Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 80- Moment of Completion
You have imagined a world that I have lived in and enjoyed very much and I thank you .
Author's Response:
I am unbelievably touched by you. I have recieved little feedback on this site, I mostly get reviews on my others, so imagine my surprise when I see I have reviews waiting. I have never had one person review every single chapter before. Especially in such a short period of time. I am honored you enjoyed the story, and that you took the time to review each chapter. You made my week. I hope you stumble upon the other stories I wrote and like them as much as this one. Thank you again, so much. -JB
Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 79- Front Porch Dream
Brilliant plan! That was just too good! Those bastards got exactly what they deserved and will never bother anyone again. Thank God!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 78- Missing Piece
Clever idea to have the imprints come along to Italy. Alice knows it might just be the slight advantage they'll need.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 77- Our Lives Depend On Each Other
As scary as this will be, it probably was inevitable. To end the Volturi once and for all is the only way they'll all be safe. I hope they all make it back!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 76- Tearing Wail
Alice will never get over this, and maybe not the rest of them either. I just hate that Jasper was killed!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 75- I'll Show You Mad
Which one is gone? If it's Jake, Revi will die too, but what if it's Jasper? Poor Alice!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 74- Perfect in it's Imperfections
Things really would be perfect, if something could be done about Alec and his plan for revenge. Otherwise, it was a wonderful wedding and the vows were great.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 73- Stranger, But Stronger
What a perfect idea, to combine the two weddings into one, as marriage makes two peopleone. This story has been full of lovely surprises and this may be one of the best.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 72- So This Is Love
How ironic that Paul would imprint on Sam and Emilie's little girl Jessica. It sure took him long enough. More weddings and more babies to come, I'm sure.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 71- Never Again
I'm sure glad Revi told Jake about Alec hanging around. Now that everyone knows they can be on the lookout for the little weasel.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 70- Mirrors
I'm thinking Revi should have told everyone she saw Alec. Trying to keep this to herself is too damn dangerous.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 69- The Whole Me, The Whole Us
After waiting four years, I hope at the very least there were fireworks. Bella is easing into this new life rather well, for a newborn.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 68- The Nightmare Became The Dream
Thank you for making Bella's change not nearly as awful as it could have been. The part where Edward held her on top of him was kind of sweet, even.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 67- It Was The Best Of Times
That was the best way to spend her last day as ahuman. Bella has the best man, daughter and son-in-law.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 66- Fight For The Magic, Not The Norm
Bella is so smart to be able to see all this in the right light. She knows what's really important, love and family, forever.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 65- Tweedle
So, Jasper is a one-armed vampire now, at least he's still here. Revi scared Edward and Jacob both, but she heals fast, thank goodness.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 64- Fucking Well Done
Poor Jasper, I hope they find his arm and reattach it. The fight went pretty well, considering it wasn't a total victory. I'm with Bella, she'll help a lot next time, and you know there will be a next time.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 63- It Is Time
Timing is everything in life, isn't? Just when Bella finds a way to stay in touch with her dad, all hell breaks loose.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 62- Did I Stutter?
So they both got to propose! The one from Jacob was the most romantic, but kudos to Revi for saying it first!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 61- Let's Not, And Say We Did
It may have cost a cracked rib, but now everybody knows Revi can take care of herself. Leah and Embry did well too. There's going to be a fight, so let's all root for the good guys.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 60- Head Hard
Bella being a fragile human during a fight with the Volturi is a weird concept. There's sure no guarantee this will turn out well. Guess I'll have to chew on a fingernail!
Date: 20 Jul 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 59
Funny Edward doesn't spill about the ring in Jake's pocket, especially since he's heard Revi's thought about proposing to Jake. Oh well, they all have a lot on their minds right now like how to fight Aro and his minions.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 58- Twenty Three Year Old Virgin, This Blows
Oh happy day! The Volturi are coming! I knew it was just too good to last. Hopefully, battle plans will be drawn, and soon.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 57- Romance Lotus
Good for Jacob, he and Revi aren't rushing into anything. Poor Edward, he's going to have to officially give away his little girl. The upside is he's going to have Bella forever, to compensate. Now if Leah can let herself be happy, that just leaves Paul.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 56- It's A Hop, Skip, And A Leap
Wow! Leah finally imprinted, so Paul is the only one left! Big plans for Edward and Bella, too. Life is too good for everyone, it must be time for angst and anxiety again.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 55- Something Wrong, That Feels So Good
My only thought about the tatoos, was I hope Bella's isnt in a place Edward will bite her to change her. The designs sounded really cool! Like the love Bella has for Revi, as well as her father.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 54- Crooked Smiles
Angela and Embry, they'll make a nice couple and be good for each other. Sure glad Bella has made up her mind, to not only love Edward, but be with him forever. Tough decision, but the right one, I'm thinking.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 53- Ass Backwards
These love stories are nearly enough to bring a tear to this old ladie's eye. Everybody matching up, foreordained, so to speak, is a lovely theme and has sure been a good read so far.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 52- Woo Girl
Come on, Bella, you can't fight this forever. I think the old cliche is, this is bigger than both of you. Besides, I'm betting he's worth it.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 51- You're What's Wrong With Me
Bella is not stupid, but it seems she's kidding herself if she thinks all these feelings are going away. Edward as the pursuer is definitely a different slant on the usual storyline. Might be kind of fun to see how that works out for them.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 50- Most Beautiful Sound, A Beating Heart
Nothing like nearly losing the love of your existence to remind you of what's important. Take nothing for granted, life is too damn short, for most of us, anyway.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 49- I'm On It
Well, at least they have that scene out of their systems! Thats scary stuff, when you can forse something that far ahead in the future, and have it come true.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 48- Breaking and Entering
There's a great big snag, Bella wanting to remain human. They know they are meant to be together, but if she doesn't want immortality, how the hell will that work?
Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 47- Not A Fan
Okay, so we know this is something that will happen in Bella and Edward's future. I have a bad feeling it will have to involve the Volturi also. It's kind of sweet that E and B take care of each other.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 46- No Thinking At Bellarmine
It's interesting, exploring this relationship between Edward and Bella. Well, here's to four years of school!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 45- It Was The Worst Of Times
Big step for Reviana and Edward, being apart for the first time in their lives. Just like any father and daughter, it's a big adjustment. Wouldn't you know, Edward and Bella are in the same dorm? What are the odds?
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 44- I'm A Cold One Too
What a neat way to let the wolves know she knows. That was a good one, dreamed up by Bella and Revi. They really are good friends. Now if only Bella and Edward could drop the pretense and admit what they are to each other.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 43- What I Was Missing, Is You
Okay kiddies, the deer blood is out in the open! So, now what? Will Bella be horrifyed or will she be intrigued? I can hardly wait to find out.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 42- Love at Five
Really threw Quil for a loop, to imprint on Claire. He just has to be patient for the next twelve or thirteen years, watch over her and keep her safe and happy. About Bella and Edward, I don't know why he's fighting the inevitable. It's useless, she's the one.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 41- Stumbling
I don't see them as hating each other so much as being extremely wary and suspicous of what they're feeling. It's not the normal thing to to have this connection right off the bat. It's a supernatural thing I'm betting.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 40- What Are The Chances?
Maybe Emily, Alice and Bella would like Revi and Jake to take out an ad in the paper. Or they could hire a town crier. Sheesh!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 39- He's Been Looking For Her, Shes Seen Him
The plot thickens! So Bella has dreamt of Edward rescuing her for years and even knows his name. This is what I love about the supernatural, anything is possible. Plus the adventure and romance aren't bad, either!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 38- Before Us, None and After Us, None
Things are getting good! Revi knows something is going to happen between her dad and Bella, and is looking forward to it. She's out of school and starting a life with Jacob. Their mutual graduation present to each other was just right for the both of them, and just the way it should have been. Lovely1
Date: 19 Jul 2011 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 37- That Old Chestnut
Edward must have been so proud of his baby girl. I'm sure that the next phase of his life is about to begin, now that Revi has met Bella. Oh Yay! If they didn't have the threat of the Volturi hanging over them, this would be a very good time.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 36-Won The Battle, But What About The War?
Hope springs eternal, alright. I would want to know what Alice was seeing , every other minute. Revi is going to have mental scars to go with her tats.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 35- Can’t Get Rid Of Us That Easily
Lucky, lucky girl, not only to have survived her ordeal, but having all the love from everyone in her family. It may be the most unconventional of families, but a family nonetheless. Now the planning and plotting begins.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 34-You Can Sleep Sweetheart, I'll Carry You
It's a damn shame that the gang couldn't take out Aro, but at least they're getting out of Volterra, with the prize they came for. Now all they have to do is figure a way to stay safe. No problem, right? Yeah, right!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 33- I Come To You In Pieces
Here am I, hoping pride goeth before a fall. Aro is too arrogant for my taste. Somebody needs to to take him down a peg or three. Preferably Edward, Jacob and company!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 32- Speeding, Beating, Still, Ripping Hearts
I'm putting my faith in you to get Revi out of this horrifying mess she's in, without getting her family killed. I really hate Aro!!!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 31- Fight or Flight
As I said before, Aro is an evil, sneaky bastard. This is going to be a very bad thing for Revi, to be in the hands of the Volturi. I really don't see how Edward, Alice, Jasper and Jacob are going to rescue her.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 30- Come True
I should have known things were going too smoothly! Aro's probably had spies on the lookout all the time Revi's been growing up. Now the evil son-of-a-bitch wants her back, no doubt. This can't be good!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 29- I Wanna Hold Your Hand
Taking it slow and easy, and watched over by all and sundry. No danger for these two! Yet.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 28- Remove His Head From His Body
Saved by dear old dad, and just in the nick of time, too! Sure pays to have a psychic in the family, at least when your family consists of vampires and werewolves.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 27- Hit Me
That's a horrifying vision for Alice to have, and I hope it won't be coming true. Jake and Revi are finally back together and it would be a shame to kill one of them . Sure hope you aren't going to do that.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 26- I Knew I Forgot Something
Alice's nose sure got out of joint because Revi failed to rush to tell her about the imprint, but I think she'll get over it. The kids have a whole lot to talk about and straighten out. All in all, it's great the Blacks are back home where they belong.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 25- Be Here
Edward Cullen does not appreciate Jacob Black imprinting on his baby girl. Big shock there, right? Guess he'll just have to resign himself to the fact it won't change now.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 24- Snap Outta It
I'm thinking Jake isn't the only one that needs to snap out of it. This punching is getting out of hand. Give the guy a break, girl!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 23- You Made Me Whole
Nice touch, having Revi punch Jake for leaving her. Even if it wasn't his choice, she still needed to punish him. Lucky wolves are pretty durable. It was so sweet for them to reunite and imprint. Oh happy day!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22- Vamanos Vamanos
May I say I told you so, to Billy Black? It didn't help one damn thing to run away after all, the boy still phased. I hope this makes Revi happy to see Jake come home!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 21- Bang Bang Bang Bang
Sixteen and no big blowups, that is flat amazing! It's good Edward and Revi got the air cleared of misunderstandings. It's also good for Revi to know that the pack , including Emily, are okay with her and her family. The last part about Jake's thoughts in Quil's mind should be really interesting!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 20- Let Me Go
Boy! Talk about laying all your cards on the table! It's probably a talk they needed to have, but it still must have hurt both Edward and Reviana. That's the trouble with kids, they keep growing up and wanting to be their own boss. At least they do if you have been raising them right.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 19- Batface
I love this girl's pet names, Boo, Radley and Batface! What a combination! And two young wolves for friends. If only Jake could be there, life would be perfect for Revi.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 18- She's It For You
I really feel sorry for Jacob, missing his friends and his Revi, who's more than his friend. It's nice he has Bella for a back stop, especially as she's got a good head on her shoulders. Bella is always portrayed as mature beyond her years. Good thing as her mom is a bit of a flake, usually.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17- For The Good of The Tribe
It took him a while but the kid came through. Now, if Revi's dad just doesn't let his anger get in the way, maybe the kids can forge a bond again.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 16- High School Is Silly, Like Purple Hair
Revi has a very loving father, not to mention openminded. Purple hair streaks are one thing, but a pierced tongue is beyond me, for a fourteen year old. She's a lucky girl.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 15- What Are You Guys
It sure must help that the secret is out, that makes it easier for all concerned. Of course, now the boys are probably going to phase soon. That won't make anyone very happy.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 14- Remembering Too Much and Trying To Forget
I think maybe Revi should have listened to her dad. I just hope it doesn't lead to anything too bad.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 13- The Loss I Never Expected To Feel
The first time you have your heart broken by a boy is the worst. It cut's the deepest and that's not just song lyrics. All a part of growing up, just not the happy part, only the inevitable part. Poor Reviana, and her poor dad!
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 12- Running Away
Easy for you to say! There's two kids with broken hearts because the adults thought they knew best, one adult , anyway. It's so sad to read about, that's the age when everything is a huge deal and the end of the world, besides. Not to wish Billy bad luck, but I sure hope Jacob comes back to La Push someday.
Date: 19 Jul 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 11- Vampires Don't Fish
Any supernatural, fairly canon story has Billy feeling like this, half proud and sorrowful at the same time. It's going to be devastating for Revi as well as Embry and Quil. I think Billy is kidding himself, but that's just me.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 10- Interest For A Certain Quileute
I'm kind of wondering too, if Jake will ever phase or imprint. Guess the story wouldn't be very interesting if that didn't happen. He and Revi are growing up and who knows what will come to pass?
Date: 18 Jul 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 9- Edward Betty Crocker Cullen
Sounds like the Volturi may still be after Revi and her father, maybe Alice and Jasper too. Of course, life can't be too easy and peacful for Edward and Revi, that would never do!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 8- A Fairly Geeky Family
Revi has a good view of her family, calling them fairly geeky. Had to laugh at that. It's one way to look at supernatural differences. That last sentence sure sounds as if there's trouble ahead on Revi's birthday.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 7- You're My Life Munchkin
Typical daddy, dropping his baby off at school for the first time! That was so cute, and how canon to have Jacob Black be Revi's first friend. Edward was fortunate to meet with Old Quil and tell his story and be accepted so easily. At least the Quileutes will let them live in peace. Much better than the Volturi would have done.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6- Damn Psychics
You zip right through the chapters, ninety miles an hour. It makes for a fast read, for sure. This is going to be a wrench, for Edward and Reviana, as well as Alice and Jasper. I'm wondering how the Quileutes are going to react to Edward and his hybrid child?
Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 5- Born in Death
Aro has a lot of patience, thinking he's going to have his way in the end. I'm hopeful you have a few nasty surprises in store for the old perv. It sounds to me like Alice, Jasper, Edward and his baby are okay for now. Their futures are full of possibilities.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 4- Experiments and a Promise
Aro has to be pleased as punch his little plan seems to be working out. Let's see if Edward, Alice and Jasper can thwart him , just a little!
Date: 18 Jul 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 3- Captives
I'm seriously hoping Aro has bitten off more than he can chew this time. The manipulating little bastard thinks he's so damn smart, it will be good for him to get his come-uppance. Lead on, this story is good.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 2- Monsterly Addition
Volterra ain't what it was , huh? This is quite a different view of vampire life in Italy. Alice and Jasper are there, golden-eyed as ever, though his ability is changed. Edward is set on an interesting path.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1- Slowly, Getting Faster
Okay, I'm intrigued. This sounds very promising and I'm giving it a shot. Edward is experiencing immortality very differently from the way we expect from the Twilight saga. Let's see how it goes!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 80- Moment of Completion
Great story, sorry I didn't review for so long. I'm sad that it's over
Author's Response:
i'm glad you liked it! i hope you check out the other's. i'm sad this one is over too. i'm sad when any of them end.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 46- No Thinking At Bellarmine
I started the story this morning. I am still in my jammies and have a cramp in my ass from sitting at the computer. Not to mention I keep having to make the font bigger every few chapters. Needless to say-you totally got me hooked. I love your twist on everything. Since I still have a ways to go I thought I'd better finally review. Plus, you deserve it.Ü
Author's Response:
thank you! though im sorry for the cramp in your ass, trust me ive been there, while writing all my chapters. i'm glad you like it and i hope you keep enjoying. let me know what you think when you finish it! theres still more twists to come
Date: 30 Sep 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 80- Moment of Completion
It was totally awesome... Thanks for a wonderful story!
Author's Response:
your welcome! thank you for reading reviewing and enjoying
Date: 24 Sep 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 80- Moment of Completion
loved the ending, kinda tying things up..well done
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 79- Front Porch Dream
OMG!! I am so loving this story. I just found it on here yesterday, and have read the whole thing. It is so creative, I haven't read a story of Edward being a daddy w/o Bella and I have to say I LOVE IT. You have a great writing style. Climatic in just the right places, and very well written. So awsome Job and can't wait for the last chapter!
Author's Response:
thank you so much! i'm glad you've enjoyed it. you should check out my other story i have posted if you like my style of writing. its an imprint story. last chapter of this one will be up this weeekend.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 77- Our Lives Depend On Each Other
wow-did not see that direction coming. I thought Alec was working separate from the Volturi?
Author's Response:
yes in my world they cant but a vampire back together, i should have clarified that once the heads off, game over.
and alec is still a part of the volturi, he just is watching them on his own. this will be explained in a upcoming chapter
Date: 12 Sep 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 76- Tearing Wail
can't they put him back together??????????? I guess not in your vampire world. Oh I always had a special spot for Jasper.........
Date: 12 Sep 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 75- I'll Show You Mad
Noooooooooooooo! I do not know which would be worse! (I was always a little team Jasper at heart)
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 74- Perfect in it's Imperfections
sweeeeeeet!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 73- Stranger, But Stronger
Love it! Bring on the wedding!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 71- Never Again
want some details! sorry, I know, keep it clean, but it does carry a rating for more!
Date: 05 Sep 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 70- Mirrors
uh oh........alec is back to avenge Jane....trouble!!!!!!!! Enjoyed the update!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 69- The Whole Me, The Whole Us
Great chapter.
Date: 01 Sep 2010 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 69- The Whole Me, The Whole Us
sweet : )
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 68- The Nightmare Became The Dream
sweet-good change
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 68- The Nightmare Became The Dream
Great chapter
Date: 26 Aug 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 67- It Was The Best Of Times
awwww cute-now lets get some action!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 67- It Was The Best Of Times
Hmm... Next chapter, pretty please?
Date: 08 Aug 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 66- Fight For The Magic, Not The Norm
sweet....I like Bella's thinking. Nice thought processing. Good work!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 66- Fight For The Magic, Not The Norm
I look forward to the next chapter