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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 13

oh my she really does remember everything even her defensive act of killing that nasty alec, did she really dissapear upstairs to reconnect with jasper with everybody downstairs it's a good job her parents are so liberal lol her words to all the parents were heartfelt and sounded honest, great chapter thanks tracy

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 14

lovely!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

Very sweet.  Loved the heart to heart with Kate.



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Thank you ;)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

Yeah!!!  I am so glad that she remembers them!!!  I thought the fact that she had sex with Jasper in Edward's old room at Christmas with the WHOLE family downstairs was a little odd, but I can roll with it.  I wonder why she didn't drag Edward and Alice up with them?



Author's Response:

You have to remember that she remembered Alice and had quite a few flashes of her time with Edward but Jasper was pretty much nothing. I think that Bella and Jasper needed to reconnect one on one becasue it had been so hard on Jasper that Bella didn't remember them ever making love.

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

really good .. I am glad that Kate and Bella got to talk a bit :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

yay! finally and oh crap to the last line! :)



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well that was an...interesting ending.  Can't wait to see the reactions. Keep up the excellent work!



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thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

B.B.

Ok the tears are flowing from this reader right now!!!!

More please!!!! When it's ready that is!!!!

Now I'm going to blow my nose (hee, hee)

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you, Cory:)

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 13

hahahaha love the ending!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well I am happy she remembers but Bella can be one hell of a firecracker.



Author's Response:

Thank you, yes she is:)

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 12

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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

sounds like their having a great xmas although i had to laugh at the 101 ways book, and hey good news breakthrough bella remembers jasper everything about jasper,, her memory is returning strongly so hopefuly she will recall the others as well thanks tracy



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 11

bella is very compassionate giving jessica another chance after her stunt, things seem to be settling down generally despite the memory loss, bella is back at work and is getting on well with alice, jasper and of course edward, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

oh my just when i thought things were ticking along quite well bella's  therapy and alices pregnancy alongf comes jessica and god only knows what she has on her mind, great chapter thanks tracy

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 12

I love all the combinations you come up with for these four..always sexy..always hot!!!

I am so glad she got her memories back of Jasper, but what was in the bag that triggered it and what about Edward?



Author's Response:

Thank you. I promise that everything will be explained in the next chapter:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 12

awww YAY!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 12

B.B.

Now that's a great Christmas present!!! Her memory!!!!

Well done!!!! (two thumbs up!!!!)

More please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

yay!! baby steps! so happy for Jas!! Can't wait till tomorrow!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awww yay!  Poor Edward is gonna feel left out though....



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Thanks.

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2010 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 12

woohooooo only a fool would not remember my jasper :-P <cover her eyes at the mention of stinky jessica> lol that was good.. and we're back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Tricia



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

very sweet



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

B.B.

I would have kicked Jessica's arse out of that office pronto!!!! I'm glad you made Bella a little bit more understanding!!!!

Jasper is a hoot!!! "No fucking in the kitchen!!!" (hee, hee) He just wants to be the first one to do it in the kitchen!!!!

Loved the chapter!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

In real life, I would have too but for the sake of the story...I did not:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

crazy jes jeez LOL :)



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I know! thanks:0

Reviewer: tric4r Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

well if i have to work with somebody whos got 3 hotties on tap i'll be so green with envy they'll think im a foster child for earth day!! thank god youre not adding jessica in the mix .. that just wrong..hmm that means you could be adding more characters to gel with stinky jessica..hmmmmmmm nah lol



Author's Response:

lol, I promise you that I will not be adding Jessica to anyone's family.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 11

Ok, so sex in the kitchen is not allowed, but oral in the office is?  I just want to make sure I have my sex rules memorized. LOL

Another excellent chapter.  I'm glad to see Bella is getting her balls back.



Author's Response:

lol, Sex in the kitchen is fine, just not near the food ;)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11

Those boys are so silly and sweet.



Author's Response:

THanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 10

B.B.

Fabulous story you've got going here. So glad that I'm all caught up now!!!!

Love how you're mixing a story with the hotness of the sex!!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG what the hell!! LOL



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh Snap Jessica who would have thought?! not me!! tho her and lauren did get busy :) lol



Author's Response:

lmao, gross!! but funny!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

Okay, addressing the elephant in the room first...WTF?!?!?  What the hell is up with Jessica?  Is she trying to get a raise or something?  I didn't realize she batted for both teams.  Alice is going to give her a serious bitch slapping!

Baby names...hmmm, that is a tough one.  I am very curious to see what you come up with.  But please, for the love of God do not give that poor baby a blended name.  Of all the things that SM did with Twilight, that is the one thing I really hated was naming Renesemee.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I can assure you that the baby will not have a blended name. I agree with you on Reneseme;(

Reviewer: jtaylor1972 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

awww damn it! that's just messed up for crying out loud!  Leaving us all hangin' like that!!!  Geez!

I can only imagine Alice is gonna go postal on Jessica?  I sure and hell hope that Alice doesn't freak and think Bella chose to have Jessica invade her space... so to speak!

Please hurry soon with the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

your welcome :-) all we can do to keep our writers happy and well writing what else!! 

 

very much contented with uber what-the-fuck moment/chapter

Tricia

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh Jessica why must you start trouble.

Reviewer: tric4r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 10

WHAT THE FUCK INDEED!!!ohh i was beginning to think we gonna mellow out for a bit and there you go again.. hit us with a sledgehammer... whatever that thing is lol fucking jessica ??so she was harboring lesbianish .. is that a word?...tendency now? that was a nice.. hmm dunno bout nice.. but its a surprise alright lolyou must a pretzel in your past life .. you like twisters.. looking forward for the next one!! :-) lol

 

Tricia



Author's Response:

Your review made me laugh! Thank you so much. I really needed to laugh tonight:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 10

thats just not fair....  cliffhangers are mean...please post soon, I need to know what is going on.



Author's Response:

I will, I promise:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

i wonder if bella memory will ever return? but at least she is feeling that connection they all have especially her and edward, i love that she wants to wear her rings again, and the fight with her parents, all the parents was resolved quickly as these things can quickly get out of hand, nice bit of sexy to finish with thanks tracy



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

yay :) really good chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 8

uh oh :(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

i think they need to go slow with the information they give her ... there is just so much that they need to tell her

Reviewer: edwardsboxers Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 9

Wow this sequel is even more powerful than lustful awakenings x

keep writing hun

as ever kisses xx



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

I loved this chapter!  It has been my favorite of SA.  I thought Bella's reaction to her parents was very realistic. 

I absolutely love how she declared her love for Alice, Jasper and Edward and how she explained that she may not remember loving them, but knows that she does now.  Perfect!



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 9

well she is getting to the bottom of a few things. looks like she has realized that the past is not as important as the present and the future.



Author's Response:

Exactly, thanks:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 9

Much better great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Maybe too much good chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 9

awww....cute! 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

how sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

nice banners on both of the awakings!!!!! just one thing is missing on this ones banner...no jasper at all anywhere!



Author's Response:

I know, thanks:)

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8

Maybe it was a little too much to throw everyone's relationship at her at once, huh? Maybe this will spark her memory back. I hope. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

um ok what the fuck bella?



Author's Response:

It'll be ok:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 8

Hey cool banner i like it, oh my the news did not go down with bella too well did it, i thought she would be receptive to the idea but maybe it was too much at once given the whole they never accepted her thing, great stuff thanks tracy



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 7

i think they are doing a great job with bella's memories. she remembers the party. next up the parents, wonder what she'll think of that?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 6

i agree with bella this is a great idea, they just need to keep at it

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

yay she likes the relationship idea! and the sex! oh honey we are all waiting for the sex!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

ok so far she seems to be taking everything ok. but man this would really be confusing.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

well it looks like it is gonna be a long road back.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

how has bella noticed alice's hair but not the baby bump?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

well looks like the baby is fine, i wonder if they will do a paterity test to find out who the daddy really is? or will the baby come out blonde like jasper or with green eyes like edward?

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

Oh boy.



Author's Response:

THANKS:)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 8

Does Bella remember more than she is letting on??



Author's Response:

No, sometimes the littlest things can trigger things.

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 8

cant blame the girl.. last memory she has when they pretty much disowned when they find out about alice.. its gonna a long ass road before we see paradise again eh lol poor thing



Author's Response: Exactly!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

Holy shit!  I am sure that wasn't the reaction they were expecting.  But if you think about it, it would make sense since they all gave her and Alice shit about their relationship for years.



Author's Response:

Exactly!! Thanks:)

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

ohhhh nice! please nxt be her remembering ed and jazz!!!



Author's Response:

Soon:) She remembers bits and peices of Edward, already:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great chaptder

Author's Response:


Thanks for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

I would so try that to get my memories back even if it didnt work i would try again

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter love it

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

i dont know if telling her about alex is a good thing.

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh land of jasper!! :-)california here.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Gseat chapter

Author's Response:

thank you:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

great chapter, no i think they were correct to not tell her about alexs attack she is still having nighmares over jacob, with a memory and brain that will not work properly i can see the sense in passing over nasty news in order to help restore good memories if she never remembers that would that be so bad? bella seems to be quite comfortable with her relationship status now so her parents and all the others indulging the same should not phase her and its positive news that everybody is happy about so i think bella will be ok, thanks tracy



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

that must be so bizzare looking at photos that are very clearly you yet you cant recall it, but its good that the house seemd familiar to bella, lots of info to trickle in and help, now that's some kind of therapy they're indulging in (i want to shout mind the hip lol) kinda makes sense as her flashbacks were sexualy themed, roll on more flashbacks for bella, more please thanks tracy

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 7

i'm voting for the parents telling bella about them.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

she still feels it the connection they have despite not recgonising him her body still does,  love how they just laying on the bed chatting, tanya seems nice, thanks tracy

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

you gotta feel for bella her physio will be intense,  nice to see her joking about even if she cant quite get her head round her life and how different it is,  great chapter thanks tracy

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

This is great i love it so far

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

First off, excellent chapter! I love that Bella is remembering more and more of her life and I love Edward and Jasper's reactions everytime she has memories of them.

To answer your question, yes I think they should tell her about Alex and how it all came to be.  But I don't think they should tell her at the office.  She needs to be somewhere safe with them so it doesn't hit her too hard since in her mind Jacob had just attacked her.  It is all too fresh.



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

i've been trying to read this all day but the kids and bloody housework keep getting in the way, poor bella she is so overwhelmed, jasper and edward are feeling left behind i get that but she just need time and a few prayers thanks tracy



Author's Response:

lol, darn kids!! Don't they know you have things to do!!

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

LOVE it :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 7

I probably would hold out on telling her too, but I dont know.



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

good idea



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

btw.. are you a member of insomnia club too? lol i always get a response from you.. which im greatfull lol.. no matter what time i sent it out.. where on paradise land you hail from?

 



Author's Response:

Yes, I am:) Insomina has taken over my life!!  I am from Texas;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 7

well she is goign to eventually remember what happens so i would let her figure it out herself! 



Author's Response:

Good point:)

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 7

hmm tuffie...maybe but that could have the opposite effect but seems like shes a lil tough girl herself



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: bitandhooked Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

Sex is a great stress reliever, energy builder, and many other things in my house and I am all for the memory inducer too.  My husband says thanks for the stories, I read him the extra yummy ones out loud... he may get into fan fiction yet!

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh yes, a hell of a way to remember. LOL



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Thanks:-)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2

jepers what a scary senario losing 4 years of your life like that and she has been asleep for six months, will her memory return? or will they have to teach her all that has gone on again? it's so late here in england i'll have to read the rest tomorow thanks tracy



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

i only just got here your updating like a woman possessed were six chapters in not that i'm complaining, its lots to read and catch up on, oh my lord everybody has altered their life for bella not that i would expect anything different, alice kept the baby thank goodness, and now bella is awake six months later but what will she be like?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well that is one way to try to remember something.



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lol, It doens't hurt, right?

 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

I hope that she starts to remember things soon for her sake.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6

it was well worth the try! LOL :)



Author's Response:

Can't blame them for trying ;)

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 6

It brought a smile to my face all I could about was "screw the memories back into her" I was killing myself laughing.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:) Glad I could help !

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

 in all my yapping and jabbering i just finally notice i dont really leave a 'review' per se more like snarky stupid ass comment..dont have constructive commentslol .. sowwy.. cant say much other than whether im feeling your chapter or how great it is lol..

 

Tricia



Author's Response:

Hey, I love your snarky ass comments!  They make me giggle ;)

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 6

Love this chapter a lot :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

amen to that..  cant improve on perfection eh lol



Author's Response:

lol, nope:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Hell yes that would be an awesome way to try and get my memory back!  I'd fack amnesia just for the chance to have a roll with Edward and Jasper (ok, and Alice too).  Excellent chapter.  I am so glad that she came home with them and is starting to find some familiarity in her life.



Author's Response:

lol, me too!! I would let them try to trigger my memory all night long!!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love that she is starting to trust Edward and allow both boys to get closer to her.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: bitandhooked Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 6

Sex is a great stress reliever, energy builder, and many other things in my house and I am all for the memory inducer too.  My husband says thanks for the stories, I read him the extra yummy ones out loud... he may get into fan fiction yet!



Author's Response:

lol, tell him I said he is welcome:0)

Reviewer: hippie105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

I want Bella to get her memory back! Love the story though!



Author's Response:

She will:)

Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

it would be a hell of a way to get back her memories...you're the author make it happen!!!! like i dont know



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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