Date: 03 Mar 2017 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 30
Liked it! The dynamics were good!
Author's Response:
Thanks! So sorry I didn't see this until now, 4 years later.
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 30
i'm really glad the i ended up reading this story ;) i read its reviews 1st because i'm team exb ALL the way i'm canon relationships ;) i hope you do make a 3rd edition of this and it has NO cheating and bella becomes a vampire ;D
Date: 25 Jun 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
WEll, those body parts can pull back together....hummm
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
I do, what a pig
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
I think the thing jasper is hiding is that victora forced him to drink human blood xxx love the story xx
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! Since he had to drink human blood to get better it wouldn't make much of a difference. She only did it to torture him. What a bitch!
I am glad you liked the story. Please feel free to check out my other work. Thank you for reading!
Date: 28 May 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 16
RELIEF. For Jasper's well being at least. More questions about who Bella is with...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! I hope you are enjoying the story and will be able to finish it. :)
Date: 28 May 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmmm. Given both facts and assumptions thus far, I am going to guess that the woman on the phone was NOT the Charlotte of the true Jasper's history. How the heck did Victoria get these look alikes anyway??
Date: 28 May 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Aaaargh!!
Date: 28 May 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
Alice wouldn't have visions of Jasper if he is being kept unconcious, but then what is up with Bella's emotions...??? Edward just might be on the track to realize his and Alice's 'deaths' were staged but he has to take it to the next step (or four!!)
Date: 28 May 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Soooo. Rosalie isn't dead?? Who is Victoria's captive 'pet'??
Date: 28 May 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Emmett! Grateful the others are ok though. Soooo, is Jasper being controlled like a puppett? or is this not 'our' Jasper, like the body of 'Edward' and head of 'Alice' planted at the meadow??
Date: 28 May 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am guessing that Jasper is messing with Bella's emotions; reducing her grief while amplifying her arousal...
Date: 27 May 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
WTF?? Jasper has snapped. Why would he wish to take his brother's fiance? Where are the others? The 'battle' scene seems contrived.
Date: 24 May 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
well I will definitely think this one over ... mind you I am partial to babies lol
Date: 22 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 30
This story was great. I was hoping for a sequel - maybe telling of the wedding and maybe if they have a child(ren) and her change (if there is one) - I was surprised that she didn't end up preggers in this one.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so glad you liked it. I might do another sequel at some point in the future. But probably no children involved. If you have any ideas, please sene them my way. I'd love to hear them.
Date: 22 May 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my goodness ... what now????
Date: 21 May 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh but why waste a good lemon on Vic?
Date: 21 May 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward will be fighting a MAJOR guilt trip if he isn't in time to save her!
Date: 21 May 2011 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yea! Jazz Lives!!!
Date: 21 May 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 15
Actually, there are enough people there to take care of Jazz and Edward should go get Bella!
Date: 21 May 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh God, Please let Jazz be alive!!!!!
Date: 21 May 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
They better go inside that burning warehouse and hopefully, Jazz is still alive and saveable
Date: 21 May 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok so Alice is seeing the warehouse where Jazz is but why isn't she seeing Jazz himself?
Date: 21 May 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
no I think it was Victoria and I hope Jazz is rescued in time and doesn't die!
Date: 21 May 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Jazz simply CAN NOT die!!!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
WTF> Ok, his eyes are black, he has a new phone, new card and just happened to take Bella and leave her phone so they can't be found. Why is he kidnapping her and why and why and why!? Idiot. Where's my lighter!
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks for r & r. I hope you continue to enjoy.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
no way, they are So not dead. What the fuck is up with Jasper though, hmmmm I must keep reading.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 30
thanks for the chaotic story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading, Maria! I hope you enjoyed and will check out some of my other stories.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 23
jasper you are the man!! love ya!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
ed go save her...... please...
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 11
go save jasper!!! who is the fake jasper?!?!?!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
i am way too confused,... i don't know anything at this point.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 7
no who is this?!?!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
ok then who is with bella?!?! WTF i am totally confused!!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
WTF! is alice in on this? she wants edward... so she and jasper set this up so he could have bella and she could have edward. they killed rose because she figured it out!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
I want to know what brought all this on? and where is everyone?
Date: 26 Feb 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
something wicked this way comes and thy name is jasper!!!
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 28
THe story before this, I just got through reading. I read this story when it first came out and I missed the first one.. Well duh on me. So Now I am about to finish. I love the sexually liberated Edward. Pretty funny all in all.
Author's Response:
Hi MaryMary! Thanks for reading and reviewing Bella's Revenge and My Heart's Desire. I hope you enjoyed both of them.
Happy New Year!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
I absolutely loved this story from start to finish, and I truly hate to see it end, though I love the way it did.
Author's Response:
Thanks, JS! I am sad that it's over, but glad to move on to new things. Hope you stick around for Teardrops on My Guitar.
Date: 12 Nov 2010 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
Tear
Author's Response:
Hi Sunnycarolina! Thanks for reading. I hope you will check out some of my other stories. :)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh crap is right!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
nooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for sharing your unique and well written story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you will stick around for Teardrops on My Guitar.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 30
I LOVED your story!! I'm soooo sorry it ended! Great one!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support, Modiggy! I'm sad too, but it was time. Hope you stick around for Teardrops on My Guitar. :)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
that was good i liked it
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hope you stick around for Teardrops on My Guitar.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
I'm defintely team jasper too. Thanks for taking the time to write the story hun
Author's Response:
Quite welcome! Hope you'll stick around for Teardrops on My Guitar; Jasper has a starring role (and if I have anything to say about it, many shirtless occasions). :)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great job Girly! I'll be sad to say goodbye to these two, but I'm looking forward to moving on to your other stories. Very sweet on this though.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I'm sad to see it go as well, but I've got so many others stories in my head that it was time to wrap it up. Hope you stick around for Teardrops on My Guitar.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 29
What a way to heal! My favorite part? Jasper telling Alice that it couldn't be heaven without her....and meaning it! Inspired!
Author's Response:
I know, right! Sex is the cure for everything. And Jasper only spoke the truth. He might have been happy to feel at peace, but he wouldn't be complete without Alice.
I used that line on the banner for this story as well. :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 29
sex J. mmm mmmm good
Author's Response:
I know! It makes me wish that Jackson Rathbone was really here!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 29
lol for horny jazz
Author's Response:
A horny Jazz is ALWAYS a good thing!
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 29
Jasper certainly is a persuasive cuss, isn't he? Not that I can blame Alice. Who could resist him when he's hellbent on seduction?
Author's Response:
True! And if I had sex like that, I'd never leave the room!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
Go, Jazz! Get u some boy!
Author's Response:
And he did. :D
Date: 01 Nov 2010 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 29
Yay for Jasper! So happy he's going to be ok.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks! I couldn't end the story without some Jazzy lovin'. Figured you'd like that. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
I'm sad there are only 2 chapters left, but I do want to read Teardrops!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I know. It's been fun. I wish the new chapter was up now but I haven't gotten to it yet. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 27
Cant wait to read more!!
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
It's always nice to see the bad guy fall, and I enjoyed seeing Riley burn. It was awesome that it was Bella that saved the day. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Bella had to do something; she owed it to Jazz and the others. :)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved the chapter, glad to see Bella with a backbone.
Author's Response:
Too bad she couldn't have kicked his ass herself.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 28
should have let the wolves help too.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that wouldn't happen. Jacob didn't allow it. :)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
Nicely done. Glad Bella was just a distraction rather than a sacrifice.
Sounds like Edward has gotten over his issues and is finally ready. It's about time. Why does it always take longer for boys to make the right decision?
Cheers,
karina
Author's Response:
Because they're boys. :)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
Damn! Intense and full of mind numbing questions! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I am currently working on the next chapter, may have it up tonight or tomorrow. :)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
good chapter. curious to read wha comes next.
Author's Response:
Riley's demise and a long-overdue lemon. I may get the chapter up tonight.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
BELLA DONT LET HIM ANYWHERE NEAR YOUR CUNT!!!!!
Author's Response:
Lol. I love your responses. :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
HOLLY SHIT they have a copy of jasper!! god damn how did thehell did they pull that off?? and i think there gonna find him before he bites the dust....this story is sooo fuckin good!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
OK i dont think rose is dead....and what the motherfuck is up with jasper?? this story is good as fuckin hell!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
WHAT THE MOTHERFUCK???
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
HELL NO i dont think the cullens are really dead that whole story sounded fake as hell!!! if he was so sad for his family why the fuck is he all over bella?? and why was he smiling so damn much?? its fake i tell ya FAKE
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
Oh my, i thought they would have been farther away by now. Glad to see they're not. I can't wait to see what Bella is going to do. Why do I foresee her trying to distract Riley with her blood? Just saying. That might not work so well, with Edward there too.
Can't wait to see what's next!
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Thanks, Balti K! The next chapter should be up tonight or tomorrow. Can't wait for the next chapter of Obsessed.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 27
hmmm if carlisle says she should be in bed, ya think she'd have learned by now to stay in bed.
Author's Response:
Yes, but Bella is frustratingly stubborn.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 27
good one
Author's Response:
Thanks! I hope you're ready for a lemon. :)
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
I knew he couldn't be on the up and up. Dirty rotten bastard. I hope Jazz peels the flesh from his bones before burning him. Asshole.
Author's Response:
That's not a bad idea! :)
Thanks, Balti K!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh man! Now what? Did Victoria not really die? Is she all horribly disfigured now? Or are the Volturi involved and coming to clean up?
Reading on!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
Sweet. Nice POV from Rosalie. I have a feeling she's going to kick Riley's ass repeatedly though. He should watch out. And Esme may have to rebuild the house after Rose and Emm "celebrate" their reunion.
Cheers!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I knew it was Jasper! Too miltary and calculating to be anyone else! Wonderful. Surprised he didn't go after Bella though, since he's so weakened now.
Onward!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
I thnk your end note about sums it up. Oh, Crap! indeed!
Cheers!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
oh no, did the clone snap? Is he losing his mind and attacking Bella? Better hurry, Edward!
Cheers!
Date: 08 Oct 2010 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
Now what's really going to get to me is what will happen to the Jasper replica when they get her back. Is he going to die? Will he get sent back to Maria? Hmmm. I feel bad for him actually!
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, thank goodness. I'm so glad he'll be ok. And maybe he can help them figure out what's happening.
Cheers, Balti K
Author's Response:
Hi Balti K! I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. I hope to get chapter 27 up soon. :)
Date: 07 Oct 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm pulling for jasper. Of course, you know he's one of my faves! Can't wait to see what's next!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
I really hope he's still alive. They need his help to figure this whole mess out, sooner rather than later.
Cheers,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
This isn't the first prophetic dream she's had. Why isn't she listening to them? And why hasn't she picked up yet on the fact that he hasn't fed? She knows how often Edward needed to hunt in order to keep her safe. Her intuition is a bit off right now, i think.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh no! Not jasper dead! I hope they get there in time!
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
Finally! So glad they're going to check it out. It's about time!!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 10
Creepy Jazz impersonator!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
Who IS this?? Who has really got Bella and what's he doing with her?
I'm guessing it was Victoria on the other line, to give the fake Jasper more orders.
Onward,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Is there a castle in Iceland they're going to? Was it Rosalie or Charlotte in the vision? Hmmmmm..........
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
More complex every chapter! Great job with this, I am totally roped in!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ha! I knew it couldn't be the real Jasper with Bella!! Oh, I hope he holds on a little longer. This is heartbreaking!
Onward for me,
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
What on earth is going on with everyone? So twisted, but certainly pulls you in!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Does she have the real Jasper? Or the real Rose? This is very intriguing and I'm loving it!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm... Victoria must have some kind of gifted help. She's so twisted! I wonder what she's hoping to accomplish here....
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 2
What the hell is up with Jasper? I feel like he must be possessed or something. And like he had more to do with the initial attack than he's letting on. Hmm....
Balti K
Date: 07 Oct 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
They're not burned, they can't be dead. Argh! What's Jasper up to?
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 05 Oct 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok, I certainly wasn't expecting that, though I had a feeling that Riley wasn't as much of a good guy as he was trying to make himself out to be, and I never liked the way he was around Alice. Poor Alice, she just gets Jasper back and now she's taken from him. I'm looking forward to seeing Riley get what he deserves.
Author's Response:
Thanks, JaspersSweetie. I hope to update soon!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
hahaha.. your comment at the bottem made me laugh :)
Nah, they SO aren't dead. jasper is baaaad boy for tricking bella!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Hope you continue with the story!
Date: 02 Oct 2010 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
i knew it. he just doent fit in a good guy position. good luck trying with the next one though. How are they going to get around him though? hummm i need to think on tha one, cuz Bella is still human. hummm *scratches head* ugh i'll be look for the next one. :)
Author's Response:
I should be able to update soon; hope you like it!
Date: 28 Sep 2010 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 26
aww poor jasper and alice are really getting the worst of the situation.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I know. Luckily it'll all be over soon. :)
Date: 28 Sep 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
WOW..Story getting epic now....update soon plz..and will Bella be a vamp soon i can see her with some awsome powers to help find Alice.
Author's Response:
Sorry, no Bella vamp in this one...maybe I should write a third....
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Kill Riley's ass, great twist!! How's Bella?
Author's Response:
She's improving. You'll find out more next chapter. :)