Date: 07 Dec 2010 2:22 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
Ohhh so cute! Update again soon please!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:52 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
This was a truely amazing chapter. Thank you for sharing this with us all. It was a fantastic read and I am excited to see what is next.
TAT~
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:03 AM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months
I'm hooked!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 12:02 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
That was incredible! I really loved it so much! Their names are beautiful! I was wondering how you were going to name them (whether stick with the "E" or a new one).
Just one quick question, this sentence says ""That's not necessary Ms. Sanders and I would feel better if you called me Mr. Cullen." but in the first (real) chapter, it says "I am 35 years old and have a PhD in Education", so doesn't that mean he should be Dr. Cullen, not Mr. Cullen? I have seen that in a few chapters but keep forgetting to mention it. So, I hope that can be cleared up soon :)
Anyway, amazing job once again, I really loved it so much and cannot wait to see their first time in the playroom after the babies :D
Author's Response:
He can be called Dr. Cullen but the fact that he chooses not to be called that all the time shows him in a more down to earth way then if he insisted on being called Dr. Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:59 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
this was a wonderful chapter. Wow - they have come so far. I really hope that Esme gets better and isn't a threat to Bella or the babies.
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 5:20 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
awesome chapter aww the babys sound so cute.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 4:20 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
great chapter. glad they made a safe arrival. nice christmas presents for them.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:38 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
That was wonderful, as usual. i just love all of your stories! I´m glad the babies had a safe arrival and everyone behaved at the hospital, that was the best Christmas present of all. I can´t wait to see it Rose has changed at, hopefully, she has for the best. Another thing that seems like it´s going to be epic is the impending breakdown of Esme, i hope she can go through what she needs to, to heal and become apart of her familiy´s life again. Great chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks you and thanks for reading - Esme hitting bottom is coming - Beth
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 2:37 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
I am so happy that the babies and Bella are safe and healthy. I love this story I just hope Esme gets her act together she is missing out on so much by being bitter
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:34 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
That was lovely. Its going to be interesting to see how they cope with 3 newborns. Wonderful stuff.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:16 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
Awwww the babies have arrived. I love this story i am going to be so sad when it is over.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:41 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
love this story of your, can't wait for christmas :) maybe a delivery?
Date: 28 Nov 2010 12:23 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
I am so glad that Bella is pregnant. I don't think Bella and Edward should forgive Esme soon, and I don't think she should be around the babies at all unless she is proven to be trusted which I think would be a long time. If I was Bella I would not forgive her.
Author's Response:
Bella pushes Edward to fix things with her because she and Renee's relationship is non-exsistent. However Bella does not feel the same need to get along with Esme and will be very protective of the babies. Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 6:39 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
Iam so happy that Bella is pregnant.I know that this time Edward is glad he can be there for it all .I really love this story I hope it will not be ending soon .
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - there are only a few chapters left - Beth
Date: 22 Nov 2010 10:31 PM Title: Christmas Break
enjoying your story. it's very hot.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:44 PM Title: The First Six Months
bella seems very wise beyond her years.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 7:09 PM Title: Be My Master
WOW hot chapter! sex was great :) edward is worried when he is 50 and she in her 30's... well I'm sure he be one hot fifty year old. Can just picture it. Silver gray hair and hard body yum.
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 12:51 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
I loved every word like I always do I think his Mom has enough problems in there lives and I hope she is being honest with them because I feel Bella just might kill her if she says anything around those babies Bella is going to be on protective Mommy when they get here Everybody better watchout I wish my mom had been like that Thank you for sharing this with us and I am so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks.....
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:00 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
i always love it! you definatly got my vote. cant wait for an update
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:08 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
That was a mean cliffie!! Don't you dare let anything happen to them during the delivery!!! I swear I will hunt you down and throw you into my shark's pool!!
Other than that...
I loved it!!
Also I can't wait for the voting to start!!
How about a visit from tanya??? ***hint hint***
xx
Marianne ***grins***
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:59 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
Triplets! These two never do things by half. LOL. Loved the chapter. Glad that Edward and Esme are working on their relationship. So looking forward to the babies arriving.
Until the next time.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Nov 2010 10:00 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
It is good that Esme is truly working on her shit. I was ready for a baby but 3 holly shit but I love it. Great chapter just the right amount of everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:20 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
I think Edward is being very understanding and open to Esme and I really hope she appreciates it and has learned her lesson. Bella is most definately his rock. She is so incredible to even attempt to encourage him to make peace with his mom after all that she did to her.
Triplettes?!? It has been so long since I read the 1st chapter of this that I can't remember if they were mentioned or not. That is just too cool for words. I love how involved Edward is with the pregnancy. It is sad to think that he never had any of those experiences before.
Ahhh, pregnancy sex. I loved when Bella attacked him in the middle of the night. That was awesome.
Author's Response:
Thanks - the babies are not mentioned in the one-shot - I loved the pregnancy sex with all three of my kids - thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:17 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
wow esme and carlisle have alot to work thru. it is too bad like edward says that she didn't have faith and trust in her family to share her secret with htem. trouble about secrets they usually come out. i so love bella and how the honesty is great in their marriage. she doesn't hide things from edward it is great.the angry sex was hot. i am so thrilled they are expecting. not one or two but three. yipee i am over the moon. i love bella almost being due and stripping her husband while he sleeps so she can fuck him. that is too great i can't wait i so love it
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:05 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
brilliant chapter ! all the secrets and three babies!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:54 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
I found this story on FF but to find it here with an update!!!!! HEAVEN!!!!!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:42 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
wonderful as always....glad to finally be putting the Esme situation to rest.... can´t wait for the triplets.... I just love ExB babies... their always the cutest... great chapter...good luck with the awards!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for redaing - Beth
Date: 17 Nov 2010 12:16 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
OOOO naturally conceived triplets a wonderful rarity. The babies are coming can't wait.
So excited for the next chapter but i get the feeling it means we a nearing the end boo hoo.
keep up the excellent work
Author's Response:
Thanks - Beth - Thanks for reading!!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 11:58 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
Their strongest quality as a couple is their "togetherness". It's amazing how they support and comfort each other. Something much needed with the situation with Esme. It is huge and it needs time to process, understand, forgive and forget. Hopefully all of them will manage.
The tattoo situation was also very well handled, and that wasn't easy. Again another proof of their trust in each other. I guess the kids kind of think that their relationship isn't as "regular" as the rest of the people around them. But since nothing in their lives since that day could be considered "regular" I guess they all just go along with it. That's way Evan made such little fuss then and even now.
As for the babies!!!! Wow that's a huge package. Lots of work, thankfully there are plenty of arms to hold babies in that house.
Author's Response:
I noticed with my own kids, especially when they are younger, if the adults don't make out a big deal out of something neither do they. Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 11:48 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
well sweets you got my vote! I love it! This was a great chapter and I am so thrilled. I can not wait to read all about the triplets birth. YAY!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:58 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months
This chapter was amazing! I love how they dealt with the tattoo issue, that had me worried! I wonder if the set of twins that they have are identical or not? Also, cannot wait to see if they are boys/girls or one of each. I wonder if Bella's condition will cause problems in labor. I cannot wait for more :)
Author's Response:
The twins will be identical - thanks for reding - Beth
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:27 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
i knew esme had a dark past loved it can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 12 Nov 2010 10:18 AM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
Can you please update soon?
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:09 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
you have a true gift. a wonderful imagination, and a VERY LOVING AND SINCERE HEART. Thank you for your story, I love it. Can't wait for your next update !!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:19 PM Title: The First Six Months
Sheesh, even feral domestic cats have better parenting instincts than Tanya - those poor kids.
I'm glad that they (the kids) have Edward and Bella available to them for love, support, advice, and such - lucky kids.
Great story, plot, character development, dialog, interactions, and descriptions of steamy/sexy playtime between Bella and Edward. ;~D
VERY well done. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading!! Beth
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:20 PM Title: Be My Master
Woah! Very intense emotionally and sexually too, with great details and well thought out back history.
Well done. =)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 4:03 AM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
THAT SELFISH BITCH!!!
I think this is probably my first review to your story, but I'm just blown away... I can't believe.... I just need time. Like Carlisle.
You truly write a great story.
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 04 Nov 2010 5:20 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
wow...*speechless*
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:49 AM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
All the years she has hid her past she was so young Carlisle would of understood
Date: 03 Nov 2010 9:19 AM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
ooo Esme has been very self serving she has made a total mess of her so called perfect life.
I get the feeling though that Bella will understand and she will get every one to forgive her it will take some work though.
oooo can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Even Bella only has so much compassion and this could hurt Edward's relationship with his mother beyond repair.
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 4:37 AM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
wow what a story. she did have 40 years. so who is she. does esme know who she is? man carlisle got to love him. he knows more about his son than esme does. she needs to stop worrying about herself and try and make amends. she needs to see the family she could loose. she needs to suck it up and tell them the truth and see where the chips fall. she has brought this on herself unfortunately as carlisle said if she come out with this along time ago she would have been forgiven no questions asked. we all make mistakes. but she went passed that line.
love it
Author's Response:
While Carlisle understand her need to protect her secret when she did so at Edward's expense is when she crossed a line with him she may never be able to get back. Right now things with them are very up in the air. she could end up with no one.
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2010 2:40 AM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
Oh snap! The shit has really hit the fan in Esme's life hasn't it? I love Carlisle and the fact that he refuses to even consider forgiving her until she has made things right with E&B. It shows what kind of man he is.
I don't blame Esme for trying to hide her past, but Carlisle is right. she should have told him as soon as Carmen reared her ugly head in her direction before the wedding.
As much as I LOVE Edward's POV, I am so glad you wrote this chapter because it explains so much!
Author's Response:
So many reviewers wanted to know what was in the envelope and why Esme was doing things I was worried I would running for cover if it wasn't explained. Glad you liked it and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:59 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
I had considered Esme had secrets and skeletons in her closet, but never of this size and magnitude. She has made plenty of mistakes during her life. Some can be understandable, others have gone too far. Carlisle is right, the one where things really turned for the worse for her was when she began taking things out on the one person who had nothing to do with any of this. Bella.
i can see Esme wanting to save what ever she could from her life, what isn't fair is to do it by hurting so much the people she is "supposed" to love above everything.
I know we all hope that when time comes, and we do tell the truth, we will be forgiven and all will be forgotten. It can't always be that way. Wounds need time to heal, some more than others. These ones, on so many people will take time and a joint effort. The thing Esme needs to hope for now, is finding assistance in trying to save what ever she can.
Author's Response:
All very good observations. Forgiveness is often harder to give when a loved one is the that was hurt and they didn't deserve it. Esme is going to have to work for it.
Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:57 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
Wow. I had no idea where you were going to take her reasoning, but you sure as hell shocked the crap out of me. Excellent! I never saw that coming at all. I can't believe that Esme cared more about herself than she did her own child. What a royal bitch with a capital B. I wonder how Esme is going to get Bella's support. Bella is very compassionate, but I do not want her to offer Esme any. This is going to kill Edward. He is not as forgiving as his lovely wife. I know that if I were in his shoes that I would be hurt, angry, and disappointed. I do not know how Esme is going to talk her way out of this mess. Fourty years of lies. I am so ready for the next chapter. Thank you for giving us this outake. I think that we were all dying to know what was in that envelope.
Author's Response:
Bella knows without looking the information in the envelope has the potential to destroy the way Edward sees his mother. Bella forgives many things but not seeing Edward or the kids hurt = even she isn't that compassionate.
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:58 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
I really enjoyed seeing things from Esme's POV, it made me kind of feel sorry for her. I wonder what will happen now. I really hope she can mend her relationships with everyone (minus Carmen and Tanya).
Date: 02 Nov 2010 6:08 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 5:54 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons
Wow.... didn´t see that one coming at all..... On one hand I understand, but I´m with Carlisle... my forgiveness depends on Edward and Bella´s... Esme has quite a few skeletons in her designer closet....I want Carmen and Tanya to get theirs as well... Bella is one of a kind.. not many ppl would´ve handled the situation like that... can´t wait for the fallout...poor Carlisle... he really is a victim as well in all this mess...great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:50 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Wonderful story...thanks for the read!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 3:29 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
awsome story.love it n i wonder what bella has on esme.hope it all works out for em.update soon.
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:42 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Can you please update soon? I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:57 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
ahahah the tatoo makes its debut 0.0 I wonder what dirty dish Charlie got on Esme...hmmm..
Date: 23 Oct 2010 11:38 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Another great chapter.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:11 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
eek cant wait for an update love it as always!
keep up the great writting
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:46 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 8:10 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
when Esmee give them a rest with her condescending attitude towards Bella.six years is not enough to realized what kind of person Bella is to Edward and his children.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:24 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
great chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2010 6:47 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
They have themselves some fuck hot sex shit!!! I would love to know what the fuck is up Esme's ass I am sure it is not a frozen dildo lol. I cant wait for more.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:26 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Edward's tattoo had been something between him and Bella, until the pool party. I am certain, he didn't think about it, or that not only his kids but 18 more would see it. I can't wait to see what will he say to the kids.
So Esme has kept her attitude toward Bella. It is turning out to be too much, even for Carlisle. He had no clue what could have happened during Bella and Esme's lunch and he still was thinking Esme got what she had been working on getting. Edward was more than surprised, for the lunch, the fight and what Bella did. I think neither him or Bella wanting to read what's in the package is good and noble. It's Esme's not theirs. However, we don't know if Esme thinks Bella read it. Maybe next chapter we'll find out.
Author's Response:
The next chapter is the outtake of Esme's lunch and phone calls. She definitely thinks Bella read it because she would have read it.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 5:08 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
OMG! i cant believe he forgot the tatoo. LOL
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:24 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
I just finished reading this chapter, and I noticed that 23,041 people have read this story; but only 276 have reviewed. I feel like a fucking bitch. Your story is MY TOP FAVORITE out of 79 other stories. I think that I have never left a review before. It is very troubling for me to realize my lack of common courtesy. Here you are pouring your head and heart into this story that I LOVE SO MUCH, and I have NEVER COMPLIMENTED you! I am a heartless bitch just like Esme'. I would like to COMMEND you on this story. It is absoultely the SMARTEST take on a D/s realtionship that I have ever read in fanfiction! I thought that The Training School Saga was phenomenal, but I have to say that Be My Master - Head Master? is the HANDS DOWN WINNER! Thank you so much for every single word written in this story and all your other stories. If I was a coach, I would slap your ass and say, "Great Job".
Author's Response:
Thank you very much and thanks for reading.
I have to say I am often guilty of not leaving reviews also but I am working on it so don't feel bad.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:30 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Love the story! I am excited to see where you take this from here! They are so cute together!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:07 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Oh no...I wonder how many questions he will get about this. I loved how Bella took care of the kids spending time with Charlie and Sue. Esme about died. I just don't get her. I feel bad for Carlisle. I'm starting to wonder if they will make it. Thank god Charlie gave Bella the files. I still wonder what is in there. I am so glad the adoption is final. They won't have to worry about that ever again. I love it all. So much happened, and I can't wait to see what happens next...baby maybe??? Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:21 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Awesome chapter... I enjoyed it very much...I would surely love to know why Esme is being a royal biotch...so hopefully you´ll clear that up for us.. and because I´m extremely nosey I wanna know what was in that packet.... yeah they´re trying for a baby.... I can´t wait... poor Carlisle he´s really cool but s caught up in the middle... I need to go back and review... I forgot what Edward´s Tattoo says... great chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Edward's tattoo is over his heart and says 'Owner of Isabella Cullen' with her special occasion collar wrapped around it.
For the next chapter wil be the outtake of Esme's lunch with Bella and the phone she makes at home.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:50 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
wow what a chapter. the playroom scenes where out of this world. what fun these two have. but it comes with a lot of love and trust and honesty and alot of passion for each other.
i love the relationship bella has with the kids. she is very honest with emily and has alot of respect for her and it shows.
esme what on earth are we going to do with you. man i want to know what was in the pkg. i am not sure i would have the power not to know what is inside the pkg. bella you have such will power. i am so proud that edward backs her up no matter what.
i am thrilled that charlie and sue got married. they deserve to be happy. man does he love his daughter. i am glad he is watching out for her and her family. and dug and has what his daughter needs for esme to back off. and whatever he found sure to piss off mis esme. charlie what do you know.
man i love this story. baby soon maybe. seems like they are ready for an addition to their lives.
Author's Response:
Charlie and Bella have a very unique relationship based on trust and respect and that is what Bella is doing with the kids. He dug up what he could and is leaving it to Bella if she uses it or not. By telling Bella it would shut Esme up he is warning Bella that she may not want to know if she wants any type of good relationship with Esme.
Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:31 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
thanks another great chapter
Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:25 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Excellent as always they are trying for a baby yayyyyyyyy!
Can't wait to read the outtake i so want to know is stuck up Esme's ass.
Author's Response:
Thanks & thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 12:10 AM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
I always do a little happy dance when you update this story. And this chapter did not disappoint. Ugh, where to start? Aro is a creapy bastard. I loved how Edward put him in his place and inferred that maybe his mentor should be contacted...nice! I also loved how he put the asshats in their place at the ball. They weren't the brightest bulbs in the box. LOL.
Seriously, what the hell is up Esme's ass? Even after learning everything she did in that last disasterous lunch, she still wants Edward to go with Tanya?!? Why, cause she can control Tanya with money and she can't control Bella? I agree that this story is best with Edward's POV, but I can't wait to see the outtake and find out what is ticking in that brain of hers and what was in the envelope and who she called. She is gonna have a coronary when she finds out Bella is prego!
Speaking of, I loved how Bella buttered Edward up to tell him her change of heart about the baby. To hell with the stomach; the way to a man's heart is about a foot lower. ;)
Ahh, the kink. God I love the dirty things you do with these two. The fucking machine with the vibrating butt plug...fucking classic! And the scene in the bedroom with the wax...let's just say that a dirty mind is a terrible thing to waste and I plan to use all the impure thoughts you have just given me and put them to good use!
As always, excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much - I know how I want Esme's story to go but I don't know that it will make anyone have sympathy for her.
You know how to write the kink also - I love Use Somebody.
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:43 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Oh boy, this can't be good, can it? It will be nice to know what is in the packets though. You're doing a good job with this story. I love how it is unfolding.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:15 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Wow, that was amazing! I really loved it so much! I am so happy they are starting to make a family of their own :) I am now really curious as to what the threatening envelope for Esme was. I am also hoping that no one notices the tattoo too much or if they do, that Edward can explain it! Amazing job, once again. I really loved it all so much, you are so awesome! I am also happy Bella is now officially Emily, Ethan and Evan's mom, she is so great with them! Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading. I don't know how many people read the A/N at the bottom (I am guilty of not doing it all the time) but I think the next chapter posted will be an outtake in Esme's POV explaining the envelope and the phone call she made. - Beth
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:41 PM Title: The Fifth Year The Second Six Months
Love it, this story is so much better then it looks. Glad your wrote it!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 1:42 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
You did a great job with this chapter, Iloved the way that Bella told Esme about Tanya. If I was in Bella's position I don't think I would have had Edward bail out Esme with the way Esme has treated Bella. Is Bella going to press charges against Tanya and Carmen for hitting her? I'm glad that Bella's heart is alright and that it was nothing serious. I can't wait to read what's going to happen next.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:18 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
Good story, with fucking awesome sex play. Love the little "dirty" girl.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 5:48 PM Title: Christmas Break
All orifices used in every chapter. You are a dirty girl and I love it. My kind of writing.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading - glad you like it!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Be My Master
Wow, this was TOO hot for me. So much so I read it twice. ;-)
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:58 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
wow..you definitely know how to work us readers up with their sexcapades..
Bella outing Tanya infront of Esme and Tanya's mom was awesome and Bella for the last time explaining how she felt about Edward was wonderfully expressed.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 03 Oct 2010 8:43 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
:)
Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:41 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
I love the way she told Esme about Tanya. I love the fact that Bella punch Tanya after Tanya slaped her no sissy stuff for Bella.
Date: 02 Oct 2010 6:15 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
I love their first night in the new playroom. What is up with Esme? I could not believe that she invited Tanya and her mohter to the lunch. Why not talk to Bella first. I hope she did have her eyes opened. Edward and Bella are being much nicer then I would be. I understand why this is important to Bella, but then again she stabbed Bella in the back by inviting the other two women. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job as always...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Bella has been trying to take the high road but she is at her limit!!
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 9:03 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
as always awsome chapter thanks
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2010 1:34 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
Another excellent chapter! I have to say your description of the playroom does strange things to my girlie parts. God, Edward is the perfect Dom. He could spank me any day.
Loved the snowball war. It was such a fantastic family moment that shows how much fun they all have together. And I love how the kids are so protective of Bella.
I can't believe Esme was so dillusional that she invited Tanya and her mother to that lunch. I really think if she doesn't show huge improvements that they really should cut ties.
Author's Response:
Thank you - Esme is in for an eye-opener
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 9:20 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
This was totally hot and I am really excited to see where it goes from here! Thanks for sharing your story with us all. I am excited and can not wait til you read my submission for the contest...even though you will nto know it is me til the end..LOL heeheehee :)
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 4:55 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
great chapter - hot playroom time!!! I loved her explanation of the fight - Tanya, what a bitch!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 01 Oct 2010 3:49 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
Wow, that was amazing! I am so happy they found out what was wrong with Bella, that had me worried! I am also shocked about what happened at the meeting with Esme, but I am so happy she is at least making an effort to be civil with everyone. I really do not like that Tanya is back :( Hopefully she won't cause too many problems. Also, loved all the gifts for Christmas, it was all perfect :) I really love this story and you constantly surprise me in a good way, I cannot wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 3:17 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
Wonderful as usual...I am so ready to pimp slap Esme for being a colossal bitch-in-;aw....it's pretty much expected of Tanya by now...I just realized this story is great but also super unique in that the other couples had limited involvment and the little they did have was of a pretty negative nature...love how you've change things up.... great chappie Babes!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you like it - given the way B & E started it was inevitable that most people who knew their history would be against them but it is also what makes depend on and be so close to each other and why they usually communicate to each other so well. Thanks for reading - Beth
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2010 2:45 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
That was very good.I can't belive esme i know that she is a bitch but ti invite tanya and her mother to lunch i just can't belive her i hope carlisle goes all dom on her ass lol.I was scared that bella had a bad heart at first but am very glad that she will be alright .I love the new playroom sounds very hot and iam glad the kids can't get in there now that would be a talk edward would never want to have lol .This story is so good i can't wait to see if/when they start trying for a child of their own,but i bet now that the kids want her to adopt them tanya or her parents will try to cause some problems even though tanya gave up her rites to them .loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading. The Orgasmic Syncope Bella has is real and as described in the story. Beth
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:35 PM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
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Date: 30 Sep 2010 9:36 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months
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Date: 30 Sep 2010 8:16 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year
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Date: 29 Sep 2010 10:42 PM Title: The Fourth Year - The First Six Months
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Date: 29 Sep 2010 6:55 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months
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[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2010 9:21 PM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
Love this story - can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 3:34 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
Oh this shoild be fun lol bella and esme in the same room that is going to be something else . i just whis esme could really understand how much bella loves edward and the kids she is no tanya she doesn't want his money she just wants his heart .i loved it great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading !! - Beth
Date: 19 Sep 2010 8:52 PM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
It wasn't easy to find a house that would suit everyone, in every way. But they eventually did. They will enjoy it a lot. Saying good-bye to Forks was bitter-sweet, especially for the kids. Bella's idea of Emily's party was amazing, she enjoyed it a lot. Edward, not so much, but that's part of being a dad.
The new schools seem to go fine. It was better for Edward to be at different school from the kids, much less pressure on everyone. Although Bella turns heads, it's easier when it's a teacher and not the headmaster. The incident in the kitchen with the boys, was... bound to happen sooner or later, it was well handled.
But the best part of the chapter, I think was the kids standing up to Esme. Carlisle was right, she needed to hear it and from them. It was up to her to fix things, she was trying to convince herself otherwise, but the kids made things more than clear. Now we just need to see how that reunion goes...
Author's Response:
All good observations - Esme is beginning to realize that this is a battle she can not win. thanks for reading
Beth
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:13 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
Is the lunch going to be a good or bad thing I sure hope Esme can control herself.
Author's Response:
This is Esme we are talking about and now things are effecting the kids - Bella doesn't like that!!!
Thanks for reading
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 8:10 PM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
What a great chapter! Thanks so much!!!
For those of us that need it - what does Emily's license plate say? I can never figure those things out. :)
Author's Response:
Punch Buggy - like the game kids play when they see a VW bug.
Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:31 PM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
You are doing such an amazing job with this story I really enjoy reading it and I am glad that others are reccomending it because it deserves to be read. Just awesome!
TAT~
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 5:25 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
God i love this story can't wait for Esme to pull her head out of her ass.
Also i can't wait for bella to be pregnant although that is probably just me projecting my own desire onto the story.
excellent as always keep up the good work
Author's Response:
Thanks and keep reading!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:32 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
i just have to say i so love their house they ended up buying. the master bedroom is to die for. i love the day room as well. beautiful so love it. they made a good choice. the rlationship they have is so solid it is noce to see. the party before they left was awesome. the dance sounded so cool and love that she did that for him. they both pushed their limits and it paid off for them both. poor esme she is so missing out on the family dynamic. but i am thrilled that carlisle is still choosing to be part of the family and still also try and work on his marriage with esme. i love it when bella stands up to other women. she is strong and they are very faithfully to each other. it is almost like bring it on. i so love it all. can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you i Loved that house too and you made good observations - thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:32 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
Holy shit! Esme finally stopped holding her breath and stomping her foot like a toddler and actually called Bella?!? I am so shocked, you could knock me over with a riding crop!
Speaking of toys...FUCK ME SIDEWAYS! THAT PARTY WAS HOTTER THAN HADES!!! OMG! I loved the whole fucking thing! I don't know where you come up with this stuff, but I would love to tap into your brain sometimes (I'll bet it is a god damned party up there).
Excellent chapter from start to finish!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you - I was actually a little worried about the party part because B &E won't get into the public play part of BDSM very much so I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:27 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months
awsome chapter thanks