[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hm, I didn't expect that...
Love the chapter ^^
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Date: 11 May 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
that was awesome great chapter
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Date: 11 May 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter! So I am guessing by the description of the baby she is Edward's... does that mean that Bella's will be Jasper's ? Can't wait to see more and the boys reaction to Bella's pregnancy!!! :)
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Perhaps, guess we'll just have to see what the baby looks like when he or she is born, huh ;) Thank you for the review:)
Date: 11 May 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
B.B.
Now I wasn't expecting that twist!!! You surprised me B.B.!!! Job well done!!!
Looking forward to more!!!!!
Cory
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[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 24
OMG!!! Best Chapter Yet!!! Love the name and the fact that Bella is pregnant now is just awesome. So Edward is the bio-daddy of Whitley...will he be two for two or will Jasper get in the mix? LOL! I can't wait to find out!
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Date: 11 May 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope that Edward isn't the father of Alice's baby...it just doesn't seem right. Although the tuft of auburn hair probably means that he is. I just can't wrap my head around it!
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Date: 11 May 2010 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
Please please please!!!
Alice R..*
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Date: 11 May 2010 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
wicked chapter and im guessing that the baby is alices and edwards biologically. hopefully that will mean that bellas is hers and jaspers so they all have biological children.
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Date: 11 May 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 24
loads going on this chap[ter, ben and angela are all sorted, bellas in therapy which is helping her and she's walking on a stick so she's healing well, then on to the big news the new baby has arrived, whitney bless her, the birth of a child is always something to celebrate and this baby is going to be loved fourfold, and more news bella is pregnant so two babies9 months apart now thats hard work i have triplets myself so i know all about lots of babies at once but there is four of them so i'm guessing help is always available, lovin the happy chapter thanks tracy
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Date: 11 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 23
another cool chapter, i'm glad bellas hip has not been made any worse, bella really does not see her own strength and ability, i liked the end bit it was real sweet bella asking for confirmation in a way that they are all fine together after everything that has happened, thanks tracy
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 24
oh boy i cant wait to see how bella and alice decide to tell the guys that they are going to be fathers again this is going to be good i hope you have a good way that she is going to tell them so please update soon
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[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
that was seriously fucking awesome!!! love it
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[Report This]Date: 11 May 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE the chapter :)
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Date: 11 May 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
im happy they are starting to get their happy time cant wait till the next chapter
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Date: 11 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
How exciting.
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Date: 10 May 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter! :)
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Date: 10 May 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
We need some happy times. I am tired of seeing Bella so sad and blaming herself for everything that has happened. I hope she does find a therapist that helps her work through her anger and issues.
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Date: 10 May 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
B.B.
Oh good!!! (Cory lets out a big sigh) Some happiness is coming!!!!
So loving this story!!!!
Cory
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lol, Thanks:)
Date: 10 May 2010 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
Alice R..*
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Date: 10 May 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
i love happy times good chapter
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Date: 10 May 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yay for happy times.
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Date: 10 May 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
B.B.
I sure hope this is the last of the troubles for Bella!!!!! They need peace. A baby is coming soon!!!!
Great chapter as always!!!!
Cory
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Date: 09 May 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
just as i suspected she must be a little crazy what a crazy excuse, but at least bella knows why, it might be stupid but bella got what she asked for knowledge of why, so she can deal with it and move on, i'm sure when all is explained to angela she'll realise she was hasty in her decision to leave i think she should have listened to his side, great chapter thanks tracy
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Date: 09 May 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
what was that about that? kelly must be a little mental, bloody hell bella did have some rage i was begining to worry her self preservation skills were gone for good, but edward made her realise she had a lot back home waiting for her, do we find out why she picked bella, but i'm glad she diddn't shoot her she does not need any more to deal with thanks tracy
Date: 09 May 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
look here butterfly betty what are you doing to me!!! (in jokey voice) again i just start thinking about what to write in a review and there is a shock ending lol this time involving a gun, what the hell is kellys problem with bella has she been skanking all over town just to get bellas attention but i'm glad to know ben was never unfaithfull, great chapter thanks tracy
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lol, just keeping you on your toes ;)
Date: 09 May 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh lord i was just starting to think what to put in a review and the last two lines threw me through a loop angela and ben seemed so set when bella visited, so the meeting went well it could have been so different if the man had not been remorseful but i'm glad they felt they got some closure, great chapter thanks tracy
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Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 09 May 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh my, i actually got a bit teary when i read the letter and what her mum and esme had done i should have said last chapter that was a good thing they did holding bella hand as they got the scan done etc, and now bella has physical evidence of those things instead of a memory, and she wants to see the boke who crashed into them is that a wise choice? i'm not sure thanks tracy
Date: 09 May 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
excellent i not been able to read for a couple of days and now i get 6 chapters to catch up on you have a fantastic posting schedule thankyou, this chapeter is great i'm glad bella is feeling more secure and has begun to talk to the others, as for the crazy restaurant lady why is is people think they have the right to berate complete strangers on the basis that they are not one woman one man status, my cousin (a girl) is living with a girl and they are so happy, but they have been given grief on occasions when out with their son who they adopted it is never acceptable, luckily my cousin has a gob just like bella so can give as good as she gets, love the last line thanks tracy
Date: 09 May 2010 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
Alice R..*
Date: 09 May 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
okay she one crazy Bitch almost baby time yeah so exciting
Date: 09 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella really does attract the crazies, doesn't she?
By the way, very nice jealousy sex in the hotel..hot! ;)
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Date: 08 May 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow that was a lot of drama for what reason did she do that
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Date: 08 May 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
i knew he wouldnt but wow does everyone have guns i don't
Date: 08 May 2010 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
i am so glad they all got the closure they needed i was hoping for some fluff and lemons not more drama a least not for a chapter or 2
Date: 08 May 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was so sweet they did for bella closure Will be good for them all
Date: 08 May 2010 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 21
stupid crazy people! LOL :) Great chapter
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 07 May 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 21
Poor kids, they can never catch a break.
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I know:( thanks!
Date: 07 May 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
B.B.
Caught up on the two chapters. WOW!!!!!
You go Bella!!!!
Loved the chapters as you can tell!!!!
Cory
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Date: 07 May 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
Whoa, Bella was very brave but very foolish as well. I am glad none of them were seriously hurt. Alice is going to rip her a new one when she hears what happened.
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Yes, she was:( Thanks.
Date: 07 May 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad that Ben is not a cheating bastard, but now we have a crazy-husband stealing-skank with a gun? Not good!
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Not good at all:)
Date: 07 May 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
You better hide you bad girl!!! How can you???? Now you have to update soon!!
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I will update soon, I promise:)
Date: 07 May 2010 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh
Shoot.
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Thanks:)
Date: 07 May 2010 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 20
Lol u my friend is up to your old trick :-)
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Yep, I am :)
Date: 07 May 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 20
Holy crap, is she gonna shoot them? Please update soon!
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Date: 07 May 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
OMG you can't leave it there! LOL :) Can't wait to see what crazy bitches' issue is LOL :)
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 07 May 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
hot damn ! yet again another thing is happing to their happiness! cant wait till the next chapter !
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Date: 07 May 2010 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
B.B.
That was a well written chapter!!! (two thumbs up) Absolutely loved it!!!!
You've left me wondering how many times a situation plays out like this one in the real world!!!!
Cory
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Date: 06 May 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
uh oh :( That was a great chapter though! :)
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[Report This]Date: 06 May 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
i think the cullen house hold just grew to include two moor people i cant wait to see what happens next this is going to get good so please update soon
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Date: 06 May 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG! I never would have guessed ben was a cheater. man ur good. don't keep us hanging so long. cant wait for the next update.
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Date: 06 May 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh boy. poor angela. I really like how you had Bella and everyone confront the driver because a lot of people don't and just let it fester. I hope now she can move towards being happy again.
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Thank you. Bella, as well as everyone else, needed that closure:)
Date: 06 May 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh poor Angela.
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I know :(
Date: 06 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Holy crap! Did not see Angela showing up on their doorstep with her baby coming! Their bed is full, she is going to have to sleep somewhere else. ;)
I liked the confrontation Bella and the family had with the driver. It was emotional, but not out of control with anger. Well done.
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LOL, Angela will not be joining our foursome in bed ;p Thank you for the review:)
Date: 05 May 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 18
Aww that was so unbeliveable sweet a thing of Esme and Renee to do. Hope you update again soon
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Date: 05 May 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter! Aww Esme and Renee are so great for doing that for her! :)
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Date: 05 May 2010 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
Alice R..*
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Date: 05 May 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
hmm what to do with a straight pretzel .. ;-P Love it lol
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 05 May 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 18
B.B.
Now I'm a bit scared. I hope this goes well for Bella and group!!!!
More when you can please!!!!
Cory
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Date: 05 May 2010 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Sex wake up calls are the BEST wake up calls ever!!!! Very hot! I loved every hot sticky word of it! LOL!
Esme and Renee rock!!! What they gave Bella was absolutely perfect! Only a mom would know how important those moments would be to Bella.
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 05 May 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 17
Poor Bella. I really hope the three of them can help her see the positive of the situation and not focus on all she lost.
I love how she totally gave it to that bitch in the restaurant and how Mike kicked her ass out...sweet!
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Date: 04 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
B.B.
Wonderful chpter!!! Loved that Alice & Bella stood up for each other!!!!
More when you can please!!!!!
Cory
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Date: 04 May 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
:) ugh stupid people ... great chapter! Can't wait to see what she decides to paint :)
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Date: 04 May 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
i do like firey Bella great chapter oh
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Date: 04 May 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella needs to be less dramatic let it out and move on
Date: 04 May 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 15
think that's a bad decision anger builds if not taken care of
Date: 04 May 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
so sweet great as always al
Date: 04 May 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
yeah she remembers great chapter
Date: 04 May 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella's Back!
I was a little teary and then was cheering! I hope she can see that they do love her - flaws and all! None of them are pefect..nobody is perfect!
Thanks for the update!
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Date: 04 May 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh that's great that she is gettin more of her memories back and
Date: 04 May 2010 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Okay don't think Jessica was thinking on that one great chapter Okay
Date: 04 May 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 10
wow was not expecting that yeah its a girl great chapter
Date: 04 May 2010 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
Selena..*
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Date: 04 May 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 16
good chapter... at least she is talking about her anger now :)
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Date: 03 May 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was a sad chapter. I can't believe they thought that Bella wanted to leave them. I don't understand why she blames herself for missing all that time with them when she was in a coma. It's not like she was choosing not to wake up.
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Fear can do amazing things to a person:(
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 16
awwwwwwww poor bella!!!!
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Date: 03 May 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella, always trying to take everything on herself.
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I know,thanks:)
Date: 03 May 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Poor Bella.
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Date: 03 May 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love the update! :)
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Date: 03 May 2010 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
Alice R..*
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Date: 03 May 2010 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
oh poor bella she is really distraught but at least she is talking about it she needs some help to realise losing six months is a small price to pay that drunk could have killed her mentally impared her or crippled her for life any number of horrible things or even lose the baby, maybe a therapist would be a good idea just a better one than before, loved the flashback of when they first met and their teenage years thanks tracy
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All in the plans, my lovely:)
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
So sad :( But lovely chapter
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Date: 03 May 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
B.B.
That was a tough ending to read BB. You can't let Bella blame herself!!!
I trust you to fix this teeny problem!!!!
Thanks for the quick update also!!! I hope your muse doesn't stall out on us readers!!!! That wouldn't be good!!!!
Great chapter!!!!
Cory
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Thank you, hon. I have 39 chapters of this story written already:)
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh man plese tell me that there isnt someone stocking bella and please tell me that we will not only see alice have the baby soon that maybe we will see bella get a big surprise of her own espcially if it is a christmas baby from jasper i cant wait to see what happens next so please update soon
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No one is stalking her...Yes, Alice will have the baby but not for a while and I can assure that I am far from done with this story:)
Date: 02 May 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 15
a nice chapter, bella is back at work and is coping well her anger issues i hope she can work on, thanks tracy
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Date: 02 May 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
It's so sad how much she's missed and i feel sorry for her that she feels like she can't express her anger because it's bound to get worse before it gets better! Looking forward to the next update
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Date: 02 May 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
Yay, she has her memory back!!! That was some hawt time between Bella and Jasper there. Sorry to be so short, but I have more of this awesome story to catch up on.
Date: 02 May 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
really good chapter.. Love that she is making Jess and Eric work together LOL :) Hope her anger doesn't create too many issues :)
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Date: 02 May 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh no. bad things happen when people attempt to handle their anger alone...
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yep
Date: 02 May 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
B.B.
Bella has to talk to someone or else she will spontaniously combust!!!!! I thnk you should send Edward in with concern but, your muse will tell you what's the right thing to do and the right time as well!!!!
Loving the story!!!! More when you can please!!!!
Cory
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Thank you, hon:)
Date: 02 May 2010 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
theres like hmm a 'but' feel to it.. ? does that make sense? lol it should be a happy but felt like shes waiting for the other shoe to drop???? lol
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Exactly!!! Thanks:)
Date: 02 May 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
Uh oh, Bella shouldn't be keeping secrets from the others. This has the potential to either blow up in her face or bite her in the ass.
Author's Response:
Yep, it does:(
Author's Response:
Yep, it does:(
Date: 02 May 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 15
Aw, she should talk to them. It won't do her any good.
Author's Response:
I know but she so stubborn!
Date: 01 May 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
B.B.
Tears are flowing after that chapter!!!
Things are going well for everyone. So why do I have a funny feeling that something bad is going to happen???
I hope you and your muse prove me wrong!!!!
Cory
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Thanks:) I still have a few surprises up my sleeps for this gang:)
Date: 01 May 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
well it seems like things are good for everyone. does that mean we are getting close to the end?
Author's Response:
Nope, we still have quite a ways to go:) I just didn't wnat to drag out that part.
Date: 01 May 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
yay jasper made her remember! it was that day with him that set it all off. so happy thet b is getting everything back. it's a christmas miracle!
Date: 01 May 2010 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 12
what the hell was in the bag to make b remember jasper?
Date: 01 May 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
heehee i wonder what bella has planed for jessica?
Date: 01 May 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
wtf!?! is jess trying for a promotion? trying to start shit? or is she just that fucking stupid?
Date: 01 May 2010 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
a lovely chapter, bella and kate chat was sweet, bella just needs a bit of time to process, the end was lovely everybody happy and settled all the various fours (as apposed to couples) content with their lot, more please thanks tracy