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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 49

B.B.

Glad your back and I agree sometimes real life just stinks!!!!

Great chapter!!!!

Cory



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: ZiggyND Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 49

yay so happy to see an update!



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Sorry for the delay. Real life has sucked :(

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 48

OMG those people better give them the baby. I want Embry and Jared to be happy.



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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 48

great chapter

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Reviewer: Kiwibeme Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 48

Another girl! Please tell me that Edward is the father! I know, I need to get over it, but I just can't fathom Jasper and Bella having a child together. I still can't get past Edward and Alice having Whitley together...I prefer not too, actually. I pretend she's Edward and Bella's! LOL



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Thank you. I can't tell you that Edward is the father of Bela's baby cause honestly, I don't know yet.

Reviewer: tric4r Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 48

nice.. good job always

 

Tricia



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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 48

hey great chapter, i liked it,  bella is in the  chair but like she says the health of the baby is paramount and it's temporary, so the new baby is a girl as well i like that they will grow up to be really close, the ending was sweet bella laying there feeling her baby kick, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 48

B.B.

Another little girl!!!! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!!

Cory



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 48

Hmmm, with Embry and Jared possibly adopting I wonder why Mike and Tyler haven't??

Lovely chapter. I was kinda hoping Bella would be having twins since she's so big, lol. ;) And I wonder if this one will be Edward's or Jasper's? Jasper was hurt Whitley wasn't his, but maybe Edward has SuperSperm! LOL

Well, they're bound to have a boy sometime, too! hee hee



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 48

Ahhh, another girl?!?  Charlie is right, E&J are going to need lots of guns and locks.  Maybe an attack dog wouldn't hurt either.



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 48

Great chapter



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Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 47

i absolutly love this story!!



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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 47

beautiful wedding very touching great chapter wow

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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 47

B.B.

Beautiful wedding!!!!

Man a lot of peoples were having a wedding night that night!!! (hee, hee)

Cory



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 47

I found myself smiling throughout this entire chapter. The wedding was absolutely perfect!



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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 47

great chapter, another beautiful wedding and  loasds of love flowing between all parties, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 47

awwwww emmett!!!!!!!!



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Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 47

I have a feeling that the baby Bella is carrying will be Jaspers. What will happen if it turns out to be Edwards? Oh boy will that cause some problems. Do I smell a another story coming from this question? Great chapter. Thanks



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I can assure you that there will not be a third story here....at least I don't think there will be, regardless if Jasper is the father of Bella's baby or not.

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 47

I knew Emmett was that deep!



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lol, he really is ;) thank you for the review:)

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 47

I  love each and every chap and cant wait for updates. Love the hotness.

I am however interested in why you introduced a special connection between B/E and also A/J in Lustful Awakings and in earlier chaps of this story. And I only ask this because it seems pairings have mostly been B/J, B/A, E/A with the occasional J/E and J/B/E. To me it reads like in your attempt to spread their love evenly you have done the opposite and just changed the dynamics of the relationships. It seems that A shares a more intimate bond with E through physical acts, parent couplings, and now the birth of their biological child. As is the same with B and J as I am sure Jasper will be the biological father of B's baby. It honestly feels like there is no substance to connect A/J or B/E to each other. I think that part of your story got lost.

I hope that you take no offense to my ramblings as none was intended. I am really fail at reviewing because I never really know what to say but I just noticed a pattern and thought I would bring it up, mostly to get your thoughts on it.

I truly love reading your fics and salivate at updates. Thank you 8>)

 

 



Author's Response:

When I first started with LA, I never expected the story to go the way it did. But one of the things I wanted to show was that even though it started off with more of a E/B and A/J connection, that they love each other equally. I have found it hard to try to balance out the dynamics of their relationships, but I am really trying to show that they have small connections with each other. A and B are not only lovers but best friends as are E and J. E and A do have that connection because they have a bio child together. That doesn't mean that B and J are any less Whitley's parents but their is that connection, just as their will be if B's baby is J's. Does that make since at all?

Anyway, I appreciate the review, and I love, love, love discussing the content of my stories like this so please don't feel like you are offending me by bringing something up.

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2010 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 47

ahhh love how sweet

 

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 47

Great chapter

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 46

All caught up. Great job with these last few chapters. Thanks for the update.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 46

superb chapter, i had to laugh so overrcome with lust they left a batchelor party to make love most guys just get pissed up, and bella's baby bump is showing i was glad to hear she had moved on and has left her anger behind, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 46

Interesting chapter



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 46

B.B.

Humina, humina!!!!

Loved it!!!! (two thumbs up)

Cory



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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 46

loved it



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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 46

great party think the boys might have had a better time great chapter

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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 46

I love a little J&E time!  They are so hot together.

Ben and Seth were too funny at the club!  They are brave guys being the only straight ones there. LOL



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 46

The guys are always hot and Seth's "no" was too funny.



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 45

The wedding is almost here!!!!!!!!!!



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I know!! Thank you:)

Reviewer: breathmetolife Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 45

best chapter ever

 



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 45

B.B.

That was fun!!!! Great party!!!!

Can't wait to read what the guys did!!!!

Cory



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 45

I've missed out little nymphos!!! Poor Bella.  It ain't easy feeling like you are the size of a house. ;)



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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 45

they are all so yummy and funny too!



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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 45

they had a great night out, so the wedding is 2 days away at least they will be all sorted before the baby arrives, love the chat around the table very funny just can't see angela chatting to her parents the same way lol, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 45

Great chapter



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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 45

great chapter can't wait for next

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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 44

yay!!!!!!!!! can't wait!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 38

hahaha  loved it!  I hate any and all things Tanya denali.......but this version isn't so bad.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 34

wow!!!!!!!!!  That is a shocker!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 25

I bet Rose is too and is pissed because she stole her thunder!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

i figured Edward was gonna be the father....but I was hoping that JAsper would father Alice's baby............don't know why...and nothing is wrong with it....I am just a team belward all the way!

But the whole chapter was beautiful!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 21

Way to put up with the psycho !!!!!!!!!!!  Love this Bella!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

oh what the hell?!?!?!?!?!  Really...Ben......come on!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2010 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 17

way to let the bitch have it!!!!!!!!!  Atta girl!  I am thrilled that she is getting her fire back!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 44

great chapter i was wondering why there was not mention about bella pregnancy

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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2010 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 44

great chapter, and what a way to say sorry, it was a very good way to say sorry, an all night sorry lol and i would love to know what the babies are going to be if you choose to say, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 44

B.B.

Happiness. I f**king love it!!!! (two thumbs up!!!)

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory



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Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

annnnnnnnd they're back~ to business lol



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 44

Thanks so much for this wonderful update.... Well worht the wait, Keep up the awesome work....



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

good!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 44

Mmmm, this was a yummy chapter.  It has been a while since we have enjoyed our nymphos at their finest!  I love how Alice, Edward and Jasper all helped undress and worship Bella's body before it became a free for all.  The whole damn thing was fucking hot!!!



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Thank you. They needed a night of fun, didn't they?

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 44

Great chapter, I look forward to the next.



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Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 43

i had to catch up on my reading, i love the way that this is written you are doing an excellent job..well im off to the next chapter! keep up the good work



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Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2010 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love this story, I have been reading all your stories, and I was wondering when r we getting a new update for this one? I see your other ones are updating, just not this one. Keep up the awesome work...



Author's Response:

Thank you. I hope to have the next chapter out today. All of these stories are stuff that I have posted on FF. When I'm Gone is the only one that is complete. I have eight different stroies that I am currently writing on. I try to update at least once a week, if not more. Right now, things are super busy with my kids so I haven't had the time to write like I used to but I am starting on this one this morning and should have it done sometime today. Thank you again for the review:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 43

hey there, if your going to be stuck in a lift at least embry is a decent bloke to be stuck with,  i think he will work well at the firm, and i was not expecting lauren to show up let alone have the news she did, how sad! glad bella accepted her apology and let her say her piece before she moved on,  bella should just blame her mood on her pregnancy hormones lol does she need a reason?  sometimes we all do it,  we can just get moody, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 43

B.B.

Cute conversation in the stuck elevator!!!! I think Embry got an earful there!!!! (hee, hee)

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 43

Fun, sad and sweet...got to love it



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 43

I liked the impromptu conversation between Embry and Bella. :)

Poor Bella and her raging hormones.  Or should I say poor Edward, Alice and Jasper?



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lol, pregnant women....enough said:)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 43

It was a great chapter; I look forward to the next.



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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 42

wow glad everything is okay great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 41

oh know hopes rose is alright

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm glad Rose ad her baby ok, can't wait for when she and Bella finally have their baby's to hold.



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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 42

oh i'm so glad rose's baby is ok  uterine cysts can they cause more problems? it's nice to see how the whole family rally round to help that is something i've never had so it must be good knowing lots of people will help you if needed, the end was cute bella and edward just flopping into bed with alice and jasper downstairs caring for whitley, great chapter thanks tracy



Author's Response:

From what I know if Uterine Cyst, they are pretty common in pregnant women. I think they monitor the pregnancy closely to make sure that they don't grow but there is really nothing they can do. Thank you for the review:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 42

B.B.

Thanks god!!!! The baby is ok!!!! (Cory stops pacing now)

That was a stressful chapter!!!! I need a drink!!!!

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory



Author's Response:

I need a frink too!! I was stressed just writing it!

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 42

Interesting story, I look forward to the next chapter(s) in this story.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 42

Yay she didn't lose the baby!



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 42

I am soooo glad Rose and the baby are ok.  That has to be the scariest thing to have happen while you are pregnant especially after one miscarriage.



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 41

B.B.

Not Rose's baby!!!! Oh god, everythings got to be ok!!!!! (Cory starts pacing the room)

But, I'm liking the new guy!!!!

Update when you can please!!!!

Cory



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Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 41

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOT ROSES BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Wow, I will. I promise:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 41

I loved Embry but NOOOOOOOOOO, why Rose can't lose the baby!?



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It's going to be ok:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 41

great chapter, poor rose i hope not again,  embry seems cool and sounds like he will fit in well and i never ger tired of reading how they start their day lol, you have eight stories on the go you must be tied to your laptop so no worries if chapters slow down thanks tracy



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lol, I use a desktop, and I am tied here. Not to mention that all three of my kids play baseball, which has been taking up a huge amount of my time lately!

Reviewer: Alice R Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 41

:) :) :)

Please please please update as soon as you can..*

:) :) :)

I love love love this story..*

:) :) :)

Alice R..*



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh crap!  I hope Rose doesn't lose the baby..

I love Embry.  He is going to be fun to have around the office.



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Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 41

Ah poor Rose, but totally love Embry.



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Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 41

Oh no.... poor Rose... I hope she isn't losing the baby.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 40

great chapter, is it me or does 6 wks seem early to go back to work? i took  6 months off and only then went back  cause my matt pay was running out, but i suspose it's different for each mother and whenever you go back alices feeling are typical imagining dreadful scenarios anf being racked with guilt then you get home to a happy smiley baby and you wonder what the hell you were worried about, i wonder if jasper is a bit lost at work as he and edward  worked so closley for so long?  thanks tracy



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Thank you. I know it typically depends on matternity leave here but usually about 6-8 weeks is offered.

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 40

can't wait for that daddy Edwards first day great chapter as always

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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 39

hot and sweet great chapter

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 39

hot and sweet great chapter

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 40

B.B.

Loved it!!!!! Loved how they all had troubles and almost picked up the phone!!!

More when you can please!!!!

Cory



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 40

Love this chapter...can we get a sneak at Seth and Tanya ILYs



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 39

Aww :)



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 40

That was an excellent depiction of a mommy's first day back to work.  I have been through it three times and each time I had the urge to call home every half hour. LOL.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 40

Aw.  I feel for Alice, I remember going through the same thing.



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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 39

great chapter, they all seemed to enjoy alice getting the all clear and they all reasure alice she is still desirable after having whitley, the lullaby at the end was beautiful what a lovely bloke your hubby is to do that, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 39

B.B.

That chapter was a keeper!!!!

A great mix of smut and love!!!!! (two thumbs up!!!!)

More when it's ready please!!!

Cory



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Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 39

goose bumps material!! :-) love it



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 39

Domestic tranquility and fuck hot lemons...the best of both worlds!  Loved it!!!



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 38

B.B.

Oh god yes!!!!!! Let the games begin in the next chapter!!!!

Can you tell I'm excited!!!!

Cory



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Are you by any chance excited???lol, Thanks:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 38

great chapter, that's nice for tanya and seth (despite him being a idiot last chapter) he said sorry and they both deserve a little happiness, nice to see the new baby is all ok seeing your baby for the first time is always magical, and now alice has the all clear ans there is no whitley those boys i suspect will be exhausted by tea time lol thanks tracy



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 38

Ohh boy are Jasper and Edward in for it.



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lol, Thanks :)

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 38

why do i have a feeling that alice is going to kell all of them with sex this is going to be good and oh is it pay back time for alice for all of the teasing she has had to endore from all of them i cant wait to see the next chapte so please update soon



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 38

ROFLMAO!!!  Oh, this is going to be good!!!!

Bella is like the love goddess.  Everyone around her seems to find love, case in point-Tanya and Seth (so cute).

Loved the conversation about how many babies they were all going to have.



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Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 38

Those boys  better watch out.



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 38

It's going down!!!!!!



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lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 38

LOL OH BOYS



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 37

Seth how could you be so narrow minded?



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I know! I expected more from Seth!

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 36

That was to funny I so thought it would have been Jasper!



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A lot of people did:)

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