw her shield around everybody to protect them. Or maybe she can just whip the shit out of Jane, yeah I like that idea. Some payback on an evil vamp after what Alistair did to her. I wonder why Alec can't just destroy all of Jane's feelings and senses to give someone a chance to destroy her? He can do that with other vamps. Especially since Jane will destroy his mate if she gets the chance.
Thank you again for such an awesome story. Now I am waiting anxiously for the next breath-catching and/or jaw-dropping chapter. Or maybe another gigglefest like chapter 15.
The only reason Alec hasn't done anything to her is he hasn't seen her to do anything. Alice cant see what he will do until he decides and he is trying not to think about destroying his twin sister. So we have to wait for them to confront each other and then when he decides Alice will see it.
Next two chapters are done as soon as my beta sends them back I will post them. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story!
Date: 29 Sep 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
Oh My Gawd, please you have to continue this story. I love it so much. This has been the best chapter yet. I was laughing so hard I cried, "Alice and the fruit". Esme comments and Edward's reactions had me laughing so hard I had to hold my stomach. Your description of their facial expressions and inner dialog are hilarious, I love it. This is such an awesome story, different from any I've read. I really, really like that everybody is friendly and gets along. Although, I feel horrible for Seth. I hate that his father has treated him this way over something that isn't his fault.
Thanks for sharing your time, talent, and wonderful story with us. It is greatly appreciated.
Thank you for such a wonderful review! Rest assured this story will be continuing, the next two chapters are already being beta'd so when I get them back I will post them immediately! Thank you again, it's nice to hear when people like what I write.
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well, I like your funny side as well....sex is like naked wrestling! LOL.
I can see Esme furious about Edward. Good one.
And as for Bree and James....the Cullens help and fight them?
Sorry it took so long to answer your review! I have been writing up a storm over the last week. Next two chapters for this story are already done and being beta'd. Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue to follow it!
Date: 26 Sep 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 11
Seth was changed and now his dad doesn´t want him back - thats soo sad.
I really like this story! The only thing I thought was strange was the Walmart bit. Isabella feels inferior because of her clothes....
I guess Isabella goes thought a lot of emotional changes and she does not unterstand.....but would she really act like that with her Master? It´s almost like blackmailing...... Nevermind - thats just me: I coulnd care less for designer clothes and shopping in general.
I like the dark side of this story. It is not easy but you did a great job so far!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 17
wow that was one hell of a vision! poor alice to have to see it all. sometimes knowing the future is a heavy burden to carry. i wonder what they will do to change things?
Thank you again for all your reviews! The good thing about Alice's vivsion is once you see it it's like the story of a butterfly wings. one flutter can change everything. Unfortunately she has to relive it until the one thing does change it. I dont know about Alice but I cried writting it, Thanks again!
Date: 03 Sep 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
did i miss something? how did bella get the claw marks? where on her head are they? who gave them to her?
i wonder what bree will do?
Thanks for the reviews. as for your question Bella did it to herself when she was locked in the closet her scratching when the fabric touched her. Thanks for reading it!
Date: 02 Sep 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 9
well shit eh eddie? eddie needs his gaurd up at all times with bella. she is so unsure and insecure about everything, there is no room for eddie to make even the smallest mistake. i wonder if bella will talk to stella? will stella be able to explain?
Date: 01 Sep 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
So awful to see everything be a huge deal for bella, things that 'normal people' don't even think about are panic inducing for her
Thank you for review each chapter! I am glad you chose to read my story. This was my first shot at the darkside, I hope you are still enjoying it.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Question why is eddie, I'm assuming it's eddie, keep coming in her room? How old is bella now? When she was taken?
sorry it so long to get back to you i am sure by now you have figured out that bella was taken when she was 8 ind is now 18 he held her for 10 years. Thank you for reading and reviewing it.
Date: 28 Aug 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
This chapter was not what I thought it would be. Hopefully the Cullens wil not die.
I am sorry if you didn't like it. As for them dying? I couldn't do that then the story would end. And sadly at that. I had a hard time writing it as a vision. Thank you for reading it.