Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 26
WTF?! I was not expecting that.
Author's Response:
Good. I've done my job. :)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
grrrr. she should have told. between em, eddie, and carlisle, they could have been able to rip him apart.
Author's Response:
Exactly. But Riley could be VERY persusasive. Besides, if she had then the story would pretty much be over. This way, we have four more chapters. :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
ok im all caught up now. What in the world did he do to Alice. he isgoing to kill her (or try i should say) man and jasper was just starting to mend. i will be looking daily to see if you have updated. holy cow this is good! you are amazing!!!! oh and i think uh-oh is and huge understatement...lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, bekah. You'll find out soon. :)
Date: 26 Sep 2010 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
ok it clear i found this i didnt look fore the last review~ you had me so worked up i think i yelled so much my hubby might commit me now....lol i'm still stuck on the jasper thing.
Author's Response:
Lol. Glad you are liking the story. :)
Date: 24 Sep 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter! Certain things make more sense after reading Jasper's explanation, and I always love hearing his POV on things.
Author's Response:
Then you'll be happy to know he has about two more in this story. :)
Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 22 Sep 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 25
Now that cliffhanger is just plain cruel! Perfect....but cruel! The dynamic of Riley added to the family is fascinating.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Till! Don't grow too attached to him though. :)
Date: 20 Sep 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
I know I'm late with reading the update but I truly hope that your week got better. I loved the update. The Cullens just can not catch a break.
Kat
Author's Response:
I know. But if they could we wouldn't have a story. :)
Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
great chatper.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 Sep 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
ugh now who...
Author's Response:
Frustrating, I know. You'll find out next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 25
good chapter plz dont leave us hanging for to long.
Author's Response:
I hope not. I "should" be able to write this weekend.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh, no!! What happened to Alice?
Author's Response:
Any guesses?
Date: 07 Sep 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Such a sweet reunion. Kat
Author's Response:
Thanks, Kat. I thought you guys deserved it. :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
U know I love it!! More, More more!!!
Author's Response:
Good! I love hearing that. :)
Date: 06 Sep 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
You're so clever;-) Now stop writing responses and write more chapters!
Author's Response:
:D
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
hmmmm need to hook Riley up with Irina or tanya
Author's Response:
Not a bad idea.....
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
Really imaginative story. I am really enjoying it, Thanks
Author's Response:
Hi HopelessRomantic! Glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 05 Sep 2010 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 24
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Date: 05 Sep 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
He couldn't smell her?
Author's Response:
No. What do you think the rose was for?
Date: 05 Sep 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
Lovely piece with Emmett and Rosalie's reunion as the icing on the cake. I swear I almost cried!
Author's Response:
:D
It was sweet. Nothing against the overly dramatic reunions, but I thought it just didn't fit.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
I just knew Jasper would be there when it counted and make all the difference! Superb! Every little move and word.
Author's Response:
Well, I couldn't have him not get his revenge. After what he went through, it was only fair.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 21
I say Edward's voice is Jasper - the real, one-of-a-kind, Jasper. Great cliffhanger!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
YAY!!!!! Go, Jazz!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Lol. Jasper needed the revenge more than anyone. But what will he do about Riley?
Date: 26 Aug 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yay! Now what are you going to do w Riley? He needs someone too *pouty face*
Author's Response:
Well, Riley wants Alice. What do you think he'll do to try and get her?
Date: 26 Aug 2010 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next one will hopefully answer everyone's questions.
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
awww jazz should haVE KILLED HER MORE SLOWLY....
Author's Response:
That's a good point, but he was out of patience.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
good chapter.. i love that edward got her back.
Author's Response:
Yay! Can they save her?
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh, you have to write more soon! I have to know what happens!!! *sitting on the edge of my seat*
Author's Response:
I am actually writing the next chapter now; hope to have it up soon. :)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 22
was riley the one killing the other new borns? or was that rose? please update soon.
Author's Response:
Hmmm...you'll find out soon. Thanks for reading!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
it has to be jake outside. way back when he started helping he mentioned checking the parimeter, just like here.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
that seems just like vic. she would think of her plan coming together and her enemies dying as a huge turn on.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 19
oh boy will eddie get there in time?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
well that was a real shit way to end the chapter! :( and i have to go to bed! see you in the morning!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
well the fake jasper is showing his true clors but he too seems to be torn on what to do.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
yay jasper is back where he belongs. alive and snuggled in alice's arms!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 15
well jasper is found and is on the mend. right? your gonna let the hunky texan be ok right?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 14
finally! they found him one way or another. but he better be ok!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
ok bella really needs to start thinking with her head and heart and not with her cooch!
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12
well aren't we just a crazy bitch?!?! wonder what the 'prized possesion' is? and what is her special talent? and how the hell did she make the copy jasper?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
about fuckin time! yay for jake having a head on his shoulders and not shoved up his ass.
and who did eddie kill for the information about iceland?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
bella honey, you do not need to settle! and you need to start listening to the feelings that this is wrong.
and alice better check the fuckin building. still can't understand why she hasn't yet.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
was it rose? vic?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
ok jake is now on board and they know that bella was headed north to canada. now we just need jake to track down the real jasper. by the way why have they not gone to check the building from alice's vision? it is so close and they would find the real jasper.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
i wonder who or what is controlling the voice in bella's head? it seems to make her second guess everytime she thinks of pulling away from 'jasper'
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 6
haha! jasper is not a part of all of victoria's fuckery! now we need alice and the gang to find him before it's too late. they will right? right? you believe in happy endings right?
and who is the imposter? riley?
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
poor alice! and all of the rest of the cullens except jasper. he is still a wild card to me i am not sure if he is another victim of victoria's or if he is just using all of this to get what he wants - bella.
Author's Response:
Hi Sunshine-Sue! Keep reading; you'll find out. :)
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
ok so vic is fucking with everyone here. and it sounds like she has rose locked away somewhere. so is jasper acting on his own? does he know this is all a sham? is he working with vic?
Author's Response:
Hi Sue! No, he's not working with her, but he knows it's a sham. You'll find out why. Jasper is the key to the answers.
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
so is vic fucking with everyone? or is jasper the king of the mind fuck here and just blaming it all on vic? oh the questions!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
not sure i wanna kick jasper's ass maybe tie him down, spank him and then have my wicked way with him!
Author's Response:
LOL! We'll take turns. ;)
Date: 22 Aug 2010 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
ok seriously what the fuck?!?!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 21
yikes!!!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
must be jasper outside he wouldn't let alice go off on her own even in his weakened state he would fight. look forward to more.
Author's Response:
You seem to know Jasper's mind. ;)
The answer will be revealed in chapter 23.
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2010 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great Chapter...I still wish it would have been the real Jasper. I like him and Bella together. The story is awesome either way, I am enjoying it. Thanks for taking the time to write it for us. :)
Author's Response:
Well, thank YOU for reading it. And reviewing. It means a lot. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope to have the next chapter up soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for the next chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thanks! Everything's about to hit the fan!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
Like vikki deserves anything???? bah.
Author's Response:
True, but I did like the idea of Riley naked. :)
Date: 07 Aug 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
Cruel, cruel writer, leaving us there hanging! It's perfect, but cruel. Why do I keep thinking that the real Jasper is going to screw up their plans completley.
Author's Response:
You're not far off. :)
Date: 01 Aug 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
uh oh ! hope edward gets there in time.
Author's Response:
I hope so too!
I should have the next chapter up in a day or so.
Date: 30 Jul 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
what?!?!?!?! NO!!!!
where the flip is edward?
Author's Response:
He's on his way. But will he make it in time?
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
poor bella. hope eddie gets these fast.
Author's Response:
Yeah, me too!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 19
ugggggggggggggggggggggg
Author's Response:
I know. Will she get out of there?
Date: 30 Jul 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 19
Oh now that cliffy was just plain evil!! A clone! I love it and as I wrote before, I am sort of hitting myself going, "Duh!!" Great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next....big time!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I know the clone is different, but that's why I liked the idea. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2010 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh, shit! Hurry, Edward. Hurry!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, shit indeed. Can he make it?
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 18
i hope he isn't too late as well.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that would suck. All of his hard work in finding her and for nothing.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
YIKES.......Damn my fingers are white from hanging on the ledge and it's been only 1 minute scince you left me hanging over the edge.. plz update soon my fingers will thank you
Author's Response:
Lol. You can't have numb fingers. I'm afraid that the next chapter won't alleviate it, though. I hope to have that up Thursday.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
poor bella....and jazzz
Author's Response:
I know. Jazz is fighting so hard. And Bella...well she's Bella.
Date: 24 Jul 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ok. I'm caught up now so I will be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
I hope you explain this ability of Victoria to make doubles. Are they machines or clones or what? How did she get the ability to do that? How is it that the double has Jasper's abilities and memories?
Kat
Author's Response:
Hi Kat. All will be revealed. Jasper is the key. :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
You couldn't be so mean as to really kill Jasper. I assume that will get him out in time. Kat
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Nooooo Bella! Kat
Author's Response:
Lol, I know. If Edward's not available, why not his brother? :)
Date: 24 Jul 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Alice better hurry and find Jasper. I wonder why she doesn't see him - just the double. And when is Bella going to get a clue that something is off with her companion (and not just his ease with being around her).
Kat
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh good. So the Jasper with Bella is a fake...yay! What kind of creature is with Bella that he doesn't need to hunt? kat
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
I just don't get Jasper's actions. I'm sure that it will become clear in future chapters. I'm just being impatient.
Kat
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
Is the Jasper with Bella a double? kat
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Okay. So is Jasper working with Victoria? Where did Victoria come from? Where exactly did Edward's dead look a like come from? I know...I know...I'll read on.
Kat
Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't believe that Bella is even considering being with Jasper. What happened to a respectable mourning period? I don't whether I want to kick Jasper's ass or both his and Bella's.
Kat
Date: 23 Jul 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was assuming that something was off here. I can't help but wonder how you are going to explain all of the Cullen bodies - but maybe they will be put back together. I wonder why Victoria didn't burn them if she was indeed behind this whole thing (and its not Jasper's doing). Kat
Date: 23 Jul 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 17
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 22 Jul 2010 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love a good mystery! And I have to say that I'm not bad at them but this one...you have me so stumped! Bravo on that one! You rock!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I'm actually surprised that people haven't figured out what's going to happen. But I'm glad; hopefully you'll like what happens. :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Cant wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Modiggy! It should answer at least one question: who is with Bella?
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Yea!! Now edward just has to find Bella! & kill the bitch!
Author's Response:
Lol. I love how you phrased that. What would you prefer? Edward killing Victoria? Or Alice?
Date: 21 Jul 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
I really like your story and I'm looking forward to reading more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! I hope you like where it goes. :)
Date: 21 Jul 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
hmm listen to your instincts B
Author's Response:
She never has before, why start now? :)
Date: 20 Jul 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 16
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! ITS SO GOOD!
Author's Response:
Hi StickyNiki! I plan to finish; I just had an issue that had to be taken care of before I could concentrate on writing. But chapter 17 is up; I hope you enjoy it. :)
Date: 05 Jul 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 16
glad jazz is gonna be ok
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 04 Jul 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Absolutley brilliant...so inventive I swear I could see the hallway and everything Jasper saw. It should be interesting to find out what happens when Jasper learns Bella's been "taken" and tricked using what she thinks is him. When he heals, I think he'll be more than angry!!! This piece was lovely though and a true testament to absolute love!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the kind words! You're right that Jazz will be angry; wait until you read what happens!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
I know he needs to rest but isn't time kinda of the essence? And totally took notice of E's wrist band in Eclipse and thought of your story.
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm glad you noticed the wrist band. :)
Yes, time is of the essence. They all know that; but to all but Edward, Jasper comes first. Edward's next POV is on the plane to Iceland.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Damn I want more .. I know I know .. but i am addicted to this story
Author's Response:
Thanks, velvetwhispers! That makes me feel great!
Date: 03 Jul 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
glad they found him.
Author's Response:
Me too! Let's just hope it's not too late!
Date: 01 Jul 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
woo hoo for jazz and thank god for jake
Author's Response:
I know; Jake is more than a warm body.
Jazz isn't out of the woods yet; but don't worry; I know what happens.
Date: 30 Jun 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Brilliant fix! Jacob offering to donate...brilliant! Also, on behalf of Jasper lovers eevrywhere, I just want to say, "Whew! Close call! Thanks for not only saving but restoring our guy's honor all it one fatal blow!"
Author's Response:
Lol. I am totally Team Jasper (and Team Edward). I am rooting for him as much as you! And don't worry; I know what happens. :)
Date: 30 Jun 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
wow..cant wait for the next chapter...this was a good one
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope to have the next one up Saturday.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
OMG. That was intense! I do hope he pulls together soon. Good story!
Author's Response:
I know, right? Poor Jazz; he's not done fighting yet!
Date: 29 Jun 2010 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Date: 29 Jun 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh, that cliffhanger is way too cruel!! Not only am I puzzled, now I'm worried about Jasper's life. Eeek!
Author's Response:
Sorry, didn't mean to be cruel. Poor Jazz!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 6
hmmm so who is with bella then......
Author's Response:
Who indeed? Victoria mentioned using a machine and some of Jasper's hair. The truth will be revealed....
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
getting seatbelt on b4 i fall off the char that i am setting on the edge of now ..lol good chapter ..more plz
Author's Response:
Lol. I love your review. Thanks for reading!
Date: 21 Jun 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
Okay, now was Bella dreaming about a dangerous Jasper, or has Bella woken from a dream about what could be? I'm hoping it was just a dream. I do love Jazz! Great emotional impact here!
Author's Response:
Basically the dream was a foreshadowing. Maybe not that graphic, but her subconscious that she shouldn't tust "Jazz."
Thanks for the kind words! I'll be updating soon!
Date: 20 Jun 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
:)
Author's Response:
Hi! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella, I swear, the little hoochie!!! She needs to hands to herself and stop being so gullable!
Author's Response:
Lol. Very true, but then that wouldn't be Bella, would it? She did say that her libido needs a break.