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Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 10:22 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

OMG!!!!!!!!! I AM SO CRYING LIKE A BABY!!!!!

Loved it!
I have no words!
thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 9:13 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

This last chapter made me cry.  The last thing I expected was Bella to die. Poor Edward he took it so hard.  I loved the very end when they were reunited. That was so very sweet.

I have really enjoyed this story and am sorry its ended. 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 8:26 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

OK I have been with you for ever and I loved this story, a little warning on the sever tear jerker woul dhave been nice, but thank you so much for sharing with us all such a wonderful loving story about how deep true love and desire can be in our lives if we allow those we love to be loved back the same way.  I am freakign crying and my 18 yr old thinks I have lost my mind, but this was excellent and I will always think this is one of the best stories I have ever read.  Thank you again for sharing it!

Kasi~



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I thought about a warning but worried it would give too much away - Beth

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 8:16 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

My heart clenched and I cried as I read this for two reasons: the ending of the story and the end of their mortal lives.

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful love story. I know I will be reading it repeatedly.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reding - Beth

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 8:03 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

its not my favorite ending but its nice i loved this story sooo much



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 7:36 PM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 7:23 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

OMG!  When I saw the 'Completed: Yes' I felt a huge wave of sadness take over and then to find Bella was gone did me in.  I cried so hard throughout this entire chapter.  The only time I smiled was when Bella and Edward talked about their kids.  Edward's pain and desolation was so real it was palpable.  I swear I could feel his heartbreak at losing the center of his existence.  And then for him to force himself to live after her for three whole years was just awful.  Yes it was easier for the kids to not lose them both together, but in all reality, they did.  Edward died the day Bella was killed; his body just didn't get the message from his heart. 

It was a beautiful and tragic end to a story that I have looked forward to every time I got an email alert.

This has been such an incredibly amazing story!  I have loved every word, every emotion and every character.  I really cannot put into words how much I have enjoyed reading this.  This story had so much depth and love and hot spanking sex.  It was perfect (and I do not use that word lightly).  I feel like I have just lost two dear friends.  I know I will reread this at some point just to go back to happier times and visit this wonderful world you have given us.  Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this with us. 

All my best,

Nickey 

PS.  I wish there was a higher rating than 10, because 10 seems completely inadequate for this chapter and this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  For some reason I didn't feel like I could leave this story until they had a definite conclusion and tohave Edward die just struck me as cliche - way too expected.  I loved writing this story and I feel as if they did get a HEA in a way.  Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 7:17 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

i'm going to miss this story so much. i was so glad you took it from the one shot it started out to be. i hope that you update your other stories soon.



Author's Response:

I will - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 7:09 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

happy together forever. loved it. made me cry. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: candyandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 6:50 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

Awwww You made me cry!! I am at work I am not supposed to be crying lol. Thank you for a wonderful story!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: kvgamble Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 6:33 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

Oh my, I cried!!! I have to stop reading this stuff at work. I will miss them, this was a great love story for them and so well written. I can't wait for another story from you.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - beth

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 6:25 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

thank you so much for such a wonderful story - I'm going to miss them so much

xoxo



Author's Response:

Me too - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 6:23 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

WOW! I CAN'T TELL YOU HOW MANY KLEENEX'S I JUST WENT THROUGH.  DID NOT SEE THAT ON ECOMING BUT I TRULY WANTED TO TELL YOU I LOVED THIS STORY.  I AM CREATIVE IN OTHER FORMS BUT WRITING IS NOT ONE OF THEM.  I KNOW IT TRULY TAKES A GIFTED PERSON TO DO THIS SUCH AS YOURSELF.  I LOOK FORWARD TO YOU NEXT FAN FIC VETURE.  HAVE A GREAT ST. PATTY'S DAY.

SHANNON



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading.  Several reviews have said I should have had a tissue warning but that would have been too much of a give away - Beth

Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 6:15 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

Omg what an ending I loved this story so much and it brought me to tears.  I hope you write something else soon your a wonderful author and I really enjoyed your story so much.  My husband doesn't understand how I can read fanfiction and love it like I do.  I suffer from severe depression and it helps me to excsape from my head for a while when I read so thank you for spending your time writing for all of us and even helping some of us get a little peace and quite and a good story to read.  Thanks so much, Jennifer



Author's Response:

Your welcome and thank you for reading.  I am glad you liked it - Beth

Reviewer: crhunt123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:48 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

That was so beatiful that you made me cry.



Author's Response:

I cried too - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:37 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

beautiful, wonderful ending



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:15 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

thanks for the story i really enjoyed it!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:06 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

This chapter killed me.  It was so sad.  You did a great job with this story though.  I hope you continue to write.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: CrimsonRed-ink1792 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:06 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

Oh dear. I think I cried a little. lol.

 

CrimsonR



Author's Response:

I cried a lot - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:05 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

I will miss this story



Author's Response:

Me too - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Onelove3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:04 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

Seriously?!! I never would have thought you'd have me in tears through the entire chapter.. I have loved this story from the beginning and sad that it has ended.. Maybe some outtakes??

Author's Response:

I am open to outtakes - let me know what you would like to see - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 4:58 PM Title: Fifteen Years Later

you have me in tears!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:32 AM Title: Ten Years Later

loved it this is my fav story i have reread it  5x s



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2011 4:00 PM Title: Ten Years Later

I like what a happy story this is, sexy parts are good too*~D)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 9:42 PM Title: Ten Years Later

I truly love the devotion, trust and love shared by Bella & Edward. They have overcome so much throughout their relationship and it just keeps growing stronger.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 9:54 PM Title: Ten Years Later

Thanks that is alot of things got caught up on I love the fact that they let the kids be who they are and love them that way.  Tanya is a waste of space and air and it sounds like her parents are that way also.  Rose and Emmett they are happy with each other as long as they get to play with others also.??  Love the fact of how in love Bella and Edward are.  Cant believe it is almost over.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2011 5:20 AM Title: Ten Years Later

Oh girl, you have a true gift for smut and story all wrapped up in one.  There are some fan fics that are great stories and others that have lemons that would make you do dirty deeds.  You, my friend have incorporated both so well that it kills me to know this is near the end.

I love how you have given us a visual of how their lives have grown and flourished in such a beautiful way.  And even after being together for all this time, they are still so into each other.

The scene in his office was so freakin dirty...I loved it!  And even though I have read several scenes on motorcycles, yours was so unique and fucking hot...damn!  There are just not enough words.

I have loved every chapter of this story and I am going to miss it so much when it is through.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: bammers Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2011 6:02 AM Title: Ten Years Later

Loved it so much and I am sad it almost over but I loved every chapter and I can't wait for your other stories to update when you can.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Marianne Northman Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:38 PM Title: Ten Years Later

LOVED IT!!! I can't even describe how much!!! It's not enough!!

xoxo

Marianne

PS Will we ever learn what happened to Alice??? My curiosity it's quite big there...



Author's Response:

I am not sure about Alice yet - maybe - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 8:53 AM Title: Ten Years Later

Awww...say it isn't so, I'm not ready for it to be over! Lol!  It was definitely worth the wait, so no worries.  I'm glad Esme finally got her shit together, too bad it took Cancer to get her there.  Great Chapter!

 

Krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 1:41 AM Title: Ten Years Later

Ten years and so many things that have come and gone in that time. Their life is good, better than it was then, and yes, very different. They still enjoy each other and still find ways to surprise each other and sometimes others too.

Bella has been able to get close to Rosalie and to find a way to get along with Esme, that's a good thing. Their older children have their lives going the ways they want as for the younger ones, they seemed happy. I guess next chapter will tell us more about them.

Only one more chapter???It will be sad to see the story end, it has been a great one.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:08 AM Title: Ten Years Later

This was an amazing chapter and I seriously have loved this story from the start!  I love it!  thank you so much for sharing this with us all!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: mimimgr Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 10:46 PM Title: Ten Years Later

great chapter.  nice to see the two of them still so madly in love.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 8:40 PM Title: Ten Years Later

Loved the chapter and usual.  Its so wonderful to see them going so strong.  At 51 i thought surely Edward is going to have a hard time keeping up with his young wife but no, there is still life in the old dog yet. LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 6:36 PM Title: Ten Years Later

I will be sorry to see this story end, as you know that I have loved it from the begining and I hope that you will write again soon.

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:31 PM Title: Ten Years Later

that was HOT!! i can't believe that the story is almost over.  I makes me want to cry!  I lvoe this story it has been great!!!  ed is even hotter older!  HAHA crap he would be hot anytime i don't know what i am talking about!!!  thanks for the update!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: ccaajjaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 9:17 AM Title: Ten Years Later

I was just wondering when you would have an opportunity to update this story & low and behold a new chapter, wonderful as always.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 7:02 AM Title: Ten Years Later

i so love this story. i can't believe the 3 kids are 1o now and we are at a wedding. emily is expecting a married, love it. seems as if the kids all did well for themselves. the are unique in their own way and where raised with love by bella and edward. they where blessed. at least esme and bella have made a small closure in the gap. it still seems as if bella gives and esme takes. doesn't seem that she has grown all that much. but it seems she has lost alot. oh where to start with rose and emmett. don't know and can't get into it even with the party. didn't take em for a pain slut, wow. bella what a way to keep your man hot and horny for you showing up at his work. got to love their marriage. not bad for a 51 year still keeping his 34 year old wife happy very very happy. so love this story it is been alot of fun. thanx for writing. looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you - I have really enjoyed writing this Bella and Edward - they compliment each other in many ways - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:14 AM Title: Ten Years Later

Wow...I love it!  Everything seems to be awesome in their lives.  They are all so happy.  I can't believe there is only one chapter left.  I will miss these characters.  Great job...thanks so much!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:03 AM Title: Ten Years Later

I like how well done we jumped ahead ten years yet witnessed the ensuing years by way of flashbacks. Edward and Bella are still so very much in love and lust.  The scenes at the club and on their bike were incredibly good reads!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 2:35 AM Title: Ten Years Later

Wow, amazing job, once again!  Sad we didn't get to see an update on the triplets, but everything else was AMAZING :)  I cannot believe only one chapter remains :*(  Cannot wait to see what happens then!



Author's Response:

Thank you and the next chapter will be another time jump and you will learn about the triplets then - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: xmenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Feb 2011 12:16 AM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

I'm glad Rose and Bella are working on their friendship. Are Alice and Bella going to repair their friendship? and it would be priceless to see her face to find out that Bella is into BDSM.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:56 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

Once again you have sucked me into a story I didn't want to stop reading.  The relationship between B&E was so beautiful, loving, respectful, and just all around perfect.  I love how you showed the way a D/s couple can live that lifestyle and still maintain a vanilla lifestyle and be happy.  I loved Peter, Charlotte, Thomas, and Kyle.  I was sad they had to leave them behind in Seattle. I could't help but laugh when Bella got arrested in Chicago and Edward received the call from Thomas.  I loved the kids.  They were great.  Bella's maturity and intelligence are awesome.  I love how she was so much more mature than most of the adults who had 15+ years on Bella.  I'm glad we have a few more chapters.  I want to see how things play out with Rose & Em.  I have a feeling them being into the D/s lifestyle will only help rebuild the relationship between Bella and Rose.

Anyway, great job with this story and I can't wait to move on to the next story.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2011 9:36 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

Can you please update soon?

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 6:47 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

I think I have missed the playroom almost as much as E&B!  That was an incredible way to get back to playtime!!!

Esme is certifiable!  WTF?!?  I am glad they have her on drugs cause obviously the therapy isn't enough.

Hopefully in the next chapter she will be a better, more stable Esme.  Oh!  With the ten year jump, maybe we will get to see Emily getting married?!?  That would be too cool!

Excellent chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: mimimgr Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 4:25 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

great chpater. sad to see this story ending. enjoyed it very much.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: krisandrob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 1:22 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

This was a good chapter I am so glad that everything is working out for them it is about time.

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Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 8:54 AM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

I love these two and the kids.  I am glad Esme is getting better and Bella is an angle for putting up with any of Esme's crap.  Edward I just want to eat him up lol.



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Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2011 7:02 AM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

thanks for the update!! again i loved this story and i love your bella thanks for a great story without the unecessary drama between ed and bella.. they love each other and dont doubt each other.  the drama happens around them!!  i really like that!!  again thanks ;0p



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: vbfb1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 11:39 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

Another excellent chapter as always can't wait to see what the future holds



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 11:13 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

LOVED it!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 10:48 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

This was so worth the wait! Seeing Esme first insult Bella at the hospital then harass Bella and the fallout that ensued; dealing with teenage sex drives; the anticipation of revisiting the playroom; seeing Rose in line at the club; the satisfaction of returning to the play room; the babies growing and Emily graduating *sigh* Very nice journey.



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 9:38 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

Firstly happy New Year.

A wonderful chapter.  They are doing so well as a couple and family.  Its nice to see things working for them.   This despite all the problems that beset them.  I just love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 8:31 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

as always awsome chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:45 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

What happened to and with Esme was tough on everyone, but it had to be the toughest for Carlisle. He is an incredible man, when things became really, really bad, he didn't leave, he stayed there and took care of Esme. That shows character, love and devotion. I think we know where Edward got it from. It seems Esme did hit bottom, which was necessary, however, that doesn't mean everything would be perfect from there. It will be okay but it also needs time, it seems she is trying, doing a big effort and it's paying off. Probably after attending Emily's graduation, Esme will see it and make a bigger effort.

Bella and Edward's life is going really well, even Rose might be around now. She has matured and seen things from a different perspective. The same as with Esme, it  can't all change in an instant but it will and that's what counts.



Author's Response:

My mother-in-law was the exact opposite of Esme - detached, not rude but not welcoming either.  I don't think anyone would have been good enought to marry her youngest son and child - until I had my oldest daughter.  We were never close but she did come around some.  Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 7:23 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

esme shouldn't surprise us by her actions. it is cool how well the babies fit into the family and how well the family adapts to the new threesome. i am surprised that carlisle is still with esme. but hey they do have a life time together. i am hoping that with all her therapy she does get better. this family deserves to be happy. they have alot of changes to look forward to and charlie and sue are reaping the rewards and esme is being left out cause she can't be good. it is nice to see that rose and bella may have a change at a grownup relationship. seems they may have alot in common. i guess time will tell with them. it must be thrilling to get back int he club and playroom for them. it is a part of their relationship. it is great that the kids feel and know they can go to bella for support and for certain topics they might not be comfortable with their dad. i love the dynamics of this family. tanya and her parents are missing out. love it



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading.  Very good observations and the reason for the coming time jump is to show how some of those work out!!

Beth

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 6:30 PM Title: The Sixth Year The Second Six Months

That was INCREDIBLE!  I really loved it so much!  I am so happy for Bella and Edward.  One minor comment on sentences that make me confused "The babies were coming into their own also.  Simon looked like me with his copper hair and green eyes, Sabrina was a mini Bella with her dark hair and dark brown eyes and Samantha was a mix with my hair and Bella's eyes" You said earlier that Sabrina and Samantha were identical twins so, why does Samantha have Edward's hair while Sabrina has Bella's?



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and I am glad you like it.  I researched identical twins and they aren't completely identical.  I found several sites but one explained it the best.  Both babies receive the X from their mother or X/Y from the father.  The Y is always dominant and that's how we get boys but when both are X the males is not necessarily the dominant one, it could be the woman's.  They are still identical - they have the same DNA but different X's became dominant.

I even found a site that said a pair of Chinese twins were proved to be identical even though one is a boy and one is a girl - that seemed a little far fetched but they say fact is stranger thatn fiction!!!

Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:50 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

love it was going to wait till it was completed and couldn't resist reading... so i am on the hook!!!  love the babies and can't wait to see what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading & reviewing.  I have never like the way Bella was portrayed - to me she seemed like a pushover and I am raising my girls not to that crap from anyone - especially a guy so I write a strong Bella but hopefully not a cruel one.

Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 1:26 AM Title: The Sixth Year The First Six Months

again love the story and 6 kids!  wowo!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:43 PM Title: Outtake - Esme's Reasons

wow she really messed up and i can't believe she wouldn't tell the truth from the start!!  I would definately be very hurt too!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:24 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

HOT HOT HOT i should not be reading this where i am reading this.....damn!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 6:12 PM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

oh yeah this is going to get good esme and bella duke it out!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 4:26 PM Title: The Fourth Year The Second Six Months

dang i love this story glad things are working out for them and they are getting out of forks... can't wait to see what bella has planned...her and esme are going to come to a head and i can't wait!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:08 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

wow and I have caught up on this one sadly :) 6 kids :) brilliant story I have laughed so much and wanted to smack Esme out so many times.. you wrote her really well :)

looking forward to an update :)

xxx



Author's Response:

Thank you - I have always felt Esme had the potential to just go nuts about something and I enjoy writing her that way.  Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 4:20 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

damn edward please come to my house and f me on a car too!!!  he is so f-ing HOT!!!!! 

cool with the wedding.  here comes esme!  can't wait to see what bella is going to do!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:50 AM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

ok more shit on the way... what about the roses...james.... you are lulling us to sleep in order to spring something on us.  and what up with esme what a biotch!!!  i am glad ed is standing up to her and go charlie go charlie!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 2:07 AM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

ok must be james.... how creepy and this is when i am glad that edward is a contol freak and went all dom on bella!! :0)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:09 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months

wow what is up with tanya yes she is definately up to something.  rose and alice are complete bitches!!! i can't believe they are treating bella like that she supported them everything and they are being such nasty bitches to her.  that really sucks when your friends turn out to disappoint you so much!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 12:24 AM Title: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

i keep repeating myself but i really really like your bella she is one of the best i have ever read!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:06 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Second Year

again i love bella... she is more mature than ed!!!!  wow..

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:39 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months

again i really like this story and i really like your bella damn if i liked girls i would want to do her myself!! haahah  but you know i love ed and would never trade him!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 10:01 PM Title: The Second Six Months

i really like your bella you always have a strong bella and i really like that a lot!!!  they are going to get caught though aren't they... i just have a bad feeling about this!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 8:15 PM Title: Christmas Break

damn HOT i need a panty change!!  thanks for showing the love in the story and showing that the bella does have a say and edward takes her seriously!  i enjoy that.  i hate when it is just f-ing..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:53 PM Title: The First Six Months

damn bells is beyond smart and fucking HOT!!! damn 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 7:23 PM Title: Be My Master

ok that was easy?  Hot and easy.. what is left?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 12:19 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

interesting medical facts?? lol no idea but it did sound good if it wasn't real lol



Author's Response:

It is true also.  I was worried when I first wrote it then I did actually find a condition to bacK it up  I was shocked.  It is rare but it is also real - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 11:23 AM Title: The Fifth Year The First Six Months

LOL I love how you have done the family dynamics with this..

great story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2011 6:53 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Esme is so good in this.. I know she isn't the normal Esme but you know what? it is nice to mix it up a little :)

 

good on you !!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:34 PM Title: The Third Year the Second Six Months

LOL oh no....

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Date: 03 Jan 2011 12:28 PM Title: Christmas Break - The Third Year

oh no.....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 11:45 AM Title: The Third Year - The First Six Months

ha ha ha ha ha ha the love triangle was priceless That was so freaking funny xxxx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:26 PM Title: The Second Year - First Six Months

oh Jealous of your orlando trip...

great chapter :)



Author's Response:

It was a lot of fun!!! Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 12:36 PM Title: The Second Six Months

they are so going to get caught....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:42 AM Title: Christmas Break

really living this!!! hate taya :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 11:12 AM Title: The First Six Months

great story.. :) I want to hurt tanya bad :)

Reviewer: feline Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27 Dec 2010 11:32 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

i love this story, thanks so much

Reviewer: messymarvin82 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:20 PM Title: The First Six Months

i like this story very much

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:12 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

omg this is a beautiful story i can not wait till edward and bella are back in the playroom i love this story keep it coming you are a great writer



Author's Response:

Glad you like it and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: Leibeezer Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:35 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

I thought those were cute names that they chose for the babies.  I don't think Bella should be friends with Rose anymore.  She and Alice were never true friends to Bella if they were they would have accepted Bella being with Edward.  If I was in Bella's position I wouldn't be friends with someone like Rose.  I don't care if Rose apologizes, it still doesn't make up for what happened to their 'friendship'.



Author's Response:

It won't make up for anything and even if Bella does have contact with her it will never be what it once was.  thanks for redaing - Beth

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:03 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

We had the 3 E's and now we have the 3 S's I love the names.  They didnt have much time to spare once they got to the hospital did they???  When is Esme going to pull her head out of her ass???



Author's Response: She is headed for a breakdown - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 4:28 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

Awe, what a great Christmas present! I thought maybe they would try & have a natural delivery. 

Thanks for writing, looking forward to next update, happy holidays!;D) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:12 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

This has been a great read, I'm feeling a little bad for not reviewing more, but it's not due to lack of enthusiasm, your writing is a pleasure to read. I like the intelligent, insightful and honest dialogue between B & E. And it's like Thomas said, she keeps things interesting. It's refreshing reading a self assured & empowered Bella.

Thanks for writing;D)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it and thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: fanfictionfeedn_the_addiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 11:15 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

awww that was so special..

Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 10:54 PM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

 

That was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet!

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 4:18 PM Title: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

This is by far my favorite chapter.  Bella has a tongue like a two edged sword.  She gave Tanya and Esme a good lashing.  WTG Bella!  I throughly enjoyed the lines you used in this chapter.  I must say my mother-in-law would be speechless with those lines.  LOL

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 10:41 AM Title: Christmas Break The Fourth Year

Excellent!

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:54 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

Loved it very much and I loved the names thanks for sharing and update when you can thanks......

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:05 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

omg i so love this story. wow esme you so need to deal with your life. man when you crash and you will i feel for your family. but i hope you do it fast before you lose anymore time with your grandkids.

i so love how protected bella is over edward. i love when she tells the women to back off and like better women have tried and failed. there will always be a bella and edward. noone can come between these two. their marriage is based on honesty and man the sex they have as a couple and master and sub they are indestructible. noone will ruin what they have.

3 babies are here. got to love edward to be prepared for having the roads plowed. love him. 2 girls and a boy and thank god bella is okay. it all went well. i am assuming they are done having kids since they now have 6. 3 babies they are very blessed. they will be great parents together. edward ahs always been a great dad but with bella they are a team. i so love charlie and sue. they are so supportable and bella needs that. her dad will always be there for her and that is great. she will and is a great mom cause her dad was loving and great with her. love it all



Author's Response:

Yes they are done having kids.  I am glad you like the story - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:48 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

OMG!  That was so sweet!  I love the visual of the three older kids holding the babies!!!  I think the names are super cute, but they are going to regret making them all sound similar when they have to yell at them when they are older. LOL ;)

Bella sending the kids as interference for Edward's party was very funny.  And I love Bella's reaction to Heidi hitting on him.  I am surprised she didn't smack her with those wicked hormones corsing through her.

I am glad they are standing their ground with Esme.  I like the explanation that Edward gave Bella over why he didn't want Esme in their home.  It makes a lot of sense and it shows how protective he is over what is his.  He is the best husband and father.  How can you not love this Edward?

As always...excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

My kids names all start with "S" and it has gotten very confusing - thanks for reading - Beth

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 4:42 AM Title: Christmas Break The Sixth Year

They are finally here, just in time for Christmas. They are all healthy, perfect and very loved. It will be lots of work for everyone, but thankfully there are enough arms at home to keep up with them.

Things with Esme are going better, it is a very slow process but things are improving. Still Edward has doubts and wants to go slowly, which is understandable. His talk with the therapist was a good idea. Lets hope things improve and she can again be active part of the family, especially with the babies here.



Author's Response:

Esme just need to stop blaming Bella - that is her last hurdle.  Thanks for reading - Beth

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