[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is so funny, with the whole misscommunication and missinterpretation. Bella and Edward could really be pitied. But in the end the finally got together. All the pain pays off.
Anyway, I just wanted to add, that I really liked this story, because the emotions, thoughts, motives etc. came really good across. It was a joy to read. also the switching of POVs was cool, whenever something happened to one of them the other (of course) interpreted it differently. So cool!!!
Date: 17 May 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
That was great! I'm sure my colleagues think I'm crazed I've been laughing so hard. Keep writing, I'll keep reading. Promise
Date: 17 May 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Girl, I'm about half a page in and I just had to stop and tell you you're cracking me up
Date: 17 May 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ugh, so cute! I can totally epathize with poor Edward. Nothing just seemed to go right!
So very glad that they finally got it right at the end!
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
that was hilarious. i don't think i've ever known things to go as wrong as it did for them. thank god things finally got straightened out, lol.. great o/s! :) :)