Date: 14 Sep 2014 11:21 PM Title: MY HAPPY ENDING
Thank you for finishing out this story! I really enjoyed it as it didn't have "pat" answers and solutions to problems. Things needed to be worked out....as they do in life. Again, I really enjoyed this one with its ups and downs and all! Thank you for working so hard on it for us!
Date: 02 Feb 2011 11:45 PM Title: THE FINAL STRAW
He will come back, he may be hurt but he already said that he accepted her as his mate. You cant just walk away from that even though he's hurt. I love Bella and Peter but he should take more of a dominate role. Great story .
He should be more dominate, but with another alpha its a struggle. thanks for reading
Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:41 PM Title: THE FINAL STRAW
So...I read this entire story in less than a day!!!! I am not a huge fan of non cannon pairings but I truly adore this fic! Peter and Bella...who would of thought! I even liked the torn Edward! Please continue this!!!! Pretty please with Peter on top! :)
Thank you for reviewing! I hear ya...I didn't like non cannon for a while either, but there are some really good ones out there. I have another story with Jasper, that's pretty generic, but a lot of people seemed to like it. The Bella and Jasper story that caught my attention was from IdreamofEddy on fanfiction but she just recently pulled her stories. Anyway, if you are willing to venture out there are some really good plot filled non cannon out there. I'm glad you enjoyed the story...
Date: 05 Jan 2011 11:36 AM Title: THE FINAL STRAW
Nice to have you back, and you really kicked up the drama ;-)
Thanks for updating!
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 28 Jun 2010 9:56 PM Title: KISS
I am still here reading and I really loved this story. The chapter was very sweet and i can not wait to see what is going to happen. Can't wait to see how the cullens are going to come back into Bella life and if she will appologize to Esme. Although, I kind of like the fact that Esme slapped Bella cause she did kind of deserve it.
Until next time :)
Thank you for the review. Yeah, some didn't think that Esme should have slapped Bella, but I thought Bella hit below the belt so to speak...
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:23 PM Title: KISS
I must say.. One of the most interesting developments I've ever read! Not at all what I expected.
Amazing story. I cannot wait to read what happens next, I'm hooked.
Thank you for the review! So glad you liked it!
Date: 13 Jun 2010 12:46 PM Title: CAUGHT
Firstly I really like this story! Secondly I understand that work can take over your life and leave only a little for everything else, so thanks for the heads up about the next chapters and its cool we can wait! lol! Oh and I would LOVE to see the Volturi try to recruit Bella only for her to show them the door - in a really fun but nasty way!
Oh and I really laughted at the fight between Bella, Edward and Tanya. I think they should learn their place lol! Because it seems that no matter how much Bella tells them she's Bad Ass, they still seem to think that she is still sweet little Bella that will forgive them at a drop of a hat. Can't see that happening!
So Keep up the great work (Don't work too hard!)
Till next time
Thanks for the review! Yep, that's exactly what they see. Little Bella that sweet and nice, but she is long gone. You'll see something similar to what you want. I have the second half of the story planned out, so I just need to write it now. I'll try not to work to hard. :)
Date: 13 Jun 2010 11:12 AM Title: CAUGHT
loved the chapter. I guess I am still holding a grudge against edward as well. I wanted a little more damage done to him than she did. maybe another time.
Thanks for the review! Maybe she will, I still haven't decided.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 5:36 AM Title: UNEXPECTED VISITOR
Stunningly intense chapter! You really set the bar high! Edward, here, just can't seem to let it go. The product of no intense pain and suffering I think. That's why Jasper, Peter and Rosalie get it; they've walked the walk. Enjoy your time off! Things now get so-o busy! Trust me, we'll be here...chewing our fingernails, but we will seriously be here happily awaiting your next update.
Thanks for the review. Well, yeah...it's hard for him to let go. The person he was in love with for over a century died. Now, she's back...that's got to mess with your head. I agree with your assessment of Jasper, Peter, and Rosalie. Check out my poll over on ff . net.
Date: 30 May 2010 4:04 PM Title: UNEXPECTED VISITOR
This was such a heartbreaking part of the story, especially the pieces about her son. Really good chapter though. Hope you update some more soon
Thanks for the review. I'm pretty sure this is the sadest thing you will read in this story. Although, I'm not finished writing yet, so you knows...
Date: 29 May 2010 6:58 PM Title: UNEXPECTED VISITOR
ok, Love the no love to Edward, and really enjoy Jasper and Peter. Bella is badass, and I really like that. I think that you could go into the Voultri trying to kill her, and her, Peter, Jasper, and Alice taking over. Bella being taught to feed from sick and dying, like Peter. Umm more southern wars? Her discovering why she cannot be killed...
I hope that helps cuz I really like this Bella and would like to read more about her and Peter.
Thanks for the review. I was thinking of one of the ideas you threw out there. However, it was just going to Bella taking over. ;) Thanks for the ideas.
Date: 29 May 2010 6:15 AM Title: UNEXPECTED VISITOR
Great chapter, I really hope to see another chapter soon. As for ideas, I've done my own little war-ish story (still writing it actually). I'd like to see an actual conversation between Peter and Bella, one where she actually answers his questions about some of her past. It seems like there's a lot of back story missing, and I know you're writing a fuller version in that prequel of yours, but I just think there needs to be some true back story in this one. I also would like to see another lemon between Peter and Bella. just a thought...
Thanks for the review. Thanks for your thoughts and I am sure you will see what you are looking for. Chapter 13 will be your next lemon and I wrote some serious dialog between Bella and Peter. Plus, the dialog will contain more of her back story. Yeah, I guess I am kind of dragging out her back story. Oops! All will be revealed...promise!
Date: 27 May 2010 9:37 AM Title: MY UNHAPPY ENDING
Wow! Wonderful, I can't wait for more. I wonder, could it be maria's head he is hearing. i mean technacly she isnt dead only burried. if it isnt i'd love to know how they would react to knowing about Maria's head.
Thanks for the review. Maybe, maybe not...stayed tuned... I can promise there will be more of Maria. ;)
Date: 26 May 2010 8:23 PM Title: MY UNHAPPY ENDING
Okay, I began reading this story this morning, and read it straight through...Awesome job! You hit all the emotional lows yet are still bringing us an excellent mystery in some ways. So much of Bella's past is a mystery still at this point. I can't wait to see where you bring us next! I'm also looking forward to Jasper getting Maria's head and a book of matches. Think of his jollys! Amazing job! Bravo!
Thanks so much for the kind words. I'm glad it was an easy read; that's probably one of the harder things to do. Yes, some more stuff is still to be revealed. Next chapter I'm hoping will be a surprise.
Date: 26 May 2010 7:05 AM Title: MY UNHAPPY ENDING
Funny....Maria? Never a dull moment in this fic that's for sure. Meeting Jacob William and that whole conversation made me cry....not to mention the letter we're supposed to have forgotten about from Jake....gah.........I can't take it I tell ya. But I do love Peter the manpire.
Thans for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I don't know if I'm going to reveal what's in the letter, but we'll see...
Date: 25 May 2010 3:11 AM Title: MY UNHAPPY ENDING
Lmao i'm guessing he can hear 'the Maria head' that Bella burried lol. That is just too funny!! This was quite a sorrowfull chapter but very very good and i so can't wait for the next update!
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you found it funny as I did.
Date: 23 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: MY UNHAPPY ENDING
I love that the chapter are getting longer. Can't wait for more. :)
Thanks. I'm trying, apparently I don't have that much to say in this story in comparsion to last story. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 17 May 2010 1:55 PM Title: THE END
Aww, this was such a sad story, but i'm loving all the Bella and Peter interaction especially since it's pissing Edward off lmao.
Thanks for the review! It will get better. I'm starting to write some fluffier stuff.
Date: 16 May 2010 9:22 PM Title: THE END
Poor Bella...i feel so bad for her. I always love stories where Bella has a baby, even if something tragic happens in the end. i have quiet a few most are not posted but you get the point. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for the review! You should post them.
Date: 16 May 2010 12:31 PM Title: THE END
great chapter. I really want to say that Edward should be beaten by Lucybella at least once but I really don't think she cares enough about him anymore. All her anger towards him and the family seems to have been taken out on the house. However what the hell is he doing with Tanya since he obviously still had feelings for bella. For his possesiveness he is attempting to assert over her and his display of emotions towards her..for that he should get his ass handed to him by her. he was perhaps never good enough for her. look forward to more.
Thanks for the review! With Edward and Tanya-Edward loves Tanya, but unfortunately not as much as he loved Bella. Alice and Edward mourned Bella for over a century and the family didn't pressure him into a relationship, but they contributed to his moving on with Tanya. I'm not sure if I'm going to put this information in the story, but thought you'd like to know.
Date: 16 May 2010 3:07 AM Title: THE END
That was a sad chapter. But seems to be par for the course with this story. hehehe I just see your story title and get out the tissues now. LOL Update soon. :)
Thanks for the review! lol...hopefully you won't need the tissues much longer. There will be a couple more sad ones on the way; I actually cried writing one of them, but the sad stuff is almost done and her fighting/army story is coming up next.
Date: 13 May 2010 3:14 PM Title: CEMETERY
It was good hearing some of Bella's past. It explains why she feels she lost herself. Losing a child will do that to any mother but being changed as well just broke her even more. I have a feeling Bella and Peter may be getting closer to each other and when she feels up to it she will open up more to him soon. I cant wait for the next chapter. I have fallen in love with this story and this pairing as well. Awesome work.
Thanks for the review! Thank you for your kind words. Next post should be Sunday!
Date: 13 May 2010 1:04 AM Title: CEMETERY
Ok, first, I am still here reading this wonderful story. I do not think that it is too dark. In fact, I am really enjoying this. This chapter made me cry when Bella was telling the story of her son, and I like when I can feel the emotions of the characters. So good job!!!
I have read alot of fanfics that start after Edward leaves Bella in New Moon, but none of them have ever been like this one. I just think that it is wonderful.
I am really enjoying this and can't wait to hear the rest of Bella's story and to see how this ends.
Please continue with it!!!!
Until next time :)
Thanks for the review! Your review meant so much to me. Thank you for taking the time to write something meaningful. Does it make me horrible that I'm glad I got you to cry? LOL...after the fluffy story I just wrote I wanted to make someone cry; I wanted to convey that emotion well enough to make someone tear up. Anyway...thanks for the encouragement.
Date: 13 May 2010 12:23 AM Title: CEMETERY
I have been following your story for several chapters now and am absolutely in love with it!!! It just keeps getting better and better!! so glad you updated again with Bellas past the cliff hanger at the end of last chapter was pure eveil but genius at the same time.... can't wait for more!!
Thanks for the review! Glad to see a review from a follower. Yeah, I know it was evil that's one of the reasons I posted today intstead of Sunday.
Date: 12 May 2010 10:12 PM Title: CEMETERY
My goodness the story of bella's son was so sad as well as Jacob blaming her for their sons death. I've never liked rose so I like it when Bella showed her who's boss.
Thanks for the review! Yeah, I had fun throwing her into a tree.
Date: 12 May 2010 10:11 PM Title: CEMETERY
Great chapter, was interesting to learn some of the back story to Bella/Lucy. So, was Rosalie the one who killed Anthony and changed Bella? I would think Bella would be more mad if she was?
Thanks for the review! No Rosalie was not the one to kill Bella and her son. If you recall earlier chapters Rosalie was the one to attack and then Edward left like he did in NM. You'll find out more in the next chapter!
Date: 12 May 2010 8:53 PM Title: CEMETERY
What a sad chapter...but it`s good to see why Bella turned out the way she has..
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you understand. A lot of people aren't liking how dark she is, but with that under your belt, how could you blame her? Thanks for that.
Date: 12 May 2010 8:40 PM Title: CEMETERY
Oh wow, i mean seriously cool chapter. And Finally Rosalie got taken down a peg or two lol and by Bella makes it even better lmao. So can't wait for the next update!
Thanks for the review...means a lot.
Date: 12 May 2010 7:43 PM Title: CEMETERY
I love multiple and longer chapters. You are right. This story is pretty dark. But I'm hoping that it will get a little lighter soon. :)
I think it will; I'm trying to fight some fluffy stuff into chapter 13 but it seems out of place, so we'll see.
Date: 12 May 2010 12:40 PM Title: JACOB WILLIAM BLACK
I love it!!! I would like to see Bella AKA Lucy, put Edward in his place. That would be funny to see. I can not wait to see how and what has happened with the pack and what the legend says about Bella.
Until next time :)
Thanks for the review. You may get to see what you want. ;)
Date: 10 May 2010 6:03 PM Title: CIRCLING
Wow that was really good, was hoping that bella would dominate jasper. Cant wait to see who is coming
Thanks for the review! That's awesome! I couldn't decide who I wanted to win so this is what happen. :)
Date: 10 May 2010 2:49 PM Title: CIRCLING
great chapter. enjoying the story. would have like to see her come out as alpha though.
Thanks for the review! I like someone else's thoughts about that actually. It's like they are both Alpha's; there's a male and female alpha.
Date: 10 May 2010 7:49 AM Title: CIRCLING
Lovely! Hmm i wounder who it could be? Maybe the rest of the cullens or the wolves or maybe some newborns come after maria's head or after bella. So many posiblities. I can hardly wait for more.
Thank you for the review! You will probably see the next chapter in a day or so...