Date: 01 May 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
: (SADLY AFTER READING FROM THE BEGINNING I'VE LOST INTEREST. ONCE IT WAS REVEALED THAT EDWARD WAS IN FACT WHITLEY'S FATHER... IT'S JUST NOT RIGHT...EVEN IF EDWARD TURNS OUT TO BE BELLA'S BABY'S FATHER THE BELLA EDWARD BOND HAS BEEN DEFILED. :( GOOD BYE.
Date: 14 Sep 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 62
LOL, yep that was definitely full of lemony goodness!! Thanks so much for writing such a loving story. I can't wait for the third installment in the series, I'm sure it'll be great! :D
Loved it! Bravo!
Thank you:) The third one should be up very soon.
Date: 13 Sep 2010 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 62
That was AWESOME!!! Way to go out with a bang! Well, several bangs actually. I am sad this is ending, but only for a second because I am so looking forward to EA!!!
All in all, great story woman! Well done!!!!
Thank you:) I think they all needed one last....get together:)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 61
Yes, I so called it on Jasper being the bio daddy. I still think that Mac was made on Christmas Day when Bella remembered Jasper, finally! I love this story. :)
lol, I thought it was obvious but I guess not;) THank you, hon!
Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
*Standing Ovation* ;)
Whew! Yay! Bravo!
Congrats to Jasper! And oh my gosh, you'd think Seth and Tanya would've learned their lesson the first time! LOL! Enjoyed their first outtake, so I can only imagine this one! *snicker*
Fabulous, butterflybetty!! :D
Aw, thank you, hon:) I apprecuite:)
Date: 09 Sep 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 61
I loved it!!! I am so glad that Jasper is the baby daddy, it keeps everything in balance. Thanks for the explaination for her name. I got the Whitlock reference with Whitley, but I honestly forgot about Alice's maiden name.
Can't wait for the next chapter! You write the best four way lemons ever!!!!
Thank you:) I had alot of people who didn't get the Mackenzie/McCarty connection.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 60
Love it :)
Whitley was for Whithlock, right??? Or am I wrong...
but why Mackenzie?I can't figure it out ;)
Please enlighten me ^^
Yes, Whitley was for Whitlock. Mackenzie is for McCarty, Alice's maiden name:)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 60
Ahhh, love the name, but I guess I am a bit slow and don't see the connection as to why they chose that name.
Excellent chapter. I totally understood Bella's feelings ( I had 3 c/s myself and each time the stress and worry always hit me the morning of. You wrote that whole experience really well!!!
Thanks:) I've had three c-sections, too. I totally understand what you mean.
Date: 06 Sep 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 60
I just knew Faith would be in her name somehow, LOL! Adorable! Just awesome! :D
Maybe you should go ahead and explain the baby names anyway?? I suffer from CRS (Can't Remember Shit) and it's very annoying, LOL! They're great names, and I would like to TRY to remember how their names came about. :)
So...will there be like an epilogue and then the new story will go from there? Loved how this one progressed from the first. :)
lol*snort* CRS, I like that:)
Ok, so here's the thing with the names. Whitley was named after Jasper's family name, Whitlock. Mackenzie was named after Alice's family name, McCarty. Make sense???
There are two more chapters before I start the third story.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 60
AAAWWWW!!!!! so cute!!! so they named her after Alice's last name, right!?!?!?!? i really hope that she is jasper's!!! :D LOVING IT!!!! cant wait for more!!! :D
Yep, that's why they named her Mackenzie:)
Date: 02 Sep 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 59
I have missed the sex fest that these four enjoy together! They are my favorite poly-amorous grouping out there!!! Always so hot, six weeks will feel like forever. ;)
Poor Bella having her mini breakdown. I have been there and totally get it. You wrote that scene in the office so well. Very real to life.
Can't wait to meet baby Cullen!!!
Thank you:) I've been in Bella's shoes. All three of mine were born via c-section and I can remember feeling so scared that something was going to happen to me or my baby.
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 59
i cant wait to see if i am right i have a feeling that this baby is jaspers conceved on christmas day when she finally remmember who jasper was i hope i am right and i wonder if seth and tanya made another bet this is going to be fun to find out so please udpate soon
Date: 02 Sep 2010 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 58
Miley Faith Cullen?
Idk why but Melissa and Michele where the only other ones I could think of and this one sounded better. I feel so bad for Bella I was never on bed rest thank god bt was huge and uncomfortable both times i can't even imagine!!
Lovely guesses:) I was on bedrest with all three of mine and it sucks but the end result was worth it every time. New Chapter should be up with in the next hour or so:)
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 58
No guesses on the name right now. I'll keep thinking though!!!!
I loved the chapter. Full of nothing but happiness. And happiness is always nice. I know angst comes in the story too but, it's great to have a whole chapter dedicated to happiness once in a while!!!!
Also glad that you spent some quality mommy/daughter time. Even if was to nap!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 58
I couldn't guess the new baby's name even if I tried (the F is really throwing me off). Congrats on catching the cat nap. They are so rare, so I am glad you got to enjoy it. ;)
Another fantastic chapter. Kate might be prego? Love it! They are going to have so many kids running around between these familes, they won't know what to do.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 57
A clean house? What's that??? I totally hear ya my sista. I have 3 kids, work full time and a house that is only truly clean before parties. LOL. You update when you can, we will be waiting. ;)
I loved this chapter. It had a little of all the things I love. A little family bonding time (the visual of Edward singing to Whitley is damn near orgasm inducing, it is so hot). And a little bit of lovin time with E&B.
Excellent chapter, as always.
You clean your house before parties?? lol, I have three kids to so I understand completely! Thank you for reviewing, and being patient with me. I agree Edward singing to Whitley...Yeah..
Date: 20 Aug 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 56
So beautifully written...I'm sitting here in tears.
Clayton Isaac Call, great name. I'm glad that Claire shared the experience with her parents, Quil, Jared, & Embry.
It was so nice that the rest of the ever-expanding "family" is so supportive. Just needed Mike, Tyler, Seth, and Tanya to be there, too, lol!
And of course, what perfect comic relief while at a hospital - the 'skanky bitch' nurse!! Priceless!!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 56
All these babies being born. Such happiness!!!! Love it!!!!
Bella is such a trooper. That baby better be next in line!!! I thik Bella needs that baby in order to move forward!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2010 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 56
“They’re going to be good dads,” whispered Claire. Quil looked away but didn’t say anything. I couldn’t imagine how hard this was for both of them.
“Thank you,” muttered Quil. “I know they can give him what we can’t right now but…”
My heart broke for Quil in this chap. I cried for him and I cried for Claire. The whole scene was gut wrenchingly, beautifully written. Thank you