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Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Thanks for the update, yes, James gets his just desserts;)

Reviewer: luv4jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 78

This was so freaking hot: “Look at how you respond to just my voice and my touch.”  He purrs as he continues to move both hands over my body in a whispering touch.  He leans into my ear and whispers, “How would it feel to have my cock buried deep within your pussy?  How would you respond then?” I loved this story and I hate to see it go but it must so I will deal with it. Damn  1st TPW and now this what's next ladies? The Lessons Saga will be ending eventually then what? Okay let me stop being all dramatic I hope this will free you up for VO or DLG hell yeah now I'm excited again. Can't wait for more from you talented ladies. Perfect ending!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 78

So sad to see it over but what a ride thank you so much.  Maybe you should do a short story of James life now I would like to see him suffer more. LOL   Good to see her healing and willing to go back to the life still that Edward and she really like

Reviewer: michswan Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 78

Thanks so much ladies! I've enjoyed the ride! :)

Reviewer: itlnbrt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 78

You guys did a great job!! Thanks!!

Reviewer: shebonds Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 78

Oh thats just wrong! You could have given us one last play scene.

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 78

Wow, Its finally over...is it weird that im kinda sad about that? I guess I'll jsut have to buy the book when it comes out and put it on my fanfiction shelf!

 

~Tiffany

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 78

I think that was the perfect ending! Great job.  Definitely an amazing story!

Reviewer: ju007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 78

love it! cant believe its over! I want outtakes!! 

Reviewer: sarahlynn81 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 78

I am so sad this is over! But what a perfect ending!! Can't wait to read more from you guys!

Reviewer: rachelcullen77 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 78

LOVED IT! It has been an amazing ride, and I have enoyed it all! Brilliant ending!

Reviewer: cull Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 78

I found the whole story fantastic. I just can't believe this is the last chapter. But i hope you do a sequel or something.Really can't wait to see what happens in VO either.

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 78

OMG OMG -- lOve this story - i can read it all again just for that ending !! u guys did excellent work!!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 78

Thank you for this story. I loved it. I have been following for a while and it is wonderful. I will enjoy re-reading it and your other work in the future.

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 78

Thank you for this story. I loved it. I have been following for a while and it is wonderful. I will enjoy re-reading it and your other work in the future.

Reviewer: gracie7236 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 78

Perfect ending! Loved this! Thanks for writing and sharing. You both are amazing!

Reviewer: Charmie Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 78

wow.....what a wonderful story.  i'm glad you never compromised your ideals....and i loved the ending...it made me want more...which is what you want....always leaving them wanting more.

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 78

OMG.... is it really over? 

I can't believe after ALL these chapters/time it's over... yes, please pass the box of tissues :( .... sob, sob!

 

What an awesome way to finish - absolutely perfect! I loved this final chapter... you answered every single question I was hoping would be answered just right - so thank you!

You guys SO ROCK!!!!! 

 

Will miss TTSS - but love what you have done just as much & the journey it has sent me/us readers on!!!!

Love T2M xxx

Reviewer: fanficaddict6604 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 78

I'm sad that there is not going to be one last scene between them.  those were always my favorite part.  But i really loved this story.  Thank you!

Reviewer: hlsmith29 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 78

OMG!!!  I absolutely loved this story!  It was so much darker than any other story I had read, but I was hooked and couldn't stop reading.  I knew you would find a way for everything to work out in the end though.  Will there be a sequel or is this truly the end?

Reviewer: agovita2312 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 78

I can't believe its over. I am sooo glad everything worked out for everyone. I have been reading TTS since about chapter 4. It's been a bumpy roand and I am so happy that you were both able to over come that and finish the story. Good luck with the original. I wish all the best for you in that endeavor. Awesome job ladies. :)

Reviewer: jessedholm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 78

Excellent!  that last line was perfect!  Although I hope Edward can slip into dom mode easily after months of repressing it.  He didnt have much time to prepare himself mentally did he....

I can't lie...I'm not ready for it to end.  I need an epi or something!!!  Please!  A little more detail to the HEA?

Reviewer: Donut_Magnet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 78

*claps hands loudly in a standling ovation before bringing fingers to mouth to wistle in appreciation, only to be distracted by left over chocolate on them*

That was a fantastic finale to an amazing journey! Thankyou for giving us all a ride...wait, that didn't come out right, you know what I mean!

I love that you kept the ending realistic, the fact that it's taken 8 months with 6 of them in therapy plus the support of friends to get Bella and Edward to a place where they are happy and trusting enough to reopen that side of their life. Also that they did infact need that part of their life still.

I can't believe it's all over red rover. :( At least there's still VO to keep me gnawing on my fingernails *claps hands gleefully*

Love you guys!

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 78

It's so sad that it had to end there.  Maybe you can do a sequel into her reintegrating play into her life....just an idea.  I LOVED this story and am looking forward to reading others by you.

Reviewer: radvan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 78

thank you so much for this story i cant wait to start reading again now that its done
i dont even know what to say i will surely miss your updates in my mail this is most definatly one of my favorite stories
again thank you for your time and effort
Diane

Reviewer: luv2readff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 78

Awww, that was a perfect ending! Great story, great job!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 78

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 78

I love the ending.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 78

This was such an incredible story.  Truly an amazing journey for Bella.  I loved the ending and really wanted more. 

Great job!

Reviewer: slyt2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 78

Oh i loved it ........the whole chapter wrapped everything up perfect.... I was wondering what she would decide to do......I just wonder if she chose to be him Sub 24/7 or just weekends? Or if she just wants to play once in awhile and not be a submissive persay...... Anyways i am so glad she is going to college and glad Victoria's baby came out healthy (thanks for letting us know what she had)... I am glad to know what is going on with everyones life.......... Now i will miss my dose of this story.......i'm sad but i understand it did have to end.....don't like it but understand............ now i just have to figure how to add you two for any futher stories you may right because i would love to read more of your new  stories...........

Reviewer: Kristina79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 78

What a very very fine and brilliant end. HOORAY!!!

Thank you for your story - for writing it - and for sharing it.

It's been a real pleasure following it and I'll miss the caracters you created. I'll be looking out for your bbok and I'll buy as soon as it's out.

I wish you all the best with the book. with life and with your other stories (I'm reading them aswell).

THANK YOU!!!

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 78

I'm so sad to see this great story end.  It has been a very good learning experience.

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 78

Well done, a most amazing story.

I love that they are all healing.

Congrats

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 78

That was a great ending. Even though you did leave us hanging there at the end.

I'm glad they were all able to move on and get help. Victoria and the baby are doing well, Alice and Bella are going to school, the school was improved, and Edward and Bella are happy. Oh...and James is suffering somewhere for what he did.

I got the alert as I was heading to bed, but had to come and read it!

This was a great story and thanks for sharing it!

Reviewer: Linda Romith Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 78

Thank you for this chapter! I'm sorry to see your story end and I would love for an outtake of a future session between E/B perhaps?

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 78

Loved it!  But I wanted one last Domward! *pouts*  Thank you for a fantastic story!  ;o}

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 78

Is this really the last chapter? It doesn't say completed, but other than that I love your story. Very well written and just lovely.

Author's Response:

yes it is unfortunetly I could go on for ever but I think I would be dragging it out.. LOL this is how it was going to end from the begining..

 

and thank you for reminding me I hadn't clicked the completed button LOL it is now ticked!

Reviewer: PrincessNic Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 78

I was just on my way to bed when I got this email...totally worth staying up to read :D

Reviewer: SnowyHedwig Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 78

I am so sad to see it end, but LOVED IT! You left us enough to imagine endless torment for James in the last chapter, but tied up the loose ends very nicely here.

Victoria is doing well, Alice is failing algebra, The Training School is all-new & improved, Rosalie and Bella are close and both recovering, and Edward seems quite happy that Isabella wishes to play.

I've been addicted to this story since I first found it, and it's been one hell of a ride. Bumpy, but totally worth it. Thank you so much for sharing it with all of us, and best of luck in getting it reworked and published.

I'm thrilled to go on to read your other projects. ;)

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 78

That was a great ending :)  I am so happy!



Author's Response:

Why thank you... I am so glad you enjoyed it..

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 78

NOOOOOOOOO   whhhaaaaa   I don't want it to be over.

LOVE YOU GUYS

smiley



Author's Response:

LOL theladykt... you know we love you.. you helped us with this process giving us encouragement.. thank you so much honey.. we both really love you.. mwah xxx

Reviewer: Whateverhater69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

OH EM GEEEE I read thewhole book in like 2 days.. This is a really good story. I love the plot and theexcitement and ofcourse the lemons :-) Im glad James got whatwascoming to him(fukkin douche) I cant wait for the next chapter.. hopefully Victoria has the baby and is on her feet and Bella will be in college oh and still with Edward *faints at the name*

 

CANT WAIT TO READ!!!

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2010 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

i still await your next chapter i want to know if edward and bella will be together forever now and that they are in love i love a happy ending i also would like them not only to be a regular couple but also a d/s couple where thy bothe love it and the pleasure from it as well

Reviewer: weisysmutslut Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2010 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Well I would say that was the perfect end for James.  I can't wait to read what's been going on with the rest of the gang.  I hope Bella and Victoria will be able to recover.

Reviewer: Laliita Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

i waited for this since the story started. you are amazing.

congrats.

 

love.

Reviewer: PNW Luna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

   What goes around comes around and karma has found James.  He is now doomed to that fate worse than death which is slavery.

   Thank you ladies...  

Reviewer: sammy55 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Wait, your publishing a book?

... Well I cant wait, but I have NO idea how Im going to get it without my friends finding out...

I enjoyed James punishment thingy. Hope he enjoys it. Cant wait for the next Chapter-The Ending!

Reviewer: libbybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

favorite

Reviewer: joice84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

it is better what dead!!! I love the end of James!!! is so sad to see end of the story!!!! I really love then and hope continuer see things wonderful off you, thanks for write

Reviewer: Hakkyn Slaysh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2010 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I just read from the beginning through to now. I can honestly say this is one of the most riviting stories I have ever read. bravo... you stirred emotions from sexual desires to honest fear of what would happen to the characters next. I found myself drawn in and bonding with all the characters of the story. You have a great talent for story/character development. I have really enjoyed reading this story and will truly miss it when it is done. once again, Bravo!!

Reviewer: slayerjules Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2010 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

:)

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

THis Story is really good i need more!



Author's Response:

ha ha ha ha.. why thank you, that is a nice compliment.. and yes we are working on it.. but might be another week off, sorry Footroza is just finishing up her masters in the next 9 days.. I am counting down.. and we want the last chapter to be spectacular.. not rushed.. but it is planned out.. so once we get going with it.. it won't take long to put together.. we can write a chapter in a few hours.. LOL

Reviewer: mrsmodd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

i would love to know more about The Publishing House! I'm sure you guys have it all covered but I would like to help any way I can! The time, energy and tallent you have put into your writing is so phenominal! Thank you for sharing1 



Author's Response:

awww thank you... that is so lovely of you.. We just announced it and there is some info on the site, we have so much to do before we start publishing... if you want to take a look all you have to do is click TWCS PH up the top.. and it will take you to the new site.. and yeah we do try LOL we are trying to get it all done.. but Jenny (aka footroza) is busy with the last 10 days of her masters so we are mighty busy at the moment LOL she thinks she is busy now... wait until after she has finished with her masters, she won't know what hit her LOL SHHHHHH!!!! he he he he..

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 May 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

James got what he deserved. I wasn't expecting another James POV, but I'm glad we got a glimpse of what he got. 

This is a great story and I'm sad to see it end.

Reviewer: roxymar Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

whoa, i kinda felt bad for him for a while until i remembered all the disgusting and depraved things he use to do to bella and victoria...then i thought....fuck it! Aro hand me the gun!

i completly love this story. i remembered when it started and am soo happy i could join in on this ride with you guys! i can't wait to read whatever else you girls come up with.

okay, so i can't wait until the next chapter!

-roxy

Reviewer: LindyP Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Yes! James FINALLY got what he deserved! You ladies did him up right! I can't believe this story is truly coming to an end, so sad. Thank you so much for such an AMAZING story! It has been an awesome ride! Looking forward to your last chapter ladies!

LindyP :)

Reviewer: vampluvr25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

James is Finally getting his as handed to him!!

WOW! This is it! I remember the day I got the first chapter alert. It has been the one constant from the very beginnig of My personal FF journey. And now that it's over I almost don't know what to do or say. I wish you the best. :)

Reviewer: JessiCllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

WHAAAT?!?!?! The next chapter is the last one!!! I can't believe this! But... I am sure it will be a fantastic chapter. I can't wait to see how you end this. I will most definitely be waiting for your announcements to come.
~Jessi Cullen

Reviewer: jdm13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2010 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

For some reason, I didn't get the update notices for this and the previous chapters. Glad I checked to see if there were updates.

Its hard to believe this story is almost over. Its been quite a ride! I look forward to seeing how you have the ending planned out. Thank god that James is trapped and will be taken care of very satisfactorily. He deserves everything Aro and company will do to him!

Reviewer: M_Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Wow. Congrats. Loved it by the way. Would love to know what happens to James and his diserved punishments.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I am so glad that Jacob turned James over to Aro. James does not deserve death. He definately deserves what he is getting. He willl forever pay for everything that he has done. I just kind of wish that Bella and Victoria, at least Edward got to have their say with him also.

I am sad to see the end coming. But I have really enjoyed the ride here with you girls. You have done a terrfic job writing this whole saga. Can't wait to hear more about your book and also other stories you have in mind forh ere at the Writers shop. We all will be waiting on pins and needles for the last of this story and all other stories from you. GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: MrsJakeBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

omgee hahahahahahah

serves him right

loved that

nawww cannot belive its nearly over thought

:(

soo sad

gona cry next chapter tooo

UPDATE SOON!!!

cant wait to see how it ends :A

Reviewer: lobsters4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Wow!  That was actually worse than I had imagined for James.  I almost felt bad for him ...almost!

Reviewer: Twilightobsessed09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Thank you all for this fabulous journey...I was enthralled through it all.

Oh! the last chap will be such a hard read being it's  the end but I know it'll be outstanding.

Now as for this chapter, I know it's right to rejoice about someone else's misfortune, but Fuck Yeah! for what Aro is doing to that bastard! Perfection...girlies...Perfection...

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I have to admit that I really enjoyed hearing James saying he just wanted to die. It's scary how much I like the idea of him being their pet.

Reviewer: pixdog Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

great job

Reviewer: Luminesk Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I was not expecting another James POV, but after reading this chapter, i think it was thoroughly needed. Even as we reach the end of the road, i am still finding insights into this maniac's psyche!

  • Figures that James would be absolutely terrified of being tied up! What a sadist! Reading that, angered me, and made me happy all at once. Angry that he would subject others to what he is most fearful of, and happy that he finally gets to experience it himself.
  • I felt like slapping James across the face when he thought about teaching Rose a lesson. And at that point he could still sense some form of freedom...he really is a twisted f***!
  • I am still very curious as to James' "power". Even Aro alluded to it in this chapter...i feel this has kind of been a niggling mystery to me throughout this saga.
  • I laughed so hard at the first mention of James being a 'pet'!
  • I love love LOVE the torture that Aro is imparting on James...so deserving! And it was the ultimate revenge for James to be branded. I imagine there being a huge audience in the room "oohing" and "aahing" in all the right moments, and a cheer squad in the corner egging him on! He deserves very ounce of humiliation inflicted on him. It is great justice that he is kept alive to lead a life of misery, and not be met with death!

I can't wait to see what you do with the final chapter. I am feeling so bittersweet right now. Your story has taken me on such a rollercoaster of emotions, and i feel i have been so invested in your writing. I have often left my computer after reading one of your chapters, and been caught up in the flurry of emotions for days to come. It is the kind of story that just sticks with you...that you can obsess over, re-read, and still not garner all the juicy goodness that is TTSS! I remember very clearly when you were having all those problems with FF, and your story was haulted momentarily. I remember reading and re-reading this story, and was hanging on your every written word, trying to anticipate what was happening next, but mostly, just completely caught up in the beautiful pure love story you had created. Absolutely stunning.

I am very curious about your new TTS adventure, and can't wait to hear more details about this, and be able to support you guys in a new endeavour. I think it is a very clever idea to retain this fanfiction version, and create a new version, where you can take new readers, as well as your loyal followers, on another journey in a world and setting we have come to love so much!

Thankyou so much for the update. I eagerly (and bittersweetly) await your final installment...

Reviewer: cynful407 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

James got his in the end....it was well deserved....

Reviewer: agovita2312 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Holy shit!! I am sooooo glad he got what was coming to him. I am saf to see this ending but excited at the same time. Great job ladies.

Reviewer: benna Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Yes he is finally getting his. Sad to hear it is almost over, I have truely enjoyed this story. Hope you write another.

Reviewer: Anadabyel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

OHMYGAWD!!!!!!!  OHMYGAWD!!!!!!!  So mean and so deserved!!  OHMYGAWD!!!!!!!

Reviewer: markadda Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

What a perfect chapter!

Reviewer: katstooldforthis Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

omg i can't believe this is almost finished. :(
but this chap was great as always. i love how you treated james in this last bit. give him a taste.
can't wait for the last chap now, sad but excited.
thank you so much for all your words you are fab.

Reviewer: twilightfan4ever09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

i loved the chapter. the tourture on james sounds like what he diserves and more. :D:D im sad the story is about over.

Reviewer: bbbluez Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Enjoying the torture!  He deserves it!

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Loved the chapter, and the poetic justice, =)

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: Tina Wannabe Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

ah, finally an occupation for James that he can't make others suffer in. What a lovely ending for this character :) 

Reviewer: Sugar Rae Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

So fulfilling seeing James tortured. Will be so sad to see the story end.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Teehee teehee!! I was smiling throughout the entire chapter without one iota of sympathy for James. He got & is getting everything he deserves and needs more "training". I'm looking forward to the epi. So many questions but I trust you will answer all. Good luck & waiting with baited breath!!

Reviewer: momams Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

So James has not met his match, but his superior. The person he thought was his influence and inspiration, but, he is human and has an understanding of rights and respect for others. Somethings that James disregards completely.

At first he thought he might be able to get out, he saw reality later on. He is there for life it seems, or until "his" life is over.

 

It's sad to see this story end, but, yes it has brought amazing things, for you as the authors and us lucky readers.

The story might end, but all you have accomplished so far, hasn't it's just starting...

The Best of Luck!!!!

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

that was good glad that james got some of what he dished out cant wait to read the last chapter   going to be good

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Can it really be almost over?? Gah, it feels like the end of an era..But what a journey you took us on..Can't wait for the book :)

All good things must come to an end, but, hell, we'll be Spoilt Rotten for ever, right? To you, TSO and Footroza! (raises her glass)

Reviewer: patch138 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

This has been one crazy ride! Can not wait to the how it ties together in the end. I knew Aro would have a fun time with him!

~Tiffany

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

That was incredible!  I kinda liked reading about James' torture!  I wonder what is up with Bella, Victoria and Edward?

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

yes, that is what James totally deserves.  Sad to see this story end, but it really has been an adventure.

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Hi,

to both of you: A big thankyou! For sharing your story with us/me  AND for publishing another version. I'm looking forward to it and to the new publishing house!

Don't cry over the end, it's just another sort of beginning! It was an amazing ride and will continue to be so!

Again, thank you

ttfn

Ardanwen

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

:)

Reviewer: terriberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Definitely his just desserts! Loved it. The last chapter *tear*-can't wait.

Reviewer: MagdulkaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I'm glad that James got what he deserved! I hope you'll update soon.

Reviewer: EmoryB123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Wow!  James REALLY got his come-uppance!  I am thinking that this is the end of him, but if you want to tell more about his FATE in the next chapter, that is fine with me!

This has been an amazing ride.

 

 

Reviewer: Vtiedemann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

It was so nice to see that James is getting his.  I would have loved to have read more, but I know all good things come to those who are patient.  Love this story and can't wait for the "original TTS" to come out. 

 

Reviewer: jaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Bon voyage ladies, what a ride!

Reviewer: snowball64 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

It's so great to see the psycho get his just desserts, let's hope that Aro finds a way to keep the pain coming for years and years and years. I'm waiting in anticipation for the final chapter, but I'll miss it when it's gone.

Reviewer: mmsa Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

very cool ending for James

Reviewer: Romix Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

wow, that was harsh, but he so deserves it!

wow girls a publishing house? that is so awesome!!

much love!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

awwww really...it has to end!  Great job so far with everything and major KUDOS and PROPS to you and your team for having a vision and making come true with this site!  EXCELLENT!

Reviewer: erikajo Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Whoa..........and I thought the cock cage was bad  ;)  Hee! Hee!  James definitely got his just desserts.

You are writing a new version of TTS?  Very cool!  I'm confused though.  Are you publishing it as a book, or will it be posted here?  Also, the one on Fan Fic you mentioned........is it the original story or the new one?  I know the FF Police made you take out all the good stuff.  Sorry for the dumb questions.  I'm just trying to understand what is going on so I don't miss out on any of your great writings.

Thanks,

amorelli  

Reviewer: coryoplayer Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

S.O. & Foot

Man am I a bad girl!!!! I f**king loved that chapter!!!! Oh, I'm a bad girl!!! (hee, hee)

Looking forward to the finale!!!!

Cory

Reviewer: rangernstephfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

LMFAO!!!! Poor ole' James...NOT!! I think the best chapter yet. The evil bastard got everything he deserves and more. So sad its coming to a close. Can't wait to read more from you in future stories. Thanks

Reviewer: chartwilightmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

*sniffs* ah, I don't want the story to end, but I nkow that you won't leave us hanging for long. Wow, your own publishing house, that is wonderful. I do admit that I have an original story that I have played with a bit, needs much writing, but that would be fun to have it in print one day. Looking forward to hearing more about your new adventure.

I will miss this story, it has brought me joy and tear and fears as well as informed me and enlightened me to another world that I didn't know that much about.

So, I'm off to plan my own imaginary playroom *giggles* =0 J

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