Date: 01 May 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
: (SADLY AFTER READING FROM THE BEGINNING I'VE LOST INTEREST. ONCE IT WAS REVEALED THAT EDWARD WAS IN FACT WHITLEY'S FATHER... IT'S JUST NOT RIGHT...EVEN IF EDWARD TURNS OUT TO BE BELLA'S BABY'S FATHER THE BELLA EDWARD BOND HAS BEEN DEFILED. :( GOOD BYE.
Date: 06 Dec 2013 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
loved it! What's wrong with Rose?
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved it! Uh-oh!
Date: 25 Nov 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Uh-oh! Bella is pissed!
Date: 10 Feb 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Alice!
Date: 31 Aug 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 63
Great loved it
Date: 20 Jun 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Surely, after 6 months in a coma, she can't still be on the Pill, and they didn't use a condom if they aren't careful, they are gonna have a second arrival soon!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 62
Great story
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Thanks:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 55
great chapter, and another baby arriving thanks tracy
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Thank you:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 54
great chapter, a c section is not all that bad like they say a healthy baby is the only outcome, thanks tracy
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Thanks:)
Date: 30 Oct 2010 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 53
cool chapter getting thrown out of a shop made me giggle thanks tracy
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Thanks:)
Date: 14 Sep 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 62
A sexy finish to a sweet story.
Looking foward to EA!
Any plans for a baby with the Swan family name?
Author's Response:
Thank you:) First chapter of EA just went up.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 62
Hot as usual if only I had my own Edward, Jasper and Alice or Bella.
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lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 62
LOL, yep that was definitely full of lemony goodness!! Thanks so much for writing such a loving story. I can't wait for the third installment in the series, I'm sure it'll be great! :D
Loved it! Bravo!
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Thank you:) The third one should be up very soon.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 62
B.B.
Fabulous ending!!!!
Can't wait for the new story!!!!!
Cory
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 62
Wow what a lot has happened in a year. Loved your story.
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 62
Awesome!! is all i have to say can't wait to see what is in the next story!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 62
What a sweet ending.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 62
That was AWESOME!!! Way to go out with a bang! Well, several bangs actually. I am sad this is ending, but only for a second because I am so looking forward to EA!!!
All in all, great story woman! Well done!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I think they all needed one last....get together:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 61
Yes, I so called it on Jasper being the bio daddy. I still think that Mac was made on Christmas Day when Bella remembered Jasper, finally! I love this story. :)
Author's Response:
lol, I thought it was obvious but I guess not;) THank you, hon!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 61
B.B.
Fabulous chapter!!!!
Looking forward to the final chapter and the new story!!!!
Cory
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Thank you:)
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Thank you:)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 61
oh i am so excited i hope you start it a few year down the road can't wait maybe even more babies too awesome chapter story loved it
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Thank you:)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 61
thank you love the chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
*Standing Ovation* ;)
Whew! Yay! Bravo!
Congrats to Jasper! And oh my gosh, you'd think Seth and Tanya would've learned their lesson the first time! LOL! Enjoyed their first outtake, so I can only imagine this one! *snicker*
Fabulous, butterflybetty!! :D
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Aw, thank you, hon:) I apprecuite:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 61
great stories cant wait for the next one!
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Thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 61
I loved it!!! I am so glad that Jasper is the baby daddy, it keeps everything in balance. Thanks for the explaination for her name. I got the Whitlock reference with Whitley, but I honestly forgot about Alice's maiden name.
Can't wait for the next chapter! You write the best four way lemons ever!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I had alot of people who didn't get the Mackenzie/McCarty connection.
Date: 09 Sep 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 61
What a sweet chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much:)
Date: 07 Sep 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 60
B.B.
Pass the tissues please!!!! Sniffle, sniffle.
Great chapter!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Heres your tissue. Thank you:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 60
awesome!!!!! write more please
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 60
lmao.. fuck me if i argue with a woman who actually given birth lol ill take your word for it sister!.. loving it
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lmao:) Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 60
Love it :)
Whitley was for Whithlock, right??? Or am I wrong...
but why Mackenzie?I can't figure it out ;)
Please enlighten me ^^
Author's Response:
Yes, Whitley was for Whitlock. Mackenzie is for McCarty, Alice's maiden name:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 60
Oh man! Is she Jasper's? I am trying to wrap my head around it...but I can't!
Author's Response:
All will be revieled in the next chappie :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 60
Ahhh, love the name, but I guess I am a bit slow and don't see the connection as to why they chose that name.
Excellent chapter. I totally understood Bella's feelings ( I had 3 c/s myself and each time the stress and worry always hit me the morning of. You wrote that whole experience really well!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks:) I've had three c-sections, too. I totally understand what you mean.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 60
I just knew Faith would be in her name somehow, LOL! Adorable! Just awesome! :D
Maybe you should go ahead and explain the baby names anyway?? I suffer from CRS (Can't Remember Shit) and it's very annoying, LOL! They're great names, and I would like to TRY to remember how their names came about. :)
So...will there be like an epilogue and then the new story will go from there? Loved how this one progressed from the first. :)
Author's Response:
lol*snort* CRS, I like that:)
Ok, so here's the thing with the names. Whitley was named after Jasper's family name, Whitlock. Mackenzie was named after Alice's family name, McCarty. Make sense???
There are two more chapters before I start the third story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 60
Is Mackenzie for Mason, Edward's middle name? Really good chapter!
Author's Response:
Nice gues but no. Mackenzie if for Alice's family name, McCarty:)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 60
AAAWWWW!!!!! so cute!!! so they named her after Alice's last name, right!?!?!?!? i really hope that she is jasper's!!! :D LOVING IT!!!! cant wait for more!!! :D
Author's Response:
Yep, that's why they named her Mackenzie:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 59
Awesome, I can't wait!! :D
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 59
great chapter can't wait baby time next chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 59
B.B.
Such a love filled chapter!!!!! I like these types of chapters!!!!
Bring on the baby!!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 59
Yay the baby will be here soon :D
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 59
Yay!! the baby is almost here!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 59
I have missed the sex fest that these four enjoy together! They are my favorite poly-amorous grouping out there!!! Always so hot, six weeks will feel like forever. ;)
Poor Bella having her mini breakdown. I have been there and totally get it. You wrote that scene in the office so well. Very real to life.
Can't wait to meet baby Cullen!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I've been in Bella's shoes. All three of mine were born via c-section and I can remember feeling so scared that something was going to happen to me or my baby.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 59
Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 59
i cant wait to see if i am right i have a feeling that this baby is jaspers conceved on christmas day when she finally remmember who jasper was i hope i am right and i wonder if seth and tanya made another bet this is going to be fun to find out so please udpate soon
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 59
well cant wait till the next chapter !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 58
Miley Faith Cullen?
Idk why but Melissa and Michele where the only other ones I could think of and this one sounded better. I feel so bad for Bella I was never on bed rest thank god bt was huge and uncomfortable both times i can't even imagine!!
Author's Response:
Lovely guesses:) I was on bedrest with all three of mine and it sucks but the end result was worth it every time. New Chapter should be up with in the next hour or so:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 58
Great chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 58
B.B.
No guesses on the name right now. I'll keep thinking though!!!!
I loved the chapter. Full of nothing but happiness. And happiness is always nice. I know angst comes in the story too but, it's great to have a whole chapter dedicated to happiness once in a while!!!!
Also glad that you spent some quality mommy/daughter time. Even if was to nap!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 58
I couldn't guess the new baby's name even if I tried (the F is really throwing me off). Congrats on catching the cat nap. They are so rare, so I am glad you got to enjoy it. ;)
Another fantastic chapter. Kate might be prego? Love it! They are going to have so many kids running around between these familes, they won't know what to do.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 58
Mary Faith Cullen or Megan Faith Cullen IDK!!!!!!!!!!!
Another baby yay!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Nice guesses:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 58
AAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 58
loving this story - the way you are letting the plot unfold - i wonder what is coming up next.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 57
Such a sweet chapter! So nice to have Bella home so that she can share those moments with Whitley and Edward that she otherwise wouldn't have. :)
Amazing prego lemon, whew! HOT!! ;)
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 57
Oh i am so excited baby almost here can't wait
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 57
haha it doesnt seem like bellas bed rest is too bad right now
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lol, thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 57
Great chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 57
B.B.
Wonderful chapter!!! Glad that Bella is enjoying the time off her legs like she should be!!!!
As for posting chapters. When they're up, they're up!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon;)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 57
Yeah I voted for Endless!!!!!!! OMG good luck with school and we will be here when you are able to update.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 57
A clean house? What's that??? I totally hear ya my sista. I have 3 kids, work full time and a house that is only truly clean before parties. LOL. You update when you can, we will be waiting. ;)
I loved this chapter. It had a little of all the things I love. A little family bonding time (the visual of Edward singing to Whitley is damn near orgasm inducing, it is so hot). And a little bit of lovin time with E&B.
Excellent chapter, as always.
Author's Response:
You clean your house before parties?? lol, I have three kids to so I understand completely! Thank you for reviewing, and being patient with me. I agree Edward singing to Whitley...Yeah..
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 56
So beautifully written...I'm sitting here in tears.
Clayton Isaac Call, great name. I'm glad that Claire shared the experience with her parents, Quil, Jared, & Embry.
It was so nice that the rest of the ever-expanding "family" is so supportive. Just needed Mike, Tyler, Seth, and Tanya to be there, too, lol!
And of course, what perfect comic relief while at a hospital - the 'skanky bitch' nurse!! Priceless!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 56
B.B.
All these babies being born. Such happiness!!!! Love it!!!!
Bella is such a trooper. That baby better be next in line!!! I thik Bella needs that baby in order to move forward!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 56
awesome chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 56
I look forward to the next chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 56
awww!!!! thats adorable!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 56
“They’re going to be good dads,” whispered Claire. Quil looked away but didn’t say anything. I couldn’t imagine how hard this was for both of them.
“Thank you,” muttered Quil. “I know they can give him what we can’t right now but…”
My heart broke for Quil in this chap. I cried for him and I cried for Claire. The whole scene was gut wrenchingly, beautifully written. Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 56
Carlisle and Bella together would be hot!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know, right? Just not in this story:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 56
What a fantastic chapter!!! My favorite part had to be when Carlisle called the nurse a skanky bitch! And to have her turn to face off with Esme...that was the bomb!!! Loved the whole thing from start to finish. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 16 Aug 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 55
i love endless awakenings for the next title
Author's Response:
Thank you:)