[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:18 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
Ohhhh CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!!!
I am scared for Bella I am sure it was James, argh! and as for his job I see that becoming an issue I sure hope that people get over it fast.
So much drama for a set of hearts that do not seem to quite beat correctly if they are not entwined.
sigh!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:28 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
so i am wondering who was in her place. i love the relationship bella has with the kids. her and bella have a great and honest relationship. i am sorry bella had to be put through the talk from esme. edward and the kids are the happiest than they have ever been. that should count for something. i guess i am just disappointed. i know being a parent you want what is best for your kids but can't she see that bella is good for the family.
ican't see what happens next. love it
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:28 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
Oh crap! Christmas was so nice and now we have to worry about Bella having a stalker? I wonder if it was James. I am glad that Edward pulled the Dom card in regards to the new locks and security system. You know, for a man who never even considered the lifestyle, he is a fantastic Dom to Bella.
The scene in his parents house was unbelievably kinky and hot! And I love his tattoo!!! That is too cool. I think it was awesome that he admited that he couldn't get the thought of marrying her out of his head. And I also thought it was awesome how he told Esme off. I understand her need to protect her son, but he is of an age that she should be able to trust his good judgement (prior marriage aside).
Author's Response:
Bella was very right inher first assessment of him - that he already had most of the important traits that make a good Dom - especially wanting her safe.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:28 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
Great chapter as usual. I can understand a mother being protective but Esme was way out of line.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:17 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
I really hope that Bella left behind the 1st Edition book from Esme. I certainly would have. I also would never accept another gift or presnt from her in the future. Ever.
It seems as though creepy James was at Bella's. I hope someone beats him into a vegetative state at the next play party....
Best Parts:
The kids ran around the tree to get the present for Carlisle and Esme, it was from Bella and them. Esme gasped after she opened the box., on top was an antique silver picture frame that had been converted to a digital frame and it was filled with pictures of the kids taken over the last six months. What she pulled out next surprised me, it was a framed sketch of one of my favorite pictures of me with the kids. Bella took it when we went to Seattle for her birthday, we were at the park and I was lying under the tree and each of the kids had their heads on my chest lying on their backs and we all had our eyes closed, we all looked very relaxed.I realize you may not believe this but I had no idea Edward was a trust fund baby until we were on the plane to come here and I offered to sign any papers necessary to prove to...whoever that I didn't want his money. He refused to do that but, I don't think you will. Have the papers drawn up Mrs. Cullen, I don't know that Edward and I will ever marry or have kids of our own but I want you assured of the knowledge that even if we did I would not get a penny of his money or yours. I want to build a life with Edward, he is my reward. To me he is priceless. I will leave my address in Seattle in the room I am staying in, send me the papers. I won't lie to Edward if he outright asks me but I also can't hurt him by offering the information that his mother thinks the only he has to offer me, a gold-digging whore, is his money."
"If you send her those papers I will never forgive you. I will remove myself and the children from your life. I can not believe some of the things I heard you say." "I meant what I said about those papers, if you send them to her I will cut off all contact. I have already chosen Bella, do not force me to prove that fact to you."
"Are you sure you like this stuff B.? I mean I can talk to Dad about the presents he gets you." I will not have her hurt you like that. I told her not to send those papers, if she does I expect you to give them to me. Do you understand Isabella?" The kids told us about what they had done on the flight to Seattle and Evan kept questioning Bella about the ballet to be sure she enjoyed it. At 8 he just did not understand how someone would willingly go to that type of thing. I told her to call Charlie and she didn't want to worry him over nothing so I called him myself. He agreed with me that she should not dismiss it so lightly, which is why I had just received an angry text.
Author's Response:
Some of my favorites too.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
Wow, that was incredible, as always :) I must admit, that my family is just like the Cullen family on Christmas morning, we wake up before dawn to open presents (mostly because my brother and I can never fall asleep on Christmas Eve.). Sadly, in years past we have had to open them at around 9:30 because my mom works Christmas Eve nights and usually isn't home until then. Anyway, WOW, Mrs. Cope? I am very nervous now about Bella and Edward. Also, I wonder who was in Bella's apartment? Wonder how the play party will go? hehe, CANNOT wait for that :) Loved it so much!
Author's Response:
All good questions - thanks for reading!
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:02 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
Nosy fuckers why can't people just keep their noses out of other peoples business.
Totally love this story can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:57 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year
loved it i feel bad for how bella was treated by esme and i bet it was james at her place really good chapter
Date: 18 Jul 2010 2:35 PM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
love the story and i so totally agree with how you see bellas interactions with alice and rose..... very good character interepation in my opinion.. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2010 6:11 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
great chap
Date: 17 Jul 2010 3:31 PM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
OMG i love your stories and this is the best one i have read yet though i found some more on your profile i am dying to read. Can't wait to see where you take this story hope this is going to follow them to chicago and after. i would dearly love to see them have kids.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2010 2:04 PM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
Cool chapter. I think it is the first time, that I read a story, in which Alice and Rosalie are so unsupportive. Normally they are always on cloud nine with Bella, but here they act totally stupid. They should give Bella and Edward the benefit of a doubt and try to be happy for them.
The "love triangle" of Charlie, Sue and Edward is kind of funny, especially that there is none and Edward is dating Bella ^____^
Author's Response:
Alice & Rosalie have issues of their own and with their boyfriends, but mostly they are used to Bella just going along with whatever they want and now that she and Edward are starting to go public that is changing and they don't like it.
Also, the 3 of them had huge crushes on Edward in high school and they used to talk about him - a lot. They are shocked to see that she is actually with him considering they all used to fantaize about him.
Tanya loves to stir the pot and likes to give Edward hell, the love triangle is one example.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 17 Jul 2010 12:20 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
I wish someone would just drop a house on Tanya.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:14 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Best Part:
Charlie chuckled, “well, Bella is a smart girl.” He looked at her, “I raised her right and she knows how to take care of herself and others. She has a good head on her shoulders and sometimes I forget that, thank you for reminding me Evan.”
Evan laughed and leaned into Charlie, “That’s ok. I think my dad likes her and so do the rest of us. We want to keep her.” Charlie looked at me as I looked at my son in shock, all three of the kids were nodding their heads and I had no idea what to say to them.
Bella came over and kneeled in front of them. “I really appreciate that, you guys, I do and I want to keep you too, but I know your dad has told you about the divorce and how it would be easier on everyone if he didn’t date until after it is final.” They nodded again. “So, why don’t wait to talk about this until I come home after school is out?” They nodded so eagerly this time I thought their heads might pop off.
Author's Response:
Kids have a way of cutting to the heart of things - thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:02 PM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
great chapter!! I love how Edward and Bella are blending their lives together. How much longer does she have to go in uni?
Author's Response:
She will have her Bachelor's at the end of the third year. Some of her classes her last quarter will count towards her Master's which she will have at the end of the fourth year. Bella is pushing herself hard to get her degree's because she & Edward know they will probably have to move to gain acceptence. They don't want to but are planning for it to be on the safe side.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:18 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
That was amazing, I am so happy that Bella and Edward are working towards going public. I am also happy the children accept Bella as Edward's girlfriend. I wonder what will happen within the next 6 months besides Bella's graduation. I wonder how Edward will reward her for that ;) Also, wonder what Bella did for that time between the opera and Thanksgiving without Big Eddie?
Author's Response:
Bella was able to keep her other toys - she just had to work harder for the big 'O'.
Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:39 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
Good chapter.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:32 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
DING DONG THE WITCH IS DEAD! Or in our case divorced,same thing...
Anyways loved this chapter just like I loved the seven before it and will probably continue to love the however many your story will end up having.
Take pity on us fanfic junkies and give us our next dose aka UPDATE SOON!
xoxo
NaMaDRI
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:39 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
Love it! totally
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:26 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
i can't belive what bitches rose and alice are being to bella i loved it
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:38 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
That would be a fun few weeks adding fuel to the fire of everyones assumptions. I don't understand why Alice and Rose can't just be happy for Bella she likes her life and her relationship with Edward.
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:30 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
I am so disappointed in Rose and Alice. They are not being good friends to Bella.
Tanya is up to something, but then again isn't she always??? I am glad that Charlie and Sue were there for Thanksgiving. I felt really bad for Sue though. What is Seth thinking...
I can't wait to see what is next!! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Seth is thinking with the wrong head and likes having what he sees as a hot older woman with him.
Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:22 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
man what a chapter. i am disappointed in alice and rose. it is too bad that can't be there for bella. she has always been a friend through thick and thin and this is how they show there appreciation. man i am glad she told them to leave. i love the kids reaction over bella. the opera was great. i love bella's comments but it is too bad she went against edward and got punished. poor big eddie was neglected there for awhile. tanya you are a skank and you proved even more by being disrespectful to seth's mom. man seth grow some balls and get a better girlfriend. i so love it all
Author's Response:
Thanks and thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:16 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
OMG, this was so good. Rose and Alice suprised the heck out of me. Get over it SKANKS. Bella do your thing, oh I forget you are with or without Big Eddie. LOL! Tonya HO! HO! get a life. Ruff Ruff Sue, Charlie, and Edward.
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:14 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
Oh my word there was a whole lotta happenings in that six months. My favorite part had to be in the beginning when Edward told the kids about Bella. I loved their reaction especially when Evan wanted to get rid of the mystery girlfriend cause he wanted him with Bella. I also loved the scene in the park when Edward realized that Bella was what their family was missing.
I feel bad that Alice and Rose are behaving so terribly towards her. I thought it was awesome how Edward ripped into them at the dinner party.
I love this story! It is not only amazingly hot, but you are so creative with the ideas you put in here. I love every word!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and thanks for reading!
Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:09 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months
I think Bella should kick both Alice and Rose to the curb, they aren't real friends.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 3:15 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Wow.. what a beautiful ending to this chapter :) Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:53 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
wow this chapter is a powerful one.
i was sad to hear all the feeling s the kids had bottled up and shared witht he doctor. i love the talk charlie had with edward. he is just a concerned father looking out for the happiness in his daughter. edward understands. how funny the master how to tell her to stay put. tanya is such a waste of a human space. man being with all those underaged boys when she had a man and a good family at home that she wasted. she doesn't deserve them and i am glad the judge saw that right away. i also loved the lemon at the end. all those emotions she was able to share with edward and show him how she felt. hot, hot, and steamy hot. love it all
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 1:31 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
That was the most inspiring chapter that I have ever read. Even if it is fiction it is real on some level or what any one would want to hear. Those words were to die for!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 11:06 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
This has been a roller coaster ride. Those poor kids!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2010 9:10 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
Priceless!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2010 12:05 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:45 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Edward had to wait, for a long, long time. He knew that if he was to get what he wanted, there was no other way. It proved to be the right choice. Slowly but steadily, things worked out to his advantage, he has to feel so proud, of him, his kids, and Bella. They all have endured a lot, especially the kids, but in the end, it is turning out for the better.
But it's not all good yet, they still have to share their relationship with their families and the community, something that will not be easy, at all. There might be harsh consequences, but just as it has gone so far, on the long end, it will be for the best.
I am really looking forward to see what the kids reactions will be.
Author's Response:
Edward is very proud on the kids and Bella and also his relationship with Bella. They both knew from the start that only totally honesty would see them through this and it hasn't always been easy but it has always worked for them.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:04 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Charlie was going to realize things sooner or later, yes, it wasn't under the best circumstances, but as Bella said, on the bright side, it will be better as a whole. Tanya is really reckless and kind of dumb. Leaving the kids alone at night and risking such kinds of people to be able to get so close to them. Emily is smart and knew what to do, so, thankfully, it all turned for the better.
The boys are realizing more things than Bella and Edward thought they would. It isn't bad, but if they aren't careful, Tanya might try something. But with how things are now, I don't know if she will be able to accomplish much.
Author's Response:
Tanya doesn't see anything past what she wants and that makes her reckless. Edward has always been there to take care of the kids and now that he has left she has no idea how to focus on them and not herself.
Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:59 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
One thing all of them have to be grateful about is how much Emily trusts Bella. She got home, not only her father but grandmother was there, any of which would have been there for her to talk to, but she wanted Bella, fortunately she was in town. It was such a surprise for Esme and Carlisle. Edward had wanted to prove to them how good Bella is for him, this was more than enough. She is good for him and for the kids too. That has to have got her huge points with Edward's parents.
What Emily went through, sadly is not so uncommon. One of the worse things is that kids seldom talk about it. This time things were stopped before they went too far.
Author's Response:
Esme is still leary of the relationship but she does realize Bella is much more than she seems and not your average 20 year old. She is willing to see where things go and not be as judgemental.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:39 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
I really love this story you are doing such a wonderful job on it! Thank you for takign the time to share this with us all it is for sure worth reading.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:31 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
awsome story i really like it it's almost like a journal entrie thanks
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:59 AM Title: The First Six Months
Again, how old is B and what was E's age. LOL
She is way ahead of her time. Girl is amazing~
Author's Response:
They get together in June. After a few weeks Edward turns 36 and in Sept. Bella turns 19. Bella has been raised by Charlie and has been exposed to a lot through his work and she is very observant and smart.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 9:02 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
such a great way for Bella to tell him she loves him, I really enjoyed it.
thanks
Date: 09 Jul 2010 6:20 AM Title: The Second Six Months
Divorce is never an easy thing, and when kids are involved, it can be worse. Tanya is trying to hold on to the idea of a "happy family" it isn't working. She has lost her head a few times and made things worse for her. And yes, better for Edward, but with a high price. The kids are smart, and I guess they want peace and to see all this done.
As for Bella, she is smart, very smart and working hard in not leaving any loose strands that Tanya might find. There are still things out of her control and those make her nervous, like James' appearance at the party. Hopefully that will be a one time thing.
Author's Response:
Kids are very smart and pick up on so much more than adults think - I learned that when my brother divorced several years ago.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 5:28 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Holy hot sex in the movies AND in the shower AND on the boat! The things you make these two do...I am jealous of your dirty mind! ;)
I am gald things worked out with the custody and now hopefully the divorce will be finalized and Tanya will drop off the face of the earth.
Loved the conversation with Charlie. He plays a small but important role in this story.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 3:16 AM Title: Be My Master
WOW, why don't we get right down to it. You didn't cut any slack on this one. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2010 2:56 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
loved it
Date: 09 Jul 2010 1:06 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
It could happen! Good chapter. I'm surprised there was no drama with Tanya's parents.
Author's Response:
Not yet anyway??? Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 11:36 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
YUMMY!!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 9:41 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Great chapter thanks.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:31 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
Great chapter. I think they need to be worried about James' behavior. He scares me and I just hope Bella will remember that training she was telling Em because I feel that will be what happens with James. Great chapter. Thanks
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:20 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
oh my god that was such a great chapter. your best so far in my opinion. i can't tell you how much i absolutly love this story, right now i'd have to say it's my favorite.
missie
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading!
Date: 08 Jul 2010 4:11 PM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months
What an amazing chapter! So much happened. I am so glad things are tuning for our favorite couple. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 02 Jul 2010 9:05 AM Title: The Second Six Months
Tanya is a stupid slut and i hate her lol
Date: 02 Jul 2010 8:12 AM Title: Christmas Break
holly shit this stuff is hot and Tanya ia a whore.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2010 6:00 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
man tanya keeps screwing up. i would love to know what her involvement was with that guy and where the hell was she. you do not leave your kids tucked in and go out. that is just wrong. i am glad edward got temporary custody so far. i love that emily knows to call bella when she needs help. she is smart and knows who to turn to. bella is smart by being ther for the kids. it will work out. i cna't wait for the next chapter.
love it all
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 10:44 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Great story. Where is this Harry Potter thing you mentioned in your a/n? It sounds like fun. Thanks
Author's Response:
It is located at the Universal Studios theme park in Orlando Florida and it was a blast.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 6:44 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Terrific chapter! Tanya's a real piece of work..and I hope she gets what she deserves. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:36 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Tanya i don't think she will get mother of the year award lol and iam glad the kids were ok and that charlie didn't flip out too much i love this story great job
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:52 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 3:44 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
great chap!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2010 9:09 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
:)
Date: 28 Jun 2010 8:15 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:57 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Great chapter
Date: 28 Jun 2010 3:21 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Poor kids. No kid should ever have to wake up to something like that!!! I am glad that Bella was there for them when Edward couldn't be. Charlie took things better then I thought he might, but I think Evan made Charlie think twice about how to handle things.
Great job...I can't wait for more...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
The most innocent but insightful things really do come from children. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:28 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
I love it! This story keeps gettign better and better. I knew Charlie would support her choices. I cannot wait to see where this goes from here! This is one really great story! Keep up the great job and post again soon please.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:24 AM Title: Christmas Break
It's wonderful to see how well they get along with each other. How easily they fall into both routines, how much they enjoy them and how well they complement each other.
They are good together, they know it and value it, that is very important. They are also moving along with their relationship, out and in the community. The play party will be interesting....
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2010 4:12 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Bella is one smart cookie. And I love how the kids 'want to keep her'. They may not know the extent of the relationship, but I'll bet those kids are guessing that their dad has a crush on Bella.
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:50 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year
Wow, that was incredible! I am so happy Edward's divorce is almost final, I can almost taste it :) I loved every bit of this chapter, thank you so much for updating so quickly (after your trip that is)!! I loved that Edward is getting a tattoo too, but will he have to change it when they get married? Really incredible job, love it! Cannot wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 10:16 PM Title: Be My Master
Wow...that was great!!!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:19 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
crazy hot and sexy
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 8:14 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
Loving this story and have a great time at Harry Potter world! yay you!
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:20 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
This chapter was amazing (as always). I am so happy Emily is getting closer to Bella and is getting help from Rose. I really hope Edward finds a way to get full custody ASAP! Wonder what will happen next for these two?
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:55 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
:-)
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:08 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
i so love this story. my goodness you keep us on our toes. wow their sex lives is outrageous. i bet everyone wished they got down and dirty and had as many orgasms ans they two do. love it
I think one of my favorites is bella meeting them all in the diner and putting tanya in her place. and poor seth like a fish out of water, tanya basically thru him out there and then wanted to kept being called mrs. cullen. man if i where seth i'd be pissed she was suppose to be with him not mr cullen. edward wasn't jealous. and yeah when she does find out abouth the two of them she will be seething. love it
poor emily what happened to her. i am so glad she has bella and rose and that she trust bella and believe's she will be there to help her. i am glad charlie did as bella asked and got things taken care and spared emily as being the snitch. she did the right thing. I really love it thanx
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:58 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
Good chapter, couldn't Tanya's income coem from selling drugs? That would get Edward full custody.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:18 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
god i love it i can't wait for more. i hope that tanya gets whats coming to her.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 8:11 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
Wow a lot went on in this chapter. I have to say without Bella, Edward would be so lost. Thank goodness for her. Poor Emily, I just hate Tanya even more after this. Funny how her lawyer is related to one of the boys who attacked her. I would if that would be of some help to Edward in court when Tanya drags him in
Date: 13 Jun 2010 8:01 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
really good chapter!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:43 PM Title: Be My Master
Wow...you have my interest! Great job...thanks!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:34 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
Wonderful chapter! I hope you have a wonderful time at Harry Potter World!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 7:10 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
I love this story. I love the fact that even though we kinda know how it ends up from the first chapter, there are so many details that you give us from the middle.
The scene at the cabin was incredible!!! Edward is getting to be a very creative Dom. Love it!!! ;)
I also like that Bella is the first person Emily calls when she needs a female to talk to. She will probably jump for joy when Edward finally tells her the truth.
Date: 13 Jun 2010 6:50 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
oh that was a such a fantastic chapter! i cannot tell how in love with this story i am!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 3:54 AM Title: The Second Six Months
Love love love this story!!!! I want Edward as my master :) Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 06 Jun 2010 4:36 AM Title: The Second Six Months
Damn!! That was hott!! Tanya is such a bitch!! Bella is quite the vixen!! I can't wait for more!!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 10:33 PM Title: The Second Six Months
:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:32 PM Title: Be My Master
NICE and naughty ;-P
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 9:09 PM Title: The Second Six Months
smart man edward. tanya stupid
man bella and edward so hot. everyone needs an edward. are you selling him and how much. i think you would make a killing. i cna't wait to see what happens next. love it
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:26 PM Title: Christmas Break
a play party how fun. i cna't wait. these guys are so hot and so much fun. learning and enjoying everyhting. tanya you are such a skand and a stupid one at that. love it all
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 8:11 PM Title: The Second Six Months
This really good! The Bella take over scene was really really HOT!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:53 PM Title: The First Six Months
i so love it. bella is such a good person. she knows what she wants and they have fun. she knows how to please him and knows what she wants as well. they communicate, all about communication. love it
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:48 PM Title: The Second Six Months
Your doing a great job with this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you and keep reading!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:17 PM Title: Be My Master
I am so glad he got ride of the skank. she never deserve to have him. sick to get pregnant to keep someone. he was such a good father he stayed. Shame on you tanya. I so love all the research bella did. she really did her homework. it is great he also read and did his homework as she asked. he was living a dead end life. now he is happy and enjoying his life and having the best sex ever. love it, hot and wet
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:07 PM Title: The Second Six Months
That was a big chapter and i loved it james is always trouble i hope they can stop him before he does anything to hurt bella .san francisco was so hot .can't wait till the next update
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:34 PM Title: The Second Six Months
i loved this chapter! can't wait for the next one
Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:23 PM Title: The Second Six Months
Well, let hope they don't get caught. Seeing each other in Forks is a bad idea, no matter where the cabin is. Also has she been spending time with Charlie at all? Lately it seems like if she's not at school on her breaks she is with Edward. There is no problem with that but she can't forget about everyone else.
Author's Response:
She is spending time with Charlie but this being Edward's POV you don't see the time she spends with him or Rose & Alice. She spends the most time with Rose & alice because os school.
Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 6:20 PM Title: The Second Six Months
That chapter was amazing!!!! I loved how Edward protected her from James at the party. And the sex afterwards was fuck hot!!!
After reading the SF sexcapades, I need to go spend a little one on one time with the hubby!
Date: 05 Jun 2010 5:38 PM Title: The Second Six Months
That was incredible :) I loved it all :) I really like the banner or picture you have for this story!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2010 3:30 PM Title: The Second Six Months
Comments: I love this story!!! I was not sure if I would, do to him being married BUT it is so well written and with the right amount of smut ;-) and drama with the wife from hell... Thank you... looking forward to more keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you. The one-shot was written for a forbidden lemon contest and their relationship is, in the beginning, forbidden on almost every level. Thanks for reading.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:07 PM Title: Be My Master
This story is absolutely amazing and I cannot wait to see where you take us next :)
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 5:58 PM Title: Christmas Break
This story is really good! I am glad that you are sharing it. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 5:09 PM Title: Christmas Break
OME! I am so glad you decided to make this story more than a one-shot! The scene in the playroom was unbelievably hot!!! I am really enjoying this story and I love how you have written this E&B. They are a perfect match.