Date: 21 Nov 2014 4:34 PM Title: TPOV
Waiting for you to update this story
Date: 15 May 2013 8:06 AM Title: TPOV
WoW! I Was really getting into this story and now it's over, Please tell me you
are going to write more chapters,pleaseee!!
Date: 12 Oct 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Food for thought, this is from your own author's page; "Things I hate: Awesome Fanfiction that goes unfinished" ........hmmmmm I think that is rather interesting, since this story has not been update in such a long time. I'm looking forward to a new update some time, hopefully.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 9:01 AM Title: TPOV
Hello,
I just found your story and I LOVE IT!!! So good! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon?????
M. Scragz
Date: 22 Sep 2012 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story so far. Really wish you would continue. Please!!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:39 PM Title: TPOV
Your story had so much potential- I really hope you continue. I'm really enjoying your mysterious Edward. Please update soon.
Date: 01 Sep 2012 12:01 PM Title: TPOV
okay... thanks to share:)
xxx
see ya
Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 12
it was Funny:) go go Bella!!!
thanks
xxx
Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks:)
Poor Bella it's too much in one day...
xxx
Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks to share
i love the change in the air:)
xxx
Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well I read your fic last night in one sitting ... and I loved :)...the idea is very good and I really hope that this will turn into something more vanilla or mixed but not Bella Sumin, it will change here :)
xxx
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:39 AM Title: TPOV
Hi there,
I am following this story and just wondered are you going to update it ? Or not ? Will be patiently waiting for your reply. it's really capturing. I hope your reply is possitive .
Date: 15 Aug 2012 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
will you continue the story or will it be forever unfinished?
Date: 03 Jul 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting. 'Just wondering if you still plan to update, or if this is it? Thanks.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:46 AM Title: TPOV
Hope to hear more of this story
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Pick up the pace, please
Date: 10 Jun 2012 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hmmm...here's a thought, "call yogur father!" you know, the one that's a cop with a gun .
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Why was she snooping around his house? And why wasn't the playroom locked?
Date: 10 Jun 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh dear, where can she be? (now she decides to leave?)
Date: 10 Jun 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Glad to find you here at WCS I couldn't review at fun, codes never worked. Really like the story so far.
Date: 04 May 2012 6:55 PM Title: TPOV
Is this story over?
Date: 08 Jan 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
This ist such a great story - please continue it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Nov 2011 2:17 AM Title: TPOV
Love this story and your characters. Hope you update soon. Thanks.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
LMAO I love the fact that the Volvo met it's match. That'll let Edward know the BEAST cannot be killed! bwhahahahha, i bet the Airbags totally went off. Seriously they probably just *poof'd* at even a low speed crash. LOL tee hee. Poor Jasper, serves him right hahaha.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh My Word... I totally forgot about Tanya! BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! Great sofa king great! LOL
Date: 20 Aug 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Yikes! I was wondering why Edward hadn't called Tanya and told her not to come this weekend. What a mess!
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Is it wrong that I really liked how your Bella equated seeing the "play"/torture room with the attacks from Peter and Tanya. Let's not forget the break-in, too?
It's a Bella who knows to be afraid of Edward, without excusing it away because of an electric connection.
Thank you.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
I know you are writing Edward as a Dominant. But, I wonder why your Edward can't tell the difference between being a Dom with a Sub with a contract and functioning on a "normal" level with a non-participant? He can't even comprehend that Bella had been sexually attacted twice in one day. It's kind of creeping me out. Obviously you don't have to be a sparkly vampire to be completely out of touch with human behavior.
But, I bet I am totally jumping the gun and should just trust that all will be revealed in due time. You're that good of an author.
Thank You.
Date: 30 Jul 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 13
This review is for the entire story. It has numerous twists and turns. It is well written. I am looking forward to more chapters.
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:56 AM Title: TPOV
We really cant wait for the update!! We hope Bella getsw a better view of the d/s lifestyle and come to be a submissive and like it.. we hope edward does not change and remains the dom.. we are glad that tanya is gone.. we think edward should have told tanya to leave along time ago!! You are amazing and we love this story!! We cant wait for many long updates.. what an amazing writer and author you are!! Your adoring fans, The Fanfic Girls Reading Group here atthe university of El Paso, Texas.. UTEP!! Maureen, Gina , Denise , Larissa, Jackie , Rita, Bailey, Irene, Opal, Carey, Pauline and the rest of us. and me.. Teewhy1977
Date: 20 May 2011 3:07 PM Title: TPOV
Please post the next chapter soon! I'm anxious to move forward and have more Bella and Edward interaction.
Date: 19 May 2011 3:10 AM Title: TPOV
just one more reason why an emotionally one sided relationship is a bad idea.
Date: 19 May 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
charlie is sounding like a pretty cool dad, not quite as bad as bella made him out to be. wonder what eddie's reaction to the car is gonna be? will bella get to talk to jasper?
Date: 19 May 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh poor bella she is going craaazy! i bet she just ran into a stranger!
Date: 16 May 2011 9:51 AM Title: TPOV
OMG that women has head issues Why are there women out there that think forcing men to like them is the answer I will never get it If it's not there move on why stay Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....
Date: 15 May 2011 1:51 PM Title: TPOV
Thanks for the update!
Date: 14 May 2011 12:39 PM Title: TPOV
Hmm... I think I understand where she's coming from... but in their kind of relationship it is not up to her to set things up. I'm not surprised Edward was so angry. I look forward to more. Thanks for the update.
Date: 13 May 2011 2:16 PM Title: TPOV
dont really understand this chap
Date: 13 May 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOVE LOVE it so far
Date: 12 May 2011 1:54 PM Title: TPOV
Thanks for the update. Really looking forward to reading what's going on with B & E.
Jasper is quite the numbskull, I wonder what E. is going to do to him.
Date: 12 May 2011 6:37 AM Title: TPOV
Hmm, more diabolical than I suspected it would be. Love it. She's almost fitting for Edward, as he's rather sneaky himself.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 12 May 2011 5:10 AM Title: TPOV
Make me feel sorry for Tanya she is lost and doesnt know what to do because he doesnt look at her like he looks at Bella. Thanks for the update.
Date: 12 May 2011 3:23 AM Title: TPOV
well tanya is oblivious to everything !
Date: 12 May 2011 2:59 AM Title: TPOV
This is GOOD!!! I hope Edwards comes clean with her, we all know they want eachother. She is confused....Tanya ?I feel we haven't heard the end of her yet!!! I can't wait for more updates!!!!
Date: 12 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: TPOV
Almost forgot about this storyline.....thanks for updating.
Tanya knew exactly what she was doing. She saw Edwards attention was drawn away from her and not just in an amusing little side line form of preoccupation. She saw his intent.....she could read him almost as well as he read her body language. This was a deceitful attempt to get back at him, toy with his new interst so he would have to act; take the dominant role out of the closet and show his true colors in from of Bella. She received the fruits of her labor, just not in the mannor she expected. Bye-bye, to-da-lu, see ya later, nana nana nana nana hey hey good-bye. lol Something tells me we haven't seen the last of her though.
Edward is an enimga to me.....he started out all playful, friendly and fun; then he does this 180 and becomes all controlling on Bella. I think I would be a bit skepical, not to mention paranoid.
Looking forward to more
Date: 12 May 2011 1:48 AM Title: TPOV
she has serious issues.....crazy witch!
Date: 12 May 2011 1:05 AM Title: TPOV
To realize your feelings will not be returned hurts. To see the person you want wanting someone else can make you take harsh and wrong choices. That's what might be going on with Tanya. She will regret it.
Date: 12 May 2011 12:14 AM Title: TPOV
Tanya was always crazy and ths just proved it... sad, but true... Crazy that she thought that she could force someone into a fling and sad that she thought Edward wanted more from her.
Date: 11 May 2011 11:59 PM Title: TPOV
'Tis a dark and scary place, her mind. She is bat shit crazy to have thought her idea would work and that he wouldn't do EXACTLY what he did!
Date: 11 May 2011 11:32 PM Title: TPOV
Cant wait for chapter 14
Date: 11 May 2011 10:54 PM Title: TPOV
Skankya is so delusional.
Date: 07 May 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm hoping E's still in Chi town & won't be waiting @ Bella's apartment when she returns to Seatle
I'm hoping you'll continue with this story, I like the premiss and what I've read so far;D
Date: 07 May 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
uh oh, Hope you can update again soon, I'm missing this story. Thanks for writing, though;D)
Date: 05 May 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 13
I thought Jasper was more than a little clueless, but it fits the plot.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella is getting very paranoid. Edward wouldn't be following her if she would talk to him. She really should not have his house. He didn't do anything to her.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
I would like to hear Tanya's POV. Jasper is in deep shit with Edward not only for his Volvo but for getting caught. What is going to happen with her ex-boss???? I was so excited to see you updated it has been a bit of time I have missed you. I hope to get update soon Thanks.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm so glad your continuing with this story, I really do enjoy it. Ha ha Loved the part of Bella using her truck as a battering ram. Cannot wait to read more.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really enjoyed this chapter and would like a Tayna pov. Bella is so jumpy but then from her pov you cannot really blame her. Edward is so stalkerish, she is so jumpy how does he plan to tell her he wants her as a sub.? LOL. I wonder if he will get a face full of pepper spray? He might. LOL
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, I guess Edward is finally going to get Bella to talk to him! *smirks* He just may not like what she has to say. Maybe she'll be worked up enough to fess up to what she saw in his home that made her run and hide.
Somehow, I suspect Edward might be more angry that Jasper got caught than the damage to the Volvo. I shall certainly be eager to see if I am right about any of this.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm so glad you're back to writing this! There are so many unanswered questions. I can't wait to read more!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good to know she was right! I hope she can get some answers from either Jasper or Edward. He's obviously not going to leave her alone, so perhaps she should just confront him, in a public place, with lots of witnesses if she wants to leave.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella, she had a hell of a bad day.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
You have something written in Tpov?? I want to read it please! :)
I cant wait for the next update! Please don't make us wait this long again!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
I have been trying to review on ff but its throwing a fit.
Loved the chapter. Loved that he went looking for her.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
well i think the car deserved it! cnat wiat to see whats instore for her when she gets abcn to seattle!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well, shoot! I saw there were 16 cpts over here and thought I got lucky but I see cpt 13 posted a few times...oh well...can't win them all!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
just found this and I am enjoying the story. It seems that chapter 13 was posted 3 times. Looking forward to reading how Bella found the playroom - any why was it unlocked? Perhaps Tanya had gotten it ready on Friday, before Edward and Bella arrived?
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
It's WONDERFUL to see a new chapter! Thank you. Looking forward to lots more.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
glad your back :)
I love how Bella ruined the car. post soon
Date: 11 Apr 2011 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
Happy for an update! Great chapter! Love this story!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
thanks good chapters glade your back
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
I know Edward wants Bella, but even as a dom this is not the way to win her
but love bella crash the volvo jejej
and yes wath about Tanya, does edward already finish their arrangement?
also can i have tanyas pov
thank u for this lovely story
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
oh i think Edward will find her before she gets back to Seattle......
Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ohhh I loved it! I can only imagine how Eddie boy will react!!! It will be so fraking cool!!
Shit... i think I spend too much time with my boyfriend I am starting to sound like him....
lol
I loved it!
xoxo
Marianne
Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thrilled to see an update. I'm really enjoying your story.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Finally! So glad you are continuing this story. Waiting with much anticipation to find out what is next. Thanks and keep writing. Carol
Date: 11 Apr 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmmm wonder how suspicious Charlie is gonna be now
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
So does this mean we are going to be getting regular updates now????? Ok Jasper, who knew? I thought it was Edward. Well I am sure Edward is going to be pissed about his car. But what did he expect. I thought it was pretty funny actually. Poor Jasper is going to get a new asshole turn into him. LOL
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
Glad for the update! So the pepper spray might get a little work out? I like that she isn't all swept up into him but is (rightly so) freaked out!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Nice to hear from you again!!! You've been missed, and the story too!!!
So Bella wasn't so wrong, someone had been following her. The confirmation, didn't help much though, it's making her even more paranoid and worried. And now that she knows that Edward probably knows too it was her who hit his car, she is going to be even worse. What about him? Will he go looking for her or wait for her in Seattle? And what about Jasper? He was just trying to help his friend, again. I don't think he will agree to it next time, if it involves Bella. ;)
Don't be a stranger for so long!!! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh so happy your back with another chapter! I know that RL can get sticky sometimes, but for whatever reason... its a non issue, I love this story and can't wait to see what you have planned... I have been patient and hope that all is well and your able to write now...
Jasper, no didn't think it was Jasper following her. Surprisingly Charlie believed her story. Hummmm didn't full understand that she did see his playroom and Yeah! I guess it could be scary if she was unaware... Edward is such a georgeous and good guy I hope she gives him a chance, I think he could bring her to great heights and pleasure, lets face it... Our Bella could use some pleasure in her life.
Anxious for more!!!! Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
loved it very much and I would love to hear T's back story thanks and see you next update.....
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
I would love to see Tanya's POV.
That seems a bit out of character for Jasper to be cursing at Bella. They have to realize that she will act out after what she has discovered....
Best Part:
“Charlie-” I ignored his grumble. “What should someone do if they are being followed?”
“By?”
What did he think I was talking about, a dog? “A person,” I said slowly.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
love it,,please continue
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
First of all , please let me explain I am in love with and obsessed with this story. It is so awesome. I am praying fiercely that you will be kind enough to finish it.
I adore Domward and this Bella is innocently mesmerizing.
Question please. When did Bella find the playroom. It was a huge jump from chapter 10 to chapter 11. Because there was never any mention of her exploreing Edwards house.
I am also reading PSO and it is good, but I think this one is better. So I am seriously dying for an update. Domward could have me anytime, hell yes.
You are an amazing writer who really knows how to draw your audience into your stories. Your character developement is amazing and so realistic. Showing their strengths, insecurities, confusion, fears, desires, etc. Very, very, well developed and written. So I am completely frothing at the mouth just waiting for the next update.
Thank you so much for sharing your Awesome story with us, I sincerely appreciate it.
I tried to review at FF, but all I kept getting was an error message. So I guess FF is at it again. In case it isn't obvious Domward is my favorite. Along with Darkward, Mobward, Inkward, etc. I like my Edward dark and dominate, that is very, very sexy.
Keep up the fantastic job and again Thank You.
hugz
Date: 06 Apr 2011 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
Your story is intriguing...I hope you will update soon!
Date: 05 Apr 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
edward sweet in here but he is too shy or ,....that doesnt say his feeling toward bella. peter use bella to her advantures
you know its better not to tell anybody what you have and what you dont have so people dont get used you . in bad way