Okay, you know that you to are evil for the cliffy, but I love you lovely ladies and this story, so I will continue to wait. Hope RL isn't that bad. Love helping the site. The avi add on Twitter is very nice. Looking forward to more.

=0 J

Hmmm, I wonder what who could have done that maybe Edward :)

woo hoo   someone clocks the fucker

I'll use my hack saw to get the cage off. You don't mind if other body parts come off with the cage, do you?

AHHH!   So, did the calvary show up to save the day or were Bella and Victoria able to free themselves and then hit James with something?  Wicked cliffhanger ladies!

Can't wait for the next update!  ;)

Yes!I hope Edward finds them :)

What happened? What happened? What happened? :0)

YAY!!!!!!!  If Bella takes care of James herself she can heal that much quicker and not feel like she is dependent on Edward.  I hope it's a BPOV next!!!

Aaaarrgh!  Come on!  I would have rather waited a week and read two in a row!  I hate cliffies!!!!!!

Oh Holy Hell!!!! I love you.... Great chapter.... I hope they give James EVERYTHING that he has coming to him!!!! Worth the wait!!

Even if it is a cliffie you had the good sense of knocking him out; thank god Update soon

i am just wondering what is laurent's job at the school....

God, they were made for each other! Though I feel sorry for Victoria but then again, i didn't hear her complaining...

Oh! I had my suspicious that she was a virgin because she seemed so afraid. But she made me so very curious! What would make a virgin to sleep with a guy like james, like that?

the funny thing is that james must just fall in love. She seems perfect for him...

i am glad he is at least not having fun.. the pig.

disgusting prick! nothing against the lifestyle (at all) but clearly he doesn't give a shit if bella will be happy or not... 

Oh :O edward is a student too??? that will be interesting..

And Mike... just ewwwww!

well, she can always safework, can't see? i really like this aspect of this fic. she might be innocent and naive but she is there because she wants to.

omg

I don't think I'd be longing for ole James.  He'd be the last person I asked for.

I'm sure James will figure out he lost his phone and find a magnet to run over the device or cut it out of her or something to elude them.

James is right... Bella's protectors couldn't protect a fly

No body takes Bella from Edward and gets away with it. Go get her Edward!

I have to ask, when are you going to update your story? You can't leave us like that!

relecture, comment savoir lequel était le dernier lu?

Oh Thank God!!!  I have done little the past few days but read this mind blowing story!  Every free minute I have, and I do mean that literally, I am reading this!

I haven't reviewed each chapter because frankly, cannot wait to read more and when I'm reading it on my handheld, the buttons are a bit hard to press!!

I figured if James ever got loose, he'd find Victoria through the GPS but honestly thought, he'd die at the school.  So many stupid mistakes and Lauren ????  Well, she will get all she deserves and more.  I'm glad you all made Lauren the bad person since she didn't have a role in the movies so it's easier to visualize what she looks like using our own imagination.  Of course, the actors portraying the key characters are perfect so I love have those visualizations!!!

I am so glad James dropped his blackberry.  I was seriously going to have heart failure if Edward did not have a way to find her.  I am so glad you guys do not draw out the angst and terror unnecessarily.  There are some stories out there that torture the reader for no good reason except to drag it out.  This story is so fast paced that to have days if not weeks go by without something to go on would get boring or annoying quickly.  There are some stories that can handle the slow build but not this one.

You have an amazing tale to tell and I cannot wait to read more!!

Oh thank god!! I haven't commented before because I can't stop reading but I was getting fearful that James would leave with Bella before the truth came out.

please tell me more policeman are going to be there ... it is an operation, isn´t it?

they are sick

oh my

nice

love them

so sweet

loser

wow

I am so glad that James dropped his phone. I just hope they get them before they get on the plane.

wow

sweet

oh my

HUMM

SWEET

holy shit you guys

i just caught up on about 7 chapters and holy shit!!! i can't even believe he was freed! and by that rehtarded twat lauren! bitch even got cut from the movies and she wonders why.

i am scared shitless right now, i'll have you know! normally i would've been mad that bella didn't scream but your james is like the scariest james in the whole fandom. however, if i were your bella, i would have a fucking shotgun strapped to my hand. i hope she gets to be the one to take him out. or her and victoria. like the end of Tarantino's "Death Proof" and then we can all get drunk and listen to "Chick Habit" which is totally my song for Bella & Victoria.

omg omg. i can't believe i caught up to a cliff hanger! ah well, suppose they'll all be cliffhangers from this point on or at least for a while. 

thanks for entertaining me with this awesomeness for so long! i feel like it's been a long time, hang on lemme check my gmail for ffn update alerts...ok yeah i started getting updates for this in APRIL of 2009!!! holy shit! wow you guys. just wow. pat yourselves on the damn sexy backs already.

can't wait for the next! :)

so stupid

humm

hot

sweet

so sad

pig

fantastic

wow I can´t wait the next update this is so freaking I loved!!!!!