Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 70- Seventy Years
That was the perfect way to end your wonderful story, although once again it made me cry. I'm really getting to be a weepy old broad! I'm so glad you told me to come read this tale of love and family, and magic. I absolutely loved all of it and thank you so much for writing it. I can't believe people read and didn't review, shame on them!
i'm thrilled you enjoyed it, your reviews are the only ones i need
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 69- The Mom Card, and a Toast
That was quite a day! Taylen was the last one I thought would phase, and I'll bet it shocked her and her parents. Then to have Keegan stroll in and promptly imprinted on Tay. Unless she imprinted on him, oh who cares! That is a good reason to have a pizza party and celebrate. Nice to see also that the zip hasn't gone out of Jared and Kim's marriage.
check out hey it's me, and the life i belong to as well. characters from there will be in my rewrite series!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 67- Chocolate Milk and Pound Cake, Hot Damn!
How time flies, the kids are growing up so fast,but then they all do. It's funny Aaron hasn't phased yet, especially with vampires in the area again. Wonder what the mystery is there?
Date: 25 Nov 2011 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 66- Fuck Bee's
Boy, is there anything scarier than your child in danger? That was a real close call. If Jared hadn't been able to phase, Lua may have died before they got her to help. Very nice that all three kids are cool with their dad being a wolf.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 61- Melting the Ice
This guy with the smart-ass idea for a book could be a problem. Hopefully the tribal elders can come up with a solution. On a happier note, at last, Jared and Kim have opened up to each other about another baby. Sounds as if they got a real good start on one, too!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 60- Family Pictures
This is definitely something Jared needs to talk over with Kim. It's no doubt scaring hell out of him, thinking how he nearly lost her last time. If they don't get things squared awy, it could ruin their relationship.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 58- She's Mine, Gimme!
That moment between Jared and Mingan was pretty powerful and had me tearing up again. Did I mention I love stories that make me cry?This almost wasn't a happy ending, so it's much better because of that fact.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 54- That Was A Bit Much
It's funny, but I have never thought of Bella that way at all. If she wanted to be something, or do something, I think she would find a way. Just a thought. Kim was really hurt by Elan's words, and I think Jared was kind of too. Brother Elan is going to have some big fence-mending to do here.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 53- Telling Our Parents We're Going To Be Parents
Jared and Kim may be characters in a story, but them telling their parents the big news, got tears in my old eyes, for sure! What passed between the two of them and their respective parents was simply beautiful.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 52- Don't Worry Silly, It's Yours
That was so sweet, that Paul thought it as wonderful as Jared and Kim. Two cubs coming to the pack, how exciting! The copy of Tale of two Cities was very nice, but I think Kim's present won first prize!
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 51- You're Going To Name The Baby Kim, Right?
Emily should have known Sam would be happy about a baby, and not worry about phasing or not. It was cute that Jared and Kim wanted to be the first ones pregnant, but they have lots of time.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 49- I Married The Boy
The hioneymoon from the pack, as thanks for saving them from Drake, was most thoughtful, and a lovely gesture. The mode of transportation from the reception was rather unique, to say the least! How many brides get a wolf-back ride home from the wedding?
Date: 25 Nov 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 46- Yellow Roses and Wishes
I sure hope this doesn't mean trouble is ahead, because life looks really good for Kim and Jared right now. Their wedding is coming together, his art is selling and now her first book will be published.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 43- You Don't Want to Mess With Me
Yaya almost messed up there, giving Lulu the impression she wasn't happy about her and Elan getting married. It's good they can all talk to each other, and loaning the dress she hoped to use was sweet of Yaya. The fool never knew he passed up the best woman he would ever meet. Look at the wonderful children she raised.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 41- The Healing of Imprinting
Poor Collin, dead because some madman thought he could steal magic. That was so sad, not only for his mother but the whole pack and their imprints. Another example of the bond between imprints.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 35- Nice Day For a Imprint Werewolf Wedding
I love weddings, real or imagined, in books or on disc. Sam and Emily's was great, and the topper was Billy proposing to Aiyanna. How nice that the Blacks and the Greystones will combine into one large family.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 32- Shaking Knees, a Hero, and a Birdhouse
Man, just when everything was going along smoothly, this had to happen. Thank God for Carlisle Cullen. Fixing and healing a werewolf isn't something you can expect your local g.p. to know how to do. Kim is going to be frantic!
Date: 24 Nov 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 26- Return to Normalcy
Kim's lucky to be out of the hospital after only two weeks. Now time will be the healing power they all need. It will be a while before Jared can let down his guard again. He just came too close to losing Kim, to just put it all aside and act like nothing happened.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 24- Awaikenings and Forehead Kisses
This had to be the best of days for all concerned. Kim will be okay in time, her mom knows Jared's secret, and is good with it. Now all I have to worry about is Jared hunting Vance, hopefully not alone.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 22- Heart
I'm amazed Vance didn't outright kill Kim. It's a damn miracle she's even this much alive. Too bad he got away before the pack got a hold of him and tore him to pieces. That would be the very least that should happen.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 18- Vamp, and Spend My Life With You
Looks like Bella wasn't the only one who took the legend of the third wife to heart. That was so brave of Kim, and selfless, but scary as hell for Jared. It also cemented Embry and Morgan's relationship. They owe Kim a lot.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 15- She'll Be There
Never was a fan of Friends, so hadn't heard the lobster analogy. Makes sense, though. I'm glad Kim figured it out on her own and is fine with the magic. I always thought the shape-shifters were pretty damn cool anyway.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 13- Yaya, Mingan, Worlds, and Suck it Rachel
That often dreaded step, meeting the parents, is out of the way. They all seem to like each other, too, even brother Elan. I hope Jared will now feel comfortable enough to tell Kim that he's the golden wolf.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7- Dance it Out, and Squeals
This is like the stereotyped boy meets girl story, squared. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Kim reacts to Jared being a wolf. The more I find out about her, and Lulu and Yaya, the more I like them all.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1- I'm Gonna Marry That Boy
You suggested I read this to get to know the Greystones, so here I am. Ilike your stories , so knew you wouldn't steer me wrong. This sounds like it may be pretty good, so I'll go now, and find out! See you later.
Date: 28 Sep 2010 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 70- Seventy Years
Aww...I just can't believe it is over. I have cried and laughed my ass off though. You have written an amazing story here and I am so glad I got the chance to read it. Thanks for sharing with us. : )
thank you so much! i'm thirlled you liked it that much. and i researched native american names so thats where they came from for the most part. i'm going to be starting my third story this weekend, i hope you check that one out too. thanks again!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 26- Return to Normalcy
Ya know I started out reading this story cause your other one was so good. I didn't really think I would like it, but thought wth I'll give it a shot. I am surprised I like it so well. I don't usually like the whole imprint/werewolf thing. But this is a really good story. Can't wait to finish it.
i'm glad your enjoying! i hope you keep liking it
Date: 23 Jun 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 70- Seventy Years
loved the ending.....so sweet
You covered so much time in this story, more details in some parts would have added but I know when the thoughts are going in your head it is hard not to just get them all down. Keep up the writing, you will just continue to get better and better!
glad you liked it!. it may not be much but its my first story ever and itl always be special for that. i'm posting a chapter on the other today hopefully.
Date: 19 Jun 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 31- Night of Firsts
okay, definately can use some more emotions and details in the sex scene.................
haha im gonna try and do that in my second story. the first one i wasnt as brave, im not holding back now though
Date: 18 Jun 2010 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 12- Sunbeam
nothing new to read so figured I might as well try your other story. I love it! I am enjoying the different characters, (that is one of the great things about your stuff) and the deeper look into the whole imprint thing. Plus it is so sweet!
glad your enjoying it frekles! this story was my first i call it my baby haha. its a long one but keep at it, hope you like the ending.