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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 55

Endless Awakenings if it's going to be your last story in the series and Beautiful Awakenings if not.



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Thanks!

 

Reviewer: annielove Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 55

Endless Awakenings!!!



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Thank you, Miss Annielove!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 55

Poor Bella! It was a lovely shower...

and then what a cliffie! Claire's baby's on the way! Yay!

 

Um, wow...tough decision, they're all great titles. They're already parents, they were a family before they had Whitley so those two are out. Needs to go with Lustful and Strange...they have love that will last a lifetime, and I'm sure that kids will keep coming so that'll feel endless, they've always had a powerful connection between the four of them, and no doubt have been truthful all this time, but ...

I think Beautiful Awakenings would depict the future of the series the best. :)



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See why I've had a hard time choosing! Thank you:)

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 55

ohh when it rains it pours.. literally of babies lol i love it... i think i like the ENDLESS AWAKENINGS..it seems to blend more with the theme... might be.. although not bad at all..seeminly too concentrated on the possible topic already.. parental, lifetime, family pretty gives you the idea whats it gonna be all about. although WE know what its gonna be but still i feel 'endless' seems to go along better.. BUT that just me lol .. im sure whatever you will love it



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Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 55

Lifetime Awakenings

Family Awakenings

Beautiful Awakenings



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Reviewer: jabcobswife Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 55

Parental Awakenings.... it's the name i was trying to think of to send in last time. I just think it has the right sound. I absolutly love that you're doing a third story to this!!

Yay to more babies coming....maybe one of the parents should have a suprise baby too, like Renee or Cathrine.



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 55

B.B.

I'll go boil water!!! (hee, hee)   Another baby!!!!

I think Bella might go a tad bit nutso with out her work. Maybe she can still do some paper work from her bed????

Great chapter!!!!

Cory

 



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Reviewer: Alice R Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 55

:D :D :D 

I like Endless Awakenings or Beautiful Awakenings..*

:D :D :D 

Please please please update soon soon soon..*

:D :D :D 

Alice R..*



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Reviewer: Bambina Bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 55

Miss Butterfly Betty

I'm not much of a reviewer of any story that I read but I will say I've been enjoying yours. I wanted to let you know which title I would prefer for the next story in your series which would be Beautiful Awakenings I think it would be more fitting.



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Thank you so much:)

Reviewer: Oaky Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 55

I say Beautiful Awakenings



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Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 55

I like Family Awakenings and Beautiful Awakenings the most :)



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Reviewer: aquaserenity2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 55

The sequel should be named Beautiful Awakenings



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Reviewer: tigerlili48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 55

i like family awakings



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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 55

Oh I love Beautiful Awakenings!  Thats perfect! 

 

Oh... and so not cool with the cliffie  :(  lol



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Reviewer: RoseMariecullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 55

ENDLESS AWAKENINGS



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 55

Wow, they are all good ideas.  If I could only pick one, I would have to choose 'Beautiful Awakenings'.  I just like the way it sounds.

Poor, poor emo Bella.  That girl cries when she should laugh and laugh when she should cry.  Pregnancy hormones suck ass!!!  Another excellent chapter and woo hoo!  Another baby is joining the crowd.  Bella is going to need to open a day care in the office (not everyone has an Edward at home [don't we wish!]). ;)



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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 55

Endless Awakenings



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Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 54

Great update. Happy to read about the tender moments between E and B and that your starting to switch up relationships again. I was kind of getting placid about Bella and Jasper in most of last few chapters. I'm glad to see Alice and Edward back in the picture with the two them again.

I was wondering if the injury to Bella's hip is permanent and if so how severe?

Poor Bella when it rains it pours, lucky for her to have those three at her side.

On with the baby shower. Hopefully that will cheer her up.

 Oh, and do you have a name for the baby yet? I dont recall reading about that. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:) No, Bella's injury to her hip is not permanent. She's just had a couple set backs along the way and with the pregnancy, she has to be careful. Yes, I do ahve the baby's names picked out but I haven't mentioned it yet:)

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

I was just thinking about the twin thing.  It could be fun to have Bella have twins (one hiding behind the other).  She could have a girl and a boy and be one of each.  She did have sex with both just after getting home.  2 eggs and a lot of sperm can cause a big snafu!



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Definatly something I've been cosidering but I am not sure if I will do yet.

Reviewer: snkidd20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

Well, great chapter as always, I look forward to the next one



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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 54

another awesome chapter

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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 54

B.B.

Poor Bella. She's really feeling like everything is coming down on her right now!!!

So happy that there's going to be a surprise baby shower for her. It can only help her!!!

Looking forward to more!!!!

Cory



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 54

Well, great chapter as always, I look forward to the next one



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Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 54

thanks for a great chapter!



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 54

Awww, it'll be okay, Bella. :)

Surprise baby shower? So nice!

Nice chapter!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 54

Poor Bella.  Being pregnant, bigger than usual, stuck in a wheel chair and hormonal as all hell and now a c-section and she has to stop working?  My heart breaks for her.  I know that in the long run it is her and the baby's health that is the most important thing, but right now, all she can see are the negatives.  I hope the surprise shower doesn't throw her into an emotional tail spin.

Great chapter, as always. ;)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 54

Hmm, the chapter was good, but i think something got a little screwy when it got uploaded.  I think your last paragraph was supposed to be up toward the top, just after the "that was a little odd."  After that sentence, your whole thing is in italics.  But the chapter was good.  it's too bad Bella's feeling so fat and ugly, and like a failure b/c she can't deliver vaginally.

Cheers,

Balti K



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Thank you:) Not sure how that bit got moved to the bottom but i fixed it.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 54

Poor Bella is getting the short end of the stick so to speak.  I can't wait to find out who the father is, mostly because I'm really hoping Jasper for the sake of irony that would come with it when compared to the series.  The men switching partners to have children and all that.  It would have been predictable for Alice to have Jasper's baby and for Bella to have Edward's.  I think its kind of refreshing to see half of that happen.  I just kinda hope Jasper gets to have his "own" kid too.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 54

Wait, did Bella go into labor at the party or was that a type-o?



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No, Bella didn't go into labor at the party. Did it read like that? If you an share with me that part because I don't want it to see like that.

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 53

Another story would be great.  But mostly, I wish I knew what Bella's baby's name is and who is the baby daddy.  Personally, since this story was so even (ie. all the parent became a quad and did not just stay as two) I think that it should be Edwards baby again.  Then maybe they plan to perposfully have jasper' spawn with Alice (since she is next).  And just to add a twist, it should be twin boys.  Go ahead and steal this idea, I would live to see how this plays out...  but that is just me.  Oh, and THANK YOU for reducing the use of the word chuckle!  Fun story, I just wish it did not end here.



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Thank you:) I've really worked on my obession with the word chuckle ;) As for the rest, I'll think about twin boys.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 53

I don't know but... Hopeful Awakenings



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I like Hopeful Awakings:)

Reviewer: BasiaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 53

Its nice to see to finally see Alice with both E and J.

I think if already have a third story floating around in head you should go with it. Your characters want to be heard.

A few titles I think of when I think of this foursome and thier future are:      Mutual Awakings, Collective Awakings, United Awakings, Communal Awakings, Shared Awakings,  ect.  See where I'm going with this?

Cant wait for the next update.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: ali XP Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 53

The story is as awesome as ever. Keep writing and i'll keep reviewing.

 



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 53

Ha ha, kicked out of ANOTHER bathroom! LOL! Totally great! And the couch scene was so hot-damn!

And definitely carry on with this! It'd be great to have a total of four, since there's four main characters. The third could be Nourish Awakings and the fourth Cherish Awakings for when they're all members of the AARP and stir up things in a living facility!! LOL! ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 53

I think adding a third would be great!  And you could call it Rude Awakenings! 

 

I would love to see a momma Bells come uncorked on some snooty bitch who thinks that her kid and she are better just cause she is in a monogamous relationship with fighting and a cheating spouse and a fat bratty kid.  LOL, my mind just went off on a weird tangent.  Dont mind me :)



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Thank you:) I was thinking the same thing. Rude Awakings is on the list of possibles:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 53

So do another one that would be awesome really like our favorite four some great chapter as always can't wait for bella to have the baby she is in so much misery

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Thank you:)

Reviewer: elmarie1123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 6

uummm is Bella on birth control??????



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No, she's not ;)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

yes, I know that B/E/J had a alot of sex.....but it still just didn't sit well with me.  I guess no matter how pervy and sexually deviant I am.....and no matter how much of a loving orgy type thing that I love to read about within your stories...(CAUSE I REALLY DO)...........I am just still a pro bella and edward all the way.......bella, edward & jasper are great....really great....but alice, edward & jasper...I don't know....if it can't be bella with them all, then I want to be like bella or protect bella and if bella can't be in it....then nobody can be in it.

Crazy...right?????  I know.........maybe it's the crazy hormones...I don't know.

My husband was a grooms man for some friends of ours wedding this weekend......the weekend before that he was at the bachelor party.  I couldn't go to the bachelorette party because of something else that I HAD to attend to.....but.....when I found out they went to a tittybar....and he said he didn't do anything bad...yes I believe him....but still, it just seemed to have brought out my REALLY BAD jealous streak...and then yesterday was the wedding.  My husband doesn't dance...EVER! Maybe for a total of 45 seconds at our wedding with me only.....and he was fucking frolicking along with the bitch that he got paired up with from the bridemaids'.............can you tell I am fighting some weird ass demons here..........I am rambling. GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I get it!!! Trust me, I do but I have to show that Alice/Edward/Jasper have that connection too. But I do get what you are saying.

And, I'm sorry your husband was an ass with the dancing. MEN!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 53

Rude awakenings?? Um i know how i generally feel about them the more the merrier and to each is own....but for some reason...the three of them going at it while bella was asleep upstairs feeling down on herself ........well....that just rubbed me the wrong way.

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Thank you:) You have to remember that B/E/J had alot of sex while Alice wasn't about to, either:)

Reviewer: SpunkyBookworm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 53

Rude Awakenings. Totally fits with the storyline, I think.

 



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 53

OMG!  Yes please continue this story!!!  I love the combo of kinky fuckery and domestic bliss.  You mix the two so well together that I have loved every chapter since the beginning of LA.

As for a title, how about Rude Awakenings?  I am just thinking about what they will have to deal with when the kids are in school.  I wonder how many kids they will have by then.



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Thank you:) Rude Awakings is on the list but I'm not sure yet.

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 53

B.B.

I'm surprised that Bella is taking this "situation" she's in so well. Kudos to you and your muse for writing Bella so strong!!!!

Loved that Edward & Alice got caught!!!! Too funny!!!!

Looking forward, as always, to the next chapter!!!!

Cory



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 53

I think you should add a third story. you made this story go amazingly with LA so I know for sure that the third would go great.

Troubled Awakenings

Wonderful Awakenings

thats all i got.



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: cassyrose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 53

Yes add another story!!!!



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Reviewer: reneesmay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 53

ok i have an idea for the title for your story rude awakings because that is what its going to be with all of the parents thinking they are better then them just because they will think there relationship is not normal and how there children will be treated because of there relationship personally me i am bi sexual and i dont see anything wrong with there relationship and cant wait to see how you have them deal with small minded people so please let me know if you like the title and please update soon



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 53

Yes please I would love another story in this series. What about calling it just Awakings? I can't think.

What happened in Starbucks and bathroom and Bella?



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 53

I would LOVE another story :)



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Reviewer: lauralouwho Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 53

I loved both stories.  You can't leave this story hanging like this.  I would love to read one more.



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Thank you:) I am not done with Strange Awakings yet. Just thinking about the furture ;)

Reviewer: tric4r Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 53

YES  YES YES PRETTY PLEASE YES!!!! LOL as much as i love me smutty lemony goodness i think it would be interesting to see how would their

type of relationship would works especially with kids involve.



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Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 52

lol good chapter

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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 52

I knew it was Emmett's!!!!!!!! Poor Seth:(



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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 52

I was right, it was Emmett, hah



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Reviewer: dna2679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 52

lmfao poor seth



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 52

B.B.

Can't wait for the Seth & Tanya outtake!!!!! I'm sure it will be hot, hot, hot!!

So Bella is next. Is there going to be any kind of bets for that birth?? (hee, hee)

Looking forward to more!!!!!

Cory



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lol, you never know! Thanks,hon :)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 52

I really likes this chapter.. I fell sorry for Seth!!!!



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Reviewer: tric4r Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 52

ROTFLMAO.. ohhh i cant wait to read this!!



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 52

LMAO!!!  Poor Seth!  That is just killing me. ;)

I loved the wake up call our favorite foursome enjoyed.  They are always so hot together!



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 52

great chapter,  so emmett the daddy but as whitleys parentage makes no odds im sure jonah's wont either, look forward to that outtake lol, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 52

LOL.



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Reviewer: Applefromatree Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 52

Ha poot Seth :D

Love the chapter ^^



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 51

Wonderful!! *happy tears* Cute name!

lol, Seth watch out! That poor granny! Wonder she didn"t have a heart attack!! ROFL

Can"t wait for Bella's and Claire's turns!!



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 51

love it:)



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Reviewer: Balti K Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 51

I thnk Seth will be pleased with whatever the outcome is.  Maybe Emmett should be the father so they can compromise and they both win.  Fun for everyone.  I totally think that a guy should agree to get fucked in the ass if he hopes to put his dick into someone else's.  It's only fair.

Great chapter.  Cheers, Balti K



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 51

awesome chapter

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Reviewer: tric4r Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 51

bella freaking out scene was fucking hilarious!! lol



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 51

I knew it was a boy...pay up Seth!!!!!!!



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 51

Ahhhh, It's a boy!  Love it!  The name is very cool.

Excellent chapter!  I loved Bella's hormonal meltdown and the bet is too damn funny for words.  I can't wait to see the end result of that. ;)



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Thank you:) I enjoyed this chapter alot:)

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 51

a boy how lovely, god dont we all know labour is a complete bitch but as rose found out so worth it, i'll stay tuned to find out who is the daddy, great chapter thanks tracy



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 51

i think its going to be a girl and garretts baby.



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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 51

Taking a guess... Emmett



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Thanks:)

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 51

the seth thing was absolutely hilarious!  Loved it!



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Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 51

Can't wait to find out.



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Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 51

B.B.

I love the wager of Seth & Tanya's bet!!!! That's a good one!!!! (ha, ha)

They had a boy!!!! (tears, tears)

Poor Bella. Those hormones are really getting the best of her right now.

Loved the chapter!!!!

Cory

 



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Thank you:) I enjoyed it too!

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 51

i loved it i think the daddy should be em and seth will love the outcome



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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 50

great chapter i can totally relate the last few weeks of pregnancy are a complete bitch, cant wait to find out if its a boy or girl, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: snkidd20 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 50

Great chapter...can't wait for the next one. I think boy and i would really like it to me Em but I think its Gar's.



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Reviewer: asdf123456r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

awesome story ! but i was so bummed that u skipped over the time right after the accident. maybe you could do a oneshot or even a few flashbacks of the missed time between the accident and bella waking up . love your story can't wait to see where you take it from here.



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Hmm, not a bad idea....Thanks!

Reviewer: Sherry80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 50

baby coming awesome can't wait and lets have a boy as always great chapter

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Reviewer: Kiwibeme Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 50

I am guessing that Emmett is the daddy of Rose's baby. But I really want Edward to be the daddy of Bella's baby. Maybe it would be interesting to find out that Jasper can't have kids...it would definitely add some angst to the story!



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 50

Oh boy!!! Or girl?? LOL!

I think it's a boy and it will be Garrett's! He and Rose were hot and heavy when they expanded their relationship. Emmett was married to Rose for how long and she never got knocked up?

Just hope Bella doesn't do anything stupid to jeopardize her pregnancy...

 

 



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 50

Boy they need a boy in this family and I kind of want him to be Emmett's.



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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 50

Okay intriguing, I look forward to the next.



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Reviewer: clhrice Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 50

OH MAN!!!! That was mean!! Boy and Em. should be the daddy! I think Bella should go into labor after Rose has her baby. I can't wait till the next chapter. Love this story!



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AW, that would be awfully early for Bella seeing as she is only 27 wks along. Anyway, thanks:)

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 50

B.B.

I couldn't help but feel bad for both Rose & Bella. They both want to have babies and both of them have had troubles having these babies. So because of that, no problems for the babies please!!!!

Roses baby is coming!!!!I'll boil water!!!! (hee, hee)

I'm not even going to venture a guess. I'll just wait an be surprised!!!!

More when you can please!!!!!

Cory



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Reviewer: tric4r Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 50

Yay an update! lol love it..especially w roses water breakin in the end..

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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 50

Woo hoo!  A new baby for the grandparents to attack!  I think it is going to be Emmett's baby and it is going to be a boy.  Just guessing.

I have started posting my own story on here called "Use Somebody".  If you get a chance, give it a read.  I would love to hear what you think.  Thanks. :)



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Thank you:) I'll go check out your story:)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 50

loved it



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Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 50

oh I couldn't even begin to guess!

I remember how that feels....I was pregnant throughout the summer with my son.  He came three weeks early and he will soon be a year old on August 7th.



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Thank you:) My kids were Nov,Dec, and Oct babies. We live in Texas so it was very Hot! Happy early birthday to your son!

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 50

My goodness.  Yippee a baby is coming.



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Reviewer: VampireEv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 50

loved it!



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Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 50

great chapter - EMMETT'S!!

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Date: 13 Jul 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 49

awwwww......wish my bestfriends parents werel ike that.



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Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 49

fucking awesome dude!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 48

Great chapter. Yay! Another girl. Thanks



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Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 49

Interesting, I look forward to the next chapter.



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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 49

Awww!! Yay!!

Poor Claire. Nobody to talk to about hemorroids, lol.



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lol, hemorroids are embarrassing! Can you imagine being seventeen and needing to talk about them?

Reviewer: Ella Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 49

Beautiful chapter.



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Reviewer: tracygoodey1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 49

great chapter, i cant imagine how difficult that must be to have your baby adopted, but i'm sure embry and jared will do a super job, bella seems happier about the chair now  as well, thanks tracy



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Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 49

This was such a sad and happy chapter all in one.  Poor Claire. :(



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Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 49

Yay! they are getting their baby. I'm happy Bella just talked to her and did try to sell her on Embry and Jared.



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