[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 65- Tweedle
Great chapter, I look forward
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 64- Fucking Well Done
Interesting
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 63- It Is Time
uh oh............I liked your way of having Charlie guess more than the books did, many things should have been more obvious, I agree with you!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 63- It Is Time
Oh frack, next chapter?
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 62- Did I Stutter?
Intriguing, I look forward to the next chapter
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 61- Let's Not, And Say We Did
great chapter, loved the thoughts and actions. Sorry I have not reviewed lately but I have been reading each chapter! Keep up the good work-cannot wait for the big showdown.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 61- Let's Not, And Say We Did
Intriguing, I look forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 60- Head Hard
Intrigueing, next chapter please?
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 58- Twenty Three Year Old Virgin, This Blows
Nest chapter please?
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 57- Romance Lotus
This is a great story. I usully don't go for the Twilight gang and another character, but Revi just works. Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
thank you! hope you keep liking it
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 57- Romance Lotus
Great chapter
Date: 30 Jun 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 56- It's A Hop, Skip, And A Leap
it's about time Jacob!!!!!!! I still cannot get used to Jacob and Edward getting along, I guess I am following too many stories at the same time!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 56- It's A Hop, Skip, And A Leap
Great chapter, I look forward to the next
Date: 27 Jun 2010 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 55- Something Wrong, That Feels So Good
sounded good
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 55- Something Wrong, That Feels So Good
I look forward to the next chapter. Great chapter by the way
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 54- Crooked Smiles
great chapter
P.S. you posted it twice
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 53- Ass Backwards
Great chapter, I look forward to the next
Date: 17 Jun 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 52- Woo Girl
I like your story. A Lot. And I do hope to see next chapter soon:D
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 52- Woo Girl
Interesting
Date: 17 Jun 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 52- Woo Girl
awwwwwwwwww keep trying Edward!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 51- You're What's Wrong With Me
Interesting.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 50- Most Beautiful Sound, A Beating Heart
I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 49- I'm On It
wow-had not expected that and yet it all clicked in-good work!
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 47- Not A Fan
yeah ! some progress here? I hope, but loving the tension too !
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 49- I'm On It
Oh for frick's sake, you can't end it there. Next chapter please?
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 46- No Thinking At Bellarmine
wow, that is creepy about the dorm. Love the way this is playing out. Always glad to see a story where Bella and Edward do not just jump into each others arms, but take some time.....
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 46- No Thinking At Bellarmine
Great chapter, next one please?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 45- It Was The Worst Of Times
next chapter please?
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 44- I'm A Cold One Too
Interesting, next chapter please?
Date: 08 Jun 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 43- What I Was Missing, Is You
oh boy, now the fun begins!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 43- What I Was Missing, Is You
Ah crap... next chapter please
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 42- Love at Five
Great chapter
Date: 05 Jun 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 41- Stumbling
I like it-definitely the way to start them off. Enjoying the frequent updates!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 41- Stumbling
Interesting, I look forward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 40- What Are The Chances?
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 39- He's Been Looking For Her, Shes Seen Him
hmmm... this story's getting better. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 02 Jun 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 38- Before Us, None and After Us, None
sweet................
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 38- Before Us, None and After Us, None
Great chapter, I look forward to the next.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 37- That Old Chestnut
Yay, we're finally getting somewhere with the Bella department *jumps around clapping and grinning like a maniac*
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 36-Won The Battle, But What About The War?
Interesting chapter, I look forward to the next.
Date: 26 May 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 35- Can’t Get Rid Of Us That Easily
sounds good but why are they staying in Italy? And I forgot, how are Caarlisle and Esme connected to them?
Author's Response:
they were staying in italy because carlisle happened to be there and hes a doctor. they couldnt travel without getting revi checked out. i introduced carlisle in chapter 29 as an olf friend of alice and jaspers, that revi also knew as a child. hope that clears stuff up
Date: 26 May 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 34-You Can Sleep Sweetheart, I'll Carry You
sweet, but wait, you said she was created from a vampire and half vampire. Did you not mean vampire and human? Was Teegan or Edward a half vampire? I am confused.....but glad they have her back.
Author's Response:
i just noticed that too. thats a mistake on my part i meant a human and a vampire. i must have been thinking of revi being the half vamp and screwed up. good eye
Date: 26 May 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 34-You Can Sleep Sweetheart, I'll Carry You
sweet, but wait, you said she was created from a vampire and half vampire. Did you not mean vampire and human? Was Teegan or Edward a half vampire? I am confused.....but glad they have her back.
Date: 26 May 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 33- I Come To You In Pieces
love the details you are giving on the connections of the imprint, I have not read enough about Jake and Revi or Nessie to see anything on this.
Date: 26 May 2010 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 33- I Come To You In Pieces
love the details you are giving on the connections of the imprint, I have not read enough about Jake and Revi or Nessie to see anything on this.
Date: 26 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 32- Speeding, Beating, Still, Ripping Hearts
enjoying the new direction this is taking-the wolves to Volterra!
Date: 26 May 2010 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 32- Speeding, Beating, Still, Ripping Hearts
enjoying the new direction this is taking-the wolves to Volterra!
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 35- Can’t Get Rid Of Us That Easily
Loved the chapter, looking forward to the next.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 34-You Can Sleep Sweetheart, I'll Carry You
Ah crud, next chapter please
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 32- Speeding, Beating, Still, Ripping Hearts
My suggestion to your predicament is get a flash drive. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 May 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 31- Fight or Flight
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Suspense is great!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2010 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 31- Fight or Flight
Aw crud... Next cahpter please?
Date: 21 May 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 30- Come True
ahhhhhhhhh!!! I had almost fogotten about this side of the story. Way to keep us guessing!
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 30- Come True
Oh no, next chapter, please?
Date: 18 May 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 29- I Wanna Hold Your Hand
sweet...........
Date: 18 May 2010 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 29- I Wanna Hold Your Hand
sweet...........
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 29- I Wanna Hold Your Hand
I loved the chapter, and I look forward to the next.
Date: 13 May 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 21- Bang Bang Bang Bang
I don't know how much more I have to read but this story is wonderful. I can't believe that you only have 2 reviews as of this chapter.
Author's Response:
i'm glad your enjoying it! i do wish i had more reviews, but every one is appreciated. thanks!
Date: 12 May 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 28- Remove His Head From His Body
awwwwwwwwwwwww
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 28- Remove His Head From His Body
I loved the chapters, and look forward to the next. Is Bella going to come up and visit her father? Even though I know this is mostly about Revi and Jake I really hope Bella and Edward end up together
Date: 11 May 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 27- Hit Me
aaaaaaa! I hate cliffies!!!!!!!
Date: 11 May 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 26- I Knew I Forgot Something
yeah! okay, we are ready for this story to get to the rating it has been placed in!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 26- I Knew I Forgot Something
Loved the chapter, I can't wait for the next.
Date: 06 May 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 25- Be Here
I LIKE THIS STORY. REVI REMINDS ME A LOT OF BELLA IN SOME OF HER THOUGHT AND ACTIONS BUT I LIKE THE FACT THAT SHE IS INDEPENDENTLY HER OWN PERSON. SO ARE YOU GOING TO BRING BELLA INTO THE STORY FOR EDWARD AND ALICE?...IF U DO COULD U NOT LET EDWARD BE STUCK IN MANBRAIN LAND AND LET BELLA BECOME A VAMPIRE? OR WILL U BRING BELLA IN AS A VAMPIRE AFTER SHE IS TURNED IN PHOENIX...OR WILL EDWARD STAY LONELY? HIS PERSONALITY IS SLIGHTLY DIFFERENT HERE SO I HOPE U CAN OPEN HIS MIND UP A LITTLE BIT AND GIVE HIM SOME LOVE IN HIS NOT CHOSEN VAMPIRE LIFE. HE KNEW TEEG WASNT HIS SOULMATE, SO WILL HE FIND HER?
Author's Response:
thank you for the review, i'm glad your enjoying it.
i meant to make revi semi bella like in her independece, but stronger. bellas character will also be a little different, and will be returning. i have plans for both her and edward and it will be a lot different from the book of course. theres a lot of twists planned i dont want to reveal, but be patient their coming haha. and edwards character is meant to be nothing like the book because in the book he annoyed the hell out of me sometimes. he's just protective of his kid. keep reading! i'll be posting again real soon.
Date: 03 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 25- Be Here
last sentence a little off but good talking between Jake and Rev.
Date: 03 May 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 24- Snap Outta It
love seeing the fight in Rev! It is great not to see the girl just bow down to the wishes of the boy, even if she does care so much. Honesty is so important. Great chapter!
Date: 01 May 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 25- Be Here
Sorry you said your sophomore year at school a couple of chapters ago and I just assumed you were high school level. At least your writing style and accuracy makes more sense now.
Author's Response:
thank you i'm glad i'm doing this right :)
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 25- Be Here
Dang girl, wtf, how dare you end on a cliffy. I look forward to the next chapter. You're a very good writer, especially for being your age.
Author's Response:
ha thank you, and il right as soon as i can. im only three years younger than you silly. btw i love your stuff
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 23- You Made Me Whole
ahhhhhhhhhhh so sweet. I am a sucker for happy stuff. Nice job! Good luck with finals. I will be watching for updates. Thanks for not leaving us hanging!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 22- Vamanos Vamanos
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!can not wait for more. Thank you for the quick updates!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 21- Bang Bang Bang Bang
wow!!!!!! Fantastic chapter. As a parent that survived her kids teen years you really nailed this one. Well done. Your story and writing is just getting better and better with every chapter. Now a cliffie aaaaaaaaaaaaa! do not leave us hanging long!
Author's Response:
glad to hear i got it right. my mom said my teen years werent too hard on her so i was worried i wouldnt be good at that part. you wont be hanging long, im writing today.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 21- Bang Bang Bang Bang
Well I've spent the better part of today and yesterday reading this and all I have to say id I love it.
Your characters are great, it's a different twist and you have me wanting more, the pace of the story is perfect not to fast or slow.
Keep up the awesome work hun. I know how hard it is when you have no response or reviews but don't let that get to you. I for one will be with this story till you finish it.
LilyAurora
xxxx
Author's Response:
thanks that means a lot. i think i just got spoiled with my first story. it did well on fanfiction. but its good to hear this one is being enjoyed too thanks. il try and keep it up
Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 20- Let Me Go
growing up his hard on everyone, you did a great job with this. Please let Jake back soon though!!!!!!!! ps I read the whole story today-and am really enjoying a different version of the story then I have ever seen!
Author's Response:
thank you so much! this one hasn't been liked as much as my first one. i'm glad your enjoying and yes jake will return soon.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 20- Let Me Go
I am enjoying this story it is different and that is good! Great story line btw!
Author's Response:
thank you very much!