Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
well among other things sniff sniff im not completely without feelings <nose up in the air> although those lemons are high on the moments.. lmao good job girl
npn
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[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Awwwww Love it ^^
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Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
that must be so horrible.. not remembering...helluva memories shes missing too lol ok i just ruined the moment but you know what i mean
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I do know what you mean! I would hate to forget about having all that great sex with E and J:)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
Very good chapter. Can't wait to read more. I hope that Bella gets her memories back or at least can start some new ones.
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Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
glad to see things moving along a bit for them ... maybe she will get more flashes soon too :)
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Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
LOL. Love her last thought. I hope she can get her leg moving again.
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Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella, Will wake up right!??!
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You mean remember??? Yes, she will:)
Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
At least sheh is trying to remember all of this now.
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[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it soooo much :D
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Date: 21 Apr 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love these four together even if they are just talking. I am glad that Bella is at least listening to what they are telling her and not just shutting them out.
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[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Well I have to agree with Jasper at least she still has her humour, I think she would be screwed if she did not have that.
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Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 4
good chapter! can't wait to see more :)
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Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
Liking it.. its more emotional than the first one..
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Thank you. It is more emotional than the first one;)
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
You probably think what I am about to say is a bit nasty but please don’t take it that way at all, I am just expressing how I feel about them but sometimes it comes out wrong so please forgive me if it does.
I have read both of your stories Lustful Awakenings and this one and I have to say it really does fall into fiction with a humungous capital F. I have enjoyed reading them so far even if it is mainly just sex, sex and more sex with a hint of overcoming ones sexuality and what someone in this sort of relationship would face. (Everyone to their own even if I do not agree. I am in no way shape or form to judge anyone’s beliefs or sexuality at all, I say if it make you happy and you are not harming / abusing anyone go for it, life is to short not to be happy.)
Yeah so the story is so farfetched when it comes to everyone being in this sort of relationship (The whole family). There are actually some really good messages behind it and I have left my comments till now so I was not telling you that “come on really like this would happen” because I know how hard it is to actually put yourself out there like you have. So I take my hat off to you for that.
Well I really can’t wait for the next chapter to see where you take this story especially with Bella now coming out of a coma and having to face the fact she is going to have to learn about the last 5 years of her life.
Not that I know what you are going to write and I would never tell you but I wonder how everyone would feel if Bella turned around and said she only wanted to be married to Edward and no one else, or how they would feel if she said she only wanted Alice not Edward or Jasper? Sorry the thought crossed my mind. I was just wondering.
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Thank you for letting me know how you feel. That's the great thing about Fiction is that it deosn't have to be real, and I will be the frist to admit that my two stories are farfetched and unbelievable but that the great thing about books. They can take you to a world of make believe and wishful thinking, like sparkling vampires :) anyway, thank you for reading my stories and taking the time to tell me what you think. I appreciate it because you didn't have to. Have a wonderful night:)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ah, I feel so bad for E&J. They miss their wives. I am glad that Bella is letting Alice stay close through all of this. At least she has someone she can connect with.
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Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, that was kinda sad but hott at the same time.
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Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
Cool Beans! :)
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Date: 20 Apr 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting! :)
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Date: 20 Apr 2010 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
aww poor jasper and edward :( but at least they have each other until Bella gets better .... good way to throw some hot sexin in the middle of the angst! :)
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Date: 20 Apr 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
AWWW I'm teary eyed!
I want Bella back!!
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I know!!!! Thanks for the reivew:)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
WOW great chapter. Poor Bella cant wait to see how she takes being married to them all.
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella to have lost 4 very important years of her life. I feel bad for Edward and Jasper because they can't even touch her. It must be killing them after 6 months of her in a coma.
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
Will she get her memory back soon or will it be awhile yet? I wonder if it will change her outlook on their relationship. Oh boy, she is in for a eye opening experience if they tell her everything that has happened with all the family. LOL
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
No... ***pouts and stomps her foot down like Alice***
Nice try! ;)
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Well, damn.....
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
You evil evil girl I hate the word "eventually" as much as Jake...
lol
***thinks about future***
***another devilish grin***
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ok, hows this, I promise that by the end of the stroy that they live happily ever after, in the land of fairy's and pixie's :) Better?
Date: 19 Apr 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
You have got to be kidding me... Painful just that!! Please make her remember!! Use my sharks as a motive if needed ***evil grin***
Love ya
xoxo
Marianne
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LOL, not the sharks!! No, please, no....I'll do better! Please???? Ok, now that I've had my dramatic meltdwon, I promise everything will be ok....eventually ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
I absolutely love the first two chapters :)
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
well at least she didn't forget everything! :) Keep writing... so excited to see more :)
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
aww when will bella remember!!
Please don't stretch it out too long.
great chapter.
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Thank:) I won't.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I can't wait to read more!!! love it!! :)
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's so sad that she can't remember.
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT??????ohhhh mamas been a bad bad pixie ..im still reeling after reading the first paragraph lol ill let you know how i feel about this one after i read the next one lol fucking A! trust you to not only dump us in a different state but go back in years too!! talk about honey we're not in kansas anymore.. lmao.. ill see you on the next one .. lol
with reserve feeling and slightly confused
tricia
Tricia
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
I really hope that Bella gets back her memories because it is sad that she doesn't remember her life for the last 4 years.
Date: 19 Apr 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
That is so sad that she doesn't remember the last 4 years. I hope that she gets all of it back though.
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like it! Great chapter.
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
i still cant believe you made bella forget!!!!!!!!!!
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I promise it will be ok:)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
She has been in a coma for 6 months! That is terrible she has missed so much.
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
really great so far! I feel so bad for everyone :( Can't wait to see more :)
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh no!!! I hope everything will work out...cant wait to read and find out
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Date: 19 Apr 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
i loved the first on cant wait to see what happens in the second!
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Date: 18 Apr 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was good cant wait for more
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Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Phew, I'm glad Alice didn't lose the baby, but how long is Bella going to be lost to them?
Excellent beginning.
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Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
aww i hope Bella is okay!!
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Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
aww it was a sad note. But looks like it will turn out to be very dramatic just like the first story. :) Cannot wait to read more
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