Date: 12 Oct 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
Food for thought, this is from your own author's page; "Things I hate: Awesome Fanfiction that goes unfinished" ........hmmmmm I think that is rather interesting, since this story has not been update in such a long time. I'm looking forward to a new update some time, hopefully.
Date: 09 Sep 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
LMAO I love the fact that the Volvo met it's match. That'll let Edward know the BEAST cannot be killed! bwhahahahha, i bet the Airbags totally went off. Seriously they probably just *poof'd* at even a low speed crash. LOL tee hee. Poor Jasper, serves him right hahaha.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
Is it wrong that I really liked how your Bella equated seeing the "play"/torture room with the attacks from Peter and Tanya. Let's not forget the break-in, too?
It's a Bella who knows to be afraid of Edward, without excusing it away because of an electric connection.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
I know you are writing Edward as a Dominant. But, I wonder why your Edward can't tell the difference between being a Dom with a Sub with a contract and functioning on a "normal" level with a non-participant? He can't even comprehend that Bella had been sexually attacted twice in one day. It's kind of creeping me out. Obviously you don't have to be a sparkly vampire to be completely out of touch with human behavior.
But, I bet I am totally jumping the gun and should just trust that all will be revealed in due time. You're that good of an author.
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:56 AM Title: TPOV
We really cant wait for the update!! We hope Bella getsw a better view of the d/s lifestyle and come to be a submissive and like it.. we hope edward does not change and remains the dom.. we are glad that tanya is gone.. we think edward should have told tanya to leave along time ago!! You are amazing and we love this story!! We cant wait for many long updates.. what an amazing writer and author you are!! Your adoring fans, The Fanfic Girls Reading Group here atthe university of El Paso, Texas.. UTEP!! Maureen, Gina , Denise , Larissa, Jackie , Rita, Bailey, Irene, Opal, Carey, Pauline and the rest of us. and me.. Teewhy1977
Date: 16 May 2011 9:51 AM Title: TPOV
OMG that women has head issues Why are there women out there that think forcing men to like them is the answer I will never get it If it's not there move on why stay Thanks for sharing this with us and update when you can....
Date: 12 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: TPOV
Almost forgot about this storyline.....thanks for updating.
Tanya knew exactly what she was doing. She saw Edwards attention was drawn away from her and not just in an amusing little side line form of preoccupation. She saw his intent.....she could read him almost as well as he read her body language. This was a deceitful attempt to get back at him, toy with his new interst so he would have to act; take the dominant role out of the closet and show his true colors in from of Bella. She received the fruits of her labor, just not in the mannor she expected. Bye-bye, to-da-lu, see ya later, nana nana nana nana hey hey good-bye. lol Something tells me we haven't seen the last of her though.
Edward is an enimga to me.....he started out all playful, friendly and fun; then he does this 180 and becomes all controlling on Bella. I think I would be a bit skepical, not to mention paranoid.
Looking forward to more
Date: 12 Apr 2011 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
I would like to hear Tanya's POV. Jasper is in deep shit with Edward not only for his Volvo but for getting caught. What is going to happen with her ex-boss???? I was so excited to see you updated it has been a bit of time I have missed you. I hope to get update soon Thanks.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really enjoyed this chapter and would like a Tayna pov. Bella is so jumpy but then from her pov you cannot really blame her. Edward is so stalkerish, she is so jumpy how does he plan to tell her he wants her as a sub.? LOL. I wonder if he will get a face full of pepper spray? He might. LOL
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well, I guess Edward is finally going to get Bella to talk to him! *smirks* He just may not like what she has to say. Maybe she'll be worked up enough to fess up to what she saw in his home that made her run and hide.
Somehow, I suspect Edward might be more angry that Jasper got caught than the damage to the Volvo. I shall certainly be eager to see if I am right about any of this.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good to know she was right! I hope she can get some answers from either Jasper or Edward. He's obviously not going to leave her alone, so perhaps she should just confront him, in a public place, with lots of witnesses if she wants to leave.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 11 Apr 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 13
just found this and I am enjoying the story. It seems that chapter 13 was posted 3 times. Looking forward to reading how Bella found the playroom - any why was it unlocked? Perhaps Tanya had gotten it ready on Friday, before Edward and Bella arrived?
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 13
I know Edward wants Bella, but even as a dom this is not the way to win her
but love bella crash the volvo jejej
and yes wath about Tanya, does edward already finish their arrangement?
also can i have tanyas pov
thank u for this lovely story
Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ohhh I loved it! I can only imagine how Eddie boy will react!!! It will be so fraking cool!!
Shit... i think I spend too much time with my boyfriend I am starting to sound like him....
I loved it!
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
So does this mean we are going to be getting regular updates now????? Ok Jasper, who knew? I thought it was Edward. Well I am sure Edward is going to be pissed about his car. But what did he expect. I thought it was pretty funny actually. Poor Jasper is going to get a new asshole turn into him. LOL
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Nice to hear from you again!!! You've been missed, and the story too!!!
So Bella wasn't so wrong, someone had been following her. The confirmation, didn't help much though, it's making her even more paranoid and worried. And now that she knows that Edward probably knows too it was her who hit his car, she is going to be even worse. What about him? Will he go looking for her or wait for her in Seattle? And what about Jasper? He was just trying to help his friend, again. I don't think he will agree to it next time, if it involves Bella. ;)
Don't be a stranger for so long!!! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh so happy your back with another chapter! I know that RL can get sticky sometimes, but for whatever reason... its a non issue, I love this story and can't wait to see what you have planned... I have been patient and hope that all is well and your able to write now...
Jasper, no didn't think it was Jasper following her. Surprisingly Charlie believed her story. Hummmm didn't full understand that she did see his playroom and Yeah! I guess it could be scary if she was unaware... Edward is such a georgeous and good guy I hope she gives him a chance, I think he could bring her to great heights and pleasure, lets face it... Our Bella could use some pleasure in her life.
Anxious for more!!!! Laters BB Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
I would love to see Tanya's POV.
That seems a bit out of character for Jasper to be cursing at Bella. They have to realize that she will act out after what she has discovered....
“Charlie-” I ignored his grumble. “What should someone do if they are being followed?”
What did he think I was talking about, a dog? “A person,” I said slowly.
Date: 10 Apr 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
First of all , please let me explain I am in love with and obsessed with this story. It is so awesome. I am praying fiercely that you will be kind enough to finish it.
I adore Domward and this Bella is innocently mesmerizing.
Question please. When did Bella find the playroom. It was a huge jump from chapter 10 to chapter 11. Because there was never any mention of her exploreing Edwards house.
I am also reading PSO and it is good, but I think this one is better. So I am seriously dying for an update. Domward could have me anytime, hell yes.
You are an amazing writer who really knows how to draw your audience into your stories. Your character developement is amazing and so realistic. Showing their strengths, insecurities, confusion, fears, desires, etc. Very, very, well developed and written. So I am completely frothing at the mouth just waiting for the next update.
Thank you so much for sharing your Awesome story with us, I sincerely appreciate it.
I tried to review at FF, but all I kept getting was an error message. So I guess FF is at it again. In case it isn't obvious Domward is my favorite. Along with Darkward, Mobward, Inkward, etc. I like my Edward dark and dominate, that is very, very sexy.
Keep up the fantastic job and again Thank You.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
edward sweet in here but he is too shy or ,....that doesnt say his feeling toward bella. peter use bella to her advantures
you know its better not to tell anybody what you have and what you dont have so people dont get used you . in bad way