Date: 25 May 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 38
wow ! alice off her no sex its goign to be wild!
Author's Response:
lol, I know, right? Thank you for the review:)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 35
Those crazy kids and their mood swings!
Author's Response:
lol, gotta love hormones:)
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 34
That was so hot...Edward wanting to be a stay at home dad!!!!! HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I think so too:)
Date: 24 May 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 37
fab chapter, i'm glad the missunderstanding was cleared up quickly as these things have a habit of getting out of hand, love the last line into the lions den are the inlaws really that bad lol thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 May 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 37
B.B
You know what I love about your story. It's that you're making everyone loveable have someone to love them. Now Seth will, I think!!!!
I love this story!!!!!
More when you can please!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 24 May 2010 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 37
Is it just me or is Bella in the wrong business? She should have been a match maker. First Garrett and Kate, then Jessica and Eric and now Seth and Tanya. The girl is on a roll.
I love the way you write Tanya's character. She is always seen as the evil whore trying to steal Bella's man. In this case she has a bit of a bitchy attitude, but she wears it well and she adds a nice little touch to the story. Good job! ;)
Author's Response:
lol, thank:) I don't usually like a mean Tanya. I have one story where she is a trouble maker but I don't usually see her like that.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2010 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 36
ohhhhh shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 May 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 36
B.B.
Loved the bet they all had going on!!!!!
Well done ont that part of the story B.B.!!!! I love surprises like that one!!!!
Now what is Tanya screaming about????
More when it's ready please!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 23 May 2010 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 36
great chapter, love how all the parents seemed to know berfore they even did, and they took bets lol, and now bella gets to deal with her straight talking no nonsence physio thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 36
that was fucking funny.. it was all foreboding in the last chapter and there they go taking bets!!! lol
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 May 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh My Carlisle!!! He had me crakcing up with those damed phone calls. I think this is one of the funniest chapters in this story so far.
Author's Response:
lol, I laughed so hard while writing this one!! Thank you for the review:)
Date: 22 May 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 35
B.B.
Just finished 4 chapters!!!
Loved that Bella stood up for herself but, not happy that her hip got hurt in the process.
Shocker about Edward wanting to stay home with Whitley!!! You got me on that one!!!
Looking forward to more when you post!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
that is just to funny why do i have a feeling that the boys are going to develope foot in mouth syndrom when it comes to bella and her hormones i cant wait to see what carlisles reaction is going to be when edward tells him that he wants to quit so please update soon
Author's Response:
lol, I'm sure they will ;)
Date: 22 May 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 35
another cool chapter, poor alice she needs some lovin just a few more weeks, and bella dosen't quite know which way is up at the moment and being stuck in bed dosen't help it gives you too much time to overthink every little thing, but like they say they made it through alices pregnancy and they will make it through bellas thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you;)
Date: 22 May 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
edward wants to be a stay at home dad and i totally get it when my triplets began school i had to have a a total re think about work (after taking a year off) but being a single mum my choices were limited to a job where i worked as they were in school hence teaching, but i totally understand the feeling of any care other than your own not being what you desire, great chapter thanks tracy love that the blackball thing is spreading all over town hanks tracy
Author's Response:
I know what you mean. I've been a sahm since my oldest was born. When my daugther started full time school a c ouple years back, I went back to college to get my teaching degree. BUt I love every minute I get with my kids.
Date: 22 May 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 35
All pregnant women should come with a warning sign: PROCEED WITH CAUTION. HORMONES ON BOARD!!!
Poor Jazz. Bella will have Alice with her at work, but Jazz isn't going to have Edward with him anymore. :(
Author's Response:
lol, about the warning sign.
Date: 21 May 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 34
Domestic Edward...I like it!
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 21 May 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 34
Really love your story…nice chapter btw
Hahaha can't see Edward as a stay at home dad...
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 34
as always great chapter and hot lemon
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 34
Holy shit! Edward wants to be a stay at home daddy? That is awesome!!! But honestly, I see Jasper as more of the stay at home type. LOL ;)
Author's Response:
lol, Thanks:)
Date: 21 May 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 34
oh wow big decision to make on your own edward!
Author's Response:
Yep, thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 33
mothers, i tell you! they sure can be a pain in the ass! lol! too bad we turn into them ourselves. when your baby needs you, or even when you think they do man we get crazy!
when my lung collapsed a few years ago even though i was fine and was sent home with a chest tube in to help it re-inflate, my mom took a week off work drove 5 hours to stay at my house just so she could sit with me daily at the hospital while i had my chest x-rays and check ups! i thought it was a waste of her time but mommy's need to take care os their babies. god i love the woman, she drove me nuts that week but i would never trade her in, she's the best!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 May 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 32
anywhere that i have my hunny and my babies, and be able to lock the world away. oh and warm and sunny, winters in alberta are getting old. heehee.
Date: 20 May 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 31
dream was insane, but i wonder if they will wanna act it out?...hmmm...
Date: 20 May 2010 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
god new parents are stupid! but hey we all do it. give them a couple months and it'll just be daily life. wait till teenage years and you want to go to work and wonder if you really need to go home! lol jj. it's quiet at work and almost peaceful compared to the joy of 3 teenagers, their friends, a cat, a dog, and a husband.
Date: 20 May 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 29
being a stay at home mom is awesome! i was one for 8 years, untill my baby started full time at school i highly recomend it to everyone.
Date: 20 May 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
fuck that was hot!
Date: 20 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
let me guess the baby is jasper's but just looks like edward?
Date: 20 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
well i guess this is the perk? of having these sort of relationships. everyone is having babies! life is gonna get hectic for everyone!
Date: 20 May 2010 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
yay baby is here and she is much loved! and bella has shared her big news. now we just need to see what rose's problem is.
Date: 20 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
yay one baby here and another one on the way. boy they are gonna be busy!
Date: 20 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
hopefully bella does find someone to talk to. she has a lot of shit held inside that she needs to deal with.
Date: 20 May 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 22
well the sexy times were hot and the jellousy was cute.
Date: 20 May 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 33
despite my children having grandparents i never had anybody do anything for me so i know they are a bit annoying but bella should welcome the help, which i think deep down she does, nice to know everybody is on board at her work and their revenge made them all feel better, great chapter thanks tracy
Author's Response:
thank you:)
Date: 20 May 2010 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 33
Aw the joys of mothers and mils.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 20 May 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
well looks like bella has some pent up anger that she needs to deal with.
Date: 20 May 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 33
Ahhhh, it's not what you know, but WHO you know. LOL!
The helicopter moms (they hover) are too funny. It is bad enought having a mom and a MIL, but having four in total must be a serious pain.
Author's Response:
lol, could you imagine!! Oh my...
Date: 20 May 2010 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
ok so who was she waiting for? ben? bella? can't be edward she doesn't know him. *scratches head and mumbles what the fuck*
Date: 20 May 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
well here to hopeing bella can move forward from this now. and what is up with ben and ang?
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2010 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 33
hay i love the story so far and cant wait to see what happens in the next chapters also for some reason i have not recieved the last three chapters of your story i havent recieved any chapters from any of my storys so could you please reply to this e-mail so i can see if something is going rong with my account thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you. I haven't been getting the review alerts either :(
Date: 20 May 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 33
Haha wicked update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 May 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
the gift was so sweet. those are all very important moments and then showing each of the other 3 involving b in their everyday life. so sweet!
Date: 20 May 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
so happy to see that bella finnaly talked to them all and got some of it out in the open.
unfortunatly they will all have to deal with people who judge what they do not know...
Date: 20 May 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
poor bella! but she should have said something sooner, now that it is out there they can all work together to make it better.
Date: 20 May 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
silly girl, you should not have to deal with it alone. that is part of being in a relationship, you share the joy and the ager, the highs and the lows. you are not alone and should invite them to help share the burden.
Date: 19 May 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter, a broken nose is the least he deserved what a total prick, this hip business is becoming a real problem for bella how will she carry the pregnancy with a real dodgy hip and give birth? i hope this bed rest works, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 May 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 32
Great charter a deserted island would be awesome for me
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the revews:)
Date: 19 May 2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
yeah that was crazy but a least it was hot great chapter
Date: 19 May 2010 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 30
Very good chapter
Date: 19 May 2010 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
i did that was some good sister time great chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 32
hmm anywhere i could run around naked??? lmao
Author's Response:
lol, Thank you:)
Date: 19 May 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
I am so glad Bella broke that SOB's nose. He deserved much worse.
Ok, so I was thinking about Bella's hip problem and the pregnancy. If she doesn't heal properly and fast the extra weight of the baby could do some serious damage not to mention the delivery might be hindered if she isn't 100% recovered by then. I know they are just fictional characters that you write a fun and fantastic story about, but I worry about them. LOL ;)
Author's Response:
lol, I know, me too. I cover that very issue in a few chapters:) Her hip will be an issue during the pregnancy and birth.
Date: 18 May 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
cool chapter, blimy if they are not taking flack for their lifestyle .... now it's her job why do people well namely men and idiot women find it so hard to believe that women are smart and can be sucessful on their own merits and casn run a company as well as any man can? and yeah well crazy dream thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 May 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
oh daaaaaaaaaaaaamn not good! bad bad move on that guys part
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 May 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
I can't wait to see what Bella has to say.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 18 May 2010 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 31
B.B.
Just caught up on all the chapters I'm behind on.(5 read this morning) Real life is killing me right now.
I love this story you've got going here!!!! Looking forward to more when you post!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 May 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
Ohhhh boy. This'll be interesting. Sounds like Bella should not be doing business with these people.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 May 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 31
That dream was 100% crazy, but not too far off from what hormones and a craving will do to you.
You gotta love Seth. He is so awesome how he stood up for Bella's honor. I can not wait to see how Bella handles this situation. Her normal ballsy self mixed in with hormones...the Johnson's won't know what hit them. LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 31
ohhh here comes trouble now!
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Date: 17 May 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 30
bella thought her crazy mum was doing a runner with her baby yeah i think her imagination was in overdrive lol, and nice one alice dont let thoase boys take advantage, i'm sure as they get used to it things will settle, it is a horrible situation to get used to leaving your baby to go back to work but it gets easier and whitley is with her mum so all the better for everybody, great chapter thanks tracy
Author's Response:
lol, It's amazing what your mind will do to you;) Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
Momma Alice rocks!!! I love how she totally laid into Edward and Jasper. She took charge and made them feel like the asses they were acting like. Perfect!
Oh, and the morning sex was HOT as hell!!! I can only imagine what it will be like once Alice is able to rejoin them. I see furniture destruction in their future.
Author's Response:
lol, It's pretty explosive ;)
Date: 17 May 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
hmmm.. i love this story...I was wondering how the baby situation would turn out..I mean i hope its edward's, not that i don't like jasper, cuz i love him. I just think it would put a test on the boys relationship and we could actually see how strong that half of our wonderful quartet is (I also think that the baby would be the easily predicted idea... Unlike a lot of your story). I mean alice and bella already have had thiers. I think the boys should have one as well. Anyway keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Honestly, I haven't decided if Bella's baby is Edward or Jasper's yet. But I see you point. Thank you for the review:)
Date: 16 May 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
It is amazing how far Bella and Rose have come since the beginning of LA. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 29
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
Please please please..*
:) :) :)
Alice R..*
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 16 May 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
lovely chapter, bella and rose just being sisters thats nice, everybody is content and happy, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
I love this sequel! Do you know how I can get alerts to tell me when you have updated?
Author's Response:
I think that if you add this story to your favs that you get an alert but I am not sure :) Thank you for reading:)
Date: 15 May 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 28
hey great chapter, the dna was guessed correctly by all as soon as they saw her eyes they knew but love jazz he's going with it they all parent on an equal footing, the love the four have for eachother is really apparant, thanks tracy and i just have to say great lemon at the end
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well there was no surprise there, Edward is the DNA daddy. But how can you not love the way their family functions? They are so full of love and generosity of spirit.
Edward and Jasper in the living room was seriously hot!!! I can think of one sexual combo that you have put any of these four in that I have not throughly enjoyed. Keep up the lemony goodness!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I really want to show that they are more than just a sexual group but that they are a true family.
Date: 15 May 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
so sweet and of course love the lemon
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2010 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
Please please please..*
:) :) :)
Alice R..*
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 15 May 2010 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
I know I sound like a broken record, but I can't wrap my head around Edward and Alice having a child together. It just feels all wrong. I was wondering though...maybe you could have Bella get a Chorionic villus sampling when she's 3 months along to see who the father of the baby she's carrying is. Please don't tell me Jasper...I don't think I could handle it and I really don't need a self hugging jacket!!!
Author's Response:
Hmm, I don't know what to tell you then becasue the odds are tipping in Jasper's favor to be the father of Bella's baby.
Date: 15 May 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 27
another lovely happy chapter they are all home and doing well, liked edward reminiscing on the piano thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 May 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
I must must must know what the DNA results are..*
Please please please..*
:) :) :)
Alice R..*
Author's Response: lol, soon:)
Date: 14 May 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 27
Cool update!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 May 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh! That's just wrong to leave us hanging like that. I still think she's Edwards baby...and I am still on the fence as to how I feel about that. It just seems so wrong for Edward to have a baby with Alice.
Author's Response:
lol, sorry:) Thank you for the review:)
Date: 14 May 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
Domestic bliss..love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
oh fabulous happy chapter, rose story was not what i expected thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Hi I'm from mexico and I love your story
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
You know I love you but I really don't wanna see the rents popping up children... I mean I don't know how I'll get it.... We'll see I guess!
xoxo
marianne
Author's Response:
The parents won't be having any children:)
Date: 13 May 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
hope u arent ending it anytime soon love this story great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. I still have so much planned for this story:)
Date: 13 May 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 26
B.B.
All I got right now is tears!!!! Wonderful chapter!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
Ahhh, poor Rose. That must hsve been so hard not to share the news (good and bad) with the family. I was a little worried when she pushed Bella by the stairs. I thought she was going to fall.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hmmmm, part of me does not like that Alice's baby is Edward's. I don't know why, but it just feels wrong.
Other than that, it was a good chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
:) :) :)
I like you... you update often..*
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
Alice R..*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 26
Beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 May 2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
what the fuck is up w/ her??
Author's Response:
She's cranky:) Thank you for the review:)
Date: 12 May 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
B.B.
Oh god, what's up with Rose???? I feel a wee bit of angst coming!!!! (Cory prays that it's not too bad on the angst scale!!!!)
Great chapter!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
It's not horrible....or is it???? :p
Date: 12 May 2010 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter
what's up in rose's ass?
Author's Response:
Thank you
Date: 12 May 2010 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter see rose has some envy issues
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Date: 12 May 2010 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Uh-oh....Rose is jealous. I really do hope that Bella is having Jasper's baby though because it would be nice to see both of the guys fathering children, but I do agree with what the rest of the said- no matter what he'll always be a dad.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
:) :) :)
Please please please update soon soon soon..*
:) :) :)
Please please please..*
:) :) :)
Alice R..*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
oh no i wonder whats got her knickers in a twist. youd think she wud be happy for bella
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
For a fucking reason I can't fanthom I didn't get the updates for the last 6 chapters.... Anyway now I read them and I loved them all!! Yay for me!
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 12 May 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
hey great chapter, nice to see everything going well with the baby, poor jasper feeling his moment of insecurity with the biological father issue, i wonder will they name edward as the father on the birth certificate? i suspose they have to as you cant have two, all the parents are happy nice touch from alice to call them all daddy, now whats up with rose? has she been trying to have a baby but not conceiving, one pregnancy and baby she could deal with but two? thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter! jeez Rose is all mad :( Hopefully she doesn't ruin everyone's happy moods ... but I am going to guess that she has been trying to get pregnant and cant?
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 May 2010 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
URGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh how can you be so cruel and leave me hanging lmao you live up to your reputation.. awesome kickass pretzel loving writer
Author's Response:
lol, I have a rep to protect;)
Date: 12 May 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no. Rose is none too happy. I think she really wants to have a baby too.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
hmm let me guess shes jealous?? possibly pregnant too or want to be pregnant?? lol i know i know.. loving it cant wait to see what pretzel twist youve got up your sleeve! :-P
Author's Response:
lol, I'm just going to say....yes, to one of those guesses ;) Not very helpful, am I?